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rank 5357
word count 54558
date submitted 08.09.2009
date updated 14.09.2009
genres: Fiction, Science Fiction, Young Adu...
classification: universal
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There You Will Feel Free

Jamie Anderson

Two kidnapped teenagers struggle to find their place in a future world of empty landscapes and threatened war. Speculative fiction for young adults.

 

Kidnapped in full daylight and taken to a fortress hidden in distant and deserted mountains, eleven year old Zabe and Ash struggle to understand why they were taken and what happened to the families they left behind. Over the course of eight years, their kidnappers train them to be soldiers and strategists, constantly warning them of the global war that awaits beyond their protected valley.

Released into the wider world at age nineteen, Zabe and Ash confirm what they have suspected for years: that the world is a far more complex place than their kidnappers taught. However, as time goes by, it becomes clear that it is also a more dangerous place than they ever could have guessed...

When their kidnappers return for them, Zabe and Ash must make a choice between obedience to the people who raised them and freedom.

 
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coming of age, dystopia, fiction, future, island, mountain, outdoor, science fiction, speculative, survival, young adult

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klouholmes wrote 864 days ago

Hi Jamie, I liked your opening with its images and the detail about the helicopter. Between Zabe and Ash, you handled the emotional levels well. I became quite engrossed in the story as you gave the info steadily and could retain my concentration. I wondered about Zabe’s speech for a six-year-old and then about her dress. But these were explained and the whole scenario of the civilizations being advanced according to climate would made this futurist school entrancing. I think young readers would be absorbed too but I wondered at the ages being eleven to start - I would have thought a few years older. The writing has good texture, flashbacks, and POVs. Shelved – Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

Steve Ward wrote 872 days ago

Jamie,
Wow, great opening chapters cloaked in mystery. Love the young YA writer's voice and many great metaphors: concrete corpse of the pool probed the ground with fly's feet This is so well written and edited, immaculate. You do a good job of keeping the reader guessing and turning pages and you tell the story in very natural dialogue between Zabe and Ash. Well done. Fun read, good luck with it.
Steve Ward
Test Pilot's Daughter: Revenge

mikegilli wrote 876 days ago

shelved. Great story, Ash, Zabe and Orri are superb.
The idea is fantastic and has lots of irony and possible hidden meanings..
Plus the suspense keeps mounting..... Nice nature detail..
Ch 9..The Greenhouse is brilliant, Zabe's confusion is really well done.
Ch 1 also..an excellent hook..
Sorry no criticisms. There are typos. (In Ch 9 anemic pre dawn, should be anaemic I think. Further down ...crumled ruins..)
Lots of fun with this. I'm happy to be the first reviewer of many.....Mikey (The Free)

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