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rank 5469
word count 21956
date submitted 14.10.2009
date updated 23.10.2009
genres: Fantasy, Children's, Young Adult
classification: universal
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Blueberry Pie for Christmas

me williams

Join eight-year-old David and Farlo, the Elf left under the Christmas tree at David’s house, as they try to get Farlo home.

 

... David swallowed and decided to tell the truth. “I got distracted by the Elf under my bed.”

Mom stopped dead in her tracks. At the same time Dad choked and spewed coffee all over the kitchen table.

“Good one, Dad.” Dylan said. “Well David, at least you’ve got a vivid imagination.” ...

This is the story of Farlo, a Christmas Elf Third Class who is mistakenly left under the Christmas tree, and of eight-year-old David who discovers Farlo under his bed. Stranded because his Elf Locator Finder pin is broken, Farlo enlists David’s help to get back to the North Pole. David and Farlo develop plans to get Farlo home amidst Elfin magic, Santa’s communication technologies, and some boyish fun.

Twenty-four hours later Farlo is picked up by a member of the Galactic Retrieval and Elf Extraction Team. Several weeks later, David wakes to find a package from Farlo. And then the story provides one final surprise.

The book’s first critic was seven-year-old Robert Patterson, who woke his father up the morning after Christmas, book in hand, demanding, "Read the next chapter, Dad!"

 
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adventure, chapter book, children, christmas, early reader, elf, fantasy, fun, magic, santa claus

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Leigh Fallon wrote 937 days ago

Great name and lovely story, I could see this being a popular stocking filler. Backed. Well done and good luck.
Leigh Fallon
The Carrier of the Mark

Andrew W. wrote 941 days ago

Blueberry Pie for Christmas

Hi,

This is a Christmas Blockbuster screenplay isn't it? What a fun idea, taking many elements we recognize and giving them a fresh and revivifying twist. Farlo is a great comic creation and the writing delivers quickly and efficiently in a way that it would be lovely to read out loud. As I read I wondered about illustrations, I am sure that must be in the plan for the book if it is published. There is that ETesque, the children know something that the adults don't, about the beginning of this book, a delicious strangeness has arrived in the world and what children have expected all along (that the world was magical and strange) comes true. I loved this kind of story as a child and I know my two boys would love it too, a mix of magic, humour and mayhem rooted in warm-heartedness and great characterisation, both human and elf. Backing soon. If you have the time to look at my book you have no idea how helpful that would be.

Best wishes and good luck
Andrew W.
(Sanctuary's Loss)

RachelMay wrote 941 days ago

Two chapters in and this is a lot of fun to read. I got the same feeling when I read Indian in the Cupboard. This is excellent. I really have enjoyed reading it.

well done. Shelved.

Rachel May

Sandie Newman wrote 941 days ago

Loved being inside the mind of a child on Christmas Eve night, about to hear a story that has been told a hundred times before but is tradition. Reading about the mother's words and actions took me right back to my childhood as my mum didn't take any nonsence either, love the pitch and the writing is brilliant, Shelved immediately.

Sandie
The Crown of Crysaldor

lisawb wrote 946 days ago

Giving you a spin on my shelf as it is quite an enchanting read, both my children would enjoy this, both would want to take Cosmo home, not sure about Farlo yet.

Backed.

ww Lisa
A Fine Line

soutexmex wrote 946 days ago

The website is now acting up and I cannot read any book. I'll try to swing by later to comment what you have posted. Meanwhile, I am SHELVING this effort. If you get the chance when the website is working again, would love your comments on my book, but this is not a awap read agreement so it's NOT mandatory, NOT even your backing is required. Just read mine at your leisure and you DON'T even have to comment if you don't want to in the end. But you do now have my backing with a high TSR and that's what counts to get you moving up the food chain here. Good luck, mate. Cheers!

JC
The Obergemau File

Jason Rice wrote 948 days ago

I like this, thought I wouldn't, but that's life.

Ayrich wrote 948 days ago

As a oparent I can tell you that your subject matter and age are just fine. Thsi story is one with a spesific timeing and I think you will need to be diligent to get it into the right hands at the right time. I thibnk it will happen for you thugh this is a very nice story.

shewritesromance wrote 949 days ago

This is a sweet story. I'm not a good judge of young adult literature, but I think you've done a good job with your target audience.

Roe wrote 949 days ago

I love any stories to do with Christmas, and your premise is amusing. Good luck and happy to back

MickR wrote 950 days ago

M.
Cute story.
I did find my attention drifting during the Prologue.
But as I got into ch1 I stayed with the story.The banter between David and Farlo is well done.
Early in ch1 you use 'with that' in consecutive paras. Maybe find a different phrasing for one of then.
Alos in ch1, In todays climate of political correctness, you may want to remove the 'thats insulting' reference to dwarfs.
Otherwise I think children may like this, will give you a spin on my shelf.
Welcome to authonomy.
MickR - The Nightcrawler.

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