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2150 Total Integration

Michael Gray

A cryo scientist, trapped in his own invention, is found alive 130 years later. He confronts his mentor and alien species to survive.

 

Mika Gerey, a cryogenic scientist, is buried in his newly developed cryo chamber during a 21st century super storm. He's found by 22nd century archaeologists and revived with considerably advanced medical science.

His dream of being born in the future becomes a reality. He quickly adapts but struggles with his new friend's ambition to exploit technology in the human body as he visualises the destruction of humanity and other galactic species as the end result. He finds new love but she's more than just beautiful, she's 22nd century!

Humans achieve deep space travel and become visible to friendly and aggressive species. Mika's psychology retains primitive instincts which he employs, along with 2150 science, to defeat attacks upon Earth. His leadership is seen as humanity's saviour and he's made world leader. His imagination takes humans out into the galaxy to become members of the highly evolved Galactic Seniors Partnership.

Technical science makes humans invulnerable, which again draws the interest of the 'Gohdamma'. Meeting this species reveals they are the originators of human evolution. Their revelations shatter fundamental beliefs and they leave humanity in awe of their knowledge and power.

 
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It's Monday

Chapter One

 

It’s Monday

 

 

Leading a Cryogenics project was all time consuming but worth every minute.  I spent most of my time hidden away from the hustle and bustle of everyday life in a research establishment, cleverly built into the side of a mountain in northern Wales, UK.  My team viewed me as Cryogenics guru but I was just enthusiastic about my work and had gathered together a talented group with a similar outlook.

 

Driving to the laboratory through some of the worst weather conditions I’d ever experienced made me think about why I was doing this.  Monday as the first working day of the week had never inspired me to jump out of bed, but I was committed to my current preoccupation, so I made the effort.  It made no difference that I was pathological about finishing the project, the house was empty and there was nobody else to worry about.  I’d not ventured into the high maintenance luxury of marriage again and there wasn’t a current girlfriend.  Pulling into the Research Centre’s car park I noticed the excessive amount of water gushing off the mountain’s rock face around the building, was actually forming waterfalls cascading into the car park!  Something I’d not seen before and its significance didn’t register at the time. 

 

The research team wasn’t large as the mechanics of cryogenics is confined to just a few sciences.  I’d spent months trawling universities and research projects for the right people to cope with my exacting demands and sometimes short fuse, but I made sure the sign on my office door didn’t make me unapproachable.  It read Professor Mika Gerey – Research Centre Director’.   

 

Out in the general office I walked over to the youngest in our team.  He sat at his desktop workstation and looked up from his screen with a grin on his face. 

‘When are we testing it for real, boss?’

John easily held his own with the more senior team members, a semi-serious nineteen year old with a mischievous tendency but a lot of talent and a bright future in front of him. 

‘You pushing me boy?’  I smiled to make sure he didn’t misconstrue my reaction and he refocused on his workstation’s screen.  ‘The government’s Technology Department don’t appreciate being rushed and will withdraw funding if we make too much progress.  It’s not good for future budget proposals.’  He looked up at me with a puzzled frown.  ‘Not your worry my son, least not today anyway.’  I grasped his head and faced him back to the screen.  This was a government sponsored project, attached to the European Space Agency.  Some bright sparks in their organisation had visions of travelling further than Mars and it needed Cryogenics for the astronauts.

  

 ‘Weather’s bad out there!’  My senior assistant, Daniel Eden, had been monitoring the forecasts on his workstation.  ‘A very nasty system is creeping up on us from the western Atlantic,he informed me and began biting his bottom lip.  He’d neglected the schedule of checks I’d asked him to complete in favour of watching the storm’s progress.   The climatic changes, predicted by scientists since the nineteen eighties, were becoming a reality.  The storms we got in 2020 were scary stuff but I preferred to believe that we were relatively safe here, tucked under this mountain.  Governments worldwide struggled with an increasing pressure from the electorate to maintain the status quo whilst tackling climate change, an impossible objective.  There had been riots in many capital cities, but they made no sense as it was far too late and governments were helpless to avoid the effects of dramatic changes in the planet’s climate.  I left the lab and made for the Centre’s entrance foyer. 

The reception guard looked at me and then through the plate glass frontage of the building at the gathering storm. 

‘I wouldn’t go out there Professor Gerey!’  He shook his head as he said it. 

I raised my hand in acknowledgement.  ‘Don’t worry George, I’ve no intention of doing so but I need to know if I can risk sending the team home.’ 

He shrugged his shoulders.  ‘Hard to say but if you’re going to you need to do it soon, it’s getting worse by the minute.’

 

On the way back to the lab I decided they needed to go, but there was one more task I wanted completed before they left.  Back in the lab I popped my head around the main office door.

‘Jem, come and help me calibrate the Cryo’s gas release, please.’ 

Jemma, a Cryogenics PhD had contributed extensively to the set-up of the chamber. 

‘On my way, Mika.’  Very attractive, tall and leggy, I’d always thought she could make a success in modelling.  She’d have been devastated if I’d ever admitted it.    We were making final adjustments to a Cryogenic chamber, powered by a new technology Id perfected, after finding a way to tap the energy in our planet’s gravitational field.  It was low level power but it was inexhaustible, Id named it Magnacell.  The concept was new.  I’d developed a system of life support that supplied nutrients to the occupant, albeit in very small quantities and only when it detected a life threatening level in the occupant’s body.  We didn’t know how long this would keep a human alive, but tests had easily reached a five year duration period with minimal depletion of suppliesThe chamber had been proven using small animals and we were waiting on the volunteer human guinea pig, who’d agreed to some short term testing. I was disappointed that he’d not turned up as arranged but we had a fall-back planWe had a second volunteer, but there was some extensive environmental testing to complete first.

 

The racket outside made my thoughts wander back to the climatic chaos raging overhead as I considered the options.  It’s a strong building but what would I do if the Research Centre couldn’t take it?  I glanced around the lab.  There’s not much here.., the cryo chamber, maybe?  A rumble from somewhere overhead made my thoughts switch to how my sister and brother-in-law were coping with the extreme conditions we’d created by our abuse of the planet.  My sister was married to an electrical engineer, with whom I’d had numerous debates on life, politics, the universe and my house wiring.  I had a lot of confidence in his judgement to keep them both safe and made a mental note to call when this storm had passed over.  

