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rank 5459
word count 17910
date submitted 08.09.2008
date updated 10.02.2009
genres: Fiction, Thriller
classification: universal
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The Saladin Affair

William S. Shepard

America's election is over, and the new Secretary of State goes to Europe to repair America's alliances. Along the way, Al Qaeda plans his assassination.

 

A new Administraton has begun in Washington, and Secretary of State Ronald Adams undertakes an initial trip to Europe in Air Force Two, determined to repair America's traditional alliances and image. Stops are planned at Dublin, Paris, Vienna, Moscow, Riga and London. Along the way, Al Qaeda plans his assassination, codenamed Operation Salah al-Din (Saladin). In Dublin, the Secretary's party enjoys a warm welcome. Ambassador Carlisle, the newly confirmed American Ambassador to Latvia, an authority on antique furniture, spots a large Victorian era secretary in Ambassador McGowan's official Phoenix Park residence. He uncovers the Elizabethan era desk that it contains, and suspects that it has hidden compartments. He is not mistaken. The desk had been commissioned by Elizabethan playwright Christopher Marlowe. It contains in a hidden compartment a priceless medieval manuscript. Carlisle returns to Dublin after the official party has left, and murders Ambassador McGowan. The Secretary's official tour is a triumph. The welcome news of the return of American moral leadership heartens our friends. But his reasonable approach infuriates Al Qaeda. Following the narrow failure of an assassination plot within the Kremlin itself, the fallback plan, a mass assassination plan at Runnymede, is set in motion.

 
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lizjrnm wrote 796 days ago

Wow - this is so well written so far! It is obvious you hav espent much time research and passsion writing this book! BACKED with pleasure.

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Rob Alexander wrote 1335 days ago

Bill when are you going to upload a few more chapters?? Incidentally, you have a spare set of speech marks after Carley Sherburne four lines from the end.

Wayne Johnson wrote 1335 days ago

Hi William,

Having taken the name Saladin for my own name following a muslim ceremony in Indonesia I am always keen to see anything involving my name-sake ha, ha. This has the makings of an intelligent thriller and I like how the first chapters develop, although like Rob says be careful with words that are too American like I had to with my phrases that were too English. Try to appeal to as wide an audience as possible. You are on my watchlist and I will continue reading this weekend.

Wayne (Prester John)

jeffrey wrote 1338 days ago

Bill, Saladin al--Din the terrorist group sound the most interesting aspect of the book plus the murder of the
Ambassador for the contents of the Victorian era secreatary. The travels of the new Secretary of State and his meetings with foreign heads of Satate should be an interesting background.

William Shepard wrote 1339 days ago

Rob, Thank you for your welcome comments, which I received on returning from the annual Ice Cream Social in Oxford, Maryland - $3, all you can eat, temperature sunny and 78 degrees. The Prologue point is well taken, but less of a problem when seen in the context of the manuscript. There are actually several parts of the Prologue, interwoven before successive chapters. They reveal to the reader - just before the murderer realises it - what treasures are hidden in the desk. Constant characters accompany the Secretary in the plane, as on a real trip, with a few essential new ones introduced at each Embassy. You'll like the London attache, an Iroquois, who joins forces with British Intelligence to foil the assassination plot. Thanks again, Bill Shepard

Rob Alexander wrote 1340 days ago

William, I enjoyed that, looking forward to future offerings. Two comments, firstly, could you put a date in the heading of the prologue (I thought I was reading the wrong book initially!) Secondly, I appreciate the State department is big, but in places I got confused about which were the main characters. There were a few abbreviations or phrases which are American that made me stop and think. No further comments on that score in case you read my attempts at 'Americanisms' in my dialogue. (Although all comments would be welcome!)

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