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Ignited: The Rise of the Saints

Andrew Pate

Ignited is now available on Amazon as an E-Book. Just type in - Ignited: The Rise of the Saints. Thanks to everyone for their support.

 

Set in the Bay Area of Northern California, a small church has attracted the full attention of the local Dark Prince Mammon. After Mammon finds out that his Field Commanders have let this church fall through the cracks, he throws all the powers of Hell at the members of this church in hopes of disrupting what already has been set in motion. Unknown to Mammon, Satan has sent in another Prince to ensure that a revival does not break out in an area that hosts one his mightiest strongholds on the physical realm.

However, the church is not without protection...

 
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Devon slowed his progress and analyzed the two men standing in front of him.  Sweat was flowing freely down his face and back as he shifted his stance.  He knew he had only one shot for the kill, and he steeled himself for the assault that was about to be unleashed.  Devon broke into a full out charge for the first man.  A split second before impact he broke left leaving the man momentarily dazed and off balance.  The second man charged and Devon was forced to alter his course causing his weight to defy gravity by cutting to the right.  Knowing he had been out maneuvered the first man turned around just in time to see Devon leap from his feet and drive his weapon home. 

“Two points!” Devon screamed as his feet landed back on the pavement.  As a show of superiority he caught the basketball before it hit the ground and proceeded to toss it to the opposing team.  One of his teammates let out a whoop, and they ran back down the court.

Devon had never met the two guys that were playing on his team today, but when he was challenged by some local kids they were the only ballers available.  He had been challenged by three Samoan brothers, and what they did not have in height they more than made up for in speed.  Devon had seen them play a few times and was enjoying the competition.   Although, as the game progressed, he wished that his new teammates would curve their vocal excitement over their success.  After a few more successful drives, they became louder and even more disrespectful.  Devon was about to tell them to calm down and cut out the trash talk when he heard the smack.  He turned just in time to see the smaller, and louder, of the two hit the ground on his back. 

Always the peacemaker, Devon tried to calm the Samoan brothers down, “Hey guys, I thought we were here to play ball, everything is cool.” 

The most muscular of the three turned on Devon and started yelling, “You want some too!” 

Before he could respond his attacker swung a wide haymaker catching Devon in the temple.  His vision went black as he tried to back away from the blows.  The Samoan repeatedly hit Devon in the face as he backed up.  After awhile Devon stopped feeling the pain; all he could hear was the dull thud of his attacker’s fist hitting him repeatedly in the face.  Finally, unable to defend himself, Devon knelt down and waited for the beating to end.

The assault was broken up when an old man across the street shouted that he had called the police.  The oldest of the brothers pulled his sibling off Devon and apologized for his brother.  He told Devon that he was not part of the problem and shouldn’t have been hit.  Devon was in no mood for sympathy and shrugged him off.  To add insult to injury, someone had stolen his wallet while the fight had taken place.  Devon walked across the large field to where his car was parked feeling shamed and angry.  He looked in his rearview mirror and saw that the left side of his face was drooping off his head, while the right side was swelling at an alarming rate. “Wonderful,” he thought as put his keys in the ignition and started a painful drive home.

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Three small demons of pride were laughing wickedly as they watched the attack unfold.  It took a lot of suggestive thought, but they were finally able to get the brothers to explode from the insults.  On the flip side, the player hurling the insults was quite easy to manipulate.  The original target was Devon, and they knew that it was only a matter of luck the brother’s anger lasted long enough to include him in on the beating.  After the first punch was thrown, the demons tag teamed the two boys that were playing with Devon telling them to run for their lives.  It didn’t take too much encouragement and very quickly Devon was the only target for the brothers to focus on.  What they had not counted on was the old man who had ruined their fun.  They had not seen him come out of the house and had been surprised when they heard him yelling. 

    The demons had not realized it but the old man had seen them too.  If they had not been so intent on watching the battered Devon run off in shame, they would have noticed that instead of going back into the house he seemed to dissolve into the door.  Now in his true form, the young warrior sat beside Devon on his drive home.  He was trying, unsuccessfully, to encourage Devon and to plant a seed of forgiveness.  The young warrior knew the roll that he would be playing in the coming days, and he did not want Devon’s anger to hamper the potency of his potential.