 

Watching Daniel it was obvious that his nervous system was in overload.  He was fixated by global news reports, which were telling of mass fatalities as weather conditions exceeded all known limits and were simply cleansing areas of the planet’s surface of human habitation.  The weather reports on his workstation were recording climatic conditions humans hadn’t seen before.  Rainfall no longer adequately described the amounts of water being moved around by winds of two hundred mph plus.  The Ice Cap melt along with an accelerated release of methane from ocean warming, plus the defrosting tundra, was completing the sequence of events that scientists had predicted. Nothing we did now would stop this dramatic change in our planet’s climate. I shuddered at the thought that this was just the beginning of what lay in the future, and again drew a small comfort from the knowledge that we were partly protected by the mountain above us... little did I know.  I’d told everyone to go home except Dan and Elizabeth.  They were the team’s expertise on human physiology and were both highly qualified medical scientists working on the effects of stasis on human tissueI’d always found it slightly strange to see people with significantly different physical attributes make it in a successful relationship. With Liz at about five feet four and Dan topping out at six feet three I couldn’t help smiling to myself whenever they entered the room together.  Evenso, I wouldn’t have wanted to lose either of them from the team.  They acknowledged my concern and agreed to leave.

 

A couple of hours later the barometer was almost bursting its tubes and pressures were actually causing the building to vibrate.   

Daniel shouted above the roar outside.  Theyre saying that this storm system is huge and covers most of Europe and part of North Africa.  Reports are estimating over two million have already been wiped out by this, there’s something bad happening out there.  Although Id earlier dismissed the team and insisted they go home, Daniel had wanted to stay.  I’d suspected that he’d been afraid to venture outside and right now, I felt the same.  I tried to ignore the chaos by concentrating on our project tasksIt was now late afternoon and the vibrations had increased and were causing laboratory equipment to collapse.  Windows began shattering.  The building was a strong construction but I was watching the ceiling crack.  Daniel saw it too and was panicking.

‘Get out!’ I screeched at him.  If this place collapses we certainly won’t survive.  He shot a questioning glance at me.  ‘Now, get out now!’  We both ran for the door but Daniel disappeared under a large section of ceiling that had detached from the roof.  

NoOh my god, no!’  He couldn’t have stood a chanceFor a few seconds I stood frozen, staring at the large slab of concrete that hid Daniel.   Mixed with the rising fear in me, was a gut wrenching nausea.  He was a good friend as well as colleague. My despair was overridden by an earth shaking vibration, accompanied by a low frequency rumble.  The lights were failing and more of the ceiling was falling to the floor.  Large cracks were snaking down the walls and water supplies had ruptured, pouring a fountain into the middle of the room.  

 

It flashed through my mind.  If this is an earthquake, this could be it, I won’t survive in here.  I shot a glance around the lab, looking for a way out, feeling totally helpless but hopeful of some miracle then I remembered the Cryo chamber.  It wasn’t a small device and as a space saving measure, had been sighted in a natural alcove in the rock face of the mountain.  If this was my destiny then so be it, but there might be a chance that it would offer some protection. This was no time to get choosey.  I’d have to chance that I’d be found later.  I clambered over the large chunks of ceiling now strewn across the floor, climbed into the Cryo chamber and closed the lid.  Closing the lid sealed the chamber and activated the Cryogenic system.  I knew this but could see no alternative apart from a painful and traumatic death.  After I’d attached the sensing and minerals feed to my arm the chamber began its cooling phase and the anaesthetic gas made me drowsyI’d often wondered what the sensation would be like.  The computer enhancement calculated my body mass and adjusted the conditions to suit.  As I’d set no time parameter it assumed infinity.  During the last few seconds of consciousness I watched the destruction of the laboratory through the chamber’s inspection portal.  As consciousness slipped away I had visions of Daniel’s last moments and shivered thinking will I see blue sky again?  A strange reaction but maybe it equates to a survival instinct? 

 

 I opened my eyes and attempted to focus, no detail only patches of light and dark but I could just make out the silhouette of someone standing next to me. 

He spoke.  ‘How are you feeling?’ 

I tried to respond but my lungs could only produce wisps of breath across my lips which carried no sound.  I can’t speak!   Panic rose in me. 

‘Don’t worry, this will put that right.’  He placed a small metal disc on my neck and another on my chest.  I tried to focus on his face but didn’t yet have sufficient control over my eyes.  Evenso, it was obvious that he was studying me for a reaction.  Is he a doctor?  Half an hour later my vision had improved some and his shoulder length blonde hair and medium build became obvious.  Somewhere around his mid-late thirties I guessed.  He responded to my probing stare through weakened eyes. 

You...er, you’ve been asleep for a while. 

Even with a fog in my head I could sense that he was a bit uneasy.  My throat was feeling warm and prompted a coughing fit.  When it subsided I had a voice, well, more like a toad with laryngitis, actually.  ‘Where am I?  Is this the UK Research Centre?  My voice crackled like an ancient valve radio reception.  ‘Has the storm subsided?’  

He drew a long breath.  No, you’re not in the UK.  He watched closely for my reaction and I could just make out his facial features produce a deep frown, which would become very familiar to me in time.  Please don’t be concerned, you are quite safe here. 

Some hours later I opened my eyes and became aware of softly spoken questions.

‘Are you awake?  How do you feel?’  My companion was leaning over me and had placed another disc on my forehead.  My throat felt less sore and I was more able to form some words and my vision was sharper.

‘I feel a bit stronger; did the storm do much damage?’ 

He raised his eyebrows in a questioning expression.  ‘I’m not sure what storm you mean, can you expand on that?’

The storms created by the changes in climate that were predicted.’ 

He looked confused.  ‘What year are we talking about?’ 

Is he kidding?  2020 of course.’  I couldn’t reconcile his apparent confusion. 

He caught his breath.  ‘Oh my god, I think I know what you mean.  Do you feel strong enough to cope with some difficult news?’ 

What could be more difficult than the catastrophe that’s just happened? It occurred to me as I nodded.  

