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THE PARTISAN

Chris Robinson

The Soviets wanted a Second Front against the Nazis so they sent for The Partisan

 

After the Battle of Stalingrad in 1943, Major Nikolai Solov is sent to train British commandos for an attack against the Nazis - part of a Soviet 'goodwill mission'. However, his superiors want him to become an assassin. Major Solov has other plans when a chance meeting shows him a way out by doing what he does best - killing the enemy.
But it's hard when you're not sure who that enemy is...
Haunted by memories of his father, Solov always found salvation in war not revolution. Now it's time to make amends.
He can only fight back the way he knows how...like a Partisan.




 
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    Stalingrad.  January  28,  1943.  Hell  frozen  over.  Pavel  rode  his  motorcycle across  the  icy  fields,  avoiding  the  treacherous  roads.

    Every  trip  ran  a  risk  of  being  taken  in  a  German  counterattack.

     His  sub-machinegun  was  strapped  across  his  back  for  reassurance.  The  films  they  showed  the  troops  back  in  Voronezh  about  what  the  fascists  did  to  prisoners of  war  scared  the  shit  out  of  him.  The  way  they  were  starved  to  the  point  where  they  needed  no  guards but  were  pointed  in  the  direction  of  the  nearest  field  kitchen.  There  had  been  talk  of  prisoners  eating  their  dead comrades  to  stay  alive.  He  hoped  it  was  just  that…talk.   

    He  pulled  up  at  the  top  of  the  next  hill,  rear  wheel  skidding  under

him.  There  were  no  Krauts  waiting  for  him,  just  a  few  trees  next  to  vehicle

tracks  that  had  churned  the  ice.  He  knew  the  field  post  he  was  looking  for  was

a  little  further  on.  A  possible  hot  mug  of  tea,  and,  if  he  was  lucky,  a  shot  of  vodka  might  be  on  offer.

    Pavel  parked  and  dismounted  his  bike  on  the  edge  of  the  first  group  of  tents  housed  beneath  a  huge,  white  tarpaulin  stretched  amongst  the  trees.  The  post  was  a  short  distance  from  the  river  Volga  and  it  formed  a  vital  link  for  the  troops  that  now  surrounded  the  city.  It  was  part  of  a  rifle  division.  Pavel  saw  food  being  prepared  but  no  fires  were  allowed  yet  in  daylight.  The  communications  tent  buzzed  with  the  static  of  radio  talk.  Soldiers  sat  around  talking while  cleaning  their  weapons.  A  sergeant  wiped  his  hands  on  an  oily  rag  while  he  worked  under  the  bonnet  of  a  truck.  Pavel  propped  up  his  motorbike,  nodded  at  the  sergeant  who  shook  his  head  at  the  engine.  An  officer  stood  at  the  entrance  to  the  first  tent  and  Pavel  snapped  to,  then  grabbed  the  two  canvas  satchels  strapped  to  his  pillion.

    “Peaceful  trip,  comrade?”

    “Yes,  comrade  Lieutenant,”  Pavel  said.  “Getting  better  by  the  day.  Pretty  quiet  around  here  too.”

    “That’ll  all  change  in  about  twenty  minutes  from  now.  The  next  barrage  is

due. 

    “Ours  or  theirs?”

    “Ours,  of  course.  You  don’t  think  the  fascist  dogs  in  there  have 

anything  heavy  to  throw  at  us,  do  you?  They’ll  be  running  out  of  earth  to  dig

into.  The  officer  smiled  as  he  took  the  satchels.

    Pavel  followed  him  into  the tent  where  the  radio  operators  looked  up  at  him  then  got  on  with  their  work.  The  officer  emptied  the  first  then  the  second  satchel  into  a  large  basket  by  a  desk  where  the  despatches  would  be  registered.

    Pavel  took  a  letter from  inside  his  tunic:  “Comrade  Lieutenant,  could  you  register  this  one  first?  It’s  a  ‘deliver  by  hand’.”  The  officer  frowned and  looked  at  the  envelope.

    “Major  N.  Solov.  Fine.”  He  laid  it  on  the  desk,  stamped  it  and  handed  it  back  without  looking  up.

    “Do  you  know  where  I  might  find  the  comrade  Major?”  Pavel  looked

at  a  steaming  mug  of  tea  on  the  officer’s  desk.

    “He’s  at  sector  HQ,  last  I  heard.  But  that  place  is  a  madhouse.  There’s  a

pontoon  bridge  down  the  road.  You  can  ask  the  way  there.  It’s  easy.”