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    As he pulled into his driveway, Devon took one more look into the rear-view mirror.  Through swollen eyes he saw one battered and beaten face.  He could only imagine what his mom would say when he went in the house.  Devon also realized that he had forgotten about his bible study that Steve would be picking him up for at 6:00 pm.  The last thing he wanted to do was face all his friends in this condition.  “Maybe I’ll tell Steve I’m sick,” he muttered as he forced himself out of the car.  As Devon reached out to open the door the adrenaline had worn off and he found himself falling into a pit of rage, and with a hurt pride and battered face he entered his parent’s house.

    To Devon’s surprise and relief both of his parents were out.  There was a note on the refrigerator that they had gone out for a dinner and movie.  He let out a sigh of relief and thanked the Lord for small favors.  He was still angry, but not having to expose his shame to his parents for a little while did help his mood.  His face was beginning to hurt so he took a handful of aspirins followed up by a cold shower.  He had been hoping that the cold water would bring down the swelling, but as he caught site of himself in the mirror he could only think that he looked like a warped version of the elephant man. 

    Resolved to stay in for the night he called Steve to tell him that he wasn’t feeling well.  Unfortunately, Steve was notorious for letting his battery die out on his phone, and as Devon called for a third time, only to go straight to voicemail, he resolved to the fact that he was going to have to face his friends tonight.  Sighing, Devon filled a bag full of ice. Lying back in his chair he alternated the bag across his face from one swollen area to the next, and waited for his friend to come pick him up. 

 

 

 

 

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Maria Briere wrote 350 days ago

Andrew,
I love your title! That's what made me want to start reading your book. I'm glad to see more writing out there regarding the spirit world and the constant war between good and evil. When I started writing "The Warrior Twins" I wasn't sure if this kind of content would interest readers, especially young readers, but I can definitely see young people reading your book! I'm placing your book on my watchlist. I want to come back to it to finish reading when I have more time.
Best of luck with your E-Book version on Amazon!

Maria Briere

Drew Pate wrote 531 days ago

No, but it is definately worth reading to find out what he's all about! :)

Pastor Damien, is that Satan? Curious. A question, admittedly, without reading.
Tom Balderston, The Wonder of Terra.

Tom Balderston wrote 531 days ago

Pastor Damien, is that Satan? Curious. A question, admittedly, without reading.
Tom Balderston, The Wonder of Terra.

tillerman7 wrote 535 days ago

nice cover.

looking to swap reads.

steve kemp

treega wrote 541 days ago

wow! Yes, Peretti move over. It is good. I am glad someone is taking up where he left off. I think the verbal visualization (oxy-moron?) of the spirit world is a good tool. I am WLing until I have room on my shelf.
Teresa. - Mary Magdalene; My Story

CMTStibbe wrote 543 days ago

This book had me hooked from the beginning. I am (as we British say) Gobsmacked! Its brilliant. I enjoy your excellent story-telling and I just wanted you to know this book is definitely a best seller. I can feel it in my bones. This is they type of book I yearn for in Barnes and Noble on a rainy day with a hot cup of coffee. I am a new author and have much to learn so I am encouraged and enlightened. Its a fast page-turner. I will definitely back it.
CMTStibbe
Chasing Pharaohs

Lenore wrote 544 days ago

Ignited: The Rise of the Saints
The author's unique perspective of the infinite struggle between good and evil, portrayed in "humanizing personalities" is captivating in its originality. Conversation and emotion flows throughout the well-chosen dialogue. After reading the first five chapters, I feel a need for some transitions and perhaps organization, helping readers to see all activity, all temptation, all interaction as battle turf. I need a stronger connection to my, not only my symbolic yin and yan, but stronger identification into the familiar manifestations actions and motivations, such as what was outlined looking at the financial district.
When it's time to publish, a strong edit should be completed. My inconsequential nitpicks, for example, only in the first paragraph are: "...it seemed like they knew..." It should be It seemed AS IF they knew; also, "the fruit that hung from their branches..." It should be "fruit that hung from their branches WAS ripe.
Second paragraph, I would name Lucifer in first sentence, not use he. Give him the power
This is a masterful undertaking and one that I will continue to enjoy. I will back when I am able.
Lenore
Surviving the Seaweed

Drew Pate wrote 555 days ago

Frank Peretti really inspired me. After reading his material I couldn't believe that there were not more novels out there like this. I enjoy this style, who needs fantasy when you can write about the spiritual realms!

