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date submitted 02.03.2010
date updated 08.04.2010
genres: Chick Lit, Popular Culture, Harper ...
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My Oil Wife Life

Ariella Kelly

Ariella is an oil wife. She journeys halfway around the world to be with her husband and discovers a world few people knew existed.

 

A young woman married to a man in the oil industry, Ariella, ventures to new and exciting country in the Pacific to be with the man she loves. Ariella is enthusiastic to begin her life with her husband as he mostly traveled throughout their relationship.

Shortly after arriving, Ariella discovers that being an oil wife is not for the faint at heart. She is thrown into a world of money, glamour, sex and lies once she befriends a group of oil wives. Ariella, is torn between being true to herself or following in line with the oil wives before her.

My Oil Wife Life, reveals a secret world of the people behind the oil industry, most importantly the women behind the men in the oil industry.

Above all, My Oil Wife Life, is a story about being honest with oneself.

 
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A Need for Change

It seemed like yesterday I was planning my dream wedding. I was to wear a vintage Vera Wang circa 1996.  I remember that dress fondly as I would steal my mother’s Vogue issues as a child and pretend I was a fashionable big city gal. I knew my long brunette hair would complement the dress nicely. 

It may sound a bit tacky, but my bridesmaids were to rock out sundresses in our school’s color as homage to our sorority days. I just had too, if I hadn’t gone to college I would have never realized Ethan was the one for me or have met the best friends a girl could ever have; they are my family. 

My picturesque groom would be a tall, dark haired, fair skinned, handsome young man. I pictured him to look just like Prince Eric in The Little Mermaid. On a side note, I was not named after the precocious Disney heroine, Ariel. My mother fell in love with the name after reading a baby name book. I believe my name means Lion God. The momentous day would culminate with a kiss so powerful it would forge an ever-lasting bond between us.

     Needless to say, my wedding was almost like a fairytale. Instead, my prince was about two inches shorter, but he did have those signature green eyes. We decided the bridesmaids should choose their own dress after Ethan’s sister refused to wear burnt orange. She was an Aggie at heart and could not bear to betray her school spirit. I did manage to find my dream dress, after staking out EBay and other bridal shops. It was pre-owned and slightly within our price range. I didn’t care that Wang had been used before, I figured a dress this classic deserved a second chance. 

The reception went smoothly, well somewhat, Ethan’s drunken dad did slip and break his hip while dancing to Lady Gaga’s Telephone. Then there was the dude of honor (my gay best friend) and best man debacle. Let’s just say they had a little too much fun in the changing room. It would have gone unnoticed if my Grandma hadn’t walked in on them to take a nap on the bed they were fornicating on.

Something told me she wasn’t completely overtaken by the incident, as she is very accustomed to drama from all the novellas she watches.  However, I believe Ethan was blind-sided to find discover his best friend pitched for both teams.

Other than those unfortunate incidents, the wedding was successful. I had just wished my father would be alive to give me away. God rest his soul. But my uncle Joe was happy to fill in. I felt as though my life was finally coming together and I had an incredible partner to enjoy it with. 

Little did I know fate had a different path for me because not long after our honeymoon, which was in glorious Mexico, did Ethan learn of his new work assignment. He was to be relocated to the other side of the world, Asia. At first I was completely upset, since we both planned to settle in Austin, Texas. But then he explained his new promotion to Operations Manager would allow us to live comfortably and acquire our dream home in a shorter period of time. 

Ethan had a vision of owning a house by the lake, mainly so he could fulfill his boyhood dream of having a sailboat. I on the other hand, wanted to be a part of the swanky neighborhood and aspire to one-day host a dinner party and invite Sandra Bullock over.  I just knew she would go bananas over my enchiladas.

Nonetheless, it was for the best he take the offer, so I quietly went along with his move and without a hitch he was gone. I was left to pick up the pieces as usual. The issue of distance was ever present from the beginning or our relationship. When Ethan and I started dating he was employed as an offshore oil contractor and was off on job sites for one - two months at a time. In fact, we spent a large portion of our lives apart. It was difficult, but I managed since I was in graduate school. It was only on the important dates like holidays and birthdays that were most bothersome to be without Ethan.

