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word count 29138
date submitted 14.01.2010
date updated 09.06.2010
genres: Fiction, Thriller
classification: moderate
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Future's End

John Wickey

Money makes the world go round. The day it failed … Well, that was the day the future ended. It was the day civilization crumbled.

 

The whole system collapsed. No credit cards, no checks, not even cash worked. One day, it was all just worthless. Without money, the world stopped and the anarchy began.

A few saw it coming, but no one imagined it would be so bad: starvation, war, barbarism. We should have. The writing was on the wall, tensions were high. Economists, professors, analysts all said trouble was ahead. One even said we faced a modern “Fall of Rome”. But we didn’t listen. We just went on spending like there was no tomorrow. Guess what? There really was no tomorrow.

Only one man saw the full implications, laid plans and built a refuge. Jon Thomson was his name. He’s a legend now, because he didn’t just try to save himself. He tried to save everything.

This is the story of what happened, of what engulfed our world. It’s also the story of what will happen again when people get as arrogant and self-centered as they were.

It’s inevitable, like an avalanche that builds up over time. Once the snow starts to slide, nothing can stop it. Unless we learn the lesson, it’s going to happen to us.


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Preface

 

    The day dawned unremarkably.  There was nothing different about its sunrise.  The weather was ordinary.  There were no hurricanes or heat waves, no earthquakes or volcanoes, no plagues, no assassinations, no wars.  The casual observer might have assumed it was actually abnormal only in that perfection of normality, but he would have been mistaken.  For though all days contain some small seed of disaster, most, the normal ones, never see the seed germinate.

This one, January 29, 2015 saw its seed not only germinate, but blossom and bloom like few others ever had.  No, this was no ordinary day.  History would recall this day, if in fact civilization ever regained the strength to write histories again.  History would recall this as the day the money failed.

 

Chapter 1

 

Kiev, Ukraine

 

    Bright sunlight streamed in through the kitchen window as Natasha Ubinov wolfed down a protein bar and called it breakfast.  She was running late, as usual.  She could never seem to be the early riser her mother was.  “Times change, Mom!” she shouted at no one in particular, as she rushed out the door and on to her day.     

First things first, she needed a few groceries, so she needed an ATM.   Just like any other significant city in the industrialized world, Kiev, as the capitol of the Ukraine, held its fair share of that symbol of financial freedom, the Automated Teller Machine.  Natasha spotted her favorite money machine and pulled up.  A quick touch of the keys and…out popped her debit card.  Something wasn’t right.  After feeding in the card again and actually looking at the screen this time, Natasha read the message, “System Maintenance - Please try again later.”  She retrieved her card, mumbled a quick curse and drove off.

    The bank was a little out of the way, one street over, and would add an additional ten minutes.  “Sorry Mrs. Karkov, your housekeeper will be a little late today,” she muttered to herself.  She did that a lot, mutter to herself.  Too much stress, she thought.  The bank parking lot held only a few cars, so Natasha congratulated herself on some luck.  At least it shouldn’t take long. 

    As she approached the door, two men walking toward the parking lot called out to her, “Don’t bother!  It’s closed.”

    “Closed?”  It can’t be.  “It’s Thursday,” Natasha responded.

    “See for yourself.”

    The door was locked, with a hand printed sign taped to the glass: “Closed until further notice.”  What was that supposed to mean?  Natasha wasn’t much of a current events or news junkie, music was her thing, but certainly she would have heard if they had made some new holiday.  And it said “until further notice.”  That, she simply couldn’t puzzle out.  She thought she still probably had some room left on her Visa, so she headed to the grocery anyway.  She would just have to skimp a little.

    The parking lot of the grocery was full as usual, but she was lucky and snagged a spot up close as it opened.  As she walked in, some guy was shouting at a cashier.  She was in too much of a hurry to really listen, but she felt sorry for the poor checkout girl as she headed for the produce aisle.  Another angry shout from another aisle caught her attention.  They must be out of something, she thought to herself, oh well.  Natasha pulled out Mrs. Karkov’s list and made her way through the store.  Finally done, she wheeled her way to the checkout and started to unload.

    “Do you have cash?”  The checkout girl looked exhausted.  Apparently Natasha wasn’t the only one having a hard day.

    “No, it’ll be a credit card.” Natasha said, whipping out her plastic.

    “Machines are down.  We can’t take credit or debit cards.  Only cash.”

    “Oh… well, I think I’ve got my check book here somewhere,” Natasha said as she started to rummage through her purse.

