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The Doctor of Summitville

Bill Carrigan

In a Depression-struck country town, treachery, violence, and a murder trial mark the lives of a young doctor and his much younger love.

 

April 1927. A passenger train wrecks as it nears a mid-eastern U.S. farm town. Young Dr. Jim Martin, treating the injured, meets Annette, a French girl trained as a midwife, recently orphaned, and sent here to live with her uncle. When the uncle dominates and abuses her, Jim intervenes but is blocked in his efforts. Meanwhile, conflict with the county medical society drives him to practice in isolation, fully a 'country' doctor.

His failing but inescapable marriage stands in the way of freeing Annette from bondage. He contrives to send her to nursing school; where her studies are interrupted just short of graduation. Then Jim's concern and love for her lead to fateful moves and a killing. Scandal and social conditions threaten the relationship. And Annette, when older and more independent, forces a crisis.

Spanning a crucial American decade, the narrative brings to life a physician's practice in that era. One case in particular is critical to a defiant, impassioned love affair resolved in a distant land.

 
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The Doctor of Summitville

2009 Bill Carrigan, all rights reserved]

 

[Unnamed prologue on separate right page.]

 

    We called him “Doc” almost from the day he hung out his shingle. Maybe we thought he should be older. But the town was pleased to have a doctor, and a native son at that. He had grown up here, gone off for his training, and returned to start a practice.

    Age came up again when we learned about the love affair. This time it wasn’t his youth in question. Nearly thirty now, he had gained well-earned renownbut she was seventeen. True, it was mainly the women who talked. Since the girl was a beauty, we men had little to say.

    Then came the Depression, and our thoughts turned to graver matters. Doc ceased to be the center of attention.

    Until the killing . . .

    Years later, some of us looking back saw another picture, like an old snapshot in an album: Doc Martin as one of an unsung breed fast fading from the American scene.

    He was a quiet man, and his life inspired no monuments. Yet his name today, among those he served in our once-country town, summons affection, gratitude, and respect. It has even the ring of legend . . .

 

[Chapter 1 starts on page 1, right.]

 

Chapter One

    Dr. James Arthur Martin paused midway up the farmhouse steps, alert to an ominous chain of sounds. The calm morning air had carried the usual whistle blast as the 7:25 neared Summitville, but now came the din and shock waves of a crushing, rending impact.

    Train wreck?

    At first the young doctor doubted his ears. Then, gripping the handle of his black bag, he turned and rushed to his car. The chronic patient he had come to see would soon understand.

    From the sounds echoing through the countryside, Jim placed the wreck between the river trestle and the station. To save time he skirted the town by means of a dirt road he had known since childhood. He drove as fast as the ruts and stones allowed, weaving to avoid a blowout.

    The Hudson sedan wasn’t well suited to a country practice, but Margaret had liked the blue color . . . One fleeting thought led to another. Why hadn’t he stocked the trunk with emergency supplies? No time now to stop for splints, water, more bandages and drugs. He hoped these would come with the ambulance, if anyone called to launch its thirty-minute run.

    Mist obscured the sun and hung in the wooded hollows. At length the woods opened on plowed fields already green with spring shoots. At the railroad crossing, Smith’s Quarry Road became blacktop. It shortly met the state highway, and Jim, turning west, could see the small brick station on his left. He passed other cars and, about a mile farther on, spied a damaged boxcar and the train itself.

    Chaos. Titanic ruin and certain tragedy. Shunted onto a siding, the passenger train had driven the boxcar into a barrier. Black, choking smoke poured from the still-upright engine. Jim winced as he pictured the cabin crew caught between the onrushing coal and the firebox. All four coaches of the 7:25 lay against an embankment, each crushed into the next.

    He stopped at the roadside, vaulted a split-rail fence, and ran across a grassy field and the main track. He carried his baga potent symbol, but little more than that, he feared, in face of the carnage ahead. Nearing the train, he saw people inside, stunned or panicked, and began to hear their cries.

    A dog barked at a woman who clung to an open door. “O Jesus, save me!” she wailed. Jim recognized her, a neighbor who often visited someone in Carroll, the previous town on the line. She screamed as smoke rolled over the car. A young man tried to help her down, and Jim stepped up to lend a hand. “Call the hospital,” he said. “Tell them to send the ambulance.” The man nodded and led the woman toward a parked roadster. The dog ran after them barking.

    Up close the engine and wrecked coaches looked huge and threatening. Townsmen approached them, hesitant, grim. Some were helping passengers down from the sloping doors as Jim reached the last car, where he entered the train from the canted observation platform.