Now, it was a different story, I was no longer a busy student writing research papers and interning at clinics. And as much as I delayed the inevitable, I had to join the real world; therefore, I painstakingly tried to fulfill my desire to have a career, but it just did not go according to plan. I was beginning to think someone up stairs had it out for me, but I joined the bandwagon and I blamed the economy. It also didn’t help that Austin had a flooded job market with an abundance of college graduates vying to stay in the hip city. I couldn’t help but wonder if a simple girl like myself could have it all, a perfect dream wedding, a wonderful husband and a rewarding career? So far I only had two of those, but that was more than some people I knew, I was grateful, but I wanted more.

Without much else to occupy my time with, I spent most of my day in the company of a computer, overlooking classifieds and sending out job inquires, while wistfully longing for one day to be in the same place as my beloved, Ethan. Although we mutually decided I would stay back in Texas until he was firmly rooted in his new home away from home, I was beginning to feel restless; thus, it was with no surprise, I grew tired of the tedious routine.

My girlfriends were around, but they had their own lives to live and men(s) to comfort. It was only on the weekends that I had any human contact with the gals and my dude of dishonor. I was utterly miserable. Well, not entirely, I did have HBO, it at least kept me entertained with stories I could live vicariously through, but it just made me cynical.

Right when I was about to go bonkers, I received a lifeline via a phone call from Ethan. His company acquired him a private apartment and he had enough miles saved from his frequent flyer account that he could purchase me a ticket and I would be able to come live with him. I was extremely ecstatic I could hardly breathe. Then I realized my career aspirations would cease, since I knew my profession was nonexistent in that country. My question was answered and I had no other choice, but to say Yes! I yearned to have a career of my own, but I wasn’t going to let that come in between Ethan and I.

The girls were devastated I was leaving them and our wonderful city. They were happy I would finally be with my husband, but our plan of growing old together and move into the same house just like the “Golden Girls” would be delayed. I always thought of myself as a Dorothy, but for some odd reason they said I was Rose.

In celebration of my departure, they hosted a farewell dinner in my honor. We went to one of my favorite restaurants in Austin, El Chile. It was fabulous! I was with my best friends having chicken enchiladas and a prickly pear margarita, there wasn’t nothing else I could ask for; ok, well besides the obvious.

Even with all the excitement, the night had an underlying somber tone to it because it was dedicated to my going away. After desert we shared some of our favorite moments with each other. I couldn’t believe the predicaments we would get ourselves into and the horrible boyfriends and fashion choices we made. I sure was glad Ethan wasn’t there to hear the stories; he would most likely question why he even married me. Then again, I could always blame my young naïve brain for the mishaps in judgment.

    Four margaritas later and we were sloshed. I think our waiter decided to cut us off because of the entire racquet we were causing, since we asked for another round and the only thing he brought was our $300 bill. I said goodbye to my wonderful companions in mischief with a toast and a last minute group photo. It was tough to let go of them, but I knew I had to do it.

The night was definitely one of the most enjoyable on record. I only hoped they wouldn’t forget about me too quickly; however something inside me was saying it wouldn’t be too long before we saw each other again.  Until then I would have our picture and Facebook to keep in touch.

The days leading up to my departure were like a blur. As though I was going through the motions in subleasing our apartment home and putting our belongings into storage. I had procrastinated the moving process because I hated doing the work by myself, but luckily I managed to get Ethan to hire movers to help. I placed all our belongings into boxes and had them disassemble the furniture. Then we put the past five years of my life into a small storage room. I couldn’t believe I had so acquired so much junk, but nonetheless it was mine and it felt awkward to lock it all up. When I closed the door to the storage room, I was relieved to have gotten the job done, but I also had a tinge of sadness come over me as though I was beginning to realize things wouldn’t be the same anymore. 

I drove to my mother’s house in South Texas to stay one last night with them before I jettisoned. There was no definite date on my return, so I figured I would spend some quality time with them, since I seldom get the chance.  Just as any normal parent, my mom was concerned about my long flight. I reassured her the plane was safe and that I would get plenty of sleep.  I was the youngest, so I guess in her eyes, I will always be the baby.

