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A Tear-Stained Letter: Surviving Multiple Sclerosis and my wife's suicide

Vern Beachy

A Tear-Stained Letter is one man's account of survival in the wake of his wife's suicide and while being saddled with multiple sclerosis.

 

A Tear-Stained Letter is a vividly honest and raw account of what Vern Beachy has endured, and is enduring, as a young widower (suicide survivor) with Multiple Sclerosis. Beachy‟s wife of less than three years committed suicide when she lost her job and faced the prospect of losing health insurance at a time when her husband‟s health seemed to be going steadily downhill. A Tear-Stained Letter is a story of love. The love one man has, and will always have, for his wife.

 
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Mr. Bleachy

Houses and wealth are inherited from parents, but a prudent wife is from the Lord. Proverbs 19:14

    I was a lost soul. I was rudderless and felt I had no purpose in this life when my wife decided to run away from her demons and end her life on June 2nd, 2006. I felt my life ended that day and my prayers to God reflected that sentiment and emotion. In the prayers I started reciting after that awful day I asked God repeatedly to “let me be with my wife.” I wanted to die. That was all I wanted after Melinda left this world. I didn’t want to carry on and I couldn’t see any reason not to join her in death.

 

 

    It was just after 11 o’clock on a Friday night when two Memphis police detectives knocked on my door. I didn’t know what they were going to tell me, but I knew it wasn’t going to be good.

    Our three dogs; Sammy, Allie and Steve, were barking because of the commotion and I opened the door and asked the cops to wait while I put the dogs in the back yard. I closed the door and walked the boys through the den and out to the yard and shut the door.

    I started shaking. I was shaking hard as I got back to the front door.

    That day started with me waking up alone, walking to the window in the living room and looking out at our driveway only to see nothing there. I wanted to see our car and was thinking Melinda had fallen asleep before she got into the house and all I would do is walk out and wake her up to see if she was doing okay.

    There was nothing in the driveway and I got scared.

    I walked back to the front door and opened it again. It was late spring and the officers, one bigger and bald, were in long-sleeved shirts and ties. They had copswritten all over them. Was Melinda in an auto accident? Was she okay? Did they find her? Where was she? Oh God, where was she?

    The smaller cop spoke first: Mr. Bleachy? 

    It’s Beachy. There is no L in my name. He got my name wrong. Bleachy. It kept sounding over and over in my mind.

    Bleachy.

    Can we come in and speak to you?

    Bleachy.

    I opened the door further and motioned them in. The living room included the standard sofa and chair but I doubted they wanted to sit down. This was their business; a social call was not what brought them to my door at this late hour.

Could you have a seat Mr. Beachy? The smaller one got it right this time.

    No. What’s going on?

    If you’ll have a seat we will tell you.

    No. Tell me, what’s going on?

    Please Mr. Beachy, we have been doing this a long time and it will be easier if you sit down.

    I was getting more frustrated by their insistence and the Mr. Bleachy greeting was starting to fester inside me. I still didn’t know what they were going to tell me and I wasn’t in the mood to coax it out of them. This was my house and if I wanted to stand, I was going to stand, but it didn’t seem to matter and I continued to plead with them to tell me what they were here to tell me.

    Please, just sit down.

    I knew this wasn’t good. Otherwise you don’t insist a person sit down if you are going to tell them their wife was safe and sound and got pulled over for drunk driving or something like that. A lot of things went through my mind. I thought Melinda was not at home and wasn’t answering her cell phone because she was the victim of some type of random crime. Memphis was known as a violent city and I thought something bad had happened to her on the streets somewhere. I couldn’t figure out what that would be, but I knew it wasn’t good. I replayed the previous two minutes in my mind and I locked onto another thing they had said, right after the smaller one called me Mr. Bleachy. 

    They were detectives in the Memphis Homicide Division.

    Oh God, Melinda, what happened?

    I finally sat down, not because they insisted, but because my knees buckled. I had no choice but to sit down. It was becoming difficult, if not outright impossible to keep standing. I regretted sitting down because then it allowed the two detectives to go ahead and tell me what they were here to say.

    Mr. Beachy, this is never easy…

    Oh God, Melinda, my lovely wife, what happened?

    …but it appears that your wife is the victim of suicide.