    “Um… the manager said no checks today either.  Something about the banks being closed or something.  We can only take cash.”

    “But I have to get these groceries for my job.  I’ve got to have them.”

    “Hey, I’m sorry.  Got to be cash.”

    Natasha walked out, noticing well over half the people headed out were as empty handed as herself.  They better get this fixed soon, she thought.  Mrs. Karkov isn’t going to like going hungry tonight.

 

*****

 

    As evening set in in earnest, Yuri Galasnopovic stood staring out of his thirtieth floor balcony at the city of Kiev spread out before him.  The lights of Ukraine’s capitol filling his vision like a blinking sea, each pinpoint seemed to be an exquisite opportunity.   And every one of them are about to be snuffed out, he thought to himself.  Yuri brought a glass of vodka to his lips and washed away the dark thought.  “At least we still do that right,” he said out loud as he placed the empty glass on the balcony rail.

    There was a quiet knock on the door and a middle aged man entered the room.  Yuri turned and greeted him, “Alex.”  He sounded tired.

    “Yuri, you look a mess.”  From anyone else, the comment would have carried serious risk, but Alex and Yuri went too far back. 

    Yuri peered down at himself, taking in a badly creased jacket with a few stains thrown in for good measure.  When had he shaved last?  Yuri couldn’t remember.  How had it come to this?  Yuri Galasnopovic, graduated top of his class in Kiev University, had risen to CEO of the largest commercial bank in the Ukraine and then on to Secretary of the Treasury of the nation he treasured.  He may have been forty-four years old and a little balding, but until six months ago he felt himself at his peak of opportunity.  Now it was gone, all gone.  “Did they finish the report?”

    “Yes, I have it here.”  Alex stepped to the table and dropped a folder on it.  “But it’s every bit as bad as we thought, maybe a little worse.  The run started yesterday in Europe.  It began with National then spread to the others.  Every Ukrainian-based bank is insolvent and all foreign-based banks have shut down their Ukrainian operations, because the minute they open a branch, the run starts.  All foreign counterparties have cut off all dealings. Assets were pulled by every major player as fast as they could before we shut the system down.  The bond market has taken notice and we have no access to borrowing of any kind.”

    “We can‘t keep even one of them solvent?” Yuri already knew the answer, but couldn’t help but ask.

    “They’re all so interconnected.  And now it’s become obvious that the government doesn’t even have the ability to back the deposits.”

    “What about the IMF?  Surely they know the consequences of us going under.”  There was a hint of hopefulness to Yuri’s voice, but not much.

    “Yes they do,” Alex responded, “but after the panic in 2008 they depleted much of their resources.  They haven’t had time or the ability to build them back up.  They have refused all our appeals.  They know what could happen, but frankly I think they’re saving their resources to try to pick up the pieces afterward.”

    “What pieces will be left?”  Yuri stared into space, then turned back to Alex.  “And what of the currency?”

    “The hryvnia has collapsed.  Some markets don‘t even have a bid.  It‘s worth nothing.  Even in country, it‘s worthless.  I needed some petrol on the way over; it was eighty hryvnia a liter.  That’s a month’s salary to fill a tank.”

    Yuri turned back toward the balcony and the lights beyond.  “Look at them all Alex.  They will never make it through the winter.  It’s all gone, Alex, all gone.”

    “But Yuri what’s to be done?  We can’t just stand here and let it happen.”

    Yuri remained silent a long time.  Alex was almost ready to repeat himself; he thought maybe he hadn’t been heard.  As if with a heavy burden, Yuri seemed to escape the depth of his thoughts.  He spoke slowly, deliberately. “What could we do?  No, there is nothing to be done.  People have lost faith in our economy, in our banks, in our businesses.  It’s clear they can’t handle the burdens they built up for themselves.  But we have been there before.  That’s not the real problem.  What is really the problem is we, the government, can’t save them this time.  We’re in the same position.  No one believes we can survive the debt we’ve built.  Would you loan us money?  I wouldn’t.  And the lack of faith runs so deep it won‘t even work to print the money.  After all, what is the money worth?  It’s all based on faith, and there is none of that left.

    “No Alex, you shouldn’t just stand here.  Run.  Get that sweet little Shasha of yours, and run.  Find somewhere far from anywhere, more importantly from anyone, and hide.”

    “But Yuri, what about you?  Surely it can’t be that bad?”

