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rank 5466
word count 77132
date submitted 03.03.2010
date updated 30.09.2010
genres: Literary Fiction, Romance, Historic...
classification: moderate
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The Winged and Garlanded Nike

S G Scott

“Nike’ is a literary and documentary novel of the extravagant weapon culture during the Cold War. Murder, sentiment and wit leaven its otherwise serious intent.

 

‘Nike’ is a rollicking saga involving the denizens in the Gold-Rush town of Fernville, California. A metaphor plays in the background: That passion for the rare gold and uranium, surprisingly equal in weight, hubris, and maybe in consequence, stimulates the worst in human nature. The serious reader who patiently works her way through the multiple narratives in this literary novel will be rewarded, but might also experience something of dread and anger over the real nuclear confrontations depicted herein. Defense Company, Maxtar, moves to the Fernville region in 1955, bringing an unsettling milieu of engineers, scientists and executives. Hervey, an acerbic associate professor whose scholarship is the nuclear genie, worries over his nubile daughter’s chaotic entanglements with Maxtar engineers. Alice, a spirited and alcoholic executive’s wife, suffers boredom, prompting her to engage in extra-marital romance with Hervey. She desires authorship and discovers long-buried Fernville “skeletons.” Thirty years later we rejoin the characters, kept on stage by a tenuous correspondence between Hervey and Alice (now published author). Hard realities now contrast to the earlier slight whimsy present in 1955. Conflicts are resolved: Hervey’s final joust with the nuclear genie; those hot-blooded romances of 1955; a 1921 murder – or are they?!

 
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gold and uranium, gold rush vs. missile rush, murder, nuclear bottom line, realistic historical saga, unrequited and requited love, wit

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Adeel wrote 30 days ago

A fantastic and stunning piece of writing that is powerful enough to grab the attention of readers. Writing is clear and lucid and story moves well. Highly rated.

cicuta wrote 524 days ago

Dear SG, This is definitely my pick of the day. You have a wonderful, almost Sol-Volatile of a certain approach that puts writers like me to shame. Your book cast like a shadow, over my mind as I made my way through your elucidatory prose. It was passionate and masterly detailed; a daring riposte of historical romance, pitching the past against long lost paramours. I can't begin to tell you, how sad I am that your obvious talent, has taken so long to be noticed. But what do we know! We are only writer's. I have searched the world for great literature, that can last beyond the bullshit of today's modern world. And you my good Sir, have certainly restored my faith. Good luck and best wishes with your book. And please look out for my backing. Take care, Cicuta, [ Carl, Arcane ].

CarolinaAl wrote 608 days ago

A well-crafted, captivating historical (1950's). Great theme. Colorful, complex characters. Masterful imagery. Realistic banter. Excellent sense of place. Thought-provoking narrative. Well placed twists. Inventive plot. Surefooted, accomplished writing. An impressive read. Backed.

Elizabeth Wolfe wrote 609 days ago

Dear SG,
I read your introductory material and first chapter. I most enjoy the relationship you've set up between Ryland and Alice. "the dogs and cats - they'll all be new" - very witty and realistic portrayal of two people who have been together a long time. Well done!

BACKED
Elizabeth Wolfe (MEMORIES OF GLORY)

Andrew Burans wrote 616 days ago

You have written a very interesting and unique historical storyline, which I do like, and created most memorable main characters in Alice and Richard. The dialogue is realistic and well written and the pace of your story flows well. All of this along with your descriptive writing makes your work a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

richard thurston wrote 622 days ago

What a voice. Superb and very enjoyable you write with authority and maturity. Beautifully set and nicely portrayed I was struck by a profound sense of knowing. Being a total feel freak I am now lost for words. I think musically this is Steely Dan in contrast to a very crass bubble rock band.

