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date submitted 23.11.2009
date updated 17.05.2012
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Annabella and Other Stories

Bill Carrigan

Annabella is a ghost, Annie a remarkable cat, Snell a mad scientist . . . Meet them and others on this varied palette of tales.

 

"Annabella." A playwright visits his little theater, long dark, where an explosion killed several performers. Beautiful Annabella, among them, was to become his love that fatal night. The actors materialize on the dim stage and play his play. Annabella reminds him that they have a date . . .

"Jani and the Pigeon Man." Jani, orphaned in Kosovo, finds shelter with an American couple in Nice. His parents' death left him remote and mute. Then a carrier pigeon, storm weary, rests on the couple's terrace, and its uniformed owner comes for it. Holding the bird gently, he tells Jani something that changes everything . . .

"Jekyll Generic." Miles Dawson, chemist, visits historic London houses to humor Paula, his fiancee. Finding himself in Henry Jekyll’s lab, he locates the formula for the transforming potion. He prepares some for limited trials. Paula first, then a friend accidentally drink it . . .


These and 40 other stories, including several prize winners, are entered here as chapters. Read them in order or at random. See also two of Bill’s novels, THE DOCTOR OF SUMMITVILLE and CALL HOME THE CHILD. Please comment.

 
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Annabella and Other Stories

(© 2009 by Bill Carrigan. All rights reserved.)

 

Contents

 

Chapter

      1  Annabella

      2  Annie

      3  B.D.

      4  The Book

      5  Born Again

      6  Capital Crimes

      7  Carlton

      8  Charlie Was Here

      9  Checking Out

    10  A Cry of Absence

    11  The Dark Corner

    12  Dedicating Daisy

    13  The Good Times

    14  The Grab

    15  Gurgle: A Campfire Tale

    16  How We Came to See Clearly (Essay)

    17  Jani and the Pigeon Man

    18  Jekyll Generic

    19  Lenz’s Way

    20  Liberating Laura-Jean

    21  Losing It

    22  The Lure

    23  A Machine to Save the World

    24  Miz Tuttle

    25  The Monkey in the Blue Pool: A Fable

    26  The Occupant

    27  Pillar of Truth

    28  A Place for Discord

    29  The Prisoner of Ozona

    30  Puppy Love

    31  Relativity

    32  A Roof Over Our Heads

    33  Rovers

    34  Rube’s Revenge

    35  Salesmanship

    36  Shell Game

    37  She Who Rode Standing

    38  Stiffed

    39  Teaching Old Dogmas New Tricks

    40  Wake

    41  Wench

    42  What Would It Take?

    43  Windmill Hill

 

 

Annabella

 

    Stepping from the cab into icy rain, I barely recognized the busy junction in Washington’s Chinatown or the dark Oberon, the theater I had managed five years before. The night it shut downthe night of the accidentits marquee billed my play The Immortals. Hundreds came to see Annabella, who had won their hearts in earlier productions, and the little theater seemed to sparkle with promise. Tonight it looked dingy, dated, abandoned. I doubted it could ever be resurrected. Yet Id returned from Paris expressly to give it a try.

    Air France’s mobile barmaids had fortified me for the long shuffle through customs and the longer ride to a midtown hotel. From there I hurried to the theater. Sobered by the rain, however, I hesitated to enter the ill-fated building. I needed a moment to face my searing memories.

    Under the marquee, I scanned the old posters of Annabella and other players. Vandals had cracked the cover glass and broken the light bulbs. The subway stop around the corner beckoned.

    In its day the Oberon presented a variety of plays with some success. I made a start as performer, playwright, and director. But the violent death of four actors in full view of an audience, plus the ensuing panic, doomed the theater and my hopes. I left the hospital weeks later a broken man.

    Drifting, I came to rest in Paris under the wing of a rich older woman, whose ready provision of alcohol and drugs helped me forget. Only the telegram from my uncle’s attorney could have drawn me back. 

    Steeling myself, I now entered a foreboding alley, where the stage door opened to a key still on my ring. The air inside smelled stale and cobwebs clung to my face. By a single light (“the ghost light”) that my superstitious uncle may have left on, I noted new surroundings. The explosion of gas in the furnace room that fatal night had called for extensive repairs, and I stepped onto a rebuilt stage where Id last seen a fiery pit. The nightmare faded as I recalled my delight in watching The Immortals come alive.     