    “If it were just us, it wouldn’t be, but it’s not just us.  We’re just the beginning.  This is going to cascade until it engulfs everyone.  It will be worse than we can imagine and there is nothing we can do to stop it.  Just go Alex.  Don’t worry about me.… I am a captain and this is my ship.  Now go, before what cash you have won’t buy you the gas to get away.  That won’t be long, so hurry.”

    As they spoke, the Russian natural gas pipelines were shut off.   A day later riots started.  The looting followed, not far behind.  It would be a hard and cold winter for the people of the Ukraine.

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Mike LaRiviere wrote 733 days ago

John,

Let me say that I have to congratulate you on an exceptional bit of research into a myriad of scenarios, requiring exacting knowledge of a gazillion technically challenging plots, plans, and persons. This is among the best stories I have read, and from what I have determined, has no appreciable weaknesses, unless of course you are a disgruntled Republican blaming the Democrats for the fall of the world economy beginning with the current stimulus package.

The linguistics are without flaw, the word choices are totally appropriate, the development of characters meets with satisfaction every scenario, and the overall feeling I came away with was bleakness, unrest, sadness, and a strong desire to stock up on peanut butter. The government even put a stop to Jon’s humanitarian best efforts, and made him a criminal.

My time was well spent in reading your work, and I have been educated in many things. You jumped continents, governments, institutions, and economies with finesse and credibility. I don’t know if I have experienced so much power, dynamics, and sheer enjoyment in any other work thus far.

You have my strong backing and I wish you all the best in becomingpublished.

PawPaw Mike LaRiviere
Eden’s Door

I finished the first two chapters of Future’s End, with the feeling that I have just entered the realm of an excellent story teller with the knack of weaving the ultimate disaster scenario into everyday lives and everyday characters, be they the man on the street, the woman at the market, a banker, a Jihadist, or drug smuggler. Talk about many fronts? You grabbed me, pulled me in, scrambled my emotions, dumped my happy emoticons in the toilet, and invited me along for a rollercoaster ride through what might very well become reality. Thank you so much for that.

Chapter three threw me for a minute until I realized that the time frame was the same as Chapter one, and we were now in good old government Washington, D.C that was oblivious to the reality of what was about to come down. By the way, no gutter language, no unnecessary expletives, no graphic sex or gore, and this is after three chapters. I like it a lot.

Chapter four surprised me as you jumped into yet another difficult scene of action –the stock market with all its nuances and nerve centers. Nicely done and obviously to me, very well researched. Shades of October 29, 1929, only with faster communications and instantaneous reporting and analyses bring back bleak memories (No I’m not old enough to have been there.).

The opening scene of Chapter five hit me hard for some reason. When this is fleshed out for real, children (no matter how old) will be turning to their parents for help and answers, and there won’t be any. I won’t be able to fix it for my kids. Seeds of bartering have been planted. Mother and daughter bonding in a plight to survive, of which they do not even know the depth and severity of their challenge as yet. Perhaps, ignorance is bliss.

Chapter six was a welcome bit of action. Piracy and drug running are yet other realms you have chosen to invade with your storyline and adventurous spirit that just happens to be well matched with your highly developed ability to paint believable word pictures with exciting characters to boot. Well placed, and nicely done.

Chapter seven, Yuri in Kiev, a anarchy is beginning and the rioting starts, and hopelessness has raised its ugly head as the realization of what is happening begins to sour the contents of the bellies of the formerly uber rich, and fan the flames of desperation in the minds of the have-nots.

Chapter eight was masterfully placed, as it summed up the causes, reality, projections, and depth of the issues. I felt that it was just a bit too clean and risk free until the limo showed up with the earpiece bearing goons in cheap suits.

Chapter nine took me back to the Jihad and the swarthy man. Haven’t heard that word used in a long time. Nice choice. Ah, the best laid plans of mice and Jihadists –a deep cover agent. Thought for a minute all was lost.
Chapter ten brings to light bank and government insolvency. I wonder how many people think about that sort of things. Nice bit of education here. Countries collapsing like so many dominoes; now do you believe? Marshall Law, big deal! Try to boss the rioting people around and see what it gets you.

Chapter 12 introduces the rest of the book and really brings to light Jon’s plans, problems, and pitfalls as his financial dealings become of interest to the government. Jon must have had a ton of money to do what he did. Now girly girl has her idealism shattered again as she sees her would be savior brought before a tribunal.

Chapter 13-14 paint a bleak picture of the effects of the economic crisis and personalize it setting the stage for even more interesting scenarios.