    All the air rushed out of my lungs and I gasped loudly and put my hands over my mouth. My world closed in on me and the darkness seemed overwhelming. I was in shock and it would be several days, if not several weeks, before the news the two homicide detectives insist I sit down for would actually sink in. The natural numbness defense mechanism kicked in;

    I didn’t hear him exactly but the small one asked something about why and he was gesturing with his hands and both were looking at me and I glanced at the back door expecting it to open and Melinda to come in any minute but it never did open and I couldn’t catch my breath and it felt like someone took a 2-by-4 and hit me as hard as they could in my stomach and the smaller detective was still saying something but it sounded like Charlie Brown’s teacher only not so coherent and my field of sight seemed to close in and I was thinking if I were outside and could see the sky it would be pitch black because my world was dark and no stars could shine and the bigger one talked this time but the teacher thing was still running through my mind and I pictured Melinda when she walked out of the door the night before and I could see our car back out of the driveway and go up the street and the smaller one was gesturing and I think he scratched his head but I couldn’t be sure because my vision was fuzzy around the edges and that damn teacher was still occupying their bodies and they said more words and glanced at me and the back door was still closed and I was still sitting down and I think the bigger detective knelt down and touched my shoulder and the smaller one was still talking and didn’t he realize he was talking in wah-wah audibles and nothing he was asking was making any sense and the walls got closer and my heartbeat was pounding in my head and I didn’t know what it was then but later realized my bones had started to ache and the back door remained closed and my hands shook and my head bobbled back and forth because I just couldn’t seem to keep it still and I could feel the bigger detective touch me somewhere and he must’ve been saying something because I thought I could see his mouth move and I still couldn’t breathe and I was still shaking but harder this time and…

 

    …breathe.

 

    Take deep breaths.

 

    Just breathe.

 

    My bones now throbbed in pain. My heartbeat got louder my head.

 

    No!

 

    Why? The Charlie Brown teacher hasn’t left.

 

    Breathe.

 

    Slow and deep.

 

    Take it easy.

 

    Do you want something to drink?

    I didn’t hear him exactly, but I think the smaller detective asked me if Melinda would have any reason to commit suicide.

    Suicide. It’s a final act, but in my mind, at that immediate stupor-filled moment, I was thinking she would soon be home after spending a few days in the hospital getting better. Did they say attempt? Oh please say she attempted suicide and that would mean she didn’t really do it and I would be able to talk with her and find out exactly what she was thinking and I could help her.

    I think the two detectives were still talking, but I didn’t really hear them. Something about someone should be with me and that I shouldn’t be alone. I knew they were thinking suicide.

 

Mine.

 

So was I.

   

    I didn’t have to search my mind very long to realize no guns were in the house. Melinda didn’t like guns, so none were in the house. She called me one day from work and I was having a rather bad MS day. She asked me how I was doing but I knew she could tell.

    Lousy.

    That bad?

    Yes. It’s a good thing you don’t like guns in the house because I sure could use one right now.

    I have to go, Hon. Busy here today.

    Click.

    The dead receiver was still in my hand when I could hear Melinda pulling into our driveway. I recognized the sound of our car. I looked out and I saw Melinda walking in the back door. She worked not far from our East Memphis home, but she hung up the phone with me and immediately hopped into the car. She wanted to be with me, and I wanted her with me and here she was.

    She was good. She told me the last place she wanted to be right now was at work. She heard the pain and frustration in my voice. There wasn’t much she could do when I was having a bad MS day beyond just being there for me, but she was always there for me. Melinda would then lie next to me in bed because I didn’t want to—and couldn’t—venture further than the bathroom.

    A bad MS day means the usual symptoms of MS are cranked up to the stratosphere.

    Off the charts

    More ibuprofen.

    Now.

    The sooner the better. Please make it stop. I can’t get away from it. I usually want to do only two things when I am having a ‘bad MS’ day: nothing and everything. I just want to lie in bed all day and do nothing, but yet I want to do everything I can to make MS go away. The buzzing and burning in my hands, feet, arms and legs and the vision amount to a plurality of pain and crap. Oh, the vision is very good. I can see very well, just two or four of everything. I blink to try and get focus but my brain is not cooperating. I feel like I stuck my tongue on a 9-volt battery and the shocking sensation goes through my entire body.  The buzzing and burning is getting worse. My hands and feet would steam if I poured water on them because they are hot. They feel hot. They are hot. My brain thinks they are. I can’t get cool. The heat makes me sweat and Melinda knew if she saw a bead of sweat on my forehead I was going downhill rather quickly.