    I took a central seat, intending to rethink my plans. Still in an overcoat, chilled in the unheated building, I strove to reach a decision. My uncle had bequeathed the Oberon solely to me. I was free to sell it, rent it, or operate it. Free, that is, to the extent of my limited funds, and doubtful that Washington’s smattering of playgoers could be lured back.

    Some time ago, my uncle put the place up for sale but received no acceptable offer. “Michael,” he wrote, “the Oberon has gone the way of Ford’s, but lacking a President’s assassination, it will never be a national shrine.”

    I shared his pessimism. Yet, the notion of doing a play (though certainly not the one marked by tragedy) fanned embers of inspiration.

    As I gazed at the stage, my thoughts of course turned to Annabella. We had fallen in love as I coached her for the lead. My love, now stronger than ever, magnified the ineffable loss, and I tried to dispel the painful if cherished images. Pointless to dwell on a loved one gone forever. Could I even summon the will to do a play without her? Sudden tears blurred my vision.

    It was then that I heard, or thought I heard, voicesfaint, indistinct, but somehow familiar. Actors speaking their lines, and echoes from the empty theater. A radio or television left on? No, they were lines from The Immortals, which, to my knowledge, was never recorded. Straining, I discerned figures seated on tall stools randomly spaced. They were my actors, just as Id placed them years ago.

    Poised to take front stage were talented mimics of Ingrid Bergman and Humphrey Bogart in the finale of Casablanca . . . Grace Kelly and Gary Cooper in High Noon . . . Vivien Leigh and Clark Gable in Gone With the Wind . . . My own voice, spoken at the wings, would interpose stanzas from W. E. Henley’s Ballade of Dead Actors:

 

Where are the passions they essayed,

    And where the tears they made to flow?

Where the wild humours they portrayed

    For laughing worlds to see and know?

    Othello’s wrath and Juliet’s woe?

Sir Peter’s whims and Timon’s gall?

    And Millamant and Romeo?           

Into the night go one and all . . .

 

    As the spectral images grew stronger, I distinguished Annabella’s features, which matched the character’s more through expression than make-up. On cue, she steps into the spotlight: Scarlett, indignant at Rhett’s contempt for her loveless marriages. Her beauty and vivacity bring the scene to new life. And I longed to embrace her as I did before Hell opened, when she promised to be mine.

    Surely the tableau was illusory. I closed my eyes, expecting to open them to an empty stage. The voices continued, and I sensed the entranced audience around me. When I looked again, the figures were still there, the spotlight on lovely Annabellaand the play goes on.

    Strangely, I find myself in the wings, and quote the second stanza:

 

Where are the braveries, fresh or frayed?

    The plumes, the armours—friend and foe?

The cloth of gold, the rare brocade,

    The mantles glittering to and fro?

    The pomp, the pride, the royal show?

The cries of youth and festival?

    The youth, the grace, the charm, the glow?

Into the night go one and all . . .

 

    I had featured Annabella in several of Vivien Leigh’s more memorable scenes, confident that shed grace any role of the versatile original. She shines with Robert Taylor’s look-alike in Waterloo Bridge and Marlon Brando’s in A Streetcar Named Desire. Other sketches fall between, serious or comical. Mae West and W. C. Fields in My Little Chickadee belie the melancholy ballad. Do great performers fixed on film ever really die? 

    The poet’s lines, by cruel irony, foreshadowed the fate of my own troupe. As I watched, the present forced its way, and I realized anew that my actors, as well as those they portrayed, were all dead.

    Still, I hear my cue to speak once more:

 

The curtain falls, the play is played:

    The Beggar packs beside the Beau;

The Monarch troops, and troops the Maid;

    The Thunder huddles with the Snow.

    Where are the revelers high and low?

The clashing swords? The lover’s call?

    The dancers gleaming row on row?

Into the night go one and all.

 

    The lights come up and the players take their bows. Annabella, demure but radiant, is still Vivien Leigh. I bow to her and then the audience. We get several curtain calls before the applause subsides.

#

    Backstage, I caught Annabella’s hand and drew her toward me. “You stole the show,” I said with love and gratitude.

    “Now I’m going to steal its writer and director,” she replied. A group of autograph seekers closed in. “Don’t forget,” she tossed, “we have a date.”

    At length she led me into her dressing room and stepped behind a screen. Annabella herself came forth, quite as alluring as the star shed portrayed. She donned a raincoat and we slipped out the stage door. She gave the cab driver her address.

