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rank 3535 (-94)
word count 49516
date submitted 24.07.2009
date updated 20.02.2010
genres: Fiction, Thriller, Crime
classification: moderate
incomplete

Norm

Frank Rawlins

 

Norm is Oxford's new bright crime fighter. But Morse he ain't. He drives his girlfriend's Ka. He likes Springsteen. Sometimes he drinks lager ...

 

Norman Philip Ducker is far from the norm. And far from the late lamented Chief Inspector Morse. Unlike Oxford's celebrated detective, Norm uses the city's buses or borrows his girlfriend's little Ford. He likes lager as well as real ale. He likes Buddy Holly and REM and Bruce Springsteen. Oh … and he’s not a policeman. He does like crosswords, however. And reading. Cosmology and science and religion fascinate him. So do football and rugby. But he still can’t get his head round Doris Lessing. Norm is a civilian employed by the police as a coordinator for Crimestoppers, the charity that invites anonymous tip-offs. He isn’t overkeen, however, on police procedure and political correctness. He relies on an acute sense of hearing, a good memory, and a strange logic to weave a way through laborious, official channels; through piles of electronic files and folders, sheaves of paperwork, and tangles of red tape. This is the story of how he battles the Brass to play a key part in unravelling a complicated web of murder. It also happens to be a moving love story.

 
 

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a new crime fighter, in oxford but he's no morse, not even a cop, suspense, thriller, with a love story too

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FrankR wrote 404 days ago
Barry Wenlock wrote 88 days ago

Hi,
A really good read. Thanks so much ,
Barry
Little Krisna and the Bihar Boys

Cherokeeknight wrote 103 days ago

Nice read. I found it interesting to say the least. Maybe I can come back and finish it at a later date. Backed

Nick
Invasion From Within

Cruse wrote 153 days ago

Terrific! I'm certainly going to enjoy this one. Back it? I'd buy it.
Russell Cruse
Head Count

Lockjaw Lipssealed wrote 169 days ago

What drew me to this was the title....I cracked up when I read. What kept me reading was the story/the writing. I could easily see "Norm" becoming a series.

Great job!


Lockjaw

Linda Lou wrote 185 days ago

Hullo Frank. great story line and subject. Backed don't forget to have a look at mine

Linda Lou Long
Southern dis-Comfort
http://www.authonomy.com/ViewBook.aspx?bookid=11421

Jesse Hargreave wrote 193 days ago

Backed.

Jesse - Savant

Jared wrote 194 days ago

Frank, your pitches have to be among the best I've read on the site. They're chatty as well as informative, and most certainly got my attention. This is a police procedural from a completely different viewpoint. Very refreshing, Norm is a wonderful character and you have a real talent for writing books that people will actually want to read. I live near Oxford, I'd like to go for a beer with Norm.
There's so much here to admire. NP501 and her revelations about the mayor. She turns up again a couple of chapters later - wonderful. Then there's the opening of chapter 6, a gold medal won and Norm's inability to explain the emotional pull of sport to Maria. Tears in his eyes, but he dashes off rather than explain his feelings - beautifully observed and like so much of your writing, bitingly accurate.
I'm loving this, I'd buy this. I write in the same genre and I'm always interested in a different approach to crime writing. If I had to suggest an area it could be improved I'd have to say some of the paragraphs lengths are bordering on excessive, but nothing else. Backed, absolutely.
Jared.
Mummy's Boy.

Bob Steele wrote 196 days ago

Norm is a real GEM, and I'm glad to have found it. You have produced one of the best pitches I've seen - who could resist the combination of crosswords and cosmology...? I was chuckling by the end of C1 - Mr 10 CC is such a hapless character. C2 turned the chuckle into a laugh and I enjoyed your selections of words like 'a mere spit in space' or 'exaggerated stroll'.By C3 I was entirely under Norm's spell and I like him so much that I stop caring about where this bus is going, I'm just happy to enjoy the ride. This was too good a read to permit me to take notes or come up with ideas for improvement - so I guess I'll just have to back it as it is. Great work!

paxie wrote 206 days ago

Norm

I read your loaded chapter one & jumped to six........
The opening is gripping..And first I was irritated by all the times you said....'I' .....Then I got it,,, you did it to crank up the tension,,,,,Mmmm,,, clever, it did make me feel I had to read faster....

C6
TV (just) in time to see the British team lose.
he remembered (just )too late to stop himself
telling them he (had) (just ) remembered the creepy

I didn't see the need for the words in brackets......You very rarely need 'had' before an - ed verb.....

Best of luck with this...
Shelved with best wishes.

Eleanor Anne Dudley wrote 217 days ago

Dear Frank.

Your book contrasts greatly with ours, yours is terribly funny and a little mysterious.

You could put more fun into it if you showed more, not that what you do show isn't enough, but we would love th "see" more of "Norm."

Backing it.

Eleanor and Sharkey.

Jo Ellis wrote 218 days ago

You have a flair for narrative and thus write lit fic well. Although I am not usually a fan of lit fic I found Norm an intriguing character, quicky and original and your first chapter was chilling and perfect for a thriller.

I like the way you end chapter two... with a nutter calling crimestoppers.... an insight into Norm's work, where he isn't a policeman working for crimestoppers. I would be interested to see how Norm goes about solving crimes without the police procedures....

Fun, quicky, great writing.

