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rank 3566
word count 11670
date submitted 02.10.2009
date updated 11.12.2009
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction, Romance,...
classification: universal
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Leaving Coty

Ruth Estevez

When Tessa Garcia decides that there may be more to life than working for Francois Coty's Perfume Empire, a catalogue of unexpected events unfolds.

 

Tessa Garcia is personal secretary to Francois Coty, the most successful perfumer of his generation and enjoys the freedom granted to a single, working young woman living in Paris in the 1920's. All her life, Tessa has dreamed of working for him, but now she suspects that a successful career alone is not enough. Family personify the debate as to whether a balance between work and a personal life is attainable.
Tessa finds herself vulnerable to the jealousy of ambitious co-workers circulating rumours. Suspecting that he is losing Tessa, Coty asks her to write down his life story. Through this she realises what she needs from life as he appears to have all he wants.
By visiting her mother and sisters, Tessa realises that her life is incomplete. But matters are threatened to be taken out of her hands when the carismatic Gaston Bistoche enters the Coty community and attempts to not only bring about her downfall, but also Coty's.
Sandes, the man she gave up for this highly prized career appears once again in her life and she is at the centre of the triangle between Coty, Bistoche and Sandes from which none of them wish her to escape.

 
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Bamboo Promise wrote 711 days ago

What is a wonderful writing. I can feel, sense the smell of the flowers in the room .
Backed,
Bamboo Promise

Bamboo Promise wrote 711 days ago

What is a wonderful writing. I can feel, sense the smell of the flowers in the room .
Backed,
Bamboo Promise

Jupiter Echoes wrote 884 days ago

I actually love how you write...
cool everythings....
the opening engaged me, and moving on, i found somethng classy in your style.

BACKED

Ruth Estevez wrote 888 days ago


Dear Paxie,
This is really helpful. Thank you for the time you've taken. I know it needs an edit, so will revisit it as I'm ploughing ahead trying to finish. Yes, a friend has a real thing about 'hads' and not repeating them after the first, if necessary, one.

You are right about 'brown' and 'deep.'

I will go through it again. Thank you.

I'm slow with my reading list at the moment, but I am working through.

All the best and many thanks,
Ruth

Ruth
I read your loaded chapters one and two.....

The opening didn't really work for me.......

deep brown eyes, inahaled deeply.......(deep,,,,repetitive .....dark brown eyes perhaps)......

The scent of pollen laden bees ? I couldn't smell that,,,,,lavender, honeysuckle, rose blooms perhaps......
I thought she was in the graveyard or in a garden. I was surprised when mention was made of the vase......Also I'm not sure it matters more where the flowers came from , than clarifying where the Blois de Bologne is.......The beautiful landscaped park on the outskirts of Paris...

I felt more grounded as I read on, simplistic dialogue, and evenly paced narration carried me through the story, which i enjoyed.....I now have a defined profile of both Dideir and Tessa in my minds eye.

he had been holding.......he held.....

Do a word search on 'he had' I was concious of seeing them often.....

when she had asked him to fire his secretary...........when she asked him to fire his secretary..... (no need for 'had')

Hope my comments help....Best of luck with this....The promise of a great story which I'm happy to back.

shelved.

Ruth Estevez wrote 888 days ago

Dear Andrew,
Thanks you so much for this. It's made my morning. I know I have to re-edit for all the little mistakes, punctuation, repetition etc, but it was good of you to focus on the bigger picture. I'm working on this rather than Erosion at the moment as I need to finish it. Thank you. You've been helpful. Sanctuary's Loss was on my shelf, I put something else in it's place, but will read some more and am aware of the need to be taken seriously for the end of the month. Good luck and many thanks,
Ruth

Leaving Coty

Hi Ruth,

I love it when this happens, when I discover a gem amongst the books here, they are out there and you provided me with the best read of the morning so far. Wonderfully light-touch writing, delivering character and story and leaving you out of the equation nicely. Adroitly done, lots of complex social politics to come with sophisticated and well developed characters, I read and supported Erosion recently and I think of the two I prefer this one. Well done, impressive writing, you are clearly very talented and level-headed about your writing, a powerful combination. You are a natural story-teller, I think you would have trouble making a story boring, you tell them with such verve.

Best wishes and good luck
Andrew W
(Sanctuary’s Loss)

paxie wrote 889 days ago

Ruth
I read your loaded chapters one and two.....

The opening didn't really work for me.......

deep brown eyes, inahaled deeply.......(deep,,,,repetitive .....dark brown eyes perhaps)......

The scent of pollen laden bees ? I couldn't smell that,,,,,lavender, honeysuckle, rose blooms perhaps......
I thought she was in the graveyard or in a garden. I was surprised when mention was made of the vase......Also I'm not sure it matters more where the flowers came from , than clarifying where the Blois de Bologne is.......The beautiful landscaped park on the outskirts of Paris...

I felt more grounded as I read on, simplistic dialogue, and evenly paced narration carried me through the story, which i enjoyed.....I now have a defined profile of both Dideir and Tessa in my minds eye.

he had been holding.......he held.....

Do a word search on 'he had' I was concious of seeing them often.....

when she had asked him to fire his secretary...........when she asked him to fire his secretary..... (no need for 'had')

Hope my comments help....Best of luck with this....The promise of a great story which I'm happy to back.

shelved.

zenup wrote 890 days ago

I was attracted by your title + the period (20's) has an enduring appeal: IMO your prose is more than equal to the task, plus it's a fluid, easy read. nb I'd suggest a serious punctuation edit and there's a few very tiny polishing issues:
spelling, eg: 'a body prostate on the slopes of the Sacre Coeur' (Ch 4?) - prostrate.
missing words/punctuation: 'He was groaning made her tremble' (His groaning?/ and it?)
I also noticed what I feel is modern speech - sounded out of place in a 20's tale:
'no safety net' and 'anything to say that needs to be shared' (the 'to be shared' seems today's group-speak, to me). Delightful concept. Hope you upload more. Better still, I'd love to own this book. Backed.

Andrew W. wrote 890 days ago

Leaving Coty

Hi Ruth,

I love it when this happens, when I discover a gem amongst the books here, they are out there and you provided me with the best read of the morning so far. Wonderfully light-touch writing, delivering character and story and leaving you out of the equation nicely. Adroitly done, lots of complex social politics to come with sophisticated and well developed characters, I read and supported Erosion recently and I think of the two I prefer this one. Well done, impressive writing, you are clearly very talented and level-headed about your writing, a powerful combination. You are a natural story-teller, I think you would have trouble making a story boring, you tell them with such verve.

Best wishes and good luck
Andrew W
(Sanctuary’s Loss)

R.A. Battles wrote 940 days ago

Ruth,

I can tell you some editing will be required to eliminate the excessive dialogue tags and some of your paragraphs are a bit too long.

Other than these two observations, I love, love it, and want some more of it! :-)

Shelved
Rodney (NEW ATTITUDES)

Ruth Estevez wrote 954 days ago
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