    There were beads of rain on her lashes and shadows of raindrops on her face. Though the beauty I gazed upon and the form I held seemed real enough, I feared to ask pressing questions. Had Annabella somehow returned to the living, or had I, too, become a ghost? If I dwelt on this, would it all dissolve? Was there a key to these strange events, to the phantom presence of the players, to this enchanted reunion?

    We arrived at Annabella’s uptown apartment, my first time there. I was pleased to find the décor traditional, somewhat profuse, in keeping with its tenant’s Tuscan origin. She offered wine and cannabis, and I accepted both. Her face glowed softly in the smoke-filled candlelight. We listened to Ellington, and I heard subtle effects Id missed before. Annabella lay on a couch and I caressed and kissed her, though afraid of waking.

    “I think we’re both a little confused,” she said, “but it starts to make sense. My love affairs—which you’d read about, I’m sure—were brief, for real love always eluded me. Then we found each other, Michael, and I knew our love would be complete. But something, something dreadful, occurred to separate us. I don’t know how long I waited, for it was like a dream, and time has no measure in dreams. Now, though, my darling, we’re together and we’ll be as one at last."

    “Does that explain why you’re here tonight, in this world? Because you . . . left unfulfilled?”

    “It seems likely.”

    “Then, if we make love,” I said with alarm, “you might vanish, disappear.”

    She smiled. “We’ll have to see.”

    I was uneasy; I couldn’t bear to lose her again. But anxiety soon yielded to desire. Her eyes showed no fear, only yearning, as our clothing fell around us. The music suggested sounds of the city, evocative, haunting, as we embarked on a passionate journey into the unknown.

#

    When I woke the next morning, Annabella was no longer beside me. I searched, but she was gone. A trace of her scent?I couldn’t be sure. I felt disoriented, as in waking from a vivid dream, and the unfamiliar surroundings lent to my perplexity. The former décor, warm and personal, had given way to drab modern. And where were the candles? wine glasses?  records? I dressed while trying to get my bearings.

    I was startled when the front door opened and a middle-aged couple entered. Their reactions passed swiftly from shock to anger. When I said I had come there with the occupant, they claimed they’d had the apartment for five years. “I don’t see how he got in,” the woman groused. “You must have left the door unlocked.”

    Mute, I pushed past them and bolted.

    As for the Oberon, I entered it several times in the weeks to come and sat in darkness, hoping the phantom players would return. Hoping of course to find her. The stage remained empty. The silence became oppressive and I began to see things—but only things that weren’t there.

    Annabella, at last fulfilled, was at peace in another realm.

    I had no further interest in staging plays. Eventually I opened a movie house, which I manage for a modest living. I no longer drink but take a hit now and then to make this existence bearable. What is there to live for except my thoughts of her? But I don’t despair. I have an abiding faith that we have a future together.

    Sometimes I murmur to myself the last lines of the Ballade of Dead Actors:

 

    Prince, in one common overthrow

The Hero tumbles with the Thrall;

        As dust that drives, as straws that blow,

Into the night go one and all.

 

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PATRICK BARRETT wrote 770 days ago

Bill - these short stories are beautifully written and you certainly have a way of capturing the reader like a spider does a fly. The plots are perfectly laid out and the characters so life-like. You are certainly talented and your book made for a very enjoyable read. Backed with pleasure - congratulations on a great book - Paula - How mean is my Valley?

Jason Morte wrote 657 days ago

Very professionally done. Polished as well as anything on this site. I've read Annabella so far (it reminded me of Hemingway's early shorts) and plan to read more. I love short stories because the reader doesn't have to sit through hours and hours of reading in order to get to the end. In this day of short attention spans, you'd think that short stories would become popular again. Sadly, however, the short is almost a dead art. Aside from you, me, and a couple of others, nobody on this site seems to do short stories. I enjoy yours immensely and endorse them with pleasure. Nicely done.

andrew skaife wrote 653 days ago

A highly crafted piece of writing and the very definition of writing that is polished, sculpted and ready for publication.

BACKED

Sly80 wrote 869 days ago

Checked the other two stories you suggested, Bill.

21 Losing it: 'To spare her from a lifetime of hardship without him' I snorted with laughter there ... such irony. In fact, you manage to make the whole messy business funny given how useless McHenry is. The humour vanishes when O'Rourke appears. This is a man not to be messed with. But even he is tempted by wealth and beauty. Fate deals well with both men. (Some formatting problems, but that's authonomy for you.)

27 Pillar of Truth: This one just had me totally enthralled from the get-go. Clever plotting with another satisfying ending, though not without some cost to the MC. You describe the underworld and corruption exceedingly well.