    She held me. That’s all she could do. But she was there and that meant more to me than any cool vest I could put on.

    While I didn’t pay attention at the time, looking back on it I realized that the Mr. Bleachy remark wasn’t the only mistake the pair, mainly the smaller one, made that evening. If, indeed, the two were very experienced in dealing with delivering tragic news to family members, they sure didn’t show it, and that was a mistake.

    In the letters I wrote to the police department brass in the days following that evening I wanted to make sure the cops knew how to treat grieving family members, what is appropriate to do and what is not. I didn’t know how to react, I was new to this sort of thing, but they did and, therefore, didn’t have any excuse for being lousy at their jobs. That night was nothing, however, compared to how I was treated in the subsequent days.

    The detectives didn’t try to console me when they said the word suicide and used the word victim to precede that dark and menacing word. They acted like what they were doing was nothing more than a routine act of their official duties.

    Do you have someone who could stay with you this evening Mr. Beachy? (Again, the smaller one got it right this time).

    What?

    Do you have someone to stay with you?

    Jenny and her husband, Brandon, were with me earlier but had since left. Jenny was Melinda’s bridesmaid in our wedding and she helped me throughout that day because I was home alone without a car.

No.

    Can you call someone?

    I’ll be alright.

    But, Mr. Beachy, you should have someone here with you. Now the smaller one seemed concerned but it was too little, too late.

    I picked up the phone and dialed Brandon’s cell. Can you guys come back over here?

    What happened?

    They told me she was a victim of suicide. I barely got those words out before I started choking up disconnected the call.

    They’re coming.

    Good. Here is my card and you can call me in the morning and we can talk more. The card read: City of Memphis Homicide Division, Detective Mitch Oliver, with his phone number. My shaking hand took it and I made a mental note of his name; Mitch Oliver. Detective. Homicide Division.

    What happened? I needed to know but they didn’t offer any specifics.

We don’t know. We weren’t the lead investigators on this case. We came to talk to you because you have been making some frantic phone calls to the department.

    I did.

    Brandon and Jenny were with me earlier in the evening when I called 9-1-1 and no one answered.

    No one answered! How could someone not answer a 9-1-1 call? Instead, I got an answering machine.

    Leave a message? No thanks. Click.

    The phone rang immediately after I hung up. The woman at the emergency dispatch center wanted to know the nature of my emergency.

    I cannot find my wife I said trying to stifle a sob. I know that is not an emergency but in this case it is because the word “morgue” had entered into the conversation and the cops aren’t telling me anything. Please help me. I need to find my wife.

    Jenny had suggested I call the local hospitals to see if they had a record of my wife getting admitted. They didn’t. I called a morgue. No record. I called the jail. Nothing. My God, Melinda, where are you?

    I am sure she will walk back into the house after having spent some time by herself wondering what to do now that she’s lost another job. I told Jenny not to worry because I fully expected her to come back home soon. Melinda had lost a job almost two years ago and she had disappeared for a few hours the next day. I found her sitting in her car at a nearby park nursing a bottle of wine.

    Minutes, however, turned to hours. Nothing. Melinda hadn’t come home and I tried her cell phone repeatedly with no luck. The rings were re-routed to her voicemail. I left her several messages, but one in particular stuck in my mind:     “Sweetheart, I hope this doesn’t mean you don’t give a shit, because I do.” When I got her phone back from Detective Oliver a few days later I erased that particular message. It was almost as if I could take those words back and things would be okay if only I could wipe out the message before she heard it.

She never did hear it. I later found out Melinda was gone several hours before I left the message.

    Jenny was crying when she and Brandon made it back to my house. I was too.

    Even after the small detective told me that she was a victim of suicide I thought it must be a mistake and she would, eventually, walk back into the house through the back door like she had always done in the past. I would hear the sound of her keys as she put them on the antique table in the kitchen and she would greet me with the familiar “Hi Daddy.”

    Brandon was the first to break the sob-filled sounds in the room: I’m staying here with you tonight.

    No, I’ll be okay. You don’t have to do that, but I needed to be with someone. Jenny knew that and told me. She didn’t ask, she told me that Brandon was going to stay that evening and many more if I needed.

    Melinda was there for Jenny when she was going through training to become a Memphis police officer. When Jenny needed good tennis shoes to replace the ones she had worn out Melinda was right there to pay for the clothes and items she needed. Now Jenny was right there to offer her help in my time of need.