My old bedroom was exactly the same as I had left it. Mom still had my Prom and cheerleader pictures in frames. My homecoming tiara and sash were on display and I even had a newspaper fold out of the high school football team with a heart over my first boyfriend. It was hard to grasp how fast time had passed. I could still remember the feelings of excitement when I won homecoming and how much I thought Mike was the love of my life. It was funny how things turn out. Although at the time it was like the end of the world. Now I could see the bigger picture and appreciate the path I took.

I fell asleep early that night since I knew my flight was before sunrise. My old bed was just as comfortable as I remembered; the left side still had my imprint. Ethan woke me up that morning to remind my lazy butt to get up for my 5:00 am morning flight. He had a tendency to be uptight on getting to the airport two hours before departure. I on the other hand was a bit more relaxed and always opted to get there in the last minute. Once again, I was going from point A to point B, without much thinking or feeling behind my actions, but just moving.  My mom dropped me off at the airport. I gave her a hug before checking in. I could see was getting teary eyed. I told her I’d call her once I arrive to ease her fears. I then got off the car and checked in.

After take off, I began to think about the past couple of days. I had blocked my emotions about the move because I knew they would be hard to deal with while engaging in the draining moving process. I don’t know whether it was the uncomfortable seat I had to sit on for 14 hours or the fact that I was on a plane traveling halfway around the world, that I finally had a moment of clarity. My life was about to drastically change and I was scared.

 

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Jay Cuzey wrote 492 days ago

"I knew she would go bananas over my enchiladas." - I love that line!

I think you would benefit from a lot more tags for your book.

hfleming wrote 538 days ago

Hi Ariella,

I am very intrigued to begin reading your story as I feel as though it sits rather 'close to home' with me! I will provide a more in-depth comment once I have begun reading!

All the best,

Hannah (Luckily Unlucky)

Anthony Brady wrote 677 days ago

MY OIL WIFE LIFE by Ariella Kelly

Ariella - You are a born writer and you possess an attractive style. You have a captivating sense of humour too and it seasons your text. This is a book of great promise which I am very pleased to Back. Please let me know when you have posted additional Chapters, as I would be happy to make a more in depth critique. just one mini-quibble: racket for typo racquet. I do pay attention. Backed.

Tony Brady - SCENES FROM AN EXAMINED LIFE - Books 1,2 & 3.

DP Walker wrote 722 days ago

Hi Ariella
This is a great story, showing us that a promising ex-pat lifestyle is not always what it is cracked up to be. A well tod, powerful story.
Backed
DP Walker
Five Dares

Linda Lou wrote 760 days ago

hullo Areilla. what a great story which includes not only the main charecters; you and yours, but all of the events surrounding it. Very good. Already shelved and backed. Please take a look at mine and thanks for that.
Linda Lou Long
Southern dis-Comfort
http://www.authonomy.com/ViewBook.aspx?bookid=11421

richard thurston wrote 769 days ago

Hi Technology has driven me to read every first visible page of each chapter. Seamless and precisely drawn. BACKED

RICHARD

Burgio wrote 775 days ago

This is a good story. A walk inside a world I know very little about. Ariella is a good character because she has so much trouble adjusting to this new world. Makes it a good read. I’m adding this to my shelf. Burgio (Grain of Salt).

carlashmore wrote 776 days ago

I didn't think this read like conventional Chick-Lit at all. I found it engrossing, written in a beautiful, accessible manner with an excellent use of first person. The story and people are so fascinating that I found this a truly effortless and enjoyabe read.
Carl
The Time hunters

Famlavan wrote 779 days ago

My Oil Wife Life

I think what is good at the start is you really portray a sense of loneliness and while I am mindful of the genre this has created a greater depth then the norm.
You keep the story interesting and moving (just be aware of the amount times you use I) with good narrative. Very credible main character and a very well told story. –Good luck

Euphemus wrote 781 days ago

Hi Areilla, you have the makings of a great book. It has a strong storyline and compelling interest. However, your writing needs special care. i think you need to read it to yourself and edit carefully. Take care not to 'split the infinitives; e.g "By any chance you wouldn't be Ariella" is better as "Excuse me, are you by any chance Ariella"
With a little editing you have a great book. I am backing it.
Regards
David (Flawless Murder) Please have a look at my book.

lionel25 wrote 788 days ago

Ariella, your first two chapters read smoothly. Good job overall. Only minor nit I have comes at the opening line of the Chapter Two. ....nudged my shoulder to inform (me) that... You can do without the "me."