    Most of the passengers passed Summitville daily on their way to the city, but others could be local people. For a moment Jim felt hollow inside at the challenge he faced. In his twenty-eighth year, in the town of his birth now chosen for his practice, hed met his first real test as a doctor. 

    Refusing to be daunted―it was his town, and he had to do his besthe rolled up his sleeves and surveyed the scene before him. Groans and agitated movements of the ten or twelve passengers spelled various degrees of trauma. Many must have been injured in striking the seat ahead, and there was shattered glass everywhere. Two men lay in the aisle, one at his feet, the other near the front of the car.

    He knelt before the nearer man, who was unconscious and breathing in short gasps. A whiff of ammonia woke him to severe chest pain. He groaned, “Gimme a shot, doc.”

    Jim felt broken ribs. Short on morphine, he said. Put this powder under your tongue. Later I’ll help you up.” He placed a folded jacket under the man’s head.

    He hurried to the other man in the aisle. The crushed, bloody forehead told him there was nothing he could do. He doubled back, treating those most in need, helping others to their feet.  Bituminous smoke swept him in waves as he forced open the door to the next car. 

    Many of the injured leaving the train would require hospitalization. To a large man lumbering toward him, he said, “Would you try to get . . .His words died as the dazed man shoved past.

    Two boys entered and the doctor put his request to them. “I need your help. Round up drivers to take people to the hospital. Ask women to bring coffee and blankets.” Glad to have a part to play, the boys ran off, and Jim was hopeful of gaining a measure of control. He was encouraged to hear a siren in the distance.

    Through a broken window, he saw that a light rain had started. His nose and throat stung from the smoke pouring in. He watched the crew of Summitville’s fire engine approach the train, and the ambulance drew up, its siren dying. Shameful that in 1927 it bore on its side a red cross, marking it a relic of the World War. He was relieved to see orderlies unfold a stretcher.

    Around Jim were bruised, bleeding, stunned passengers moaning or crying out. Only emergency measures were possibledressings for open wounds, analgesics, a sling for a broken jaw. Low on antiseptics, he might have to rely on mere cleaning and binding, said to counter infection in the trenches of France.

    He knelt beside a young man who writhed with a broken leg. Jim injected morphine, aligned the femur, wrapped the thigh with a stiff canvas shade, and secured it with tape. The man, though in agony, voiced his gratitude. With a strained smile, he said hed slept through his stop at Carroll.     

    Jim forced his way into the next car, where he saw a crumpled figure on the floor ahead. He pressed forward, grasping handles on the seats, avoiding brambles that invaded the shattered windows. The figure proved to be the conductor, unconscious and barely breathing. Foaming blood at his mouth indicated a rib-punctured lung. Jim dragged him to a door and lowered him to men below. 

    At the front end of the car, he noted something odd. A tourniquet contrived from a silk stocking and a pen had been applied to a woman’s calf. Who could have done it? Surely not one of the wounded about him. As he loosened the stocking to permit circulation, he saw that a button had been used at the pressure point. Someone skilled in first aid had preceded him through the train.

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    In the next car, Jim came upon his helper. To his surprise, it was a young girl, maybe fifteen or sixteen. She was tying a strip of polka-dot cloth around a woman’s head, and he noted her care and dexterity despite the patient’s flailing. “Open her sleeve,” he said as he knelt and prepared to inject a sedative. Instead, the girl just grasped the woman’s wrist. Puzzled but too focused to speculate, he unbuttoned the sleeve and pushed it up.

    As he eased the needle into a vein, other passengers cried out for water. He looked around. There was no one to send for it but his aide.  “Would you fetch some water, he said.

    “Wa-ter?she echoed with an accent.

    Jim glanced at her. What next? “You don’t speak English?” he asked in a tone almost accusing.

    Her blue eyes were alert as she shook her head. “No—a leetle Engleesh.” Self-consciously she brushed strands of gold hair from her soot-smudged face. Her black overcoat and high shoes looked foreign.

    Go. Bring water,” he said. “Much water.”

    She nodded with vigor and hurried off.

    He wondered about her as he went on treating the injured. Had she been on the train when it crashed? Her skill in applying first aid continued to puzzle him. She returned not only with water but also a young man to tote ittwo buckets. Jim was impressed in view of her limitation. Taking one of the buckets, he told the bearer to offer water to the passengers outside.