‘The storm you experienced was just the beginning.  The building you were in was mostly buried by a partial collapse of the mountain.  Ironically, it actually protected you from the changing climatic conditions.  They increased in ferocity until, by around 2048, they had killed around a third of the human global population and destroyed large areas of civilisation.’ 

What’s he talking about?  2048..., killed a third..., what’s going on?  I was lying on my back and tried to raise myself from..., there’s nothing underneath me, but I can feel a couch or something.  

He could see my confusion and gently pressed me back into a prone position.  Please, you must allow your body to recover slowly.

 

I must have lost consciousness again because the next time I opened my eyes I was alone, feeling more awake and a little stronger but I still couldn’t stand.  A cursory sweep of my surroundings told me, something isn’t right!  More oddities became apparent as I scanned around the room.  There were no sharp angles where the walls met the ceiling and I couldn’t locate any doors.  No obvious lighting fixtures but the ceiling appeared to be emitting a light as bright as day.  An absence of furniture, except for the transparent bed I was lying on, gave the room a clinical atmosphere.  Everything was one colour...white.  Even more strange!  Next to me and exactly mirroring my body and movements, was a sort of holographic projection.  It lay prone as I did and showed all my bodily functions through a transparent skin, including my beating heart.  There were numerical values next to vital areas, which changed in rhythm with my pulse and breathing.  This doesn’t look like any hospital I know.  Where the hell am I?  I shouted as loudly as my voice would allow.  That’s not possible!  The guy looking after me had just walked through a wall.  My brain fought with what my eyes were telling it.  This can’t be real, who are you, what is this place?  I was in panic mode again. 

He put a hand on my shoulder.  It’s alright, calm down and I’ll explain. 

I didn’t have the strength to do anything else. 

He checked the readings on the hologram next to me.  Do you want to talk?’ 

I nodded.  It was still easier than talking. 

I’m Jodi Anderson, I live here and you are in my house as my guest. 

My face contorted as I squinted in an effort to focus.  I just imagined you walking through a wall, what have you done to make me hallucinate? 

He again put a hand on my shoulder in a gesture of reassurance.  Youre not hallucinating, what you saw is a realityThe explanation is simple but you’ll find it difficult to accept at first. 

 Find it difficult? He’s got to be kidding after what has just happened.  I again tried to sit up.  He attached another small disc to my right temple and the room faded.

 

Sometime later I woke up to find myself still in this fantasy world, maybe it wasn’t a dream?

I’m sorry, I had to sedate you.  You were experiencing a metabolic overload, how do you feel now?’

‘Mmm...I’m better,’ I croaked.  My voice was still pretty rough.  ‘Who did you say you are?

He smiled momentarily.  I’m a research scientist specialising in human biotics or put another way, I research the advancement of human capabilities through technology. 

I interrupted.  But there’s no such thing. 

His smile returned.  There is now.  You are in what used to be central Europe, now known as Ecee, which I believe is a corruption of the old European Community name.’  He hesitated and raised his eyebrows.  ‘I can’t delay this any longer.  Nothing will make sense if you’re not told.’

‘Told what?’  I queried.  

He drew a deep breath and stretched his lips across his teeth in a grimace.  This will seem impossible but in time you are in what was your future, the year....... is 2150! 

 

I croaked and choked because I couldn’t scream. 

He was anticipating my reaction and repeated the hand on shoulder reassurance gesture.  Don’t worry, you’re ok, really you’re ok and in amazingly good shape considering you have been in stasis for one hundred and thirty years. 

Even with my head in a fog his words pierced my mind like a laser and made me choke again as I tried to rationalise what hed said. My brain functions were slowly recovering and he was right, I couldn’t accept it.  A hundred and thirty years in stasis, how is that possible? 

 

I laid there with my mind searching for something familiar but my memory was fragmented.  Vague flashes of images here and there, but I understood his words.  Confusion reigned and the new reality made the blood drain from my face. 

He noticed this.  ‘You may not have all your memories.  Stasis can preserve biological tissue but it’s not clear what happens to the brain’s electromagnetic energy over such a long period.  Nobody has ever survived that length of time before.  His expression lightened to a smile.  Even so, you are recovering well. 

I don’t understand.  I didn’t have enough awareness to be truly shocked by what he was saying. 

He continued.  You were found by one of our archaeological teams, who were excavating a site in the old UK.  They found you in the remains of what appears to have been a research centre.  That Cryogenic Chamber saved your life.  Luckily for you, the power system on the chamber was a prototype Magnacell.  This technology was the prime reason you survived when the centre disappeared under a gigantic land slide during one of the super storms of that time.  Fortune was really smiling on you.  The Magnacell was still functioning when we dug you out, but I’m struggling to make sense of how we found you... in a Cryogenic Chamber.  Can you remember anything of those moments?  What were you doing, experimenting on yourself?’

I tried hard to recall the circumstances that had saved my life.  Substitute...I remembered!

I coughed, choked and croaked‘Substitute, I remember substitute.’

‘What, you filled in for somebody?’ 

I nodded and did another toad impression.  ‘Didn’t turn up, bad storm, but I jumped into the Cryo Chamber because there was nowhere else to go.’  

Jodi was excited at the prospect that I might have retained full recall.  That’s excellent!  Very promising, it’s looking like your memory is still intact.’  He grinned.  ‘Well, whoever it was did you the biggest favour they possibly could.  In any event, it’s a great privilege and very exciting to be your host.  Your presence here is not yet widely known but when it is there will be many people wanting to meet you.  

I suddenly had a flash of the laboratory being destroyed and Daniel’s fate.  I struggled to control my saliva again.  ‘Did they find another body in the wreckage?’  

His expression dulled.  They found skeletal remains not more than twenty feet from where you were in the Cryo chamber.’ 

We sat quietly for a short while before Jodi broke the silence.  His enthusiasm was obvious as he explained his reasons for being by my side when I’d gained consciousness. 

I’m charged with looking after your needs and bringing you up to date with life in the twenty second century.  What’s your name?

Er…er...it’s...Mika, Mika GereyThat was difficult.  I certainly had some way to go yet.