    Pavel  stuffed  the  letter  back  and  buttoned  his  tunic.  He  looked  again  at  the  tea  and saluted  the  officer.  On  his  motorbike  again,  he  regained  the  road.

      Ahead,  he  saw  what  he  thought  was  a  dark  sky,  but  realised  it  was  black  smoke.  He  began  to  make  out  the  crumbled  skyline  of  the  Stalingrad  suburbs.  The  bridge  was  guarded  by  some infantry.  Trucks  crossed  from  the  east  bank  of  the  Volga.  Curving  away  to  the  right,  shrouded  in  mist  and  smoke,  was  the  rubble  of  the  city  that  looked  like  nothing  on  earth.  The  trucks  cut  up  the  ice  and  snow  near  the  river  bank  as  they  struggled  to  find  the  road.

    “Comrade.  Pavel  pulled  up  to  a  corporal  directing  traffic.  “Where’s  the 

command  post?”

    The  corporal  looked  at  him.

“There’s  only  one  direction.  Follow  the  trucks.”  He  gestured  with  a  gloved

hand.

    Five  minutes  down  the  road,  alongside  the  river,  Pavel  weaved  carefully

between  the  trucks  that  snaked  along,  bumper  to  bumper.  Some  of  them  carried

troops.  They  stared  at  him.  They  were  from  the  east,  Pavel  thought,  Tartars  or  Mongols.  One  or  two  managed  a  wave  and  a  smile.

    Pavel  passed  by  four  checkpoints  that  waved  him  through  and  he  was  glad

to  get  away  from  the  convoy.  It  slowed  him  down.  He  pulled  up  again  near  an artillery  unit  dug  in  deep  away  from  the  road  under  camouflage  nets.  He  counted  around  twenty  guns  or  so.  A  sergeant  told  him  sector  HQ  was  right  here,  behind  them.  He  dismounted.  The  sergeant  asked  him  for  a  cigarette  and  looked disappointed  and  puzzled  when  the  despatch  rider  told  him  he  didn’t  smoke.

    “Old  enough  to  shave  but  you  don’t  smoke?”

    He  followed  him  through  the  battery  toward  a  half-destroyed  farmhouse

invisible  from  the  road.  The  half  of  the  building  that  was  destroyed  had  more

netting  over  it  and  served  as  the  entrance,  again  more  banks  of  radios,  tables

with  maps.  Pavel  was  ushered  inside  where  another  officer  looked  at  the  letter

then  at  him.

    “Major  Solov  is  in  the  city,  not  far.  He’s  due  to  return…”  he  looked  down  at  a  pocket  watch”soon,  I  think.  He  looked  at  one  of  the  maps.  “He’s 

on  the  edge.  You’ll  see  an  old  tram  station  as  you  follow  the  road  down  the  hill,

past  the  main  crossroads.  There’ll  be  men  down  there.  Ask  them.”

Pavel  could  see  the  city  now,  or  at  least  what  was  left  of  it.  He  could

hear  the  distant  rattling  of  gunfire.  He  rode  downhill  toward  the  remains  of  the  tram  station.  One  of  the  trams  had  been  hauled  out  into  the  middle  of  the

street  and  filled  with  bricks,  twisted  girders  and  masonry.  Ripped  electric  cables

sprouted  out  of  the  shell  craters  in  the  street.  He  passed  some  soldiers  as  they

walked  alongside  him.  Troops  from  the  east  again,  used  to  the  Siberian  winter.

One  of  them  laughed,  raised  his  rifle  in  the  air  and  shouted:  “Stalin!”  His

fellow  soldiers  laughed  with  him.  Further  along,  by the  doorway  of  a  shattered

garage,  he  spotted  two  white  Russian  soldiers.

    “Never  mind  them,  comrade,  they  only  know  how  to  laugh  and  kill.”

    “They  know  how  to  die  too,”  said  the  other.

    “Got  any  post  for  us?”

    “You  know  where  I  can  find  Major  Solov?”

    “Solov?  Sure.  He’s  about  three  hundred  metres  ahead  of  us.  He  should  be

back  soon.  See  those  three  apartments  with  no  roof?  He’s  somewhere  across  the

street  on  the  other  side.”

    “Thanks.  I’ll  go  see.”

    “Wait,  soldier.  You  better  wait.  We’ve  got  another  salvo  in  a  few 

minutes.”

    “Comrade,”  Pavel  said.  “I  need  to  deliver  a  letter  to  him,  then  I’m

out  of  this shithole.”

