Book Jacket

 

rank 2110
word count 14819
date submitted 21.01.2010
date updated 21.01.2010
genres: Fiction, Romance, Horror
classification: adult
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Suicide Doll

Claudia D. Christian

His hunger for her had stretched into famine, pulling at his insides until Narcissus’ every function was dictated solely by memories of Lisette.

 

Narcissus was once given a little doll named Lisette. He enjoyed playing with her, making her do depraved things for his selfish amusement. Darling little Lisette lived for his attention, falling into a tangle of useless limbs when he forgot her for other pretty toys. One day Narcissus’ play pushed his little Lisette too far and he found her dangling from a cord.


He tried to fix what he had broken but Lisette no longer belonged to him. His toy had been taken away. Narcissus stubbornly kept after this doll, chasing it through the centuries, feverishly begging to put all the pieces back together.


Will Narcissus ever earn her forgiveness or will Lisette keep breaking for his punishment?


WARNING: This is a dark, unconventional story meant for readers who prefer morally ambiguous tales. There is explicit content within and is not suitable for minors.

 
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Christa Wojo wrote 747 days ago

The first chapter made me very curious. Your premise is a fascinating one and I like its gothic tone. However, you lost me a bit in the second chapter. I think it's good to have his memories interspersed with the narrative, but I felt it went back and forth a littlle too much. I backed because I enjoyed the idea and I think this book has great potential.

Good luck!
Christa

Esrevinu wrote 751 days ago

Claudia, I cannot put my finger on it but your cover art speaks volumes and creates a jump-off to your novel. Great pitch--I found your writing style impressive and the descriptions—stylish. The characters are compelling and there was something special about the pace, it drew me in and supported the setting and atmosphere.
I wish you the best
I loved it.
Scott
The Esrevinu Chronicles/Secrets of the Elephant Rocks

lizjrnm wrote 762 days ago

Claudia - you have a truly gifted imagination and the talent for harnessing it into the written word. Without a doubt this is the most edgy, intense book on this site! BACKED with chills.

Liz
The Cheech Room

Marija F.Sullivan wrote 764 days ago

Fascinating stream of harrowing thoughts and scenes.
Backed.
M (Weekend Chimney Sweep)

Noizchild wrote 773 days ago

Powerful stuff, my dear! I can't turn away; I want more! You have a gift for writing. I want to sit back and laugh Narcissus and cheer for Lisette. I'm DEFINITELY coming back to this one. Keep the story going! Keep it going now!

TheLoriC wrote 845 days ago

This book is just as dark and unconventional as you described, but don't take that as a bad thing! Unconventional makes a good book, especially in this genre. The writing is strong and the story....just incredible! Deserves a great deal of exposure, and on my shelf it goes!

L. Anne Carrington, "The Cruiserweight"

Margaret Anthony wrote 848 days ago

I found it impossible to stop reading. Simply mesmerised by your gifted writing I was left wanting more. Original, dark or horrifying pales slighty when written with such strength. There is art in every word and I am lost in admiration.
It remains to be seen where you take us with this story but on the amount I've read so far, I must back this. Margaret.

nboving wrote 848 days ago

"Suicide Doll"
Claudia.
Speaking from experience the horror genre is one of the hardest to pull off without using the tired old tricks of blood and guts and gratuitous violence. I can only congratulate you. But from what I've read so far your true strength lies in your huge ability to write believable dialogue. Your premise was great, but maybe you can think about leaving off the "Warning" - it's horror - just a suggestion.

Backed, of course.

Nicholas ("The Warlock") - Horror/Thriller)

meemers wrote 849 days ago

I'm still reading, a little hard for me with this one as the font is small, but I paused so I could back it. I think it's darkly magnificent, is that possible? To write something so compelling and full of anguish so beautifully? When finished, this will cast a shadow over many of the books on here and should rise to the top with speed.
gadz.....excellent!
sue sohn

JD Revene wrote 849 days ago

Claudia,

Good strong pitch (I like your hunger metaphor in the short pitch, which is rather the theme of my work).

Dark, gripping stuff. One comment the extended passage in italics in chapter two is a little hard on the eyes, perhaps because this is screen based.

Same again with the closing section of chapter three, which ends with a hook that is most annoying! Would that there was more.

Backed.

Barry Wenlock wrote 850 days ago

Heavy, hard, dark and absolutely riveting. Couldn't put it down (switch it off). Excellent! Backed!
Barry (Little Krisna and the Bihar Boys)

CDChristian wrote 851 days ago

Wow this is very heavy.
Backed
Teresa
Eye of Erasmus



Dear Teresa:

Thank you so much for backing Suicide Doll. I hope you enjoyed the heaviness! :)

CDChristian wrote 851 days ago

A very deep, perceptive read.

Great writing if I have one nit it would be about the size of font you have chosen, possibly make it bigger.

Good luck with it and welcome to the site.

Melxx
UNICORN



Dear Melxx:

Thanks for taking the time to comment; I really appreciate it. I've taken your suggestion about the font in mind. The uploading process is still new to me so I wasn't sure exactly how the file would eventually present itself. Thank you for your welcome and I look forward to contributing to the authonomy community.

CDChristian wrote 851 days ago

Phew! I began with the intention of reading one chapter...I read all.

The agony you have painted with your writing becomes real and pity and revulsion are chasing themselves around in my head. This is beautifully written, with the craftmanship and talent of a professional.

You knowledge of the fears and lusts that drive us all is perceptively transmitted with every word.

I backed this...and have no hesitation in recommending it to anyone brave enough to take the journey.
Suzannah Burke



Dear Suzannah:

Thank you so much for your words. I have to admit I felt great trepidation in uploading to authonomy. I've been a literary wallflower in that I do very little self-marketing. Readers who enjoy dark romance eventually find their way to me and so I know what I write is to their taste. Exposing my work in such a public forum means it gets exposed to everyone---even those who may despise my visions. :)

So when I read your comment I really did a little dance in my office. You described the feelings I attempt to inspire in readers. Thank you so much in letting me know I succeeded---at least in regards to your experience. Thank you for your kindness and thank you for such a warm welcome!

Melcom wrote 851 days ago

A very deep, perceptive read.

Great writing if I have one nit it would be about the size of font you have chosen, possibly make it bigger.

Good luck with it and welcome to the site.

Melxx
UNICORN

phillipross wrote 852 days ago

i've added this to my watchlist as it sounds like something i'd be interested in. will get to it soon!
why don't you take a look at mine in the meantime?
phil

Suzannah Burke wrote 852 days ago

Phew! I began with the intention of reading one chapter...I read all.

The agony you have painted with your writing becomes real and pity and revulsion are chasing themselves around in my head. This is beautifully written, with the craftmanship and talent of a professional.

You knowledge of the fears and lusts that drive us all is perceptively transmitted with every word.

I backed this...and have no hesitation in recommending it to anyone brave enough to take the journey.
Suzannah Burke

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