Jodi recognised my difficulty and suggested I relaxed quietly and took time to consider what he’d told me.  I’ll be fascinated to hear about life that far back, when you’re ready.  His words faded. 

Yeah, ok.  I turned my head to face him but he’d gone. 

 

My mind was clearing, which enabled me to try and order my thoughts and make rational sense of what he’d said but I still wasn’t able to accept the reality.  His words kept repeating You have been in stasis for one hundred and thirty years.  

My body was still weak and I must have dropped back into unconsciousness for some while because darkness now filled the space outside the windows.  I scanned the room again to find Jodi, sitting at a sort of breakfast table arrangement, protruding from one wall. 

He smiled with eyebrows raised.  Hi Mika, how are you feeling? 

I was able to sit up and let my legs hang over the edge of the couch or whatever.  My voice had improved a tad.  

‘What have I been lying on?  I can feel it but not see it.’ 

 Jodi smiled.  You are being supported by an anti-gravity field.  It’s preferable to a solid surface, kinder on the body.’ 

Our previous conversation suddenly gushed back into my mind. 

I just can’t get my head around this.  You said this is 2150...one hundred and thirty years in the future? 

His smile faded.  ‘I did say that Mika and it’s true.  You might remember the Magnacell that powered your chamber?’ 

I nodded and smiled to myself.  I hadn’t yet told him it was my invention.  I again inwardly smiled at the realisation that I’d remembered another snippet from a hundred and thirty years ago. 

‘Well, it was able to maintain minimal conditions, which gave us enough to work with and successfully bring you out of stasis.’ 

The words, ‘which gave us enough to work with,’ sort of registered but I was later to learn the mind blowing truth of what these words meant. 

His voice was beginning to echo.  I had to lie down again or fall off the antigravity couch.

 

Two days later and more conversations with Jodi, plus help from some unfamiliar medical techniques, my strength was building and I was beginning to come to terms with my situation and gaining more memories.  Jodi had explained how my burial must have been presumed fatal.  The dominant preoccupation would have been survival and the rebuilding of the centres of civilisation. 

 

I was now strong enough to walk about the room and question what I was seeing.  Where’s the door?  My mind was recovering a keen edge and I was taking more note of the detail of my surroundings. 

Jodi was sat at his breakfast table.  There were no joints!  It was as if the wall had reached out and formed a breakfast table from its own material.  How do they do that? I couldn’t reconcile the technique.  

My host was enjoying a coffee...I drew a breath. Mmm, that smells good.  ‘How do I make a coffee, Jodi? 

He swung around and grinned.  ‘This might be interesting,’ he said with a glint of mischief in his eye.  He pointed to a wall position which contained a recess.  ‘Go to the recess in the wall by the window and simply say coffee’. 

As I approached the recess it morphed into what looked something like the dispensing aperture in a coffee machine that I would recognise.  The phenomenon startled me and made me hesitate.  

Jodi chuckled.  ‘It’s ok, go on, order a coffee.’ 

I spoke to it and a coffee materialised out of nowhere and sat steaming on the dispensing grill.

‘What... 

Jodi interrupted me.  ‘It’s a Molecular Replicator; we call them Shapers because they can reproduce anything and everything.  It’s a product of the convergence of computing, molecular scanning, nano-engineering and human ingenuity.  You won’t get a better coffee.’  I wasn’t completely ignorant of the technologies he’d mentioned but to see them put together like this was science fiction.  I was beginning to cope with the fantastic I had to, it was all around me.  I cupped the coffee in my hands and felt relaxed for the first time.

 

What day is it?  I enquired. 

It’s Monday, evening to be precise, he replied.

‘Oh right, the start of another week’s labour,’ I complained with a false intent. 

He smiled at my reaction.  Considering Monday as the first day of the working week hasn’t been relevant since the twenty first of March 2080 when the work ethic was officially mothballed. 

This is another confirmation of my move through time.  It ran through my mind as he spoke.

Mothballed, how come?  I asked.

The requirement to work was eliminated by the introduction of Shapers.  This application of Nanotechnology provides us with everything we need and has been a catalyst for major change in human society.’ 

I glanced back at the ‘coffee machine’.  There was nothing there, apart from the recess in the wall.  It had become patently obvious that Jodi was telling the truth, which rekindled a sense of unease and panic in me.  I listened in silence whilst making mental notes about my host.  A one-piece garment, like a jump suit but there were no zips or studs. A blue colour which made me question if colour indicated status. He was clean shaven.  Maybe the wrong words now?  About five feet ten inches tall and carrying a well profiled muscular system.  Pumps iron?  A girlfriend, maybe?   It occurred to me, one hundred and thirty years on and apart from his clothing, Jodi isn’t any different to my generation. 

 

I tuned back into what he was saying. 

Not surprisingly, money became meaningless and quickly disappeared.  An item’s value is measured by its usefulness. 

‘Are you telling me that everything is now sweetness and light?’  

He grinned.  ‘Not exactly, the darker side of the human psyche is still evident.  There are pockets of individuals who are not content with everything ‘on a plate’ and employ pirated Shaper patterns, which produce objects, such as weapons and explosives.  It has proven difficult to eliminate this criminal element but it’s a fraction of what it was historically.  It’s interesting to speculate on why they still want to buck the system, but another time, maybe?’

  

I was fascinated.  This had always been the stuff of my dreams and now it was reality.  Jodi’s voice, again, captured my attention. 

Domestic Shapers are loaded with a vast selection of patterns that cover all aspects of life.  The traditional causes of crime for profit have been eliminated. 

Although I was becoming reconciled with my apparent time travel, his claims were seemingly exaggerated.  I challenged his account of life in 2150.  Doesn’t all this just encourage people to become lazy?  How do they motivate themselves to achieve anything?  His reply was surprising.  That’s a reasonable assumption, but it’s not so.  Living on the edge of life during the super storms really shook up the collective psyche.  For a long time every human on the planet lived with the possibility that they might not be alive the next day.  The preoccupations with greed and wealth became unimportant, survival was the priority.  Replication has meant new opportunities and has released human energy for research and learning.  It has enabled humanity to remodel itself and changed the focus.  It fostered higher objectives and self analysis.  The preoccupation with survival and the accumulation of material wealth is no longer present.  Hunger, poverty and degradation have been eradicated.