    “Oh,  here  it  comes…”  and  the  rest  of  the man’s  words  were  drowned  as  artillery  let  loose  behind  them.  Pavel  steered  into  the  garage  with  the  others.  Behind  him,  the  other  troops  had  already  left  the  street  and  taken  cover  in  the  tram  station.  He  felt  the  ground  shake  as  dust  fell  in  streams  from  the  ceiling.  Chunks  of  masonry  tumbled  down.  His  motorcycle  fell  on  its  side.  Its  front  wheel  still  turning.  The  explosions  began  to  move  away  towards  the  city  centre  where  the  fascist  pockets  of  resistance  were  receiving  their  latest  pounding.  In  the  darkness  of  the  garage,  Pavel  could  hear  cursing  in  between  the  explosions.

    “Someone  should  tell  those  fuckin’  gunners  to  stop  using  our  own  men

for  target  practice!”

    Outside,  the  troops  were  back  on  the  street, glad  they  were  alive  and 

calling  to  each  other.  Nobody  was  hurt.

    “If  you  want  to  find  Solov,  you’d  better  go  now.”

    Another  explosion  sounded  not  too  far  away.

    “That’s  a  mine! Someone’s  stepped  on  a  fuckin’  booby  trap,”  said  one  of

the  soldiers  in  the  garage.  He  grabbed  a  pair  of  binoculars  from  his  companion.

Pavel  struggled  to  pick  up  his  heavy  machine.

    “It’s  Major  Solov’s  party.  I  think  he’s  got  trouble.  Let’s  get  over  there.

You  can  come  too,  son,”  he  said  to  Pavel.  “Leave  your  bike,  it’ll  never  make  it

over  the  rubble.”

    Pavel  let  his  motorbike  fall  again.  He  followed  the  soldiers  out  of  the  garage  and  saw  the  eastern  troops  follow  them.  Pavel  paused  to  slide  his  sub-machinegun  from  his  back.  He  fumbled  with  it  as  he  ran  in  a  crouch  behind  the others.  Pavel  wasn’t  used  to  this.  He’d  relied  on  his  bike  for  too  long.  The

others  left  him  behind.  They  reached  the  shelled  out  apartment  block  and  made

their  way  to  the  front  windows  that  faced  the  street  on  the  other  side.  They

looked  on  as  they  saw  three  men  stood  still  in  the  middle  of  the  roadway.  A 

short  distance  from  them  was  the  crumpled  body  of  a  soldier,  his  uniform  still

smoking,  the  one  who  had  stepped  on  the  mine.

    “Major  Solov!”  someone  yelled.

    “Stay  back!”  another  ordered.

    “Stay  where  you  are!  We’ve  lost  one  man  already!”

    “That’s  Major  Solov,”  one  of  the  soldiers  from  the garage  told  Pavel.

Solov  was  a  metre  or  so  from  their  side  of  the  street.  Behind  him,  his  three

men  were  on  the  other  side.  The  dead  soldier  was  between  them.

    Solov  called  to  them:  “I’ll  retrace  my  steps.  Stay  still.” 

Solov  turned  and  placed  a  foot  on  his  last  footprints  and  made  his  way  toward  his men.  He  unstrapped  his  steel  helmet,  revealing  a  clean-shaven  head.  He leaned  forward  and  threw  the  helmet  somewhere  between  them.

    “You  do  the  same  so  you’ll  have  some  stepping  stones,”  said  Solov.  As 

the  other  men’s  helmets  hit  the  ground,  they  all  faced  away  expecting  an

explosion.  None  came.

    “Alright,  Litinov,”  said  Solov,  “You  first.”

    The  first  soldier  crept  forward  and  stepped  onto  the  helmets  -  one,  two, 

three  -  and  grabbed  Solov’s  hand  to  safety.  He  followed  Solov’s  steps  to  the 

apartment  block.  The  next  soldier  advanced.  He  stepped  onto  the  helmets,  almost  lost  his  balance,  but  landed  onto  Solov’s  footprints  as  his  major grabbed  his  hand…  in  time  to  meet  a  sniper’s  bullet  that  tore  into  his  back  and  exited  his  chest.

    Solov  held  his  arm  to  stop  him  from  falling  backward.

    “Hold  on!”  Solov  yelled.

    The  soldier’s  legs  were  buckling.  Solov  fell  backwards  as  the  man’s  body

hit  the  ground.  No  explosion  came.  The  dead  body  now  formed  a  better  bridge.