Happy to back your work.

Joffrey (The Silver Spoon Effect)

Sheila Belshaw wrote 793 days ago

MY OILWIFE LIFE:

Ariella Kelly,

A most interesting story, showing a side of the world I've never seen. Nicely written in an easy flowing style.
A difficult title to get the tongue around, but eye-catching none the less.

Backed with pleasure, and wishing you good luck.
Sheila (Pinpoint)

AlanMarling wrote 795 days ago

Dear Ariella Kelly,

Thank you for sharing your story with us. I think you have a winning pitch and premise. You have “spent along” when you meant “alone”. You begin with a wedding, flourishing your chic-lit credentials, but you add tension with a distance relationship and build sympathy by making her spend dates like Valentine’s alone. Great detail that the protagonist can’t bear thinking about the one she loves all day while unemployed. I suggest against the ellipsis at the end of this chapter. “Token” doesn’t need to be capitalized. The next chapter ratchets up the tension, with the protagonist thinking about all she’s being severed from in her old life. She faces uncertainty with the airport official and not having a phone. She’s too tired to match his enthusiasm, which brings him down. This chapter ends with a problem, in the sense that everything seems happy. In my fallible opinion, you can’t end chapters on a happy note, or you’ll quench the reader’s desire to keep reading. You can either extend the chapter or display the character's doubts or employ some narrator foreshadowing.

This small matter aside, I think you have a story that will peak readers’ curiosity. Bravo! Backed, and best wishes.

lookinup wrote 797 days ago

Aside from a recheck on some clarity issues and a re-edit, this reads nicely and it's an interesting scenario. Those airplane blankets are indeed "flimsy". Wishing you the best...

Catherine (The Golden Thread)

Melcom wrote 798 days ago

Very interesting premise and the writing is wonderful.

your characters jump off the screen/page.

Happily shelved

Melxx

Francesco wrote 800 days ago

Backed with pleasure! Good Luck!!
A look at Sicilian Shadows would be greatly appreciated.
Frank.
If you back my work, you may also want to approach BJD (a big supporter of my work) for a further read and possible backing of your book.

Telegraph wrote 802 days ago

A very enjoyable read Charcter and dioloule for a unique voice that speaks the the readers. C W

bonalibro wrote 806 days ago

Hi,

Lots of little syntactical problems.

C1 P5 constantly ?? about Ethan. thinking?

Did the girlfriends comfort the men or the men, them?

I would start the next paragraph with, "I was miserable until I received"

loyalty program that come LIFE with ?? with whom?

Not until I was on the jet, traveling half way around the world, did I truly comprehend that (out out damned adverb)

That's all I have time for.

Cheers

Tim Chambers
Moonbeam Highway: With Apologies to Miguel de Cervantes

Marija F.Sullivan wrote 807 days ago

Very enjoyable read! Best wishes,
M (Weekend Chimney Sweep)

DKTD1 wrote 807 days ago

Oil wife life... say it 5 times fast.

Good stuff and backed!

Dan-
Eunice Stubbins, among others..

lizjrnm wrote 808 days ago

Try saying that ten times fast! Intrigued by the titla of course but the read was excellent! Oil wives - wow sounds like a television series like pilot wives, despararte housewives...etc., anyway - you are gifted at dialogue and your sense of wit and intelligence com ethrough in this cleverly crafted! We don't need demons and vampires to tell a thrilling story and you have one here! BACKED 100%

Liz
The Cheech Room

soutexmex wrote 808 days ago

This fits perfectly into this genre. I was not too sure. Is this real life? Even way, I like those pitches. Worked for me. SHELVED!