    From a window, he saw firemen remove a man from the engine cabin. It would be one of the train crew, trapped by onrushing coal and in need of immediate attention.  Jim dropped down from the car and sprinted toward the group. Kneeling beside the victim, who had been crushed and burned, he applied his stethoscope with care, then met the sober faces. A slight shake of his head verified the gruesome death.

    Meanwhile, the ambulance had set out with a full load. It would weave through Summitville’s narrow streets before making its long run to the city. Other ambulances were on the way, and cars and trucks were leaving with casualties. Jim greeted two doctors from Carroll. A few passengers remained on the ground, now wrapped in blankets, as it was raining harder and growing chilly. Trodden areas had turned to mud. 

    He went back through the coaches, treating wounds he had missed (but passing some bound with polka-dot cloth). Volunteers were still helping the injured off the train. The man with broken ribs was nowhere in sight. Finally Jim stepped from the rear platform and headed for his car, chilled by the rain and the water seeping through his shoes.

    He spied his young helper, now talking with animation to a local cattleman he had met at the Presbyterian church. The man, named Duval, insisted she leave with him. She knelt, however, to offer coffee to a blanket-wrapped figure. Then she saw the doctor and spoke to Duval, who gave him a stony look.

    Jim approached them and waved a greeting. “She’s been a real help,” he said, nodding toward her. “If she could stay a while longer . . .He paused at the sullen lack of response. A muttered exchange between the two eluded him, his high school French having mostly slipped away.

    “Your daughter?” he asked in a friendly tone.

    “Niece. My brother’s girl.

    Jim now noticed that her face, minus the soot, was pretty, with full lips and straight white teeth. “There’s a family resemblance,” he said, thinking to flatter Duval a bit. In the ensuing silence, he asked if she lived hereabouts.

    “Nope. Just got here,” said the cattleman.

    Pressed for time, Jim came straight to the point. “If she could help until we get through this. She sure knows her first aid.”

    “Had some training, I’m told. Worked with a sage femme in the old country.”

    She smiled at the familiar term. Jim recalled the meaning from medical texts: midwife. That could explain her composure in the face of crisis and bloodshed. Could you leave her here while you give some passengers a lift?

    But Duval moved off, barking Allons-y” at the girl, whose eyes clung to the doctor as she slowly climbed into a farm truck. They pulled away with a clash of gears and a trail of blue smoke.

    Jim continued to see an image of her bright blue eyes and flashes of their work together. He couldn’t dismiss the echoes of tension between her and her uncle. And he would later reflect that her hesitation may have planted a seed of caring in his subconscious mind.

 

 

   

 

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JennyWren wrote 36 days ago

The Doctor of Summitville

Bill, This is one of the most outstanding books I have been privileged to read. You are a skilled writer who draws your reader immediately into the story. The characters are strong, interesting and very human. Minor characters are sufficiently well developed so that the reader knows how they fit into the story. There is gentle humor, emotional turmoil, and great personal tragedy and triumph throughout the story.

You clearly understand human nature and behavior. I loved and cared for the main characters. I didn't want to finish the book because I didn't want the characters to leave me. This book is a treasure.

Dear reader, allow yourself the luxury of time to read “The Doctor of Summitville” without turning your attention to other books. I read it in three sittings as it was hard to leave the “pages” to do other things. I kept thinking about the characters and wondering what was going to happen to each one. In my humble opinion, that is the mark of a great book – when the writer captures your attention and quietly demands you give it to nothing else. Of course, you can, if necessary, read this book in multiple sessions without losing interest or forgetting what has previously occurred. While reading you will notice the fine points are painstakingly researched as the story discusses medical jargon and situations along with vivid descriptions of small town culture and history of the depression and war era.

Had I been allowed to rate this book more than six stars, I would have done so. It is truly a masterpiece.

LittleDevil wrote 44 days ago

Hi Bill

I first read and backed this over 900 days ago. I've reached chapter three and in my opinion this is by far one of the best books I've read here on authonomy. And I don't bullshit, Bill. I remember enjoying it back then, but at the time I was getting George to the desk and time was short. Although I still managed 6 chapters.

I would not hesitate to buy this book. Honestly it is written with all the qualities of a published MS. If this is not the first to be picked up from the desk, I'll eat my hat.
I'm already in love with Jim!