    I did need.

    I also knew I had to make some calls, first to my parents and then to Melinda’s. What would I say? What could I say? I was glad that I didn’t have extensive experience telling bad news to the families of ‘victims.’ Of all the dirty jobs in this world, that has to be the dirtiest.

    I called my mom and dad first and I don’t really remember what I said but I do remember dropping the receiver on my bed and yelling “She’s gone!”

    Mom crying.

    Dad crying.

    Me crying.

    The shaking got harder.

    I have to call my father-in-law, Don.

    My dad got on the line: Do you want us there with you, son? Yes. I needed to feel safe. I needed things to be back to normal. I needed this nightmare to be just that: a really bad dream that someone gets when they take painkillers. I needed this to be one of those narcotic nightmares.

    I had to look Don’s number up. I never committed it to memory. I didn’t have to. He called our house at one o’clock every Sunday afternoon. You could set your watch by it. If I answered the phone on those afternoons he would always ask me about my health, the weather, the dogs and then he would want to talk to “the kid.” Their conversations consisted of chit-chat about the weather, how many farm cats he now had in the barn at the old homestead, how many hands her mom had won during her weekly bridge game and of course who had died, gotten married or had a baby.

    Just chit-chat.

    I called their number. Don answered. I knew he would because Melinda’s mom never used the phone due to her difficulty with hearing.

    She’s gone, Don.

    He passed the message along to Elsie and I could hear her scream in the background and begin to cry. Very loud and very hard. “Oh my baby!”

    Melinda had a sometimes strained but respectful relationship with her mother. When Don and Elsie would travel to Memphis to spend a week with us each year, Melinda would fritter around the week prior cleaning the house from top to bottom because she knew her mom was a meticulous housekeeper.

    I didn’t know what else to say but I didn’t need to say anything more. I hung up after a few minutes, I think, but I don’t remember. All I remember is saying to Don that his daughter was now dead. That isn’t the way things are supposed to be. Parents are supposed to, always, die before their children. That’s a rule that is all too often broken and it’s not supposed to be that way. It can’t be that way. She promised she would never leave me.

    I sat at my desk not knowing what to do. I was thinking this is all a nightmare and somewhere along the way a mistake was made and Melinda would walk back into the house, through the back door like she always did, soon.

    No.

    No mistake. She was gone. She left me.

    The exhaustion set in. One of the worst symptoms of multiple sclerosis is extreme fatigue. Melinda told me that I could fall asleep in mid-sentence and she was sure extreme fatigue was a defense mechanism for those with MS, otherwise how could anyone get any rest without the help of a handful of sleeping pills? I took some sleeping pills in the month or so after I was diagnosed, but it got to a point where I was eventually taking pills to stay awake, not to sleep. Slumber was easy. It was my defense mechanism.

    Doctors prescribe pills like Provigil for those with MS to help combat fatigue. Provigil is given to narcoleptics to help them stay awake. It works for those with MS, at least until your body gets used to them. Now, I can take a Provigil at 10 o’clock at night and fall asleep. When that happens, doctors tell you to stop taking them for about a month or two and then resume the regimen. 

It’ll be like new again.

    I didn’t know if I could fall asleep that night, but I had been up for nearly 20 hours and I struggled to stay awake. At least until I finally did lie down in bed.

    I woke up the next morning and reached over to Melinda’s side of the bed. I would always wake up before Melinda and when she began to stir I would get a cup of coffee for her, no cream, just a half packet of Sweet’N Low.

    This morning, however, she wasn’t there. The previous day’s events came crashing back into my mind and the tremors started again. I stumbled into the kitchen, but not before passing by the living room window that overlooked our driveway.

    I looked out, hoping to see our car. Nope. Our car wasn’t there. 

    Nope, she didn’t come home in the middle of the night.

    Yep, I was alone.

    The first day of the rest of my life had just begun.

