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date submitted 18.09.2009
date updated 04.05.2011
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Help From Above (Second Edition)

Misti Sandefur

Ronald, an angel sent by God, must help George Billington recover from his drug and alcohol addictions, but the assignment won't be an easy one.

 

After the death of his parents, George lost his faith in God and sought comfort through drugs and alcohol. God decided to give George a second chance, so he sent an angel named Ronald to help George. Upon meeting George, Ronald learned that his mission wouldn't be an easy one, and he wondered if he'd be able to complete the assignment and earn his wings.

George was drunk when Ronald found him and expressed the fact that he didn't believe in angels. Although George's stubborn, ill tempered and independent personality came out, Ronald finally persuaded George to talk with him. George told Ronald about his sister, Kara, and confessed that he hadn't seen Kara in two years. Ronald then decided to search for George's sister with the hope that he could reunite the two, and Ronald thought that just maybe Kara would be able to help.

Upon finding Kara, Ronald convinced her to help him. Along with Kara's help, he also received assistance from Kara's minister, Timothy Gill. Did the three of them triumph in getting George the help he needed to recover, or did George's attitude cause the trio to call it quits?

 
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Chapter 1

Unsure of what to expect Ronald trekked the streets in Harrisburg, Illinois. God warned him that George Billington was a stubborn man and the mission he was about to embark on would be difficult. Nevertheless, God also told him that in order to earn his wings, he must complete the assignment.

 

As Ronald walked down the sidewalk, he noticed a man sitting on a bench near a liquor store. It looked as if the man had washed his hair in vegetable oil, but that wasn't the half of it. He also looked like he hadn't shaved in months, and his clothes were dirty and worn-out. Ronald couldn't help but wonder if the man was homeless… or just very poor. Then as Ronald approached the scruffy looking character, he knew that had to be his assignment, because the man reeked of alcohol.

 

"Are you George Billington," Ronald asked, taking a seat beside the man.

"Yes, sir, I am. Why are you asking?

"You're my assignment. In other words, I've been sent to help you."

"Are you crazy or something?"

 

Before Ronald could respond, George got up and headed toward the liquor store. As he reached for the door, Ronald grabbed him by the arm.

 

"I'm not crazy, and you getting ready to walk into that liquor store is the reason I was sent here to help you. Please, George, let us sit down and talk."

"Whoa, how the heck do you know my name? Who sent you and why? And another thing, I live my own life as I live it, and I don't need anyone butting in!"

"I understand that, and I'll explain. My name is Ronald. God sent me. I'm an angel, and in order to earn my wings and make it into heaven, I must help you."

"If that's true, what did you do wrong? Why can't you get into heaven right away?"

"In order to make a long story short, I will just say that I was once like you."

"Well, I don't need your help or God's. I'm just fine, and I only do this stuff on occasion. Besides that, I don't even believe you're an angel sent from God. There's no such thing as angels," George snickered.

"You can believe the way you'd like, but I am an angel. God does care for you, and although you may not want to admit it, you do have a serious problem," Ronald replied with concern.

"Okay then, if you're an angel, prove it! Don't angels have special powers that we humans don't have?"

"Yes, angels have powers, but since I've not yet earned my wings, I don't have all those great powers that the others do."

"If that ain't the lamest excuse I've ever heard," George replied as he turned away and shook his head. He laughed so hard that his sides ached, and it seemed like it took him forever to make his way back to the liquor store.

 

Finally, Ronald was a few steps from the door, but his laughter quickly turned to silence when Ronald appeared in front of him.

 

"Alright Mr. Wiseguy, I thought you didn't have any special powers."

 

"No, what I told you was I don't have the greater powers, but I do have a few of the smaller powers to aid me on my assignment if I need them. And another thing, you don't need to go in there, because it looks and smells like you've already had enough."

"Listen here Mr. Angel… Ronald… or whoever or whatever you are, you're not my boss and you're definitely not going to run my life, so move out of my way!" George said, shoving Ronald aside.

"I won't do it. You've had too much to drink already. Take me to your car and I'll drive you home so you can sleep this off."

 

George hesitated for a moment, but then staggered to his car. Ronald opened the passenger side door for him. George plopped down in the seat and sighed. On occasion George spoke, but only to give Ronald directions to his house. When George didn't shout out directions, he just stared out the window.

 

Ronald pulled in the driveway and looked over at George. He noticed that George looked a bit paler than he had when they left the liquor store.

 

"George, are you okay?"

"I'm not sure. I think I just need a little rest."

"I believe you need more than a little. Let me help you in," Ronald offered.

"No, thanks. You go on to wherever. I'll be fine," George replied, pushing Ronald away.

 

George stomped toward the house but stumbled over his own feet and fell to the ground. Even though George kept refusing, Ronald rushed over to help him to his feet. Once George was standing again, Ronald led him into the house and helped him into bed. By that time George was so tired that he fell fast asleep with no further arguments.