Had this book been uploaded recently, it would have made the desk weeks ago. Just sorry for you that it has got caught up in the old system and taken so long. But I believe anything worth having is worth waiting for.
Very best of luck
Sue xxx

JohnDoe wrote 75 days ago

I happened across Violet's thread and decided to have a look.  That was some good fortune on my part.  This is easily one of the very best books I've read on this site in a full active year here.  From the first chapter I was completely gripped by your writing abilities and your characters and the story you were laying out, and you continued to deliver unfailingly chapter after chapter.  I'm just sorry I found this so late in the night here in the UK and I don't have time to read more tonight.  This is one I'll be coming back to at my first opportunity tomorrow and reading to the end.  Your two main characters are fully formed, engaging and evoke respect, sympathy and care.  Your other characters are as well perfectly  drawn and written so as to make me interested in them all.

It all flows without one missed beat.  

I see a recent reviewer has used a word I wished to.  But before I saw that I'd emailed my feeling on your work to another writer here, I was so taken by it, so pease do take this as an original sentiment from me.  Stunning.  Stunningly good.

I would buy and recommend this to anyone who wanted to read a book.  I honestly think it has a universality of appeal, irrespective of genre tags.

Thank you.  Finding work like this here refreshes me more than I can say.  Really great, fully formed, and well but not obviously structured  writing and story-telling has a way of rooting us back into our own realities, and reminding us of our own hopes and aspirations not just through story alone, but also through a level of achievement.  It strengthens us.

John

Barry_Twotter wrote 75 days ago

This is a stunning novel driven by many skillful attributes. First of all, the pace is not only excellent, but each chapter moves the story along in a meaningful way. I started reading this and quickly found myself more than half-way through the book. Not only do you capture the time period and medical details flawlessly, but the characterization is full-bodied. This is a book where I felt like I really knew the characters and understood their motives and actions.

I've just read the events where things are starting to fall apart for Jim and will continue to read, as I'm anxious to find out what happens next. In many ways, this powerful novel demands the reader's attention, and it's difficult to put down. An easy six stars, this well crafted novel is one I highly recommend.

Bazza

Lina Beldona wrote 85 days ago

It's a very impressive story!

It's one of those novels wherein you catch a glimpse of what life is like at a certain period in history that is of great importance. I am a fan of historical novels and this is really something!! I really do hope this gets published. The way the words are written gives you an immediate picture of what their world is like and the characters are simply breathtaking.

I do hope that this would get published! It would be a great addition to the many of the books I love to collect!

Good Luck!!!!

BessV wrote 42 minutes ago

I have been admiring your cover and title for a while and finally got around to reading. I'm glad I did! I can see why it's in the top 5. You certainly know how to write a sentence. The books feels a little like Graham Greene, and I can really see it as a movie. You've done an excellent job with characterization and creating intrigue. The only bit of constructive criticism I would offer is that, while I really like the Prologue, I wasn't as taken in by the italicized section at the end of chapter 2. At that point, I was really into Jim's story and wanted to stay in it. Great job!

Dakota Velasquez wrote 55 minutes ago

The Doctor of Summitville...

Bill, I must say this is a breath-taking piece of work. Starting it, I found myself captured by every word, flowing seeminglessly never once missing a single beat. Before I knew it, chapter one was behind me, then chapter three, and then chapter six. You know how to use words, you know the human nature, it is astounding how you write. Clearly you have been at this for quite some time (and if not, please lie so you don't make the rest of us here on Authonomy feel bad). I don't usually go for this type of story due to the fact that I have found many to be rather boring, stale, and predictable. But you sir, you have reignited the flame of interest inside me. I do hope you weren't expecting me to point out any errors, for due to letting myself be consumed by you words, I found none of the sort and do have my doubts that there are any there. Six stars from me and now I must figure out how to make space on my bookshelf for you.

To all Authonomy readers just scanning through the comments on this stunning story, take my word. This is a piece of work by someone who knows exactly what he is doing. This story shouldn't even be here, it should be on display in every bookstore around the world. It should be published. Fans should be fighting each other for the last copy of this book. The characters are written so well I feel as if they are real people, people you could meet. Give this book a chance and you shall not regret it.

Bill, I do plan to return to finish. I unfortunately have little time left to spend here, alas I must bid you farewell for now. It has been an absolute honor reading your work and I can't wait for the day this is published so that I may buy a copy. Recommending this to everyone who will listen.

Thank you for sharing this,
Dakota

Lionell wrote 17 hours ago

Bill I am halfway through your book and actually can't put it down. The Doc is such a strong and very real character. One can only hope that he will be able to overcome adversity without too much collateral damage!
Based on what I read thus far I confidently rate 5 stars.
Will let you know how I get on.