 

Jodi appeared to realise he was on a soapbox and shot a quick glance at me.  If he was checking my attention level he needn’t, I was fully awake and highly motivated by the thought of what was in store. 

He closed his latest bulletin.  Life is relaxed.  The pressures to achieve have been eliminated.  We now consider ourselves to be one global race.  Humanity’s relentless curiosity is now the primary force driving us forward.

  

My mind had cleared and renewed the need to clarify how this apparent Utopia worked

So who looks after the essentials?  I thought this would be the Achilles Heel in his idyllic world, but I was wrong. 

He was enjoying revealing the spectacular advances that had taken place in one hundred and thirty years.  The physical activities of building, maintenance and providing services are performed by artificial life forms or AI’s.  These are also heavily employed in research and development but humans occupy all the management functions at the present time.  We will talk more on the subject of artificial life form technology.  It has become a very interesting and important aspect of human culture. 

 

There was so much I wanted to know. 

‘I’m guessing that education is no longer confined to the earlier part of life now?’  

He grinned again.  ‘Why would it be?  It’s on tap, whenever you need it.  He mentioned that he was currently taking in quantum physics.

Are you serious? I said without thinking.

Why wouldn’t I be serious? he responded. 

It was the first time I had detected some irritation in his tone and he took the opportunity to reinforce the point. 

Learning isn’t about burying your head in books or sitting in lectures halls any more. Its an electro-biological process, during which, information is committed to memory via an interface implant, placed in our brain at birth.  Connection to an educational database can save years of study.  The instant nature of learning now means the data is all cutting edge.

 

I was getting itchy feet.  I’d been cocooned in this room for over four days now and despite the windows, had little idea of what things looked like on the outside.  I wanted to ask how I would leave this room, as there were no doors and I didn’t possess the ability to walk through walls, but Jodi wouldn’t be diverted. 

‘Mika, we have all the time you want to go wandering about and I’m guessing you may be interested in what I was going to say next.

‘Ok...Ok.  I give in, you carry on.’

‘I was going to suggest that it may be possible to fit you with an implant!’ 

This revelation really fired my imagination.  Now that would be impressive, what is this interface implant

He smiled.  ‘It’s a Biomech interface.  That means it’s a combination of human tissue and molecular circuitry that is positioned adjacent to the Cerebellum and Hippocampus.  It makes primary connections with these two brain elements, but with all the other functional elements, too.  Once established it can communicate with external sources and becomes an omni-directional data highway into the brain.’ 

 

‘Does it mean that I would be able to bone up on today’s knowledge as well? 

I’m not sure, he mused. 

I couldn’t have known at the time that he was considering my physiology might not be capable of accepting the implant. 

We will have to consult the Biotechs.

Consult the what? 

The Biotechs,he repeated with a hint of irritation. 

I detected he was becoming just a little frustrated with the lengthy explanations needed for what he considered everyday terminology. 

The AI’s I told you about earlier, artificial intelligence, cybernetic beings, if you will.  In this century they have replaced the human medical profession and others.  A Biotech will assess your brains ability to take an implant. 

I had to ask as I didn’t relish remaining a Twentieth Century ignoramus.  What if it can’t? 

Just wait and see there may be other options.  Jodi bit his lip and screwed his nose up as he finished the sentence, he’d said more than he had intended. 

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child wrote 495 days ago

This could so easily have been dry and dusty - a sawdust read. Instead, it is pacy, intelligent and a thoroughly good read. Well written to the extent, I who doesn't understand Cryogenetics in the slightest, was intrigued. The reader is not bombarded with with scientific blah that sometimes seems to be a platform for just how brilliant the authors knowledge of his subject, this author gently feeds us what we need to move the story along and leaves out the mechanics of high-tech information that is not needful and, which I personally, find boring.
Highly recommended. I have backed your book and wish you every success with it.

Child - Atramentus Speaks

Jack Hughes wrote 510 days ago

This is a seriously impressive novel that, by rights, should become a bestseller within a short time of its release. The technological nature of the plot is not overbearing, there is a wonderful human element at the heart and the writing is succinct and very descriptive. An exceptional story for the intelligent minded reader.

Backed without reservation.

Jack Hughes
Dawn of Shadows

D.S. Williamson wrote 598 days ago

Great first chapter, Mr. Gray. You know how to write. What I paricularly liked about the opening paragraph is that it "feels" like voice-over in what promises to be a very good film. In other words, you "show it" even though you're "telling it".

This probably doens't make sense but I read screenplays from some of my "movie' friends out here in L.A and that's what it sounds like. On my watchlist.

Mach100 wrote 126 days ago

Hello Michael,
I really like your whole concept - the foul weather (personally I think the whole global warming hype is a load of horse) which was credible and the future setting is equally believable even though I think we might go the other way and lose everything like previous civilisations have done.
Couldn’t find faults in first two chapters but I will be reading and commenting more.
I hope that you will rate and comment on one or more of my books – ‘Accident’ is the one I’d like to promote the most.
Best wishes, Charles Dyer (Mach100)

mdws77 wrote 132 days ago

I have just finished reading your entire book and I did like the way you were able to keep my attention. While I don't agree with some of your conclusions and philisophy, I did like the way you presented the subjects. There are some minor punctuation issues that made it a little hard to follow who was saying what at times, but overall this book was a very good read.

Gareth N wrote 214 days ago

SF42 - I've read the opening chapter and will return later to read more. Initial comments are -

This chapter is brimming with a lot of excellent ideas about the changes to technology over the time Mika has been in stasis. I like the fact you've thought about the social and economic changes of new inventions. The pace of the plot slows somewhat in the second half of the first chapter as you introduce all these new technologies to us. If I'm honest I'd like to have seen them gradually integrated into the plot. That might just be me though.

I enjoyed the opening and I'm keen to find out how the story unfolds. The writing is very good but I'm having a bit of a problem believing that some of the dialogue is spoken by real people. Sometimes it sounds like it should be narrative rather than dialogue. I guess that it's a bit tricky since you've adopted a first person narrative. Anyway, it's not likely to be a problem with the story telling and it's only my point of view in any case.