It  was  useless  to  try  to  locate  the  sniper.  They  all  knew  that.

    “Covering  fire!”  someone  called.  A  volley  peppered  where  the  shot  had  come  from  as  the  third  soldier  skipped  across  the  helmets,  his  dead  comrade’s  body,  and  ran  to  the  apartment  block  with  Solov.  They  made  their  way  back  toward  the  tram  station.

 

***

  

    “Major  Solov,  I  think  this  is  for  you.”  A  soldier  handed  him  an  envelope.

 

    “What’s  this?”  said  Solov,  noticing  blood  stains  on  the  letter.

    “Young  lad  over  there.  Despatch  rider.  Caught  one  of  the  sniper’s  shots.

    Solov  looked  over  to  where  two  men  were  dragging  Pavel’s  limp  body  by  his  arms  across  the  rubble.  The  young  man’s  eyes  were  staring  at  nothing.

    “Leave  him  there,”  Solov  said.  “Let  him  rest  where  he  fell.  He’s  got  plenty  of  company.”

   

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MarkRTrost wrote 799 days ago

Okay Chris, I read the four chapters. And then I went back and read the betweens. It’s now 2:05 am and I don’t think I could offer a higher compliment than admitting the amount of time I’ve put into your novel.

But, your novel is worth it.

This is good writing. I’ll tell you, I love novels set in wartime. I’m a huge fan of the genre. I think you’ve written a damn fine novel. It moves well. The writing is crisp. I do think you occasionally over explain. And I mean occasionally. It’s not often.

You know, I’m going to be a bit didactic here. This novel is too good to be falling in the numbers. You need to push it. It’s not spamming to tell people your novel is here. Every day new authors join and push everyone else to the middle. And every day new authors upload a new novel. They don’t even know your novel exists. You have to tell them about it. The only novels anyone notices are the 11 little avatars on the front page.

Oh and go get yourself a cover. Each time you put your comments on someone’s book - it’s a small advertisement for your novel. Yep. It’s a small literal commercial. And each time you get someone to back your book and put your picture on their bookshelf it’s a small visual commercial. You need a cover that is distinctive. Right now I have my little advertisement on 283 shelves. And you know why? Because it's 2:16 am and I'm still working it.

This is a fine and accomplished novel. Be proud. Get busy. Your ad is on my shelf.

Mark R. Trost
“Post Marked.”

Nursing Around wrote 659 days ago

i don't know enough to explain how, but you had me hooked from the first page. Well written, easy to read and I'm getting some great pictures in my head from the descriptions/words/phrases you're using. Great job.

Christina McClean wrote 778 days ago

Tense, engaging reading. I thought of the Film 'The Thin Red line' where observations were excellent, into the relationships between the various soldiers. The details you give us build up a strong visual, enough details for our imagination to run free but not to many. The scene with the landmine is disturbing and brilliantly written. Again another film with this kind of suspense is 'The Hill'. I will read more as I am gripped.
Christina
From Under the Bed

Wanttobeawriter wrote 31 days ago

PARTISAN
This is s story that really describes what war is like. The way the soldiers used the dead man’s body as a bridge is not only great writing but something I’m sure happens. I thought in the beginning I might not be able to relate to your characters because I know very little about Russia’s role in WWII but very soon that didn’t matter. Your descriptions and the way you use dialogue to fill in back story caught me up to date with no trouble. You have a sympathetic character in Pavel as he works so hard to deliver the letter against all odds. Solov is equally well fleshed out. Highly starred and added to my shelf. Wanttobeawriter: Who Killed the President?

RonParker wrote 545 days ago

Hi Chris,

I don't usually read historical fiction, but I think you have a good story here. I've only had time to read the firs two chapters whicis enough to know that it's great writing. I did find it rather stange that you spent so much time developing the pov character in the first chapter only to have him killed off at the end of the chapter.

Also, when he is on his way to deliver his dispatches, you wriote that he is worried about a counter attack. For there to be a counter-attack there first has to be an attack.

Why no fires durin the daytime? That doesn't make sense as obviously the light of a fire is going to seen much easier in the dark.

Talking of fires, if none was allowed how did the officer manage to get hot water to make tea?

Smal things like this need to be explained but I do think you have the basis of a publishable story.

Ron

RonParker wrote 545 days ago

Hi Chris,

I don't usually read historical fiction, but I think you have a good story here. I've only had time to read the firs two chapters whicis enough to know that it's great writing. I did find it rather stange that you spent so much time developing the pov character in the first chapter only to have him killed off at the end of the chapter.