Ladyred497 wrote 3 days ago

I enjoy the narritive perspectives of those not directly involved in the story. It's a nice style for this piece, reminicient of the time.

junetee wrote 4 days ago

The Doctor of Summitville

A wonderful action-packed start to the book. The doctor really had chance to show the town exactly what he was made of.
You've created an interesting, likeable character with Doc Martin. Along with a very vivid picture of the depression.
The town and the characters I can visualise so well.
Your writing is polished and flows well. (And I like the short chapters).
The humour mixed with the all the pain and tragedy, complete this amazing story.
This is an excellent book and I cannot fault it.
highly starred
junetee
FOUR CORNERS.book one.The Rock Star.
highly starred.
gentle humour and

Christa Wojo wrote 10 days ago

Dear Bill,

Congratulations on your success! You are most deserving. I am sorry I didn't have the time to comment before, but now I will take the opportunity to tell you how much I appreciate your book.

I enjoy the insight into this period in time because as far as historical novels go, I haven't seen much done in this era. It is when my grandparents grew up and it is fascinating to witness it as you reveal it in realistic detail.

I also like the setting of the small country town. It is far more interesting to see how the story unfolds because the impact of the events in the plot are amplified when played against this intimate ecosystem of characters.

You write with class and moderation and I wish you the very best!

Christa
The Vulning Pelican

SpicePepe wrote 12 days ago

An enthralling read. Congratulations on reaching the top five.
Bridget
The Road from Makhonjwa

Andrew Esposito wrote 12 days ago

Bill, it was a pleasure to read several chapters of your book. It is a great example of a slow burning romance spiced with intrigue. I love how you did not introduce the girls name until the 4th Chapter, this shows very mature control on tension, especially after a fleeting introduction to the reader in the first action scene of the train wreck. James is outlined well early, emotively by his career and by his obvious compassion for human suffering. Tthis again is a sign of experienced writing where the reader is influenced to form an opinion beyond visual description. I usually have a lot of tips to contribute, but in this case I have nothing further to say except I'm backing your novel and star rating it very highly. I plan to read it more thoroughly in the near future. Good luck & best regards, Andrew Esposito / Killing Paradise

Ladyred497 wrote 13 days ago

The short prologue really sets the scene, pulls you into the time and place flawlessly, leaving the reader wanting to know about the scandal, the killing? The protagonist's strong, compassionate character shine through without being over the top. Believable, nice, normal, setting the stage for the reader to cheer him on.

Christine May wrote 13 days ago

This book is my kind of choice of reading. It is about real people. It is about good and evil and the in between. Look forward to reading more.
Christine C. May

fictionguy wrote 14 days ago

I usually don't see writing this polished on this site. I imagine you have been writing for a while. Nice attentian to detail and the characters are well drawn. I didn't have time to read the complete book, but I will return when I have time and finish reading it. My bookshelf is full for now but five stars. Good luck.

Fender wrote 17 days ago

I've not just logged in and picked random books. I've been reading for a bit before diving in and this book is one I kept coming back to. It's definitely publishable. Good luck with it.

Natalie1 wrote 17 days ago

I can see why you are ranked No 2, Bill! Excellent in every sense. 6-stars to bring you to No 1 where you belong! Well done. Natalie (The Diary of John Crow - would you mind taking a peek if you have time?)

S.C. Klaus wrote 18 days ago

Great book! Beautifully written and full of twists and turns with diverse characters. Should be a N.Y. Times bestseller. Good luck, Bill!
From your Elite Critque group, Susan

S.C. Klaus wrote 18 days ago

Great book! Beautifully written and full of twists and turns with diverse characters. Should be a N.Y. Times bestseller. Good luck, Bill!
From your Elite Critque group, Susan

Sue50 wrote 19 days ago

Have backed you in the past and very happy to do it again. Looks like you're on your way to the editor's desk! Hope you have a chance to take a look at Dark Side by CC Brown.
Good Luck!
Sue50

maretha wrote 20 days ago

Dear Bill, I read the last few chapters of your book again and this time I used the scale at the top of the page, rather than straining my eyes. I love your characters and they'll be around my mind in any case for a long time. I've rated 6stars and hope others who take the time to read your well written script will do the same.
Maretha/African Adventures of Flame .. and Friends
P.S. I think you have to send me a pending friendship notice. For some reason I do not have those icons below my pic and info

Lee Libro wrote 21 days ago

After having only read the first chapter, my palms have begun to twitch to hold this book in paper and ink form. The opening scene with its beautifully crafted sense of time, place and character has anchored me to the story. Bill, as you know, I'm a fan of your writing, but in this case, the word fan doesn't accurately describe my reaction. The word obsession does it more justice. The Doctor of Summitville will now serve a compulsion for me to return to my computer to read, a habit I'm not fond of as I don't care to read books in electronic form. But now you've made it impossible for me not to!