I'll return later.

alex wrote 235 days ago

I have added this to my watchlist. I think its a great premise well executed and I look forward to reading more chapters.

Billy Young wrote 255 days ago

After reading the first chapter I have some minor issues with the story so far. If the lab complex is built into the side of a mountain then would a super storm be a real threat to it? If you were to describe the base more and have most of it above ground and only the main lab below then this would negate this problem. I also felt that you moved onto the future to quickly before you had fully introduced your main character. There is no harm in using minor characters from the twenty first century that you could refer back to in memories to give more depth to your main character later in your story. Good luck with this.

Kenneth Edward Lim wrote 263 days ago

Michael,
"2150 Total Integration" is an intellectually stimulating piece diifficult to put down. What it does is open up a realm of possibilities the human ken is capable of and that very fact is where the attraction lies. I followed Mika's progress as a human transplanted into a future world, and he in turn. through lucid prose from a first person POV and just as informative a dialogue with Jodi, fed me information not in my normal diet. Thank you so much for this delightfully educational read.

Kenneth Edward Lim
The North Korean

stephen racket wrote 268 days ago

This is very imaginative and well-written, as good a Sci-Fi story as I've read on Authonomy. The advances in technology are beautifully described, the damage inflicted on the planet by global warming unnervingly realistic. Added to my WL for further reading and generously starred. Good luck with this.

PD Casteel wrote 282 days ago

Nice work. I always struggle with descriptions of technology in SciFI. You resisted the temptation to go too deeply into the description of technology. That made this a much better read than many of the works I come across. I thought the transition from the past to the new present was jarring. That was the moment my interests peeked.

writingbear wrote 303 days ago

Michael,

I put your fine book on my shelf today! Please take a look at my two novels DIFFERENT DIRECTIONS or MY GENTLEMAN FRIEND for a possible backing. Your help will be appreciated! Good luck and happy writing.

Dwain-Thomas

David Whelan wrote 331 days ago

Really like the story, has a great premise and the characters seem easy to relate to. The desciption for the scientific parts are also well done, I reckon this could be a published book no bother. Top quality work

David Whelan
The Silent Chronicles Book 1: Desolate

writingbear wrote 336 days ago

Michael,

I checked out your fine SF book today. I liked it! So I backed it! If you could take a look at my two novels, DIFFERENT DIRECTIONS or MY GENTLEMAN FRIEND for a possible backing it would be very much appreciated.
Thank you, good luck and happy writing.

Dwain-Thomas

yellowdog wrote 347 days ago

Mike,

I'll try again to finish.

`...the team wasn't large. It didn't need to be....' - either new sentence at `it' or qualifier such as `nor did it'.

`....youngest in our tem, sat at his desktop workstation he looked up from his screen and grinned.' - run on sentence - suggest new sentence at `He'.

`When are we testing it for real boss?" John easily...' - here the speaker is John, but the comment or thoughts are Mika's. Should go to new paragraph.

In the paragraph beginning `Although I was being reconciled....' You have Mika aking a question, and Jodi replying. Even though Mika prefaces Jodi's reply by saying it was surprising, there is separate dialogue so should go to new paragraph. It makes it easier for reader in any case. If you wanted Mika to relate converstation as a `report' then perhaps single quotes and you could maintain as is, but I think it would be better split up.

That's all from me today Mike. It is too hard to provide edit commentary on the site. I lost these comments twice.
If you want me to edit (to my best ability - I am no expert) the chapter you could send it to my email as a Word doc. and I will mark it up.

I agree with one of your comments re the woods. Yes, it doesn't seem to matter how many times I go over a text, someone will find something I missed. Sort of like domestic blindness.

All the best

Brian

yellowdog wrote 347 days ago

Mike,

This is the last time I do this. I have already trascribed items I was commenting on to Word and then typed into here and then I accidently hit the chapter 6 and lost it all.

Okay. Sentence `Made no difference....' - end of sentence doesn;t gel with start. Sense not clear. Suggest `That I was pathological etc. made no difference as house empty nobody etc)

`...project was (all) time consuming...' - suggest omit

`....everyday life in (this) the research....'

rhine wrote 347 days ago

chapter 1: excellent mechanics. My main comments are pacing/flow related.
missing apostrophe: brain[']s
opinion: I would put the sentence "Leading a cryo" at the very start because it defines the character, and first chapter more than the weather or day of the week.
I would also put a chapter break after the word survival to emphasize the magnitude of the world transition and give the reader a cesura.
Suggest you dedicate more than one paragraph to the cryo prep, as it is the primary macguffin in your story.
Perhaps even worry if X fixed that problem with Y yet that killed the poor monkey.

Scott Rhine (Foundation for the Lost)

yellowdog wrote 348 days ago

Hi Michael,

An excellent read and extremely well written. I am truly jealous. THe character narrative is well handled as are the actions. I read through to the end of chapter 2, so it is definitely engaging. You have crafted a wonderful modern world with the advent of intelligent materials and antigrav technology. This is all presented in an easy manner by Jodi. I appreciated the deft of touch when dealing with the narrators incredulity in such a situation.

You have interspersed the exposition and the introduction of the alien visitors and the double trip to the spacecraft spell an evolving storyline for me.

You might want to restrict paragraphs to the one speaker. Several times I was confused when an action by one character followed anothers speech e.g. `He grinned.' I also noticed a couple of run oin sentences in the first chapter, but I can't go back now and tell you exactly which ones.

Well written, a great imagination at work. I'm ranking you five and as soon as I find a spot you're on my shelf.

If you get a chance please have a look at my novel - Future Crime.

All the best

Brian

Francene Stanley wrote 356 days ago

This is really good. I love the topic and have often wondered about whether it could happen. The writing is good and the story flows well. The tension builds well.

I'd be happy to back this and star rate it well. I'd be honoured if you would return read.

Francene. Still Rock Water.

Hampstead wrote 369 days ago

Great story, written in a conversational style which makes it even more readable. I can see this book, with a bit of good marketing on the side of the published, becoming a bestseller.

Michael Clifford

Sometime in Andalusia

www.ten-minute-stories.com

Hampstead wrote 369 days ago

Great story, written in a conversational style which makes it even more readable. I can see this book, with a bit of good marketing on the side of the published, becoming a bestseller.