Best wishes

Richard

Barry Wenlock wrote 623 days ago

Hi SG,
I'm enjoying this. It's extremely well written and absorbing. One of the best I've read for a while.
The intro works fine.
Alice Smith and her alto ego are intriguing. The opening with her and her aged husband Ryland on the plane back to Fernville sets the scene nicely -- his feelings of nostalgia and the MAXTAR sign across his buliding.
In chapter three, I liked the format as different characters are highlighted on the fateful day they tested the nuclear bomb in 1955-- the uranium decade.
I'm hooked.
Backed with pleasure,
Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

Lara wrote 633 days ago

This is an intriguing but misleading title. The book isn't about some fantastic futuristic creature but the ins and outs of tense and sometimes vicious relationships set against a cold, hard political background. It's a good read and I've backed it.
Lara
Good for Him

SRFire wrote 638 days ago

Your pitch drew me into this. I like how you have spliced ideas from different genres together creating an appeal for a wider audience.
Backed with pleasure,
Sana
P.S. If you can check out Saffire Drake I would be grateful.

WJ Stephens wrote 655 days ago

Hi S G,

Had a hard time starting this story and walking away from it :) Hang in there with this well-written work, it's not common for me to feel so comfortably involved. backed.

eurodan49 wrote 666 days ago

Something I enjoyed, wish I had more time to read on..
Interesting, well told piece of historical writing. Great narration, fast pace and realistic dialogue.
You’ve got my vote.

klouholmes wrote 690 days ago

Hi S C, This soon becomes immersing. During the plane flight, you’ve well-acquainted the reader with Alice and her husband, giving Alice a loaded perspective on Fernville, Hervey, and the possible murders there. The marital relationship is also interesting and spurs the story because of Smith’s history. Smooth writing that encompasses the atmosphere and these characters. The synopsis sounds intriguing and especially after reading the outset. Easily shelved – Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

Famlavan wrote 692 days ago

I’ve only just started this and backed it!
So as I became aware of Alice’s character and the subtly of character in the identity shifts, you had me. I haven’t got into the story in depth however I have read enough to know two things
1. This is a very well thought out, reasearched and well-written book
2. I haven’t time at present to do this book justice, however when I have, this is one that is on the list to read fully.
You have captured something special here and I want to fully engage and find out what! – Good luck

delhui wrote 694 days ago

Dear SG --

This is simply brilliant -- a walk through both history and a deeply felt and finely wrought relationship -- a sort of cross between John Dos Passos and John Steinbeck. We've got much more to go but feel confident backing you on your first five chapters. Thank you for such an entertaining and engrossing read! -- Delhui, The Long Black Veil

s g scott wrote 694 days ago

Thanks lynn - just the kind of response I hoped to evoke from the discerning reader!! I should mention that the historical references throughout the book are real. As a former croupier, which I take has to do with gambling, you might appreciate the run of bad luck on red and black that is a thread in the novel. Allow me time to look at nevergreen.

lynn clayton wrote 694 days ago

Your introduction of Alice is wry and subtle, especially her Devereau persona. The passage about her marriage is touching. There's a lot of melancholy, things ageing and passing away and you express it beautifully.
In chapter two your list of the characters' reactions is very revealing and amusing. You have the ability of saying much - and deep things- in few words. Brilliant. Backed. Lynn

yasmin esack wrote 698 days ago

THE WINGED AND GARLAND NIKE
hI
Your work is powerful and your writing is engaging and polished. Your characters are well constructed and come to life in the pages of this enormously well done book.

Many best wishes
The Third Eye

BACKED

DP Walker wrote 699 days ago

Hi SG
This is a really interesting read and is informative as well as entertaining. You've obviously done your research as this all seems very credible. Great descriptive writing as well.
DP Walker
Five Dares

Burgio wrote 700 days ago

WINGED & GARLANDED NIKE
This is an interesting story. Because it has a complex plot and covers three separate time periods, I think it’s the kind of book you need to clear an afternoon of distractions before you open the cover. Otherwise, you could become so engrossed, you’ll miss simple things like the doorbell ringing. It’s a good read. I’m adding it to my shelf. Burgio (Grain of Salt).

A Knight wrote 701 days ago

This is an incredibly engaging period in history, and you have captured the sense of it with ease. It's fabulous to see someone using fact to carefully enhance their work. Absolutely superb.