Lee

Ms. J wrote 23 days ago

Doc of Summitville- Historical Reader's Group

Well, Bill, I just had to finish it tonight. I'm glad it was a happy ending. I particularly liked the twist you added. That was fun. I'm still in disbelief that the town would turn a blind eye to an uncle marrying a niece. Wow!

Anyway, great book, enjoyable read. It kept my interest. From the start, I connected with Jim, and I was so glad to see him conquer the conflict!

Cheers,
Ms. J- Lord of All

Ms. J wrote 23 days ago

Doctor of Summitville for Historical Fiction Reader's Group

Bill,
Just dropping by comment on chapters 5-17.

Chapter 11 confused me a bit. I wasn't sure of it's purpose, what it revealed, how it helped moved the plot along. Perhaps as I finish reading the book, I will understand better.

Ok, seriously! How is this marriage legal?!?! What a level of duplicity! So, the country was all in up arms about some Mormons having two wives, but the were ok with a man marrying his niece? How is that? -Ok, I'm done ranting. Obviously your chapters here gave me an emotional reaction. :-)

In Ch 17 I noticed that you spelled Henry two different ways, Henry and Henri. I would go with the French spelling, perhaps he changed it to fit in. Either way, it should be consistent.

I'm still reading, and that's good! I now know who I want Jim to kill, but we shall see.

Regards,
Ms. J- Lord of All

Ms. J wrote 24 days ago

Historical Fiction Readers Group
Bill,
I hear to comment on Dr. of Summitville. I read through ch 5 and quite enjoyed the read. I don't know if you're looking for suggestions, or just readers. I did have a suggestion when I was reading ch. 1. There were several places that you used had and it wasn't needed. Ex: had carried- Margaret had liked... The Trodden areas had turned. Dropping the had will make the language more active.

I love the description of the scenery as he's headed to the wreck. It made me feel like I was there.

In addition, I am finding Jim likeable. He wants to do the right thing, be a good person. He's a keen observer using little detail to infer larger information- a useful skill for a doctor.

Jim's experience at the hospital echoes some of the same problems still around in the medical field today.

I know there's going to be a death? Will Jim be the murderer? Who will he kille? Duval, Weber, his wife? I will read on to find out!

Regards,
Ms. J- Lord of All

maretha wrote 25 days ago

Dear Bill, I wanted to finish your novel, especially looking at its ranking. I've been reading it over the past three days. Your attention to detail is worth mentioning,tying up all lose ends. I read till my eyes popped out from tiredness, reading on the computer is a challenge to me. I did this chiefly for two reasons, firstly because I needed to find out what happens next and secondly because you are almost at the desk. I promised myself that I will only back a book that I have actually read. Thanks for leaving some of the love scenes to fill in by imagination. I do not like films or books that are too explicit, so your style of writing suits me.Thanks also for letting Annette live! At this time of night it would've been too much to handle if she died. All the best and kind regards. As far as my own book is concerned, I would like you to read it some time in the near future only as I'm busy with the cover and last chapter which could be uploaded near the end of the week. So if you have no other commitments if would be nice if you had time then. Maretha/African Adventures of Flame...and Friends

Kim Padgett-Clarke wrote 27 days ago

You have a very impressive publishing history. Five novels - wow! I can see why. You draw the reader straight into the action from the word go with the train crash. You must have carried out a lot of research on the medical world in that era as it's so easy to get things wrong otherwise. I have read three chapters so far and found them to be well written and quite compelling. Well done. Not far to go now to the ED!

Kim (Pain)

mikegilli wrote 28 days ago

What a treat to revisit Summitville and delve into Jim and Annettes's tragic yet finally happy story.
This has a Salinger-like classic style, simple and powerful, that comes from long thought and endless rewriting.
Thanks again Bill for the entertainment, and here's hoping you get to that darn desk next month!!

Adeel wrote 30 days ago

A nice, descriptive and well written book. Your writing style is very impressive, dialogue are realistic with vivid charachters and narrative is at great pace. Highly rated.