Popping Annabella and Other Stories on my shelf for a while.

celticwriter wrote 217 days ago

Hi Bill, re backing this delightful work.

blessings!
jim

klouholmes wrote 421 days ago

Hi Bill, The stories I've read so far, Annabella and Born Again, are fantastic. The atmosphere is so well established in both and then the unexpected happens, putting another dimension on that atmosphere. I recommend Born Again, number 5, to anyone else who doesn't know what it's about - the conflict, debate, and revenge between a scientist who drowns rats in experiments and an animal activist. It's really well-written from the scientific point, I think, and an excellent read. I'm shelving because I'd like to read more of these, a few at a time. Katherine (The House in Windward Leaves, The Swan Bonnet)

kendra ann ziems wrote 426 days ago

i would have to say the same as some of the other comments; beautifully written, well crafted, polished. going on my bookshelf! if you have time would appreciate any input on my book that you could give.

Benjamin Dancer wrote 566 days ago

I'm taking notes as I read 32. I'll post them once I'm done so you can see my reaction to the story.

The no feet makes a great hook for this story.

The tension is great. I'm on the delivering of the baby to his wife--and the unanswered question about the feet holds suspense.

I hang on every word of this story.

When we get to the mother's possible ancestry--the opening suddenly clicks--her reluctance.

I loved the Colt 45.

Fine ending. Good story about decent people who mess their own lives up like every decent person does. The weight of it, its implications for the mother. The empathy. Really solid piece.

A couple more notes in your messages.

Pia wrote 568 days ago

Bill -

Annabella and Other Stories - Oh you are right, this collection of yours was neglegted. I loved Doctor of Summitville, one of the first books I read here. But with these short stories you do something different. They are jewels, brilliantly deep. Tonight I enjoyed no 35, Salesmanship, a random choice. I was in fits ... I thought of panties but decided not to press my luck ... subtle, erotic, ironic, and the twist at the end, such skill. Your wit is delightful. This goes on my WL - to be sitting soon on my shelf, for some time, because I now have an appetite to read the whole collection of stories ... Pia ;)

paperbat wrote 646 days ago

Wow. Some marvellous short stories. Where do you get your great ideas from? Annie is certainly a remarkable cat! Your on my shelf as I read more of the stories.
PAPERBAT

andrew skaife wrote 653 days ago

A highly crafted piece of writing and the very definition of writing that is polished, sculpted and ready for publication.

BACKED

Jason Morte wrote 657 days ago

Very professionally done. Polished as well as anything on this site. I've read Annabella so far (it reminded me of Hemingway's early shorts) and plan to read more. I love short stories because the reader doesn't have to sit through hours and hours of reading in order to get to the end. In this day of short attention spans, you'd think that short stories would become popular again. Sadly, however, the short is almost a dead art. Aside from you, me, and a couple of others, nobody on this site seems to do short stories. I enjoy yours immensely and endorse them with pleasure. Nicely done.

mvw888 wrote 692 days ago

Hello Bill,

I think that I have been to your page now three different times, to read three different books. We seem to travel the same routes here on authonomy...often I see your name when I'm visiting a book I like and of course, thrice now I have been circuited back here. And I always find good books on your shelf.

This is another example of expert prose. I wanted to applaud out loud your use of -- in the first paragraph. Time and again I caution against its use (perhaps a personal bias but I just can't see justification for it in most cases). Here, a perfect usage. Your tone here is so different from what I remember from your other work (Dr of Summitville?); more wistful, almost elegaic ("as I had done before Hell opened, when she promised to be mine"). And of course, poetic at times, perfectly matching the theme of theater in stanzas and perhaps lost love... Wonderful, humbling writing.

---Mary
The Qualities of Wood

Marija F.Sullivan wrote 692 days ago

I read Ch.17 as you suggested. Very warm story, beautifully told. The story of home coming pidgeon reflected the destiny of the poor child. Strong writing voice plus a great story, the winning combination.
Backed with very best wishes,
M
- Weekend Chimney Sweep
- Sarajevo Walls of Fate

Maria K. wrote 699 days ago

Bill this sounds right up my alley! Backing and putting on my book shelf. Reminds me of the not-scary-but-spooky-yet-lovely ghost stories of old, like Priestley's story of Jenny Villiers.

Rosemary Peel wrote 713 days ago

Read Annabella and Annie. Will, if I get time, which is unbelievably scare now that I've found authonomy, I will return to read more. Enjoyed both stories. A very nice read. Best of luck with the book.