Chapter 15 just about says it all, and I’m glad it did. Jon, the government, the gal, the plan, and the problems are all in the open and can be exploited by a really great writer.

Chapter 16 has a wonderful line, Out with the old and in with the new.

Chapter 17, society at its worst, someone still is good, a couple bonds over peanut butter.

Chapters 18-19, really builds in tension, as Jon’s plan seems hopeless and the Jihadists plan seems to begin to become a reality with a nuke somewhere in DC.

Chapter 20 has the government calling all the shots and has located the nuke. All is calm, all is bright. Uh uh, I don’t believe it for a second.

OK, I'm done
Well Done!

delhui wrote 737 days ago

Dear John --

Future's End has the best element of a thriller: this could not just happen, but it's happening could actually affect ME. As a student of the great economic disasters throughout US history, I found your premise acutely believable; the conclusions you extrapolate from the research you've (clearly) done ring with chilling authenticity. As well, the quality of your writing kept me reading; you do not sacrifice its quality to the gathering momentum, and that's hard to do.

Happy to back such a chilling glimpse at our possible futures. -- Delhui, The Long Black Veil

Michael Stone wrote 787 days ago

I read nine chapters. It was tempting to read more, but I didn't want to get engrossed. Your pace and atmosphere are suspenseful and informative. Chapter one shows the effect, and then relates the cause. Everything the reader needs to know to understand what's going on and how important it all is.

Then you introduce intrigue. International terrorism, piracy and politics. It gives the story the edge that changes it from an everyday economic crisis to a life and death situation. It establishes gravity.

The political and economic angles that follow are quite intellectual and yet the dialogue isn't hard to follow or understand. At first I thought it might cause some eyes to glaze over, those with limited patience and minimal economic comprehension, but getting through a few dense paragraphs are rewarding in that it explains the how and why this is all happening. It gives the crisis believability through historical reference and comparison to current events. Eyebrows raise slightly as eyes focus and a glimmer of understanding begins to dawn. With the careful application of explanation, consequence and proposed solutions (even those that only cut losses), credibility is gained. With that, the story goes from a tale to a potential prediction of a real world event, and that not only involves the reader more deeply, it hooks them to read more as a form of preparation for something they might one day go through themselves. Brilliant!

Chapter seven shows the remorse, guilt, fear, as the reality of the situation begins to set in (in Ukraine), as it goes from theory to actuality.

"consequences make for better choices" - excellent line, excellent philosophy. Jon's interview paints a different picture of the ultimate capitalist, from uncaring hoarder to learned leader. We should criticize less, and pay more attention to their wisdom.

The relationship between Ian and Jon is the perfect depiction of the argument between cause and effect of the situation they're in. Intellect vs emotion. Conservatism vs decadence. Reaction vs planning. And of course there's a girl involved. She brings Jon's long running intellectual drive to an abrupt halt and causes his emotions to flare up, something already stirred up by the obvious manifestation of his economic projections. That creates a taut tension between him and Ian which sets up the stage for the inevitable battle between the two chess masters. While other characters endure, concede, fight, in their own corners of their world, Ian and Jon play for bigger stakes on a grander scale.

That's as far as I got. The grammar, spelling, punctuation and syntax are, as far as I can tell, flawless. (chapter two, I think paragraph 15, last line: "Tis was that score", probably you meant "This was that score". That's the only mistake I found, a simple typo.)

The style is exciting and should appeal to educated readers as well as those who just enjoy a good adventure. Backed and I wish you great luck with this.

John OBrien wrote 791 days ago

Any book that manages to make economics interesting is worthy of praise, and this book certainly manages that. The concept of the cycles of civilisations is a fascinating one, and I just get the feeling this book only gets better as the reader is sucked deeper in. The only thing here to criticise is is that some of the apostrophes and inverted commas are facing the wrong way, but that's easily remedied and in no way detracts from a compelling story which more that merits a backing.
John O'Brien - Other Face

Mark Eyre wrote 833 days ago

John,
I think this is a brilliant book on a subject that is too close to home. You build on events, economic and terrorist, and take it one stage further, to build an epic story. I'm looking forward to reading more. The cycle of money and debt, the rise and fall of civilisations, and the realisation that civilisation itself is paper thin, come through in your story - and all are in fact true. This could happen one day. Your characters are believable, and this is one of the best books I've seen on here. I hope you get published - not only is it a good read, but it acts as a warning on what could happen. A warning the western world could do with hearing. Backed.
Mark (Stand up and live)
PS: I'm not sure if 'Jon Thomas' is a deliberate name for your financial character, but if it is, I like your humour!