Cyrus Hood wrote 31 days ago

Beautifully crafted and the pace is well measured. The story grabs hold right away and the medical profession is clearly a subject of which you have a profound understanding. I fly fish with a doctor friend and I am drawn to the way general practitioners have the same practical insights. I really like this book and it is written in a style that is entirely evocative of the times within which it is set.
I would urge other contributors to pick up this tale- highly entertaining from the start.

regards

Cyrus

Cyrus Hood wrote 32 days ago

Hi Bill, I have just cleared all my books from Authonomy and posted a new work, Hellion 2. There are issues within this work that I am most anxious to get right. Would you please take a look and let me know if there is anything that you feel might cause offence, regarding the holocaust.

many thanks

Cyrus

jmoshins wrote 34 days ago

There is something very classic and classy about your writing, maybe a bit film noir/Raymond Chandler. It's very commercial in a good way so I can see why it's risen to the top. At times the short, punch style can seem a bit stilted but mostly it serves to the story well.

celticwriter wrote 35 days ago

Blessings Bill!

jim

JennyWren wrote 36 days ago

The Doctor of Summitville

Bill, This is one of the most outstanding books I have been privileged to read. You are a skilled writer who draws your reader immediately into the story. The characters are strong, interesting and very human. Minor characters are sufficiently well developed so that the reader knows how they fit into the story. There is gentle humor, emotional turmoil, and great personal tragedy and triumph throughout the story.

You clearly understand human nature and behavior. I loved and cared for the main characters. I didn't want to finish the book because I didn't want the characters to leave me. This book is a treasure.

Dear reader, allow yourself the luxury of time to read “The Doctor of Summitville” without turning your attention to other books. I read it in three sittings as it was hard to leave the “pages” to do other things. I kept thinking about the characters and wondering what was going to happen to each one. In my humble opinion, that is the mark of a great book – when the writer captures your attention and quietly demands you give it to nothing else. Of course, you can, if necessary, read this book in multiple sessions without losing interest or forgetting what has previously occurred. While reading you will notice the fine points are painstakingly researched as the story discusses medical jargon and situations along with vivid descriptions of small town culture and history of the depression and war era.

Had I been allowed to rate this book more than six stars, I would have done so. It is truly a masterpiece.

Goddess Pan wrote 36 days ago

Engrossing, believable and thoroughly enjoyed by me - Pan

jack hudson wrote 37 days ago

A fine first chapter. Its good to read the writing of a pro. I will read on. jack hudson

Laura_D_Purcell wrote 41 days ago

What a good start - the excitement and horror of a train wreck and we are instantly drawn to the likeable Doctor! I hope you don't mind me saying but I felt your pitch was perhaps a little long winded. The prose of your actual book flows well and is easy to read - if you made your pitch that punchy too I think it would pull in more readers. Hope that helps, well done with this!

fictionguy wrote 44 days ago

There are not many books on this site that are as polished as yjis book. It is moving and well written. I like the way it is set up and the characters are clear and believabe. Good job. This will be published soon..

LittleDevil wrote 44 days ago

Hi Bill

I first read and backed this over 900 days ago. I've reached chapter three and in my opinion this is by far one of the best books I've read here on authonomy. And I don't bullshit, Bill. I remember enjoying it back then, but at the time I was getting George to the desk and time was short. Although I still managed 6 chapters.

I would not hesitate to buy this book. Honestly it is written with all the qualities of a published MS. If this is not the first to be picked up from the desk, I'll eat my hat.
I'm already in love with Jim!

Had this book been uploaded recently, it would have made the desk weeks ago. Just sorry for you that it has got caught up in the old system and taken so long. But I believe anything worth having is worth waiting for.
Very best of luck
Sue xxx

Sue50 wrote 45 days ago

Awesome job! Happy to back your work. Hope you have a chance to take a look at Dark Side by CC Brown. Good Luck!
Sue50

George Fripley wrote 46 days ago

I didnt mind this at all - I like the length of it too...some books drag on if writers feel that they a story needs to be longer - and then they dilute ther work - you have not done this. I did like the character of Jim Martin - easy to relate to the story flows nicely...I'm not one for long comments if I have no constructive criticism - and I don't in this case, no criticism at all. Good luck with this.

George

Elizabeth Buhmann wrote 46 days ago

An excellent first chapter, Bill! I will move this to my WL and read on. The idea of a train wreck as a way of introducing the two main characters is excellent. It's gripping, and it reveals central and likeable traits in both the doctor and the young girl. By the end of the chapter, the attraction between the two, and the ominous antagonism of the uncle, have given me some broad outlines of the story to come. I'm curious and fully engaged. Very well done!