Su Dan wrote 751 days ago

i love short stories and these do not disapoint. the first two i read are nicely compact and read well...omn my watchlist...
su dan...[read SEASONS]

Kidd1 wrote 763 days ago

Wonderfully compelling and imaginative stories that show a masterful grasp of the short story genre. Well written in a unique voice. Backed.

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 770 days ago

Bill - these short stories are beautifully written and you certainly have a way of capturing the reader like a spider does a fly. The plots are perfectly laid out and the characters so life-like. You are certainly talented and your book made for a very enjoyable read. Backed with pleasure - congratulations on a great book - Paula - How mean is my Valley?

SusieGulick wrote 789 days ago

Dear Bill, Well, I backed your other 2 books, but can't find where I backed this one. It is very excellently written, just like your other 2. I love that you use rhyme, dialogue, & short paragraphs for an easy read. Could you please take a moment to BACK my unedited version, "Tell Me True Love Stories." Thanks, Susie :)

Salude El Dia wrote 861 days ago

Let's see, I read #34, "Rube's Revenge", and #19, "Lenz's Way". Both very different, both well-written, with #19 something of a surprise, with seemingly in-depth knowledge of the state of "atomic" research in the 1950's. Pleasant surprise, displaying the type of versatility of subject that most authors only dream about. Backed.

Sly80 wrote 869 days ago

Checked the other two stories you suggested, Bill.

21 Losing it: 'To spare her from a lifetime of hardship without him' I snorted with laughter there ... such irony. In fact, you manage to make the whole messy business funny given how useless McHenry is. The humour vanishes when O'Rourke appears. This is a man not to be messed with. But even he is tempted by wealth and beauty. Fate deals well with both men. (Some formatting problems, but that's authonomy for you.)

27 Pillar of Truth: This one just had me totally enthralled from the get-go. Clever plotting with another satisfying ending, though not without some cost to the MC. You describe the underworld and corruption exceedingly well.

Popping Annabella and Other Stories on my shelf for a while.

Linda L. wrote 896 days ago

I am impressed with the three stories I read. The first, Annabella, is eerie. (I noticed the name of the narrator isn't until mid-story. Did you want it that way?) The Good Times's Robert is, in my opinion, not likeable but definitely interesting, and the witty dialogue kept the story moving. Rovers had two sympathetic characters and even though it takes place in the Great Depression, I think it say a lot about our times today. Excellent work. Backed.

DDickson wrote 896 days ago

Really smashing - I was enthralled and a little puzzled which is I am sure is the absolute reaction that you would look for with a ghost story. Very well written which makes it very easy to read. I congratulate you and pop you on my shelf. good luck with this - Diane (3 things that might have happened) Could I be a little forward and suggest that if you have time to look at my work you look at two or three - I think that they may appeal to you more than one and I have had a lot of very helpful feedback already for James. Thank you .

John Booth wrote 898 days ago

Hi Bill,
I read Annabella and Salesmanship. They were superb - shelved.

I can't help you with either as I thought they were brilliant.

John

Jupiter Echoes wrote 904 days ago

Short stories are so difficult to pull off, yet you do so beautifully. All have a life of their own... well, the three i read anyway. You bring characters to life and carry us along at a good pace.

BACKED

Clare Hill wrote 906 days ago

I read Salesmanship, Puppy Love and A Place For Discord. I agree with Andrew, the characterisation in these stories is superb, as is the dialogue. In Puppy Love, Terra is a puppy - you make me believe. The guy in Salesmanship was a bit sleazy but I still felt kind of sorry for him. In A Place For Discord you capture so many levels, from their developing relationship to the disagreements in wider society about the war. Discord has its place, indeed, as do these stories: on my shelf.
Nitpick: Discord (28) has some formatting issues, some of the text is grey.

Andrew W. wrote 909 days ago

Annabella and Other Stories

Hi Bill,

These are very different from each other, I have read three now and what impresses me is the characterisation. The dialogue is well handled, these people speak in a way that is not only natural but adds a dimensionality to their personality as much by what is not said as what is. Your also have a gentle and considered way of putting us in this place, nothing showy or pretentious, but lines like the fireflies couldn't quite wait for sunset conveys much about the air temperature, the light levels and the scene generally. Accomplished and enjoyable writing, Stephen King once described a short story as a quick kiss in the dark from a stranger, I think that's what you've given us here, a surprising and pleasant experience that leaves us thinking about it long after it is over. Best wishes and good luck with these.

Andrew W
(Sanctuary's Loss)

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