Also, when he is on his way to deliver his dispatches, you wriote that he is worried about a counter attack. For there to be a counter-attack there first has to be an attack.

Why no fires durin the daytime? That doesn't make sense as obviously the light of a fire is going to seen much easier in the dark.

Talking of fires, if none was allowed how did the officer manage to get hot water to make tea?

Smal things like this need to be explained but I do think you have the basis of a publishable story.

Ron

Becca wrote 579 days ago

Always a sensitive subject--but you've included some things that were new to me in this story. Well written with a strong, authoritative voice, and a quick pace. Nothing to correct here--but I think you should try getting a cover put up :)

xBeccaX
The Forever Girl

fh wrote 579 days ago

THE PARTISAN
This is certainly worth a read and it is my favourite genre. your research is excellent and this is tense and certainly holds the attention of the reader.
Your descriptions build on the tension and left me reeling as I really felt I was there and part of the action. A great read and deserves a backing. Well done
Faith
The Assassins Village

Robert Craven wrote 579 days ago

Chris,

what can I say? meticulous in your research and methodical in your approach.have read the first three chapters & am backing it gladly. Would love to see this & GET LENIN side-by-side in a bookstore.

Rob

Molwanda wrote 581 days ago

I really enjoyed the little I read, for lack of proper time, I'll back it for that.

Joanna Stephen-Ward wrote 610 days ago

Hello Chris,

I love novels set during the war, and yours with it's slant. Your prose is tight and compelling. This should be doing better.
I suggest that you get an original cover to make it stand out from the crowd. Lots of books on here have generic covers and you might be missing out on reads becuse people think they've seen it before.

Am putting this on my shelf now. Good luck with it. Hope it rises in the ranks.

Joanna

Huseyin Angay wrote 622 days ago

Sympathetic treatment of a complex subject. I think it would become a very enjoyable book with a bit of spit and polish.

It may be useful to upload the text again as some of the formatting has gone awry. For instance, see the paragraph starting with 'He pulled up at the top of the next hill...' I suspect you have stray paragraph breaks in your original manuscript, which may not be visible if you formatted it by hand, rather than relying on the styles.
This gets particularly bad in Chapter 3 and onwards, with lines broken in the middle and so on. You need to let the word processor manage the text flow between lines, instead of doing it yourself. Tell it where the paragraphs end and let it do the rest.
A good tidy up is a drudge, but improves the readability enormously.

Some awkward turns of phrase.
For instance, '... the crumpled body of a soldier, his uniform still smoking, the one who had stepped on the mine.' The initial impression is that the uniform stepped on the mine. The reader's mind will quickly correct that, but it breaks the flow. You want want the reader to devour the lines in a story like this, not stop and reflect on sentence structure.

The scene with the soldiers hopping across the helmets through the mines should have captivated me more but I somehow felt a little detached. That may be partly because the action skips from one person to another, although Solov's at the centre. The switches throw the reader off a bit. The sad death of the despatch rider gets a bit lost because of this, too.

In the dialogue with Vatutin, I didn't get the impression that Solov had opened the letter or that it called him to Moscow. Could maybe make that more explicit from the beginning?

I like your treatment of the trains. That they always took S away from something or someone. Good potted history that doesn't hurt the pace at all.

Good job establishing Solov's credentials as a humane officer through all his conversations in Chapter 3.

Best of luck.
Huseyin
All Things Noble

Pat Black wrote 640 days ago

Stalingrad: some of the hardest military moments carried out by the hardest people. In your opening chapter you not only focus on the fear and immanence of death, but you bring out the black humour of the soldiers involved, too. Excellent set-up, fine storytelling. It would be easy to info-dump on people, but you keep things sharp and fresh with the dialogue, and the action isn't over-cooked.

Pat Black
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Nancy Kilgore wrote 641 days ago

Chris, Thank you so much for backing my novel Sea Level. I just took a peak at The Partisan and it's on my watchlist.
Nancy
(SEA LEVEL)

EltopiaAuthor wrote 647 days ago

This story should be shooting upward, I don't know why the arrow turned red but my sense of fairness says it's gotta go up and up, all the way to the editor's desk, so I am backing based on merit.

I do see a nit or two, things that I expect will be covered with another edit. Dialogue is mostly set off goog but I thought I notice a place or two. A few issues with formatting/spacing. But the story is really good. I enjoyed the sense of "being there" in WWII Europe. Well imagined (or experienced?).