flnaturelover wrote 67 days ago

Timely. Anyone who tries to keep up with today's economics is aware of how close the world is to your scenario. Your writing flows and I love the pace. Great hook. This is one book I'm coming back to finish. Congratulations on a great job! I've got to move this from watch list to my book shelf. I have to make room and that's always difficult. Give me a few days...definitely backed.

jsault2003 wrote 193 days ago

I thought the hook was absolutely fabulous, that being, a country whose currency is now worthless provides the spark for a cascade effect that would be felt over the entire world. I think it will be very effective in drawing the reader into the story, and you accomplished that without an action sequence that is so often necessary with the thriller genre. Good job.

You did a marvelous job of building suspense all the way through Chapter 7, which is where I stopped.

Your prose has a very steady flow to it, making each concept you place before the reader easy to grasp.

I have some concerns:

I would eliminate “As evening set in in earnest.

Secretary of the Treasury of the nation he treasured. Sounds awkward.

“Look at them all Alex…. Commas separate the name spoken in dialogue from the rest of the sentence.

…but despite the apparent impossibility, the lack of light (,) and the bucking ship (;)
The pilot settled the small craft on the deck with only the slightest jarring (jar?).

I think this should be AK47s, pretty much the same way the word “its” is used.

Rahim had always said……ties to organized crime (Chap. 2). Awkward sentence structure. Bad flow.

What was this “package”? Question mark should be inside the quotation marks.

When Rahim ordered the crated (crate) opened,…

There is no structural editing needed, but I do see a need for some line editing.

…taken below decks (deck)

Chapter 3 is too much like a lecture. I will agree that the themes expressed are necessary for the advancement of the storyline, but I suggest finding another way to convey so much economic information. Spread it out some.

You have also classified this as a thriller. I believe readers of that genre, while able to follow your cerebral line of thinking, crave some action. You would be advised to bring in more action before Chapter 4.

I decided to place your writing on my shelf before I finished Chapter 7. Except for some punctuation concerns, the lecture concern about Chapter 3, and some (but very few) sentence structure concerns, you have a great product. This book is timely as it addresses issues that need to be considered on a world-wide scale.

Since this book is already available on Amazon, I don’t know how you’re going to address the editing issues, but I definitely see a need to engage the services of a line editor. Even the greatest storyline the world has ever seen would be passed over by literary agents or a publisher due to the errors a manuscript may have at the beginning of a work. They assume that if there are errors in the first few paragraphs or chapters, that the entire work has the same flaws, therefore they would normally reject the manuscript.

Great story. Great writing. Timely issues. Well executed, but still needs some editing.
I hope you have the time to read mine and that you find some constructive criticisms that I can consider. I am backing this book based solely on merit, no politics. Hope you will treat mine the same if you chose to read it.

Jsault2003, author of Battle against the Beast
http://www.authonomy.com/books/38506/battle-against-the-beast/read-book/#chapter

The Radical Professor wrote 194 days ago

Dear John

Your book sat on my bookshelf for over a year. I just never had time to get to it to a couple of days ago. I have to admit I enjoyed it. I like the chapters because they are short and straight to the point. The economic explanations (and some of the similes and metaphors) are interesting too.

I gave your book five stars out of six.

Ken Szulczyk

The Radical Professor wrote 194 days ago

Dear John

Your book sat on my bookshelf for over a year. I just never had time to get to it to a couple of days ago. I have to admit I enjoyed it. I like the chapters because they are short and straight to the point. The economic explanations (and some of the similes and metaphors) are interesting too.

I gave your book five stars out of six.

Ken Szulczyk

firmlywicked wrote 369 days ago

John,

"Future's end" is engrossing, suspensful and an all together exciting ride. This is edgy and feels real. I would buy this. I love that you have multiple characters in first person. This is a book you finish, not one you brows. Love This!

EMDelaney wrote 446 days ago

Greetings John,

I want to commend you on your creativity first of all. It isn't often when one can take a subject such as you have, paint the walls with it and reveal a picture of the possibilities without being too "way out there" fantastical. Very well done. I myself have written a story that resembles this "type" of writing phiosophy with THE WRITE IN. O only mention that here because it demonstrates that i do respect highly the concept of "what if" fiction. Thoughtful and provocative stories that use character-driven plots to be suggestive as to what the world (or a country) would be like if we don't / do change our way of thinking.