Michael Clifford

Sometime in Andalusia

www.ten-minute-stories.com

Hampstead wrote 369 days ago

Great story, written in a conversational style which makes it even more readable. I can see this book, with a bit of good marketing on the side of the published, becoming a bestseller.

Michael Clifford

Sometime in Andalusia

www.ten-minute-stories.com

Woodville wrote 384 days ago

Great title.

sean.bazaar wrote 403 days ago

Excellent writein on the first chap. I'm thouroughly intrigued to see if Mika's mind can be equiped with the modern tech, if not.....He's in for some wild experiences. 5 star rating, will back in a day or two.

Leslie Rocker wrote 406 days ago

Sci.fi. is not my field, but I am impressed with this. I have only read a couple of chapters each at the beginning and end, but it is imaginative and well written. It also seems to be backed with a degree of scientific knowledge.
I am happy to back it and invite you to read I, Said the Rook.
Leslie Rocker

Beval wrote 420 days ago

A Brave New World indeed! I loved all the technology and the idea that mankind has made it to the stars.
"Mika wants to explore? Hell, I want to explore along with him!
Underneath all this is the feeling of mankind grown soft, nothing to fight against any more and the edge that made us hack our way to the top of the food chain has gone. Mika, product to a rougher tougher time is going to be either a shock or salvation.
Highly readable and most enjoyable "
That was what I said when I first read this. On taking a second look, I went deeper into the story, reading chapter further on to see how the plot developed and how your brought it to a conclusion.
The technology is a joy, exciting and believable and I thought you handled the alein creator theme very well, I had a feeling of Arthur C Clarke, someone I haven't read in years, but there was a feel of him here.
You also raised some very topical questions about what is being done to the planet which gives this a very "now" feel. The message is there, but its not advanced at the expense of the plot.
All in all, I think I agree with me...always nice to discover one has been right:-))...this IS enjoyable and readable.

Dave Goodenough wrote 433 days ago

Very, very cool! In fact, outstanding! I'm putting this on my watchlist so I can back it as soon as a couple obligations are cleared. Meanwhile, I'm going to ask my friend Kristi to back your book. I'm sure she wil like it.
Dave Goodenough

ccb1 wrote 435 days ago

Backed 2050 Total Intergation. SciFi is not a genre we read often, but glad we took time for your book. Good job. Hope you will take a look at Dark Side.
CC Brown

J.S.Watts wrote 436 days ago

Intriguing premise and some nice writing.

I thought the opening paragraphs were too full of back story/explaination/description of who and what. To me it felt like you were cramming it all in before the earthquake. Had you thought of beginning with the earthquake or some other more dramatic event and filtering in the back story as a gradual reveal? Just a thought.

I noticed a few typos, like: "..but a lot of talent, he had a bright future..." which I'd write as: ..but a lot of talent. He had a bright future.... Also "brains ability" should be "brain's ability" and shouldn't your MC be worried about being a Twenty First Century ignoramus???

J.S.Watts
A DARKER MOON

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 440 days ago

Fascinating idea and pitched with authenticity. I will definitely come back for more because the early leads you supply can take this story anywhere. Obviously well thought out and extremely well written. Patrick Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

ccb1 wrote 442 days ago

Don't usually read SiFi, but this looks interesting. Placed 2150 on our watchlist.
CC Brown
Dark Side

Benjamin Dancer wrote 461 days ago

I wanted to be offended. Went to ch 15. By the second paragraph, I was hooked—the overpopulation bit. Here are my notes as I read:

EarthII made me laugh.

I can geek out on the wormholes, time travel/pseudo-science

The story kicks off a million thoughts in my head. From biology/overpopulation to astrophysics. It’s really fun to read.

The relationships are interesting. But I confess I’m focusing on the scifi, piecing the science and new ecosystems together.

I got pulled into the story and forgot to document my thoughts for awhile—I guess that’s a good sign.

By the way, I’m not offended—but intrigued about the theology or aliens.

Balance parameters: what makes this interesting to me is the ethics.

Pretty cool universe you’ve conjured up, and pretty relevant to the universal problems I live with day-to-day.

rab14 wrote 469 days ago
rab14 wrote 469 days ago

There are some minor editting issues to address but although, I used to read a lot of Sci Fi and haven't read much lately, I still found this an intriguing concept. Cryogenetics has been used as a plot tool before ,nevertheless you give it a new twist by taking your protagonist from the climatic changes the world has to deal with in 2010 and dumping him unceremoniously in 2150 along with shapers and brain implants. A pacy well told tale. I wish you luck with it. K.J. Rabane According to Olwen

Roman N Marek wrote 470 days ago

I like this. It needs a little polishing of the spelling and grammar, but has a fine beginning that is intriguing enough to keep one reading. Good old-fashioned SF. My only worry with the story was that Jodi is the only person Mika interacts with for quite a long time. There appears to be a reason for this, but wouldn’t this have bothered Mika? How/why has Mika been assigned to this one individual and why aren’t there others monitoring him, interested in him, meeting him, etc. Wouldn’t Mika wonder whether Jodi has any friends? In Chapter 3 he enquires about a wife but this is after 2 weeks of acquaintance. Is Jodi a total loner? Wouldn’t he at least have introduced Mika to other people? Also, perhaps more could be made of the mystery surrounding Jodi’s real job to beef up the tension a little. The encounter with the Cracians in Chapter 7 is practically skipped over. Yet I would have thought that would be as dramatic as waking up 130 years in the future. Apart from these quibbles, which I think could be fairly easily addressed, it’s a very enjoyable read and I wish you well with it.

tecmic wrote 471 days ago

High time for a stable bookshelf ... Now that Authonomy is changing, I decided to look through the 300+ books I've read on this site for my favorite five. '2150 Total Integration' made my list. I suggest you give it a look.

Frank Calcagno
The First Human War



Frank! I wrote it, but thanks anyway.

Mike.

Frank Calcagno wrote 471 days ago

High time for a stable bookshelf ... Now that Authonomy is changing, I decided to look through the 300+ books I've read on this site for my favorite five. '2150 Total Integration' made my list. I suggest you give it a look.

