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rank 2030
word count 19740
date submitted 05.09.2008
date updated 28.08.2011
genres: Literary Fiction, Thriller, Travel,...
classification: universal
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Black Sky, White Sky

Ken Hyder

Deadly rivalry breaks out among apprentice shamans in contemporary Siberia when a Western outsider arrives. Shamans have just re-emerged after Soviet repression.

 

Chimit is a musician from Tuva, not far from the Mongolian border. Childhood friend Zoya, a female shaman, has taken him on as an apprentice. And he begins learning how to heal, access spiritual energy and direct it.

In Boston, graphic artist Ray Farmer strikes up an Internet friendship with an ex-Speznaz paratrooper near Lake Baikal, and decides to visit.

He visits Olkhon, the holy island in Lake Baikal, where he starts making connections with the spirit of the place.

A local artist suggests Ray travels to Tuva where he could ask the shamans about spirituality and art.

There, he becomes a reluctant apprentice, falls in love with Zoya, and gets into a rivalry with another jealous shaman.

Suddenly Ray is plunged into a fast moving turmoil involving trust, belief, betrayal, fear and courage before he completes his task.


• The book cuts across genres and sets out the landscape of the mind, culture and spirituality of Siberia allowing the reader to identify with and understand the action - which often takes place in the altered states of characters.

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Kenneth Edward Lim wrote 422 days ago

Ken,
Your prose is refreshingly forthright and unencumbered by florid descriptions some writers of vast vistas and exotic people lean towards. Economy of verbiage is the strength of your book, and certainly the splashes of local color in your dialogue don't hurt either. Thank you for wiritng this rare story both enlightening and entertaining.

Kenneth Edward Lim
The North Korean

A Knight wrote 748 days ago

Gorgeous. From the first sentence we are pulled into your rich, vivid imagery, and you paint your pictures with such style. The intense detail that stems from your research only enhances your work, and leaves us intently reading page after page.

Backed with pleasure.
Abi xxx

Tom Bye wrote 703 days ago

Ken
this is a very well written book .a lot of research went into it and produced a raw and down to earth read about the people of another country.
the type is quite large and black, have not seen this before on authonomy
the sex scene with Zola is very sensual , i think that's on chapter thirteen
the book will do well good luck
Tom 'From hugs to Kisses'

DMC wrote 1097 days ago

This is a great piece of work in which you convincingly transport the reader into the world of a shaman.

I like the quotes at your chapter beginnings.
You write in a way that Carlos Casteneda would have liked to, because you have a more grounded, believable approach. This feels real.
This work is very personal, yet epic – a small group in the vast landscape in which it is set.
And there’s also a gentleness to your prose, so I feel comfortable for you to lead me on…
Also, vivid descriptions and very well researched subject, brings way up in my estimation.

AND THEN…
you keep the reader on their toes by shifting the story across the globe. Very well done indeed.

Oh, and I love the shaman song in ch3!

I'm coming back for more.
Backed with my best wishes
David (Green Ore).

I think your syntax and grammar is a bit naive.

Unless you were aiming for a children's or teenager's voice in wriiting..

The bare sentence structure and lack of description, makes it seem like a children's story, or a factual book made simple for children. Or a simplified read of those learning English as a foreign language.

It's a bit patronising for an older reader, unless you were deliberately trying to make its simple?

sweet honey wrote 353 days ago

We are introduced into the world of 'shamans' through clothing items, ritual objects, personal ambitions and much more. What a good start!

writingbear wrote 365 days ago

Ken,

I backed your exceptional book today. If you could take a look at either of my two books, DIFFERENT DIRECTIONS or MY GENTLEMAN FRIEND, for you possible backing, your help will be appreciated. Good luck and happy writing.

Dwain-Thomas

Kenneth Edward Lim wrote 422 days ago

Ken,
Your prose is refreshingly forthright and unencumbered by florid descriptions some writers of vast vistas and exotic people lean towards. Economy of verbiage is the strength of your book, and certainly the splashes of local color in your dialogue don't hurt either. Thank you for wiritng this rare story both enlightening and entertaining.

Kenneth Edward Lim
The North Korean

writingbear wrote 427 days ago

Ken,

I was looking at the new entries on Authonomy and yours sounded good. I backed it! Good luck and happy writing.

Dwain-Thomas

DIFFERENT DIRECTIONS
MY GENTLEMAN FRIEND

Urania wrote 437 days ago

Lovely idea. But you need to pull in character, dialogue, action - your research and scene setting is great ,but I'm reading here a non-fiction sort of book and there's a lack of emotion - I'm only talking about the first pages, but those are the ones that count - I am very familiar with the shaman world, you need to make it a personal experience for the protagonist. But who is that exactly. All the best with this, Sarah

writingbear wrote 465 days ago

I backed your fine novel today. My, you are an ambitious person! If you can fine the time, I would appreciate it if you could check out either of my two novels, DIFFERENT DIRECTIONS or MY GENTLEMAN FRIEND, for a possible backing. Good luck and happy writing.