Yes, this is a fictional story. A good one, too. It has all the elements that make good movies, which is what I personally think will happen to it. Not because it is so much better written than most, but, because of the subject matter and that it is written well. Characters are strong, dialogud is good. Scene shifting works in this story. It uses a unique way of supplying backstory without having to complicate dialogue with burden. Very crafty use of words makes this flow well and I for one found myself engulfed quickly.

I commend you again on your worthy attempt to stay realistic. The way you introduce the effect on each area / group / culture in this story is amazing. You did your homework on other socities / cultures / economy so as to be as strong in this regard as you could.

I don't feel the need to crit anything here. An editor will be all that is required. This is a polished rough. Very impressive. A few missing commas and punctuation issues here and there but like I said...essentially nothing.

This is 6 star work for idea alone. Ironically, this is one of those examples where a mediocre story would have been all that was necessary to enhance a fantastic premise. Good for you that you wrote a good story to compliment that idea. It's clear the work was not hurried, plotted carefully and transposed to paper well, despite what must have been a constant level of anticipation to move forward.

Good job!

Bruna Iotti wrote 505 days ago

If this really happens, then what the people could do is to form a society without money. Based on trust and collaboration, similar to a society of ants, but without a queen or one single powerful figure. A life where everyone is equal and work to survive. Everyone will always have their basic needs met, food and shelter guaranteed to everyone. We need to spread the word now and convince people that this is possible.
Bruna

Bruna Iotti wrote 506 days ago

I carried on reading the story. Do you really believe this is going to happen so soon? What provisions have you made to survive this Dark Age?

My instincts tell me that this is more than fiction, it could be an announcement to what is coming.

Hope to hear from you. Bruna

Bruna Iotti wrote 506 days ago

Hi John,

Well done on your chosen story. I am really hooked to your story, because I feel that something is going to happen in this decade, something that will change all of ours lives until our death. I have been reading stories about the world without money and it sounds lovely. However, your book brings another side to the coin which in my naive mind I hadn't thought about.

In chapter 3, you may want to change the phrase that talks about this new healthcare system, because you are in 2015. Did Obama not put this forward before then?

All the best.

Bruna Iotti Tapper

Kaimaparamban wrote 509 days ago

Your creation is reflecting anxiety and agony of a writer about future of the world. Your work is also an indication to a world which lost control. In your novel you reveal what anarchism is. Your novel is deserving all kinds of approval from all over the world.

Joy J. Kaimaparamban
The Wildfire

flnaturelover wrote 568 days ago

Hi John. I'm stopping on page 4. I'm a victim of county politics and then the economic crisis. Reading about any future collapses, which I'm quite certain will happen, is not emotionally healthy for me. Having said that, this story is well written. I'll have a space open on a bookshelf tomorrow and will back you. I need to keep this critique short as I'm going out to buy a large quantity of seeds and munitions.
Claire THE INSIDERS mg/ya p.s. appreciate you giving a look at my book. thanks.

CG Fewston wrote 577 days ago

You are almost there - don't give up now.

Orlando Furioso wrote 581 days ago

I like the prologue. I seem to recall the day Lehman Bros went belly up it was just such a day. Since then we have had the sov debt crisis - the Baltics, Iceland, Ireland, Greece, Spain, Portugal. And now we have the curency war with SAfrica's cbanker talking of currency war leading to trade war ... and 2015 will be 100 years on from ... and 200 years on from ... and ... We have managed to keep most of the plates spinning so for, but when you think about it, what actually is money? BACKED because I like the cunning way you took me into some far off place to start the contagion. Good luck, swarming up the greasy pole. Insist on being paid in cattle, or gold bars.
Ron (Watching Swifts)

nuknuk wrote 581 days ago

Oh wow! I really like this, it's going to happen, if it hasn't started already and we don't even know it.
It's definately backed, I read 10 chapters before I had to make myself go to bed at 2:32 am. I can't wait to finish it!
Leslie La Gringa
"love Has No Borders"

hellsbelles wrote 586 days ago

You've got a talent for dialogue. I don't know if I'd be as polite if I suddenly had no money-but then I'm Canadian, so, who knows. Wishing you well on Amazon. Backed.

Wild Mother Lightning wrote 588 days ago

Excellent piece of writing, very credible and compelling, with a strong and highly relevant theme. Backed.

Thanks,

Natalie.