I can use your comments on my book when you get the chance. Cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

olive-col wrote 808 days ago

the suspense of the synopsis grabbed me. Book flows freely and and enjoyable. Backed

Jared wrote 810 days ago

Airella, you've got an interesting premise here. I found the title slightly awkward, but not grievously so, while your pitches work well. I'm intrigued by the story, especially given the names of your MC and yourself, as this is marked as fiction, but I'm assuming with a great deal of your own experience in here. If it's autobiographical, tag it as Harper True and widen your opportunity on this site.
I've read five chapters. You write in an engaging manner and manage the difficult first person narrative very well. At the start of chapter five, you mention embarking on a 'maiden voyage' and add 'for the very first time' - you don't need that qualification, a maiden voyage defines it as the first time. There's the odd punctuation issue, nothing too serious, and certainly nothing to mar the story. I wish you well with this.
Jared.
Mummy's Boy.

Bill Carrigan wrote 810 days ago

Dear Airella,

From your pitch and first chapter, this sounds like the start of a fine human interest story for teens or adults. I have to agree, though, with some of your reviewers that it needs editing, mostly for clarity and standard punctuation--nothing you couldn't do yourself. Here are some notes I took while reading:

--Your title would be clearer if you changed it to [My Life as an Oil Wife] or hyphenated [Oil Wife] in your version.
--Delete [out] in the first line. It's repeated in the next.
--[brides maids] is one word. Your spell-check, of course, missed this one.
--Write [Austin, Texas,]. There's another Austin in Minnesota.
--Place a comma after a long introductory adverbial clause--for example, after the word [period] in the second paragraph.
--Delete the comma after [We decided at first].
--In the third paragraph, delete the second [as usual]. Repetition looks careless unless intended.
--Change [a offshore] to [an offshore].
--In fiction, spell out numbers that can be expressed in one or two words, except dates. For instance, change [1 - 2] to [one-to-two].
[sub leasing) is one word.

You should go through your manuscript and edit it word by word if you want editors to take it seriously. Don't pay someone to do what you can do yourself. The story, of course, is the main thing, but craft is also important.

Backed.

All the best, Bill ("The Doctor of Summitville")

lynn clayton wrote 810 days ago

No better way to start off chick lit than with a wedding, in my opinion. All the ingredients and a good read. Backed. lynn

missyfleming_22 wrote 811 days ago

You've done a great job with this! it took us into a way of life not a whole lot of people know about and I found it fascinating. I liked it, not much more to say other than that! The reader in me was involved from the very beginning.

missy

pinkcoffee wrote 811 days ago

Writing in the 1st person is difficult to pull off, but you do it brilliantly. Straight away we are feeling empathy for her situation. Loved it. I wish the very best of luck with your book. kind regards pinkcoffee 'In The Moment'

glenn1862 wrote 812 days ago

Not that I am an expert or anything but, I am into chapter 2 and have no idea what counrty she is in... and perplexed why she would say she would only be there for thirty days? You have something here, but perhaps a bit more editing.

Mr. Nom de Plume wrote 812 days ago

The wonders and reality of the real world of uprooted travel with situations portrayed on TV, in the movies, and endured by some are all wonderfully woven into a novel to convey eye-openers for oil industry product users. Behind the pumps is where the action really is. Wonderful work. Backed Chuck (Paperboy Adventures)

Jed Oliver wrote 812 days ago

Nicely written. Best of luck with your book! Backed .Best regards, Jedward (Knut)

ElizaW wrote 813 days ago

You have a great concept for a novel. I have just a few suggestions. It would be helpful if you had more paragraph breaks during the dialog. Also, be careful of repetition. For example, you use the phrase "as usual" twice and close to each other in the first section. You may want to edit for tense. This may be a typo but you had one sentence that read "did I knew" instead of "did I know."

The plot is solid and interesting. I think the prose needs some work (but so does mine). You'll get some good advice here.

Best of luck

El
Reckless Scarlett

(If you have time please check out my novel. Thx)

alison woodward wrote 813 days ago

a very enjoyable read, well done, backed

alison

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