Jo xx

Spoilt

Pat Black wrote 220 days ago

Hi Frank, really enjoyed this - looking forward to the clash between the very methodical killer and Norm, a lovable copper. The humour was strong and you've got great characterisation - key skills for creating a detective, even one so off-beat. Well-written, too. Big fan of this

Pat Black
Snarl

Fromante wrote 220 days ago

This is great Frank, I have looked for a book like this on the site after I was reintroduced to the thriller genre. I say nothing more than I back this book with a certain feeling of its success.

Fromante. (Norman). Muddledydo and also The Witch of Hambone Bk.3.

Kolro wrote 221 days ago

It always fills me with joy when I find a comedy on here that instantly stands out as having that certain something or as the French call it "that certain something." Due to the nature of this site I can't copy and paste all the little bits I loved but I just want you to know there were a lot. I love the humour here and think that this is going somewhere fun. Backed with pleasure.

T.L Tyson wrote 228 days ago

Hello,
this came recommended in the forum, not too sure who it was at this point. As my memory is shite these days.
I enjoyed the first chapter, it told us exactly what was going to happen through Mr 10CC's prep plan. Though I liked it I felt the second chapter was stronger than the first. I enjoyed it more.
Apart from some lengthy paragraphs that I thought could be broken up to be easier on the eyes, I thought this was a good read. It moved steadily, had great character development and some humor through Norm's eyes. Namely the last line of the second chapter.
Definitely heading down the fast paced thriller road.
The thing that caught my eye is , he likes Springsteen and since Springsteen is pretty much the coolest guy that walks the planet I am gonna go ahead and back this. Don't think you don't deserve it, your writing is good but Bruce is better. ;)
Backed
T.L Tyson-Seeking Eleanor

C.C.McKinnon wrote 230 days ago

This book was recommended to me and I am happy it was. The opening chapter grabs your attention and pulls you in. You have constructed such a good character who is interesting and smart. In fact, that is how I view your writing after getting caught up reading this. Interesting and smart. I want to read more.

Strayer wrote 233 days ago

I hope you continue on with Norm and write a series. i enjoyed this book because the story was clear and easy to follow. It held my interest. Norm isn't typical. Thanks for writing this.

TheLoriC wrote 296 days ago

A fantastic blend of crime and thriller. Very strong and well-written premise and your opening chapters also work well. This is written with such great style and grabs the reader almost right away. On my shelf.

L. Anne Carrington, "The Cruiserweight"

lynn clayton wrote 297 days ago

Frank, your pitch is brilliant- it tells us everything we need to know whilst being interesting and not trying too hard. Then we get to the book. And quite honestly, I'd rather read about Norm than Morse. Your style is unpretentious but lacking nothing. To set it in Oxford is clever because people like to imagine themselves there. And Norm is a really great character who could make your fortune. Shelved.Lynn

Francis Albert McGrath wrote 301 days ago

Norm is a great character, well set up and realised in ch 2. I don't quite understand what ch 1 is trying to achieve - it's not coming across to me as a reader. Given the Oxford location, it might be no harm to mention some prime spots in Ch 1 or 2, so we can ground ourselves as readers. Very enjoyable. All the best with this.
Frank

FrankR wrote 302 days ago

Hi fellow Frank - thanks for comment. I like the little rant - it's only half a paragraph.

Immediate, fresh prose and sharp characterization.
Nice.
Backed.
The rant against literary fiction could come out though, it didn't seem to fit.

FrankR wrote 302 days ago

Hi fellow Frank - thanks for comment. I like the little rant - it's only half a paragraph.

Immediate, fresh prose and sharp characterization.
Nice.
Backed.
The rant against literary fiction could come out though, it didn't seem to fit.

FrankR wrote 302 days ago

Hi fellow Frank - thanks for comment. I like the little rant - it's only half a paragraph.

Immediate, fresh prose and sharp characterization.
Nice.
Backed.
The rant against literary fiction could come out though, it didn't seem to fit.

Francesco wrote 302 days ago

Immediate, fresh prose and sharp characterization.
Nice.
Backed.
The rant against literary fiction could come out though, it didn't seem to fit.

Clare Hill wrote 307 days ago

In Chapter 1, I thought the rant against literary fiction was more a writerly thing than a copper thing. It seemed more like the author's opinion than the character's. I enjoyed chapter 2, particularly the cottage pie (although the characters didn't!) Watch out for POV change in exchange between Norm and Dewi, it's a bit disconcerting.
Norm is a great character, and with a bit of tweaking you could really have something here; it's unusual, which would make it memorable to the reader.

Terry61 wrote 400 days ago

This was a great read. Good story, well-drawn characters and a clever plot line. The pace of the book keeps you interested and the lead character, Norm, has that little extra 'something' that keeps him apart from other fictional detectives. Highly believable and an unusual slant on the work of Crimestoppers!

Zeta Pi wrote 404 days ago

This is terrific. Immediately you hook the reader with Mr10CC’s – great pseudonym btw – calculated, methodical approach to the impending crime. Norm is such a well-rounded character; his thoughts are interesting, on everything from Space to Literary Fiction, which don’t seem out of place, or too much information. Instead, these snippets give us a huge insight into Norm, and his personality.

I would say, take care when changing POV. For a very short time, I thought Norm was Mr 10CC. I then had to reread the pitch to check before realising they were two different people. I know why you’ve done it, and I’m not saying you shouldn’t do it, but there are pitfalls, and distracting the reader from the story is one of them.

Overall though this has all the ingredients set up for a great read: clean, natural sounding dialogue, tantalising hooks at the ends of chapters 1 and 2, so I’m happy to support by giving it a spell on my shelf.

FrankR wrote 404 days ago
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