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rank 5469
word count 10288
date submitted 06.07.2009
date updated 04.08.2009
genres: Fiction, Chick Lit, Romance
classification: moderate
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The irresistible Italian

alchemist

When Emily takes a summer job in Italy, she doesn't bargain for falling in lust with her employer Roberto, a devilishly handsome businessman.

 

Emily, a young graduate, takes a summer job in Italy, teaching English to ten-year-old Silvia. Her boyfriend Andrew is not best pleased, but he eventually agrees and is delighted when Emily suggests he can join her for a holiday.

Since their first meeting, Emily falls in lust for her employer, Roberto Garanti. She is resolved to fight off her attraction to the handsome, rich businessman because Roberto is also engaged, to glamorous Lucia.

But the raw passion Roberto inspires Emily reminds her of her first love, Martin, who seduced and betrayed her. When Andrew comes to visit her, Emily realises she has fallen in love with Roberto.

Then Martin turns up at the village’s wine fair. Confused, Emily fends off Roberto's and Martin’s attentions and gets in trouble with a jealous Lucia, who takes her revenge by seducing Andrew.

Emily breaks up with Andrew. Martin gets off her case when he meets Marina, the daughter of Roberto's housekeeper.

Roberto finds out about Lucia’s indiscretion and breaks their engagement. Now they are free, Emily cannot trust Roberto, until he opens his heart.

PLEASE READ ONLY CHAPTERS 1-4 as chapter five is only a filler.

 
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Chapter 1

Im surprised you accepted the job, said Andrew.

I couldnt say no, replied Emily, nervously twisting a strand of her blond hair.

Its just like you, rushing into things without thinking about the consequences. 

Im sorry you’ve got to cancel our trekking holiday to Wales. I didnt know you’d booked it and this job is a good opportunity for me. It’s not my fault that Susan’s mother fell down the stairs and the agency couldn’t find anybody else to replace her at such a short notice.

The holiday in Wales was meant to be a surprise for our first anniversary, sighed Andrew.

Emily bit her lower lip. Why dont you go anyway, you are a better hiker than I am. Im sure one of your mates would be happy to take my place.

Andrew wiped his glasses against his T-shirt. I might do that, I hate the idea of missing such a good deal. Still, it will be hardly a romantic holiday, wont it?

Im sorry. She looked at Andrews earnest face and smiled. We can see each other if you wish, all you have to do is buy a plane ticket and Ill put you up.

Andrew’s narrow face brightened up. If I can get a cheap ticket on the internet and if I can share your room, I think I can just about afford it. After all, accommodation is the most expensive part of a holiday.

Emily looked up at the grey sky through the leafy branches of the tree. She was looking forward to bask in the sunshine.

Ill miss you, Andrew admitted, stroking Emily’s hair.

Ill miss you, too.

I must go back. I have a lesson at 2.30. Come over to my place at four. 

Emily got up, brushed off crumbs from her skirt and collected the remains of their picnic in a plastic bag. 

At the gate of the park, she walked towards the underground, treading on air. In less than two weeks she would be in sunny Italy. How exciting, she had never been abroad. Before she had met Andrew, she had always holidayed in Cornwall, where her parents rented a cottage. And the previous summer, their first as a couple, Andrew had taken her on a walking holiday to the Lake District.

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lizjrnm wrote 790 days ago

This is beautifully rendered! You have a gift for sharp descriptive prose and down to earth characters! BACKED with pleasure. I wish I could take this on holiday!

Liz
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Ayrich wrote 951 days ago

I am glad you n=made the distinction between lust and Love. Shelved.

Kimmy M. wrote 953 days ago

awww, so lovely

I don't have any good suggestions, its soo niice!!

AnnEnglish wrote 1039 days ago

Irresistable Italian - Alchemist

Please don't be offended if I give you the same comments I give to other unfinished novels whose first chapter is splendid and whose later chapters are not quite so focussed:

(1) You must finish the book. (2) To finish well you must have a synopsis - that is, a plan, a map. (3) When you write to a plan, you will pick out the details that advance plot and develop character. All the rest is "fine writing", that is, flab. (4) Get rid of the flab.

There are other things to look out for. For example, your dialogue is good, and one can tell who's speaking. It follows that many "he said, she said" tags are not needed, and neither are the adverbs that go with them: "in an aggrieved voice", "nervously twisting a strand", "he admitted, stroking her hair." We'll sort those techniques out after you have ...

... Finished The Book.

Best wishes
Ann

Krista Darrach wrote 1045 days ago

The Irresistable Italian--
I'm not sure how I've missed seeing you/your books. I actually saw you in the message boards and I joined the YA group.
I really enjoyed this. You write very well. Your attention to detail is great, you show a lot with little words (not always an easy task).

You've given us a good background on Emily and her life, however I'd wonder if it's too much(not overdone at all, just a lot of info). But without reading the whole book it's hard to tell. It works, and I like it, but sometimes we can cut things out that don't directly affect the work. (I've been editing mine for things not needed- so it's on my mind).

The pacing was good, the dialog was excellent and i can't wait to read more.
Great Job....I felt like I was there.
Shelved.
Krista Darrach
~Riley's Gift

Roberto...ahhhh.
I almost thought the end of Chapter three was borderline creepy and yet sensual all at the same time. Those Italian guys can be quite forward and intimidating...so if that was what you were going for, it worked.! LOL

Valentina wrote 1045 days ago

Hi, well when I came over I picked this of your four books because being half Italian, I have had dealing with Italian boys and it was too familiar to not read!!!

I have read chapters 1-3 as requested on the pitch and would love to read more!

You do a really good job of the Italian-English dialogue. Do you speak Italian? Or did you just research really well?

Her reminisces of Martin are good - I think most women will relate to them.

Wow, I love your descriptions of Roberto. ’Feral green and sensual mouth’ yummy!

You have the heading chapter three half way through the chapter -- a editing error?

Will return when more posted! And on my shelf xx

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