Backed with pleasure.
Abi xxx

SusieGulick wrote 702 days ago

Dear S G, I love your covering our historical California gold rush - I lived 90 miles from Sutter's Fort - you taught me so many things I didn't know about my stomping grounds. :) Thanks. :) Your pitch is excellent, so set the hook for me to read your book. :) When you use short paragraphs & lots of dialogue, it makes me want to keep reading to find out what's going to happen next. I'm backing your book. :)
Could you please take a moment to back my TWO memoir books? Thanks, Susie :)

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KW wrote 707 days ago

The time range is fascinating since it's so important to have the historical perspective to try to make sense of the senseless bullshit the world has become immersed into. For some reason, people think we live in safer times, but it's probably worse now since too many people disregard the threat that the U.S. and major nuclear powers pose to our safety. The mass media is obsessed to focus on "rouge" states as the major threats while disregarding the thousands of weapons that are engaged. "Well, I see failure and tragedy first." I love the phrase: "sexual bankruptcy." Highly fitting for people in their seventies, or is it? Simply, I'm enjoying this and will be back to read more when I can find some bloody time. The World Cup is drawing me away from this site, I think. Backed for now.

zan wrote 707 days ago

The Winged and Garlanded Nike
S G Scott

SG,
Read your pitches with interest. I'm by no means a historian, not even a slight one, but I think your pitches, and your note in chapter one, capture that anxious time in history - reflected also I think in much of the literature of the time. I think there's a nice balance of themes here to procure a very wide audience for this, quoting from your chapter one note, "We now impute an air of romance to the frenzied nature of the gold rush era" - much drama and excitement promised in the pitches which makes reading almost a compulsion. I liked your preliminary note, by the way. The prologue with your 1986 setting begins to sketch Alice in an interesting manner - moving from alcoholic to successful writer of murder mysteries. Something of a puzzling personality - moving from the storm anchor-type Alice Smith to the adventurous crimes of commission and ommission Alice Devereau when the occasion called for it. They are heading to Fernville, Carlifornia, where the doga and cats will all be new - it's been thirty years after all, and the indifferent exchange with Ryland, 76, ten years her senior, was instructive - they needed each other over the remaining years. 47 years of marriage with occcasional compatibility added to a positive, surely. I must say, I found Alice an interesting character - perhaps moreso because of her title as successful novelist and I loved those bits of information concerning her novels. I found her husband rather boring - despite his successful political career. Eerie feel at the end of this segment - he saw his hands now - he had grown old; the 1955 cats and dogs were all dead, but his building, still dominant over even the modern structures, was as vital and imposing as before.
SG, I found this enjoyable and stimulating. You packed so much detail into the flight time - instead of seeing an aging couple sitting on an aircraft waiting to arrive at their destination, you gave the reader a vivid picture of their lives, their relationship, their careers, some of the past, making one wonder, what is in store for them now as they return to this place after thirty years. You managed to inject great atmosphere, a rich texture and tone to this through your description and dialogue, even a bit of intrigue and humour in such a short space that at the end of this brief segment, one feels as if he/she knows the Smiths already. I am very tempted to turn the page and move to the next chapter upload but the second half of the Brazil/PRK match is on and it seems like an exciting second half - won't be fair to read on now as I would lose my focus and not do your work justice. So, will return to read later. In the meantime, I was happy to back this. Good plot, well-written, and can't say exactly why, but this somehow makes me think of Steinbeck. Hope you find a publisher for this excellent piece.

David Fearnhead wrote 717 days ago

This is not the story of a sports shoe as many might believe but the title comes from the original inspiration for the oregon sports company - but nike the greek goddess of victory. This is a solidly put together read, it comes across as being written by the steady hand of a author who knows his stuff. This allows the reader to simply sit back and trust the author. A vital connection that is needed, and delivered in this book.
Backed
David
Bailey of the Saints

lionel25 wrote 727 days ago

S G, your prologue is a smooth read. You've succeeded in transporting me into Alice's point of view, especially her flying perspective. Nothing to nitpick in that section.

Backed with pleasure.