 

 

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strachan gordon wrote 172 days ago

Hello Vern , I have just read the first chapter of your tremendous book and am left with many differing sentiments ,but I think the strongest impression is the feeling that you have shown tremendous resilience of heart and mind to be able to write this book ,given the burden not only of your wife's tragic death , but your own multiple sclerosis.It is written in a extremely dramatic way , which does not need embellishment to create an impact. I don't know if you have the time , but I wonder if you would be able to look at the first chapter of my book , 'A Buccaneer' , which is set amongst Pirates in the 17th century , with very best wishes , Strachan Gordon (from the UK) Watchlisted.

vbeachy wrote 253 days ago

I have now gotten to the publishing phase and A Tear-Stained Letter will come out in Mid-June 2011! Vern Beachy

Katriel1985 wrote 617 days ago

Hi Vern,

I’m sorry to hear of the loss of your beloved wife. You have written a beautiful, heart-wrenching, descriptive story that drew me into it until I could feel your pain, your hurt and confusion. It was difficult to read (although well written and paced) and more than once I had to stop to wipe tears from my eyes as I easily saw your heart. Throughout the story I felt your undying love for your wife and I really respect you for the courage it must have taken to write and then post your story on here. I have backed this 100% as it deserves.

Joyanna Winn

eloraine wrote 622 days ago

Amazing, well done and I wish you all the best with this. E.Loraine Royal Blood Chronicles book one

yasmin esack wrote 622 days ago

Very riveting opening and you create a wonderful atmosphere of fear and tension.

(Please check you didn't say you opened the door twice, I opened the front door and four lines later you say I opened the door)

Very stirring

backed

lionel25 wrote 623 days ago

Vern, this opening chapter is bursting with emotion. A sad, enjoyable read that compels the reader to turn to the next chapter.

Sincerely backed.

Joffrey (The Silver Spoon Effect)

Michael Somers wrote 623 days ago

Vern:

Hooked, right from the beginning. The first chapter alone really captures the surreal nature of what's to come in subsequent chapters.

Clearly, this is a sad story, a tragic story. But it's also an uplifting story. To write down these events in an artistic means you've survived, means you're healing. I look forward to reading the rest of your manuscript when you're ready to share it.

Cheers,
Mike Somers
Starved

Cheney wrote 630 days ago

I am up to chapter 5. I really like the way that you poured out so much emotion and feeling into your story. I felt like I was right there with you, going through each new experience. Strange that your wife and my husband were both 44. The story had me so engaged that I wanted to look online for a photo of her. You're right, she was a beautiful woman. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt story. I know that getting it out on paper was very theraputic, at least it was for me. Any publisher would be wise to snatch this one up! Backed

Lori - Out of the Fire and Into the Light

Cheney wrote 631 days ago

I haven't had a chance to read your book yet, but am eager to. I too lost a husband to suicide and know fully well the unique pain that goes along with that. I also lost my mother to Lou Gehrig's disease, which mimicks MS. So I can identify with that pain also. Thank you for your courage to write out all of your pain. That in itself is very healing. Best of luck with your book!

Lori - Out of the Fire and Into the Light

Jupiter Echoes wrote 786 days ago

Too sad to read.
A real life account that must have been very difficult to write.
It comes over well, and you capture the spirit - or shadow - of each moment.


BACKED

andyroo wrote 841 days ago

I very nearly didn't read this, because I know it can't possibly have a happy ending. Suicide is tragic, MS is utterly horrible, so having to suffer both must be... well, words can't possible describe.
Or can they? I braved it, and had a read. From a writing point of view, this is compelling, shocking, heart-breaking, a hundred emotions pounding me at once, and knowing that this is real really did choke me up. Best of luck with this, because it, as a book, is fabulous, but also best of luck with your life, because you sure as hell seem to need it.

Andrew

nillan wrote 847 days ago

Vern,
What a brave and strong man you are to write this heartbreaking count of your terrible loss. I so do hope that by writing it you have found som peace inside. I certainly hope that this will be published and am putting it right up on my shelf.
Nillan
(Blue-eyed in Luhya-land)

chrisalys wrote 852 days ago

Almost eartbreaking to read just as a premiss. The difficulty you must have had writing this but also the cathartic experience that it must have given you. I aaplaud your quiet dignity in delivering these powerful words. Good luck with it, backed.

Heikki Hietala wrote 852 days ago

This is one of the books you'd wish were fiction, but it is not fiction. Your survival and this cathartic book show the rest of us how one should live his life, with head held high and taking the blows one at a time, bending but not breaking.

I applaud you, and the book takes its deserved space on my shelf.

neal wrote 853 days ago

Wow, blimey. This book needs to be published.