I would have liked to have read a little more in the "about me" as to how the author came to have special knowledge of these places/events.

See you at the top.

F. Ellsworth Lockwood
"The Final Cruise"

C W Bigelow wrote 656 days ago

Chris - hooked right up with Paval - always amazed by the good soldier - just keeps on going until.... Well written, good atmosphere throughout the first chapter. Backed. CW (To Save the Sun)

Nursing Around wrote 659 days ago

i don't know enough to explain how, but you had me hooked from the first page. Well written, easy to read and I'm getting some great pictures in my head from the descriptions/words/phrases you're using. Great job.

Christian Piatt wrote 661 days ago

You writing demonstrates a firm grasp of the subject matter which too often is overlooked by authors trying to create a fictional world. Though I'm no expert in this genre, it seems you have a strong central character and plot trajectory.

Best of luck with this work!

Peace,
Christian Piatt
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livid wrote 664 days ago

YOu obviously know your material well because the historical pieces are brought to life on the page. Your writing has a quality to it that smacks of a thoroughly crafted piece of work.

backed

andrew skaife wrote 665 days ago

I am backing this book on the strength of the read which I found impressive enough to back. The problem is that while my Talent spotter ranking sank below one hundred I have been inundated with requests to read. If you require detailed comments please message me otherwise I was proud to back you and will watch with interest. Cheers for now. BACKED.

SVEN HANSON wrote 666 days ago

I find the opening a little vague - In my own head I was trying to place where the Soviet troops were and the German divisions were in proximity to Stalingrad itself. From what I understand the Soviets clung to the west bank of the Volga and despite suffering appalling casualties managed to launch a two pronged counter-attack in November 1942. This was Operation Uranus, and it outflanked the Germans and cut them off inside the city.Cut off from supplies and dying from starvation and with very little ammunition and the winter coming in, the German 6th army capitulated in February 1943. It was a striking victory and a turning point in the war it is estimated that more than 2,000,000 people lost their lives - just mind blowing really. I do like your down to earth style and likewise I consider it important to switch POV in order to get a grasp of the problems facing the various individuals. Naturally having only read a small portion of your work I wondered if you gave a perspective form the Germans POV? Well done - Jack (Soldier Blue)

name falied moderation wrote 667 days ago

Dear Chris
What a good book. I started reading this some time ago and just wanted to let you know, now finished. I have already commented and backed your book a while ago, but cannot see the backing anywhere. So i am taking the time to back it again because I believe your book is WORTH IT

BEST OF LUCK
Denise

SusieGulick wrote 667 days ago

Dear Chris, I got so excited when I saw that you had backed, "He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not." :) Thanks so very much. :) Since I have already backed your book, I will put your book on my watchlist. Could you please take a moment to back my completed unedited memoir version, "Tell Me True Love Stories?" I'd be ever so grateful. :) Thank you. :) Love, Susie :)
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When you back a book, it only improves the ranking of that book, not yours. However, the author whose book you are backing may decide to back your book also, in which case yes, your ranking would be improved."

philip john wrote 668 days ago

Hi Chris,

An interesting premise and a fascinating storyline.

Cheers Philip John

mvw888 wrote 670 days ago

Ah, your spare prose is so refreshing to me right now. There's something to be said for a simple style, that says much in the way of innuendo. Let the dialogue speak for itself; choose details that mean something, and leave it at that. Enjoyed this immensely; powerful writing.

---Mary
The Qualities of Wood

eurodan49 wrote 671 days ago

I started reading and so far I really like it. Good blend of narration vs dialogue. Ok, in chapter one I can spot one major problem: Pavel would never address an office as “sir” (gaspadin)…he would say comrade or tovarish and add the rank.
I like the tension you’re building enough co come back for more.

GK Stritch wrote 671 days ago

Dear Chris Robinson,

Excellent writing...great concise style.

The Partisan is backed.

GK Stritch
CBGB Was My High School

nsllee wrote 672 days ago

Hi Chris

Dateline something Stalingrad 1943 and I am there. And if the next line is Hell frozen over, you're going to have to prise me way. This is so cool, it should be published straight away so that I can take it on holiday with me in August. Super-backed.