Dwain-Thomas

Mr. Nom de Plume wrote 483 days ago

The style of writing is unique, different so to speak. I like it for that reason and for the storyteller approach with sprinkles of dialogue. Backed. Chuck

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 543 days ago

I commented upon this book some time ago and I have come back to rate it under the new star-system. Patrick Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

SVEN HANSON wrote 566 days ago

I felt like Ray on the car journey at the beginning of the first chapter that is one of being tossed around and never quite sure what was going to happen next - being a western European I didn't understand some of the terminalogy, Taiga?? I was also baffled by the opening " ... then sudden belching but dramatic industrialisation." - that is not correct and in some cases sentences seem to run into each other - an example would be - " ... brown-white of the roads winter threatened." Then a typo "... a strange town build (built) largely by ..." I can only assume the "Fag-end of winter" means it's nearing the end? " ... and when the young boy was asked what he wanted to be he said, a bird. In my mind's eye I could see the rows of men loading double-barrelled shotguns..." Sven (Soldier Blue)

Mike Kavanagh wrote 570 days ago

Hi Ken,

Having never been to Siberia, your novel opens with a clear, poetic description of the landscape. I also admire the originality of your scene-setting - I've never heard the phrase 'the fag-end of winter' but it conveys the feeling well.

I noticed a typo - you mentioned a town 'build' by prisoners; I guess you meant 'built'. Sometimes you need someone pedantic like me to point them out!

I have only read the first section so far but will continue reading when I have some more time. In the meantime, I have backed your novel.

Kind regards,
MK

La Marmonie wrote 586 days ago

Ken,

Nice prose, descriptive and flows well. A story set against a different backdrop, but your well chosen words paint a vivid picture.

I will back this.

Please take some time to look at God of the Cocoa. I would like to know what you think.

Best wishes
Marilyn

Kristen Stone wrote 587 days ago

Black Sky, White Sky - Can't add anything to the comments you have already received. A wonderful book. Backed. Good luck.
Kristen Stone
Kianda Mala - The Monkey Man
Shattered Dreams

grantdavid wrote 591 days ago

A kind of masterpiece, Ken. Strange, alluring, the wild and mysterious made somehow real ,rich, and familiar, as to a wide-eyed traveller. My congratulations go with my backing.
David Grant
POMPEY CHIMES

Lynne Ellison wrote 595 days ago

An interesting depiction of a little-known Geographical region and spiritual tradition.

Lynne Ellison

The Green Bronze Mirror

philip john wrote 600 days ago

An intriguing premise. Read only selectively but clearly a thoughtful work, beautifully written. Backed.

Philip John

Lenore wrote 611 days ago

A joy to experience the words tripping softly over my lips. A world I have never known and feel honored to experience. Good luck. Backed with pleasure.

Lenore wrote 611 days ago

A joy to experience the words tripping softly over my lips. A world I have never known and feel honored to experience. Good luck. Backed with pleasure

Jim Heter wrote 623 days ago

Ken, Thank you for this story. I feel enriched by it. It is very reminiscent of Carlos Castaneda's books about Don Juan. But your fine, straightforward third-person prose makes it somehow feel less pretentious. Nicely done. Jim

philip john wrote 626 days ago

An interesting premise, with the various threads woven together very neatly. Well written, too.

Philip John

LonnieNonnie wrote 633 days ago

It reads as if the writer is very knowledgeable about the surrounds and the writing weaves a tapestry of a culture unknown to most of us. For my taste too narrative in tone, but to absorb all the info I guess it has to be slow. Curious mix of current with ancient, but it works. Shamans being bunged out of helicopters? That would make me read on if I had time. BFP

CarolinaAl wrote 635 days ago

This is an enthralling travelog thriller with interesting and well fleshed out characters. Lovely descriptions. Fresh dialogue. Compelling narrative. Your storyline is magical. Smooth writing. Backed.

Craig Ellis wrote 638 days ago

Hi Ken

Intersting pitch and I read the first chapter. As a a reader(Vi) I wish it had some dialogue. Not much is said between the three players in this wonderful crafted book.My spouse Craig Ellis has a book on this site and maybe you could look at his book and swap backings. Good luck with your book.
Vi

paperbat wrote 639 days ago

Ken. Just happened to see your book this morning, so read first chapter over breakfast. Enjoyed it. From my understanding, I assume there is a fair bit of real tribal tales underlying some of your book.
Loved the way you were able to set the scene / add descriptions to make the readers develop pictures as they read it. Backed with pleasure.

Any comments / backing of my childrens' book would be appreciated. Thanks. Jerry [paperbat]

richard thurston wrote 644 days ago

Superb writing and an easy read backed with pleasure.