Andrew W. wrote 855 days ago

A Tear-Stained Letter

Hi Vern,

What to say, I am sorry, so sorry. But also, what an amazing testament to your love, devotion and your dogged struggle through grief this is. You bring it to life, it is painful yes, it is distressing yes, but it is also beautiful because you capture the loss, the emptiness and the sheer terror of being alive and losing what we love most. You have stared into this horror and you have done your best to make sense of it, a warm-hearted gesture of love and memory, outward looking, helpful for others and so powerful. It is difficult to read but it is so well written, stream of consciousness stuff, it must have been very hard to write. I am in awe of your courage and your staying power and your ability to dress the pain in words. Well done, onto my shelf. Take care

Best wishes and good luck - Andrew W.
(Sanctuary's Loss)

Bradley Wind wrote 856 days ago

Vern,
Notes on aTSL:
Bob Dunkelburger is the real name of a man I visited with regularly every Xmas in my youth. His wife had MS and was in a chair. Bob fed/bathed/and like a pro did her makeup for her. He loved her dearly and when my cousin was diagnosed I couldn't help but look at her husband and think You won't be a Bob Dunkelburger. I was angry but she's doing well and its not an issue yet...sorry for the aside, but this is where your book has sent me. A tough well-written opener. I felt his fear/solitude.
...completely humiliated, wifeless and nearly lifeless. = v good.
So much to feel...moved by here.
Best of luck with this.
-=Bradley

Phil Rowan wrote 856 days ago

This is a very moving and well written story. What you give us us heart-wrenching but you draw us in to what happened and it's difficult not to become involved with what you're relating. Backed and wishing you well - Phil Rowan (Weimar Vibes)

beegirl wrote 858 days ago

This is an incrediable story. The strength to write it!! You are amazing.
Backed,
Barbara
The Sea Pillow

TheLoriC wrote 859 days ago

This is such a warm and heartbreaking story, and we all could learn something from it. It is a beautiful story of human survival, and you painted it beautifully. This is on my shelf for the additional exposure it rightfully deserves.

L. Anne Carrington, "The Cruiserweight"

T.L Tyson wrote 859 days ago

This is heartbreaking.
I just read a book about MS and what a person has to go through, and their family, is simply heart shattering.
I applaud you for writing this, speaking from your heart, and putting your experiences out there for us to read.
Backed. T.L Tyson-Seeking Eleanor

Janine Crowley Haynes wrote 860 days ago

Vern,

Thanks for your comments on my book.

I'm sorry for your loss. Your story is so important, and I commend you for sharing it with the world. I wish more people would speak from the heart and share the stories that connect and bond us all on the human level.

I will continue to read your story.

Backed,
Janine

C.P. wrote 861 days ago

A Tear-Stained Letter

What can I say? You have given me a gift. Showing the part of yourself that is most tender, most exposed. I don't think that I am as brave as you. Nor do I think that I would be as resilient. You are a man to be reckoned with. Shelved C.P

Shayne Parkinson wrote 861 days ago

Vern, this is heart-wrenching and deeply moving. It's also shocking - I was quite honestly shaking after reading of the treatment meted out to you by those police officers.

I admire your courage so much - to carry on at all, and to share your story with the world. And you tell it so very well: straightforward, direct, and with a stark clarity.

Shelved.

Kim Jewell wrote 862 days ago

Hi Vern-

First of all, your cover. It's beautiful and peaceful and pleasing to the eyes. Definitely serene... I love it.

Your pitch - well written, concise and straight to the point. That's a good thing - there's really no point in sugar-coating the material in the book. It is what it is, and your pitch is enough to compell those who want to experience a good, emotional, heart-felt story to read on.

The guts of your book - and I mean that in the most literal sense of that, because it is truly gut-wrenching, and emotional. It is well written, and I know it has come from the heart, and the very bottom of your soul. The reactions of you and your entire family as they cope through the grief is heart wrenching. This is very well written, and extremely compelling. Thank you for sharing this with the Authonomy world. I'm happy to back it.

Kim
Invisible Justice

fidheallir wrote 862 days ago

Visceral, compelling, and told in a unique voice. The emotions laid so starkly bare grab the reader's attention and don't let go.

Lovexlee wrote 862 days ago

Hello Vern.

This is an exquisite and moving narrative.

You had my attention just from reading your pitch and you held it throughout reading your story. I think this is a very profound piece of writing.

I am definitely backing your story and hope others will do the same!!

R.A. Battles wrote 862 days ago

Vern,

I hope you will check in regularly to see how your heartfelt work of non-fiction fares. I don't know who is credited for the old saying, "Sometimes art imitates life," but as a man who has been in a relationship with someone who suffered from MS, I am pleased to back you.