Nicole (Chosen)

DMR wrote 674 days ago

Gripping from the start, you have an engaging way with words which makes the story unfold at the right pace.. love the minute details which add authenticity and leave the reader feeling that they are in good hands.. well done!
Backed and best wishes
Diane
Good Blood

Eveleen wrote 676 days ago

The pasrtisan
Backed
Lenny Harry
(Like a dot on the horizon)

RPK wrote 690 days ago

Very strong writing. Your dialogue in particular carries the story well. Backed, and sorry I'm late getting back to you. RPK, The Dunkirk Horror

dlmstudios wrote 698 days ago

Not my usual genre, but the tale entertained. Good description and dialogue. Beware of: use of it, there, tags, and ing words (run-on and passive sentences), and avoid, not avoiding, is stronger. Break up the narrative and dialogue in places.

ALPACAJUNCTION wrote 710 days ago

Very interesting! Very well written. I really enjoyed this. Back with absolute pleasure.

CraigD wrote 710 days ago

You've written about a time and place that I find fascinating. The writing is strong, and in particular the dialog sounds authentic to me. It seems you've invested a lot of research into your work here. I didn't see anything technically weak about the writing, either. Happy to back it.
Thanks for your comments and support of The Job. Your backing didn't show up on my news feed, so if you get a chance please slip it back on your shelf for a second, just to be sure. Thanks.
Craig

zrinka wrote 711 days ago

Your short synopsis intrugued me enough to keep on reading and so I read chap 1 and working my way through chap 2. It all reads smooth and clear. One thing I'd do is edit few sentences in your narrations so that they don't start with either HE or PAVEL few times in a row in the same paragraph. Other than that very well written and researched subject. Great idea for a nove. Backed!

mscynthia wrote 715 days ago

Hi Chris,

I read your first chapter, and I can already see that there will be plenty of exciting war scenes to your book.
Your prose is appropriate, because it reads like a re-counting of battles won and lost.
You set the stage for a wonderfully intricate plot, with Major Solov leading it.
Shelved.

Cynthia
Sharing Short Stories

teremoto wrote 716 days ago

A well told story covering a fresh angle of an infamous era. This is both informative and entertaining.

Antonius wrote 717 days ago

Lovely in its hard clean cool masculinity dare I say style of war writing. Recalled in me Williwaw in its hard pure cold attitude and no nonsense style, which i am a sucker for, as it seemed much like the paperbacks of my childhood and that sort of spare far removed from the great war , but not as to be so distant it is forgotten style of pure writing as if almost reportage. Like it much. A bit of LaCarre, and not so Byzantine Herman Woulk, or as cartoonist, who i never never much liked, as that is hard and clean, but less like reportage and more like the goddamn daily news.

johnburns wrote 719 days ago

The central idea is highly original and it is put across quickly and dramatically. The graphic opening scenes have a terrific starkness to them. Later, as we get to know more about Solov, there is too much emphasis on retelling the Soviet Union's history. I would have liked more of the trivia on the train, how the soldiers spoke, their experiences etc. Solov does not have the slightest trace of culture shock on the British destroyer, and later he notes only the very obvious. At the training camp there is a highly unlikely collection of names - Lawler, Decker, Walker, Carter, Miller and even more two-syllable names ending in er. A little variety needed there. You might also wish to edit passages where you have house and housed almost together; the same for point and pointless. Certainly, the writing could be trimmed of much of its Soviet back story. Readers do not need to have everything spelt out, you know. But ignoring these objections, the tale retains a great fluidity and there is a cleverly orchestrated tension building from the start. I read much more than I intended, which is a tribute to the writer's skill. John Burns - Queen Victoria and the Yellow Dog

delhui wrote 725 days ago

Dear Chris --

Don't know if I can add significantly to the kudos you have heretofore received, other than to say that I agree without reservation. Your writing is solid and evocative: I felt the cold of Stalingrad ("The trucks cut up the ice and snow near the river bank as they struggled to find the road") both in its temperature and in its soldiers as they step across the messenger's body. You fashion the world around Solov with convincing details; you clearly have experience in the region and/or superior research skills. As for Solov himself, I wanted to know more about him because he was obviously a survivor, and his ability to make it under the conditions in Russia in 1943 (and beyond, from your premise) intrigued me.

Quite pleased to return your support for The Long Black Veil! -- Delhui

delhui wrote 725 days ago

Dear Chris --

Don't know if I can add significantly to the kudos you have heretofore received, other than to say that I agree without reservation. Your writing is solid and evocative: I felt the cold of Stalingrad ("The trucks cut up the ice and snow near the river bank as they struggled to find the road") both in its temperature and in its soldiers as they step across the messenger's body. You fashion the world around Solov with convincing details; you clearly have experience in the region and/or superior research skills. As for Solov himself, I wanted to know more about him because he was obviously a survivor, and his ability to make it under the conditions in Russia in 1943 (and beyond, from your premise) intrigued me.