Best wishes

Richard

Elijah Enyereibe Iwuji wrote 649 days ago

Ken,


Absolutely magnificent. You have the talent for pulling back the layers to real the core of the story. By taking us back into the world we would not have known. Your title grabs also, for the eyes convince the mind. Great enlightenment. The tale flows smoothly, with an allure to dig more. Great achievement. Take a re-read and capture minors draft jumps, after that you are made with this, goodluck.

scargirl wrote 669 days ago

great setting. freshly told.
j

memphisgirl wrote 669 days ago

This has great promise. Love the detail. I'm in the middle of this world right off the bat. Glad I found this one. A rarity. Still checking out your blog. Wasn't sure if this was your first upload. If so, welcome. If you get a chance and can check out Ashes By Now, I would covet your advice.

Memphisgirl
Ashes By Now

fortyplus wrote 683 days ago

Hi Ken, i read this sooooooo long ago and enjoyed it... Always good to expand ones literary taste. i enjoyed being transported into another world. Good luck with it!
Angi
40...already!!??

Andrew Foley Jones wrote 686 days ago

A truly beautiful prose. And love the font. Highly atmospheric. Shelved.

andrew skaife wrote 690 days ago

BACKED. It's getting late so I can't comment now. I backed you on a brief look and liked your style. If you need detailed return just message me and I will give a detailed critique. If you do message me I'll get back within a day or so.

Tom Bye wrote 703 days ago

Ken
this is a very well written book .a lot of research went into it and produced a raw and down to earth read about the people of another country.
the type is quite large and black, have not seen this before on authonomy
the sex scene with Zola is very sensual , i think that's on chapter thirteen
the book will do well good luck
Tom 'From hugs to Kisses'

Jayne Lind wrote 706 days ago

Fascinating story and thanks for the bold and large print! This should go far; talented writing and intriguing plot. Best of luck. Jayne

Esrevinu wrote 707 days ago

Ken, you have a talent for pulling back the layers to reveal the core of the story. As a whole, I found the book thoroughly suspenseful.
Job well done
Scott
The Esrevinu Chronicles/Secrets of the Elephant Rocks

Lara wrote 709 days ago

Well done, very interesting and unusual. Backed
Rosalind
Good for Him

tlst wrote 723 days ago

Quite an achievement - and you are a great storyteller who can keep the reader involved throughout. Backed. Tania, This Last Summer

Barry Wenlock wrote 727 days ago

Hi Ken, this is very well written. Backed with admiration, Barry
Little Krisna and the Bihar Boys

yasmin esack wrote 728 days ago

Absolutely magnificient. You take us into a world we would otherwise not know of. I never knew Mongolia had shamans and that they were part of the culture there. How amazing. I am a big fan of shammans. Your story enlightens and the political twists makes this a real page turner. Nice professional style and writing.

Gald to find this.
Backed for sure
The Lord of the Dawn

eloraine wrote 728 days ago

Backed with pleasure. E.Loraine Royal Blood Chronicles book one

Lara wrote 730 days ago

So good to go into another world which isn't too fantastic to believe in, and has depths which are thought provoking
Backed
Rosalind
Good for Him

Su Dan wrote 732 days ago

fascinating story, told well, and with skill...on my watchlist...
su dan...read...SEASONS...

karien wrote 734 days ago

Even though there is a lot of telling, little showing, and no dialogue, the first chapter captivated me totally.
I love the 'otherness' of the Siberian setting.
K.

Becca wrote 734 days ago

The subject matter doesn't interest me personally, but this is extremely well written and I believe will interest the intended target audience. You have a fresh and evocative way of saying things.

xBeccaX
The Forever Girl

James Shown wrote 737 days ago

Ken, If you care to swap a chapter read it would be appreciated. Have you on my WL.

James - INTO THE DELTA

stoatsnest wrote 739 days ago

Fascinating and well written. Backed.

alison woodward wrote 747 days ago

this is great, a very enjoyable read, easy to get in to, well done, backed

aliso ( who want to diet anyway? and legal lies)

A Knight wrote 748 days ago

Gorgeous. From the first sentence we are pulled into your rich, vivid imagery, and you paint your pictures with such style. The intense detail that stems from your research only enhances your work, and leaves us intently reading page after page.

Backed with pleasure.
Abi xxx

carlashmore wrote 748 days ago

Hi, Ken. I'm sure I backed your book a while ago, but not sure that I commented. Can I just say that this is dazzling stuff - accessible, lyrical and both complex yet simple. Does that make sense? You are treating us to a world very few know about yet do it in such a wonderful way that I genuinely have nothing to complain about. Brilliant.
Backed with pleasure.
Carl
The Time Hunters

Lara wrote 756 days ago

This is a careful book, a little over-formally written in places but e.g. Ch 13 flows more easily. The detail and settings are convincing. I've backed it and wish you well.

Rosalind
Good For Him

Clive Gilson wrote 762 days ago

Nicely judged and crafted. Opening few pages build a convincing entry and the story so far makes me want to read more, which I will endeavour to do as time on here allows.

Clive
Cincinnati Dancing Pig