Bob Jones wrote 589 days ago

Hi John,

I'm hooked. Backed and on my watchlist. I sure as taxes hope the economy doesn't follow your imagination. Great read thanks.
Bob Jones

Eunice Attwood wrote 593 days ago

This is the work of a very intelligent mind. Fascinating scenarios with all the elements of a best seller. I am happy to back it. Eunice - The Temple Dancer.

Bob Jones wrote 594 days ago
The Collector wrote 596 days ago

Oh this is good! I really have to allocate some more time to this. Backed happily as its a great tale so far ( and i'm only at chapter 5)

hope it does well.

David
The Collector of Tales

Gefordson wrote 614 days ago

Hi,
I’d be more than happy to back your book if you’ll take the time to check out my work. Thanks
Gefordson

Nothing You can do.

Orlando Furioso wrote 618 days ago

Hmmm, but it almost did all go tits up about two years ago. Then Gordo Brown came along and saved the word and we Brits kicked him out at the next election for being a grinning glove puppet. But seriously, isn't the far more important issue the fragility of the planet and overpopulation? I can't say I really care if the capitalist system fails as it already tends to produce more losers then winners. If we cld get rid of money and religion we might be on our way to living smarter. But as others say it does not seem likely 'anytime soon'. I think the recent history of financial disorder, the collapse of Lehmans and the humbling of many American institutions and the rise of China makes far more visceral reading.

philip john wrote 623 days ago

Very timely and in its way very chilling. Having just read Mike Lewis's two books, I believe anything now. Well done for laying it all out before us.

Philip John

Fu Manchu wrote 625 days ago

Intetresting. It held me and the writing is fast paced. Excellent.

Jaemomof2 wrote 627 days ago

John,
Your work is exquisite! Your writing is strong, with no weaknesses. I was all ready reading and wanting to read more. I couldn't take my eyes off it for the first few chapters I read. You went straight into the story and sucked me in, you didn't wait a while to show me where the story was going. Brilliant! Best of luck with it, even though you really don't need it!

Jessica
"A Daughter's Sacrifice"

BACKED with pleasure!

RonParker wrote 630 days ago

Hi John,

A very unusual premise and far more exciting that it seems from your pitch.

On the whole, it's well written, but you do have the odd typo, for instnce in chapter two a 'than' which should be 'then'.

Also, in the second paragrph of chapter one, Natash is obviously in a car, but there is no mention of her getting into one after she leaves the house, or of her getting out to use the ATM.

All minor points, of course, and not difficult to correct. Congratulations on such a good story.

Ron

Herschel Shirley wrote 632 days ago

Good read and very timely message. I will put this one my watch list to read more later. Backed.

nenno wrote 633 days ago

like the way you start this in Russia, been there and lots of people assume incorrectly it's all spies and cold weather, and the plot - prediction (?) is an excellent one, obviously well researched or you have considerable experience in this field, Best of luck with this.

flower girl wrote 636 days ago

This is startlingly thought provoking and scary because it's possible...likely even. You tell the story brilliantly and the characters are strongly painted which draws the reader in. This not only deserves to be read, it needs to be read. Backed.

Lee Veinot wrote 642 days ago

Sounds like a great book! I'm going to back it based on the pitch. Hope it helps you get to the top five. Please check out my book "Crazy".

paperbat wrote 642 days ago

John. Can find if my comment got to you yesterday. So sent again just in case [also BACKED again just in case! as this deserves to be in top 5]. Loved the book's theme and ideas. Very well paced, with you allowing us to get to know Jon Thomson. My only thought is that at the beginning to put more ''context'' to the book's theme for the uninitiated. All the best.
Jerry [paperbat] = if you have kids they will enjoy it !

CamilleS wrote 643 days ago

Wow! This was chilling! I have to keep reading. Well done! Backing.

Camille
Curse of the Golden Fly

GK Stritch wrote 643 days ago

Dear John Wickey,

Future's End is FANTASTIC and so timely and all too real and frightful.

Heaps of praise, best and backed.

Are agents pounding down your door, tripping over each other? Are publishers camped out in your yard?

GK Stritch
CBGB Was My High School

T.Rhyder wrote 644 days ago

Reading the first bit of your book created a proper anxiety. I could feel the desperation. Great Job. On my W/list.

T.Rhyder
In The Mud: An American Odyssey

paperbat wrote 645 days ago

Excellent way you start. You create several clear characters which then draw in the reader. Not sure if Jon Thomson is good/clever or lucky? But will back it as I would like to see this in the top 5.
If you have any children, they may enjoy my paperbats.
Jerry [paperbats]

beeloveks wrote 646 days ago

FUTURE'S END

Excellent Work- I skipped around a few chapters to get the idea. The writing is consistent throughout-energetic and gripping.

