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rank 1917
word count 12257
date submitted 15.02.2010
date updated 15.02.2010
genres: Fiction, Science Fiction, Fantasy, ...
classification: universal
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The Cryonic Man

Joe DiBuduo

Cryonic Man melds seventeenth-century Transylvania and twenty-first century America in an epic tale featuring futuristic medical advances, prehistoric gods, witchcraft, time travel.


 

The eternal battle between good and evil, and true love takes place when, Jim Jackson, a heavyweight fighter on the verge of becoming world champion, is diagnosed with terminal cancer. After considering suicide, he arranges to have his body cryonically frozen and placed in storage until science finds a cure for his inoperable brain tumor. One fight away from victory, death claims him.

His son Joe, a gifted physician, revives Jackson fifty years later. He awakens with body and mind intact, but soon finds himself possessed by Erzsébet Bathory, a notorious seventeenth-century Transylvanian noblewoman. Erzsébet’s motive for choosing Jackson as a vehicle for her plans is unclear, and the more he resists her presence, the stronger she becomes. As he struggles to reorient himself to his new life, Jackson must grapple with Erzsébet’s seventeenth-century memories, drawn inexorably into a mental love affair and an epic battle with Erzsébet’s Transylvanian nemesis for the possession of two immortality bracelets which grace the wearer with unlimited power.

My manuscript turns history on its head, redeeming her evil reputation.

 
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Francesco wrote 789 days ago

Backed with pleasure! Good Luck!!
A look at Sicilian Shadows would be greatly appreciated.
Frank.
If you back my work, you may also want to approach BJD (a big supporter of Sicilian Shadows) for a further read and possible backing of your book.

lizjrnm wrote 795 days ago

It is evident you have spent time, energy and passion in writing thios novel! You have an enviable imagination and a gift for puttting it into words! BACKED with pleasure - great sci-fi!

Liz
The Cheech Room

Sandie Newman wrote 820 days ago

Excellent title and pitch, especially the witchcraft and prehistoric gods. The opening is brilliant and just as you start reading you realise you are inside the mind of a man with a gun in his mouth about to kill himself, shocking and brilliant. I actually found myself laughing as he was trying to write the note, not even sure if I was meant to, excellent writing that had me glued to my lap top! Backed immediately.

Sandie
The Crown of Crysaldor

Famlavan wrote 824 days ago

I know interesting keeps coming up, but it is. Nice use of sensory predicate to give it atmosphere – Defiantly backed

Linda Lou wrote 824 days ago

Hullol Joe. Very interesting story. I likes the seperation from body observations. A fascinating science, cryogenics. You have already been shelved and now you are backed. Please take a look at my book. Thanks in advance.
Linda Lou Long
Southern dis-Comfort
http://www.authonomy.com/ViewBook.aspx?bookid=11421

Bill James wrote 824 days ago

Interesting collision of concepts - nice brew!
Backed
Bill

Jesse Hargreave wrote 826 days ago

Backed.

Jesse - Savant

Jehmka wrote 826 days ago

Very interesting story... that's a very clever opening scene... I appreciate the detail, Joe noting the taste of gun oil. The characters feel real. Their thoughts and dialogue seem right. This is very well done.
Backed.
Rodney

Thomas J. Winton wrote 826 days ago

Joe, I really think you've got something here. I like your clear, snappy prose, and I saw a few very warm metaphors also. Nice mix. You have a witty, seasoned voice. A neat twist melding two time periods. Backed.
Thomas J Winton
"Beyond Nostalgia"

Barry Wenlock wrote 827 days ago

This is well written and entertaining. I knew nothing of this character previously and was quite spellbound.
BACKED with pleasure, Barry
(Little Krisna and the Bihar Boys)

Gruffy wrote 827 days ago

great job. Your pitch is well done and drew me to read. Great opening at the start of chapter one.

backed with pleasure.

Nigel Hotton - Fatal Disclosure if you are interested in a return read.

K.Z. Freeman wrote 827 days ago

Great short chapters, read the first 3 and I the writing is very polished, the only thing I wondered was where's the name? whats the cryonic mans name? did I miss it, I don't think so O_o

R.A. Battles wrote 827 days ago

Your pitch and your opening paragraphed hooked me. The narrative voice flows well and is very readable. The twists and turns make for an entertaining read and the wide variety of characters made me wonder, what’s going to happen next.

Nice job!

Backed

Rodney

Jim Darcy wrote 828 days ago

What a good read! This is an excellent juxtaposition of what would seem to be very different subjects! I knew alittle about Erzsebet from a TV documentary but this puts a differen tperspective on what was a very tabloid version. Good luck with this, Jim D Serpent's Blood

Suzannah Burke wrote 828 days ago

Hello and well done.

The premise and the pitch lured me in and the writing held me there.

I intended to read two chapters and found myself finishing all you have loaded. The pace is fast, the dialogue and unspoken thoughts excellent. This is a genre I normally take a brisk look at. The technical aspects are usually way beyond my sphere on knowledge. However you have a style and voice which assists the reader in understanding what and why.

One suggestion...the pitch is very good, however you will attract more readers if you spit it into 2 or even 3 paragraphs. White space on screen is kinder to the eyes..

Backed with pleasure.
Suzannah Burke.

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