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rank 5469
word count 49825
date submitted 29.06.2009
date updated 30.06.2009
genres: Fiction, Fantasy, Young Adult
classification: universal
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SAIL

Julian Borra

A very average boy unwittingy casts Britain adrift sending both he and it on a voyage back to themselves.

 

Tom is a very average boy in a very average life who dreams of doing something so extraordinary, so amazing and so llfe affirming that everyone will find him so sexy and cool that the burning issues of 20 missing homeworks, rubbish parents and 'that kiss' would fade into insignificance against it.
In this story, Tom takes 'careful what you wish for', throws it about for a bit, and then raises it to an earth-moving and identity shifting majesty.
He unwittingly casts Britain adrift on the high seas to travel 'up a bit, left a bit and then down a bit' as a journey both physical and spiritual unfolds around them on their big strange journey back to themselves..
With the benefit of flannels and tunnels, bad furniture and shipping forecasts, Tom eventually unlocks love (or the strange feeling that he calls love) and the riddle of the parents he wished he never had in an adventure that shows that there's little to tell between Untied and United: it's just a matter of Crossing an 'I' and Dotting a 'T'.

 
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Marcus Fisch wrote 665 days ago

Wonderful fantasy adventure with serious thought provoking ideas.
Backed (Hope you take a look at my work).
Abel Kane
The Alchemists' Cookbook
Chances
Something Elven

T.L Tyson wrote 877 days ago

really enjoying the imagery here. You have some excellent prose and I enjoy the inner thoughts.
i think this will do well. This doesn't sound YA. It sounds older.
Really good stuff.
Backed.
T.L Tyson-Seeking Eleanor

mikegilli wrote 979 days ago

Brilliant story. I'm enjoying it a lot. Just engaging and funny.
The style is very special...it works for you.
I´m sure my son would like this.
No typos that I saw...but finches don't scuttle, I suppose you know,
the sandpiper does have a fast walking behaviour.
All the best with this........Mikey (The Free) shelved.

JohnRL1029 wrote 1005 days ago

I love internal monologues. This sounds way too smart for a YA novel, or maybe that's just because most adult authors who pen YA novels are so condescending. This would definitely help improve the YA market. Great voice! WL.

Cellardoor wrote 1046 days ago

I really enjoy this and I intend on reading a lot more of it as the chapters are short and it's beautifully written yet fast paced. Excellent job, backed for now and I will comment further when I have more of the story behind me :)

Jeffrey Miller wrote 1051 days ago

I first noticed the title of SAIL, and knew I’d have to check it out.

It’s rare to come across a novel that’s almost entirely internal monologue and contemplation that is as interesting as this. After reading 23 chapters I’m still fascinated.

Jeffrey Miller
The Binding Returned

vivalasbradleys wrote 1052 days ago

Excellent writing and storytelling. Loved the pitch as well. Wondering when Britain gets "cast adrift" after three chapters, but no worries -- this is quite well done. Thank you for the opportunity.

Shadowtales wrote 1052 days ago

Write for your severest critic...yourself. Dare to stand a little apart from the pack.....
In this case I have no problem with the opening.
Shelved.

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 1053 days ago

A lot of people are criticised for a slow start on authonomy so prepare yourself. The main problem is that they may not read on and back the book which is always a shame. There is a lot of potential here and the humour is well paced. On myshelf to continue reading. Patrick Barrett (Shakespeares Cuthbert)

Alecia Stone wrote 1053 days ago

Hi Julian,

The pitch is interesting and it’s what made me want to read the book.

No, not for bloody him. The phrasing here sounds a little awkward.

I think you have a promising story here. I wasn’t blown away with the opening but I was intrigued enough to read five chapters. I thought there was a lot of telling and not showing. We get to know a lot about Tom’s character but we see no interactions with other characters, not in the first chapters anyway, and we don’t see any dialogue.

I think it’s very well written; the sentence structure is well constructed. Based on that, I’ll give it a spin on my shelf. All the best.

Shinzy :)

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