I applaud you for writing this compelling and heartfelt story. I think Nicolas Sparks would be inspired by it.

Rodney

vbeachy wrote 862 days ago

Paxie;

Thank you for your comment and, yes, I did take a look at Harpertrue. Very, very interesting, thank you. I do have a finished manuscript (76,400 words) and I do have a literary agent now working on my behalf. I think a submission to Harpertrue would step on his toes, but I am not totally sure.

I started out by writing a letter to Melinda and when I kept writing I thought it would be a good idea for a book. Writing what turned out to be "A Tear-Stained Letter" was very therapeutic for me and I know the issues I talk about in the book can be very beneficial for the general public and for those in similar situations. Thank you, thank you.

Vern

This is a very moving story....Every word squeezed from the heart.....It's what 'words' are for isn't it.....To pass on something like this and share with others an experience that you never want them to live through themselves....

You have to decide where you want to go with this.......If you just want the satisfaction of writing it and to feel totally rewarded and fullfilled when its complete then your heading there pretty fast in my view...

If you want global publication then to be honest that's a totally different ball game, (and dont we all know it).....BUT ...you can take a look at www.harpertrue.com...................You give them a 2000 word account of your true life story,, and they do the rest,,,,,,Effectively you are given a ghost writer and before you know it, your on every shelf in every airport.....I noticed it the other day.....It's not for me, bugger all has happened to me that anyone else would want to know......

Have a look.... Best of luck with this, it's an incredible story......Backed

paxie wrote 862 days ago

Vern

This is a very moving story....Every word squeezed from the heart.....It's what 'words' are for isn't it.....To pass on something like this and share with others an experience that you never want them to live through themselves....

You have to decide where you want to go with this.......If you just want the satisfaction of writing it and to feel totally rewarded and fullfilled when its complete then your heading there pretty fast in my view...

If you want global publication then to be honest that's a totally different ball game, (and dont we all know it).....BUT ...you can take a look at www.harpertrue.com...................You give them a 2000 word account of your true life story,, and they do the rest,,,,,,Effectively you are given a ghost writer and before you know it, your on every shelf in every airport.....I noticed it the other day.....It's not for me, bugger all has happened to me that anyone else would want to know......

Have a look.... Best of luck with this, it's an incredible story......Backed

vbeachy wrote 862 days ago

Thank you Ali...I DO SO appreciate the feedback I have been getting from experienced writers like yourself.

This is heart-wrenching, poignant and also sadly very real. Your writing is fluent and beautiful, and you write with searing honesty. I am full of admiration for your courage. Ali

vbeachy wrote 862 days ago

Thanks for your comment Paul. MS is hard, absolutely, but it is easy compared to losing my wife.

Hi Vern, harrowing stuff, I can still feel my heart beating. I have two friends who have MS one of whom suffered an appalling tragedy within his family shortly after being diagnosed. It can be hard to imagine the suffering some people have to go through. There but for the grace of God.
Well told with genuine emotion and passion. Paul.

Paul Freeman wrote 862 days ago

Hi Vern, harrowing stuff, I can still feel my heart beating. I have two friends who have MS one of whom suffered an appalling tragedy within his family shortly after being diagnosed. It can be hard to imagine the suffering some people have to go through. There but for the grace of God.
Well told with genuine emotion and passion. Paul.

Steve Ward wrote 863 days ago

Vern, this is a touching memoir. This is true life horror and you capture it well. One can only wish you the best in the future.
Steve Ward
Test Pilot's Daughter: Revenge

Ayrich wrote 863 days ago

Your title and pitch put you right on my shelf. I am looking forward to reading this.

Fred Le Grand wrote 863 days ago

This is a harrowing piece of writing and is real. Take it from me it is well described, atmospheric and crafted skillfully.
You drag the reader in and mess with threir soul and their emotions.
Excellent writing,
Shelved.
Best Wishes

John Brassey wrote 863 days ago

It is difficult to comment on such a personal piece of writing without being glib or patronising. Your pain and bitterness floods onto the page (especially in the long outpouring of thoughts which runs without interruption or punctuation) and your journalistic experience is evident in the writing stye. You certainly capture and hold the reader's attention and I wanted to read more than you have uploaded. I worked for more than a year on a suicide helpline but that has made me no wiser about the cause or effect that suicide has. Every case is unique as your story demonstrates so perfectly.

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