 

* * * * * *

 

"You're doing well, my son. Keep up the good work and don't give up," God told Ronald.

"I'll try my best, but I'm about to throw in the towel."

"How come?"

"Because he's a very stubborn man, and he refuses to believe I'm an angel sent by you."

"I sent you on this assignment to help George. Take his stubborn streak away. Go make him into the kind man that he used to be. I know it's going to be hard, but you can't quit."

"I'll do my best father, and while I'm on Earth, I'll pray for your guidance."

"I'll guide you well, my son, and don't forget what these addictions did to you. You don't want George to end up in the same situation."

"No, I don't, so I'll continue on and do your work with care."

 

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Misti-Sandefur wrote 275 days ago

Great story! Overcoming addictions is a favorite topic of mine :) My only advise so far is to break up some of your dialogue with some narrative :) It's great that you get right to the action, but I think some description would make it flow a bit better :) Hope that helps and best of luck with this :)



Shayzzee,

Thank you so much for your feedback. When I read, I enjoy dialogue more than narrative, which is why I tend to include more dialogue than narrative when I write my own novels. That said, I have listened to your feedback, and I think it could include more narrative, so I'm working on that. As you said, it probably would flow better.

shayzzee wrote 457 days ago

Great story! Overcoming addictions is a favorite topic of mine :) My only advise so far is to break up some of your dialogue with some narrative :) It's great that you get right to the action, but I think some description would make it flow a bit better :) Hope that helps and best of luck with this :)

klouholmes wrote 528 days ago

Hi Misti, An uplifting story although there are complications when Ronald finds Kara and their reunion is with the drunken George. It's ironic how Ronald has his father but George is floundering and needs the support from above. Sometimes the story could do with some transitions - a little stiff in moving from one scene to the next. It's an inspiring read. Shelved - Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

soutexmex wrote 561 days ago

Misti: we all need help from above. This works for the Christian genre. BACKED! and good luck on here.

I can use your comments on my book when you get a chance. Cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

Burgio wrote 566 days ago

HELP FROM ABOVE
This is an interesting story. The idea of a personal angel being assigned to help someone recover from alcohol abuse is intriguing. You have good characters in both Ronald and George because they’re such good contrasts to each other. I think you’ll find an audience for this among people who are hoping angels are real so want to read this to see how it all plays out for Ronald and George. I’m adding it to my shelf. Burgio (Grain of Salt).

name falied moderation wrote 566 days ago

Dear Misti,
Looks like you have put words to a generic book cover brilliant, well done with this. So your pitch both long and short are what drew me to your book. They promised me a good read, and guess what you did not disappoint, your book is a well crafted book that I could not put down. I have not read it all, but you dont have it all up, but will carry on. Your characters are painted so real with your art that they truly seem to be part of my life , well for the time being then you can take them home. This is about the best compliment I can give you and I wish I had half your talent.
BACKED BY ME FOR SURE
I do hope you will review my book, comment and most of all BACK it. but either way the BEST of luck with yours
Denise
The Letter

SusieGulick wrote 566 days ago

Dear Misti, I love your sending an angel (Hebrews 1:14) to help your hero. :) Your pitch is excellent, so set the hook for me to read your book. :) When you use short paragraphs & lots of dialogue, it makes me want to keep reading to find out what's going to happen next. I'm backing your book. :) Could you please take a moment to back my 2 memoir books? Thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

I see you have been online a while, but since it took me months to figure out the system, I'm includin below authonomy's info:

This is information from authonomy (so beware of any other untrue information you may receive that is spam & not quotes of authonomy):
"When you back a book, it only improves the ranking of that book, not yours. However, the author whose book you are backing may decide to back your book also, in which case yes, your ranking would be improved"
"Every time you place a book on your bookshelf, your recommendation pushes the book up the rankings. And while that book sits on your bookshelf, your reputation as a talent spotter increases depending on how well that book performs."

palexander614 wrote 630 days ago

Has another week gone by? Well, the weekend is upon us. What a great time to grab a cup of ice tea, comfy chair, and help us noobies get noticed by reading our work. If you are interested in this, please pick a book and let me know what you think. I would appreciate all comments and help . . . blessings, Pam

Misti-Sandefur wrote 866 days ago

Hi Andrew W.,

Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I will be adding more chapters as I complete them, so keep watching for the additional chapters -- there's many more surprises to come, and yes, George will continue to make it tough on Ronald.

I will be sure to head over and check out your book.

Blessings and best wishes,

Misti Sandefur

Andrew W. wrote 866 days ago

Help From Above

Hi Misti,

This is a lot of fun and it gets straight on with it, there's no complexities around the way heaven works, just story. You do dialogue very well indeed, attribution is very effective and never over-played, you write the unreal in a very real way that lifts this guardian angel book above the ordinary. Ronald is a great character and I get the sense that George is going to keep him on his toys!

Best wishes and good luck

Andrew W.
(Sanctuary's Loss)

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