Frank Calcagno
The First Human War

JM Miller wrote 473 days ago

I liked the way you kept the action coming, and dove right into the plot. It reminds me of the heyday of SF.

Backed

JM Miller wrote 473 days ago

I liked the way you kept the action coming, and dove right into the plot. It reminds me of the heyday of SF.

Backed

Robert Craven wrote 475 days ago

Hi Michael,

This has an assured touch throughout and weaves your research into the measured pace without losing the reader's interest.

backed

Rob

GET LENIN

Frank James wrote 482 days ago

To Michael Gray (Total Integration)
Great Piece of writing, well thought out and I have a feeling your book will climb the pole to quite a height. I'm BACKING your book and have a spot for it on my bookshelf. Good luck with your writing in the future. I do'nt know what happened to my first communication, but if you have any problems please contact me.

Frank James (The Contractor)

Frank James wrote 483 days ago

To Michael Gray (2150 Total Integration)
Great piece of writing, well thought out and I have a feeling your book will climb the pole to quite a height. I'm BACKING your book and have a spot for it on my shelf.

Frank James (The Contractor)

Chris_hstrswy wrote 487 days ago

Really intriguing Synopsis, I'd be happy to exchange reads/backing if you are game?

child wrote 495 days ago

This could so easily have been dry and dusty - a sawdust read. Instead, it is pacy, intelligent and a thoroughly good read. Well written to the extent, I who doesn't understand Cryogenetics in the slightest, was intrigued. The reader is not bombarded with with scientific blah that sometimes seems to be a platform for just how brilliant the authors knowledge of his subject, this author gently feeds us what we need to move the story along and leaves out the mechanics of high-tech information that is not needful and, which I personally, find boring.
Highly recommended. I have backed your book and wish you every success with it.

Child - Atramentus Speaks

mike-wolfham wrote 496 days ago

I totally understand about opening changes. I wouldn't change mine (again), so take what i say with a grain of salt and feel free to ignore it. But in your case, the opening is key....climate change brings about this cryo freezing. I think you could really build the readers interest in what happened.

You could also go another path...open with the line: Have you ever slept for XX years with a crick in your neck...I should have been well rested after xx years of sleep....ect.

Within the first few chapters you go back and talk about the extreme climate later on, so you don't necessarily need that right in the beginning, you could start in the future. You could even cut the whole part about the guy checking the weather and just start with the cave collapsing.

Also, feel free to ignore, but I do speak from experience....my first two chapters were actually not part of my original book. But my first couple of readers didn't like the way it opened. I'm much happier with it now. You really want to establish that character, but not in a way that beats the reader over the head. Feel free to bounce any ideas off of me.

mike-wolfham wrote 497 days ago

Very neat idea and you are a good with words. However, I find myself wanting something different in the beginning. The storms are too abstract and sudden, maybe it would be good if the cryo scientist is going to work in the rain and contemplating the current weather situation. It all seemed too abrupt. It might also be nice if you give us something personal about the scientist, some reason that it would be tragic if he travels into the future. All that aside, I do like the concept and writing.

mike-wolfham wrote 497 days ago

Great pitch, looking forward to checking it out.

mskea wrote 500 days ago

Hi Michael,
as promised, some feedback. First a rider - sci-fi is not my normal genre (though I loved John Wyndham), and I'm not particularly technologicaly minded, so please keep that in mind when considering my comments.
Because I think (and hope) it will be most useful to you, I'm going to concentrate on what I felt didn't work so well and would benefit from another look. - I found constructive criticism the most valuable aspect of my early days here.
Although the opening paragraph gave lots of backstory in a very short space (which is good) it didn't quite hang together. - main problems for me - if he is inspired that should produce enthusiasm, not effort. / 'Made no difference that I was pathological..' - made no difference to what? / in what sense did his office sgn indicate approachability? - seemed just normal to me.)
Your punctuation is iffy - especially use of commas (I notice this now because someone was kind enough to go right through my mss and correct it all!)Be careful of repetition eg - 'youngest in our team' + 'team junior' in adjoining sentences.The dialogue in places was a bit stilted - 'Don't worry George, I'd no intention of doing so..' / 'Thank you, now, what was I saying before I was so rudely interuppted?' (which, as well as too long is also a cliche.)
My gut feeling is that ch1 might be better split into 2 - with the early section separate (maybe even a prologue?)
The description of Jodi - 'He wore no jewellery....' etc comes far too late - (in my opinion) it would be much more effective when we first see him - perhaps when you have a reference to his possible age?
This may sound very negative, but on the plus side, as a technophobe I was able to happily accept the technological bits (even if I didn't quite understand them!) and found this easy to read. I am also interested by the premise - of how someone will fit into a completely different culture and the adjustments this requires.
The main value of this site is for all of us to improve through feedback - I hope I've helped in that,
Good luck with this,

Margaret
PS - It did occur to me that it maybe wasn't such a good idea to have your main character with a name so close to your own - just a thought.

Vanessa Darnleigh wrote 504 days ago

I have no issues with the highly original nature of the content but as an English language specialist for the past 35 years, I think I am entitled to point out lexical shortcomings when I see them. Your use of punctuation is erratic and at times the dialogue is integrated into the narrative in an inappropriate manner, interfering with the flow of the text and acting as a distractor to the discerning reader of which there appear to be all too few on this site!
Cheers
Stewart

Vanessa Darnleigh wrote 504 days ago

Great stuff for sci-fi boffins if not for me...I suggest you sort out the dialogue from the narrative.
Cheers
Stewart

Kristen Stone wrote 506 days ago

2150 Total Integration
This is a well written, intriguing book. I loved every word. Backed with pleasure.
Kristen Stone
Kianda Mala - The Monkey Man
Shattered Dreams

Jack Hughes wrote 510 days ago

This is a seriously impressive novel that, by rights, should become a bestseller within a short time of its release. The technological nature of the plot is not overbearing, there is a wonderful human element at the heart and the writing is succinct and very descriptive. An exceptional story for the intelligent minded reader.

Backed without reservation.

Jack Hughes
Dawn of Shadows

Suzalex wrote 511 days ago

Cool premise, Excellent writing, and loved the pitch.

Suz