Elizabeth
The Made-Up Man

Tarzan For Real wrote 51 days ago

Sounds like an interesting concept and I'll have to read on.--JL "The Devil Of Black Bayou"

riantorr wrote 51 days ago

I imagine Depression-era stories must do very well given the economic climate these days. Do you plan on writing more in this time period?
RT

jlbwye wrote 51 days ago

Your excellent book gets better and better, John.

Jane (Breath of Africa)

celticwriter wrote 57 days ago

that's enough for now

Gideon McLane wrote 57 days ago

"The Doctor of Summitville" - Bill Carrigan. I read the 1st 2 chapters and scanned several comments. Readers of romance novels will enjoy this one - all the earmarks/hallmarks are here - stars for that. Bookshelf next month. Some thoughts: who is Margaret and why did she like the color of the car?; suggest "Coal smoke swept around him as he...."; you may be writing too much detail in your action scenes, dragging it out when you could be crisper. Hope this helps.

Gideon ("Thrill Writer's Remorse")

celticwriter wrote 64 days ago

happily rebacking.... :-)

BJCleare wrote 66 days ago

Wel done Bill, This was recommended by my wife and I'm glad I took a look at it. You write in a way that is transparent to the reader, without putting yourself in between us and the story. That's the way I like it! The story flows naturally and I was immersed in it from the first few sentences. I read the first three chapters and want to know what happens to Jim so I will continue. Lots of stars from me and on my bookshelf. ~B

Tod Schneider wrote 68 days ago

Extremely well crafted, smooth story telling! I admire how well you set the time period, establish your characters and move things along. Best of luck with this!
Tod Schneider
The Lost Wink

RB Ray wrote 70 days ago


Hi Bill

I've just put your Doctor of Summitville on my watchlist. It may take a couple of days to get back to you because of my silly working hours, but I will be back.

If you have any spare time could you take a look at my effort Motive Irrelevant. It's a crime thriller with a few twists.

Your comments would be most helpfull.

Regards

RB Ray

FrancesK wrote 72 days ago

Bill - critical judgment suspended, I read from beginning to end. I love stories about doctors, and Jim is so flawed and human and quirky. You evoke small town life in the 30s so well. A cast of fully formed characters. contemporary medical issues and a thorny path to true love add up to a most enjoyable read. 6 stars from me and, if you need a shelf to get to the ED, call on me - Frances K

JohnDoe wrote 75 days ago

I happened across Violet's thread and decided to have a look.  That was some good fortune on my part.  This is easily one of the very best books I've read on this site in a full active year here.  From the first chapter I was completely gripped by your writing abilities and your characters and the story you were laying out, and you continued to deliver unfailingly chapter after chapter.  I'm just sorry I found this so late in the night here in the UK and I don't have time to read more tonight.  This is one I'll be coming back to at my first opportunity tomorrow and reading to the end.  Your two main characters are fully formed, engaging and evoke respect, sympathy and care.  Your other characters are as well perfectly  drawn and written so as to make me interested in them all.

It all flows without one missed beat.  

I see a recent reviewer has used a word I wished to.  But before I saw that I'd emailed my feeling on your work to another writer here, I was so taken by it, so pease do take this as an original sentiment from me.  Stunning.  Stunningly good.

I would buy and recommend this to anyone who wanted to read a book.  I honestly think it has a universality of appeal, irrespective of genre tags.

Thank you.  Finding work like this here refreshes me more than I can say.  Really great, fully formed, and well but not obviously structured  writing and story-telling has a way of rooting us back into our own realities, and reminding us of our own hopes and aspirations not just through story alone, but also through a level of achievement.  It strengthens us.

John

Barry_Twotter wrote 75 days ago

This is a stunning novel driven by many skillful attributes. First of all, the pace is not only excellent, but each chapter moves the story along in a meaningful way. I started reading this and quickly found myself more than half-way through the book. Not only do you capture the time period and medical details flawlessly, but the characterization is full-bodied. This is a book where I felt like I really knew the characters and understood their motives and actions.

I've just read the events where things are starting to fall apart for Jim and will continue to read, as I'm anxious to find out what happens next. In many ways, this powerful novel demands the reader's attention, and it's difficult to put down. An easy six stars, this well crafted novel is one I highly recommend.

Bazza