Joffrey (The Silver Spoon Effect)

mvw888 wrote 732 days ago

A masterful beginning to this multi-faceted story. I love the first chapter, where you give us an expert introduction to Alice and Ryland Smith in a few paragraphs. Through their interactions we ascertain everything we need to know to be interested--the remains of their marriage, her drinking, their antagonisms but steadfastness to each other. And the fact that they are on their way to something is intriguing and makes us feel pulled right into the story. Great finish too, with Ryland looking down over his building. Then, Chapter 2, which was even better. I love the way you began this, with a list of interlocking characters and their reactions to the same event. Your prose is impeccable; your dialogue engaging, witty and realistic. I like the backdrop of historical events and the way you approach it from several angles through your characters--political, educational, business. Excellent work, really well done.
---Mary
The Qualities of Wood

Zangler wrote 732 days ago

Beautifully written with an obvious passion for intrigue. Well done.
Backed!
Christopher
Crossing The Line

Melcom wrote 739 days ago

A stunning imagination and an amazing way with words makes this a terrific read. You definitely appear to have researched your subject matter well.

A cleverly crafted novel that I'm happily placing on my shelf.

Melxx
Impeding Justice

Burgio wrote 768 days ago

This is a good story: an interesting contrast between the gold rush and the cold war. You have good characters. And an engaging writing style. You have a lot of background info to supply here so this makes sense to your reader so it's easy to fall into a trap of explaining all of that down front. You've skillfully avoided that by stringing out info on a need to know basis. Makes this a good read. I'm adding this to my shelf. Burgio (Grain of Salt).

carlashmore wrote 776 days ago

This is some of the most intelligent writing on the site. Your prose is pitch perfect with a beautiful array of imagery on display. You are a true wordsmith and I am delighted to back this
Carl
The Time HUnters

lizjrnm wrote 797 days ago

Wow you have such an amazing imagination and a real gift for harnessing it into words! The characterizations in this story are smart and spot on! My kind of read! BACKED with pleasure!

Liz
The Cheech Room

Michael Croucher wrote 798 days ago

This has an exciting premise and lots of promise. It's well written and seems well researched. I think the book should do very well when other Authonomites become aware of it. I'm happy to give it a bit of time on my shelf.
Michael Croucher (Bravo's Veil)

http://fictionwritingasaretirementhobby.blogspot.com/

Francesco wrote 798 days ago

Backed with pleasure! Good Luck!!
A look at Sicilian Shadows would be greatly appreciated.
Frank.
If you back my work, you may also want to approach BJD (a big supporter of my work) for a further read and possible backing of your book.

DKTD1 wrote 807 days ago

Well written and detailed.
I would remove all the TAB's just for the sake of this website. That will help your formatting issues--though I'm sure it looks fine in your word processor or on paper.

Some sentences are very long. Some trimming would quicken the pace, example:
"Just before the plane touched down, Alice placed the small book she had started to read in her bag. It was Fernville: Improbable Town, A Brief History of the Region - 1851 to 1853, by Helen Crossman. Alice hadn't looked at it in years,"
You could shorten this. "Alice put her book away as the plane touched down. It was a book by Helen Crossman that described Fernville in the 1850's. She hadn't read it in years." Not sure the long chapter name is important and it slows down the eye.
Just my opinion.
Backed!
Dan-
Eunice Stubbins, among others...

plip wrote 811 days ago

Good plot, with exciting and interesting events. Personally I think you should try to move the reader's focus closer in, by using less description and backstory, less narrative detail and more for us to discover. This is especially the case in your opening chapter, which must grip the reader and pull them into this world, this time and place.
Good luck.
phil (Eland Dances)

Barbara Silkstone wrote 812 days ago

I back this book with pleasure as I see incredible potential. Hint: Please do shorten your pitch. Break it up into shorter paragraphs and cut out some of the detail. Think of it in terms of "bullets." Good luck!
Barbara Silkstone
The Secret Diary of Alice in Wonderland, Age 42 and Three-Quarters.

Barbara Silkstone wrote 812 days ago

I back this book with pleasure as I see incredible potential. Hint: Please do shorten your pitch. Break it up into shorter paragraphs and cut out some of the detail. Think of it in terms of "bullets." Good luck!
Barbara Silkstone
The Secret Diary of Alice in Wonderland, Age 42 and Three-Quarters.

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