Elizabeth Love

andrew skaife wrote 647 days ago

I have a list of written notes next to me but there seems to be no point given that the ones below are ever longer than mine in many cases.

so...

BACKED

Raymond Terry wrote 650 days ago

'Mene mene...tikal upharsin...'

Damn this keyboard. I checked all through the international files and no Akkadian...no Babylonian either..... It must be a damned Iraqi plot.

And yet that above phrase says it all.

'You have been weighed in the balance and found wanting'. Haven't we all? And haven't we all suspected that something like this was inevitable.

So my comments are Timely! Riveting! True! and it is only a matter of time to the fruition of this plot line. I suggest that all begin learning the barter system. We are there again. RT

Andrew Foley Jones wrote 650 days ago

really stunning writing
the style suits the plot perfectly
and the dialogue is natural

AnneWright wrote 650 days ago

You hooked me immediately. This is a fantastic story - compelling and well-written. I may not be able to keep it on my bookshelf for a long time, but I intend for it to stay on my watchlist until I can do more than the three chapters I've read today. Backed.

Anne
Closeted Courage

Giulietta Maria wrote 652 days ago

This is an intriguing exercise in society's chaos and confusion once money loses any worth. It explores a new world, with the ironic twist that once upon a time, there was no money. I thought of "Sneakers", except where the villan suceeds and chaos prevails. I would read this just to learn something about the way society works. The writing is easy to read, and gives this story personality. Backed!

Justis Call wrote 655 days ago

This is entrancing - it is obvious that tremendous research and study went into creating such a powerful book. It is definitely a statement of our times, and one we should all should be interested in following. Will continue to read, and will absolutely look for it in bookstores.

Backed!
Justis Call
Prestidigations

ccb1 wrote 656 days ago

Backed!!!We are living your novel today. Very timely story.
CC Brown
Dark Side

britneyjmartin wrote 665 days ago

Great story! Backed on originality and detail in the first three chapters. I look forward to reading more.

Marissa
Eternal Flame

hapless rider wrote 672 days ago

Hello - this is hard addictive reading; with subject matter like this I tend to want to put it down quickly and pretend like it will never happen. However - you have woven a very good story here and I could not 'put it down'. I particularly like the variety of characters and the roles they take in the plot. The subtle honest facts - the burning of the dining room furniture for example. Many countries have experienced runs like this - the total loss of the knowledge of where the next meal will come from, the drinking water, the heating. But by placing the start of the crash in the Ukraine you have made the plot more sympathetic to the buying books market - as the country is established, organised, rich by most standards and so can be related to. I also like the reference to what would be called 'conspiracy' the fact that the crash is already mapped - an escape route planned. I imagine this would be a very popular book - hope you catch the eye of a publisher. Hapless

J.B. Adams wrote 672 days ago

There is a haunting quality to the book that follows you throughout, the reference to civilisations before give the book wisdom while the economics of the argument convince you even further. The fact that you have constructed these points into a well written thriller has to be commended. Really enjoyed, backed.

JB Adams The Maxim Man.

Kace wrote 674 days ago

When the story is based on reality, with such strong potential to actually happen ... how can anyone resist it? You've developed some great characters to carry what potentially could have been a difficult (complicated) plot ... and the going back and forth in time/place adds the necessary global fee. I did have some issues with some of the phrasing ... specifically in the dialogue ... things like people always saying "I will not" instead of won't ... just thought a few things could be made to sound a little more natural - but, I realize different cultures phrase things differently - so obviously use the comment as you see fit.

chasecarrig wrote 675 days ago

A fresh take on an old tale. I like the Ark reference. The tone is authentic and it is obvious you have a clear understanding of the possiblities and consequences of such an event. Your research has obviously been accurate and thorough. Backed.

Chase

Stafford and Melton wrote 677 days ago

On premise and preface alone, this is worth backing because it's pretty original. Added to that is the fact that the writing is stellar, the pacing and flow were well-played, and the idea that this could actually be the future kept us riveted. The only thing we wondered/worried about was putting 2015 on there because it will date your work once that day rolls around.

Backed happily,
Amanda + Melissa
Burns Like the Sun

slh68 wrote 678 days ago

This is an incredible read, full of suspense and very well written. I will shelve this at the weekend when I reshuffle my bookshelf.

Best wishes

Sarah Louise