Quite pleased to return your support for The Long Black Veil! -- Delhui

Lara wrote 732 days ago

Very realistic. Love the history build up of Slovov in 3 and later introduction of Cambridge characters. The battle weariness and mixed emotions are well portrayed. Backed. You know your Russia so would be very grateful if you could look at my shashka chapters - so named, includding Prologue,
Many thanks
Rosalind
Good for Him

Elizabeth Wolfe wrote 732 days ago

Exciting, compelling pitch. Time for a unique book cover! BACKED -Elizabeth Wolfe (Memories of Glory)

stoatsnest wrote 732 days ago

I am enjoying this. The PC is a sympathetic character and the English class system is well portrayed. I'd be happy to buy this book. Backed.

Cherry G. wrote 739 days ago

I read Chapter 1 to Chapter 5.
This deals with a period of history I am very interested in.
You bring together the times of the last two Csars, the rapid industrialisation of Russia, their war with Japan, the Revolutions and the Civil War plus the conflict between Trotsky and Stalin, Stalin's purges and exile of his rivals, the Siberian camps and the terrible Battle of Stalingrad. Having just made that list, I'm amazed at how you mentioned it all as part of Solov's background or experience; fitting it smoothly into the story so that it felt perfectly natural and helped to fill out Solov's character.
It was interesting to see it from a Russian's point of view and his walk into the state rooms in Moscow was fascinating. I liked Solov's observation that the Soviet elite were still surrounded by portraits of royalty and bishops and his conclusion that Stalin might be hedging his bets.
He is given a mission to help train British commandos but in reality it is much more than a goodwill mission.. He is to become a "sleeper" and wait for his instructions. He has no idea what this will involve, but has no choice but to accept. There are a lot of unanswered questions here and it is interesting to see what Solov makes of the British Navy as he is taken by warship to Britain and then the Army, when he meets the men he will be working with.. He is a likeable MC: a very intelligent man who seems friendly and kindhearted (he remembered to send the cigarettes to his friend at the front) and he is clearly an able and brave soldier, but he will need all his skill to survive. Many of the British officers are suspicious of him because he is a communist, the Soviet contacts will be watching him like hawks, especially as they know he doesn't have the correct Stalinist views, and then he' ll be training and perhaps fighting alongside the British commandos.
All exciting stuff and the tension and danger promises to increase as Solov trains the men and the rivalry between Decker and Solov come to a head.
It's a well written and absorbing story. BACKED.
Cherry G.
The Girl from Ithaca

BJ Alexander wrote 739 days ago

The Partisan-

You had me until the POV shift near the end of ch1. At least use a space break to signify a change in POV or the reader will get confused. It's also a little unfair to ask the reader to invest in a character who doesn't live through the first chapter.

But the writing itself is very competent and it seems well-researched. Should do well here. -BJ

DDickson wrote 740 days ago

I think that you have a good story going on here. I do however feel that you should do something about the layout problems because they are distracting. I felt that the flow could be improved with some editing. The dialogue was good and I am sure that with some effort you will get there with this and I think that war stories are valable for two reasons. 1 they are always a good read and 2 they help to ensure that the horror is not forgotten. I wish you well with this work and will give you a boost on my shelf. - Cheers - Diane

E A M Harris wrote 745 days ago

An interesting idea, well developed. Backed.

I wish you luck with it.

Cheers
Elaine
(Long Lying Below)

Euphemus wrote 746 days ago

Thanks for backing Flawless Murder, I am returning the favour. Will have a read of your book later.\Regards
David

Diane60 wrote 746 days ago

Chris,
Am trying really hard with this. Have read 3 chapters. Alot of it reads too stilted and like a historical essay. It sound have more bounce and spirit especially given the topic. I also think the chapters are a little too long but that could have to do with the feeling of it dragging.
Like the blurb and the story from that really appeals to me.

Diane

meemers wrote 748 days ago

This is not my cup of tea, but it is very well written. I read the first few chapters, captivating to say the least.

shelved
Sue
Fate's Chastening

Marija F.Sullivan wrote 750 days ago

Delightfully vivid characters, dialogue is really convincing.
Backed with pleasure,
M
Weekend Chimney Sweep

J.Adams wrote 750 days ago

I don't normally read war stories, but this is very well written and I wish you all the best with it.
Judy Adams
The Existence Game