I am reminded of Peretti's Piercing the Darkness/This Present Darkness in reading this work. The theme is timeless, the duality of spiritual and material reality is weaved together nicely, and thus far I am drawn in.

-Brandianne

Drew Pate wrote 555 days ago

I am honestly not sure exactly how the new rating works. I have been away for awhile, but I wouldn't be upset if you put it on your bookshelf. :)

Thank you Andrew for backing LONDON. Continuing to enjoy your work. Question - do I need to re back yours? What with this new system? Let me know and I certainly will.

joy to you and your family,
jim

Drew Pate wrote 555 days ago

I am glad you are enjoying the book, I can't believe it hasn't been picked up either! :) Seriously though, I have been behind on my reading, but I will try to get a comment to you soon on The Forefather's Curse.

Andrew~
Loved the first five chapters! I promise I will finish because I am so wrapped up in the story. I can't see this story not hitting the shelf! Best Blessings to it! I am very new to the site and still in the process of uploading my book but if you have a little time to check out The Forefather's Curse I would appreciate it. I think you will like it with the books you list as your favorites. I really hope that God will further your book and mine! God bless you!

Nathalie

Drew Pate wrote 555 days ago

Thank you for the encouraging comment. Please let me know if you get a chance to read further, and what you think. God Bless..

Up to 13. Excellent. Captivating. Backed.
Tom Balderston
The Wonder of Terra

eric.swanson wrote 556 days ago

Your book reminds me a lot of Frank Peretti. I enjoyed what I have read so far.

Tom Balderston wrote 556 days ago

Up to 13. Excellent. Captivating. Backed.
Tom Balderston
The Wonder of Terra

Nat's fantasies wrote 559 days ago

Andrew~
Loved the first five chapters! I promise I will finish because I am so wrapped up in the story. I can't see this story not hitting the shelf! Best Blessings to it! I am very new to the site and still in the process of uploading my book but if you have a little time to check out The Forefather's Curse I would appreciate it. I think you will like it with the books you list as your favorites. I really hope that God will further your book and mine! God bless you!

Nathalie

Tom Balderston wrote 563 days ago

The two dimensions of the Divine, Good vs. Evil - aways available for a good spin. A revelationary battle. Good choice of the name Pastor Damien. Reading.
Tom Balderston
The Wonder of Terra

celticwriter wrote 568 days ago

Thank you Andrew for backing LONDON. Continuing to enjoy your work. Question - do I need to re back yours? What with this new system? Let me know and I certainly will.

joy to you and your family,
jim

Brandianne Kay wrote 568 days ago

I am reminded of Peretti's Piercing the Darkness/This Present Darkness in reading this work. The theme is timeless, the duality of spiritual and material reality is weaved together nicely, and thus far I am drawn in.

-Brandianne

celticwriter wrote 580 days ago

Make a wonderful movie! :-)

blessings,
jim
jack & charmian london
(another Bay Area story)

KW wrote 657 days ago

"Pleased to meet you, I hope you guess my name. But what's been puzzling you, is the nature of my game." Yes, demons are real. I've know a few. Maybe Captain Hasar needs to unite the angels in my neighborhood "to repel any attack" this hot, hot summer. Frankly, I think I'm living in hell as I type this. "Ignited" is an appropriate title, indeed! "Do you deny me even now?" No, you are backed with pleasure.

Drew Pate wrote 668 days ago

Thank you for the kind words, I am glad that you enjoyed the book.

Dear Andrew
this is the picture I have on my wall
It is one of my favorites.
It is Archangel Michael, what a gem
What a good book.
I started reading this some time ago and just wanted to let you know, now finished.
I have already commented and backed your book a while ago, but cannot see the backing anywhere. So i am taking the time to back it again because I believe your book is WORTH IT

BEST OF LUCK
Denise

name falied moderation wrote 669 days ago

Dear Andrew
this is the picture I have on my wall
It is one of my favorites.
It is Archangel Michael, what a gem
What a good book.
I started reading this some time ago and just wanted to let you know, now finished.
I have already commented and backed your book a while ago, but cannot see the backing anywhere. So i am taking the time to back it again because I believe your book is WORTH IT

BEST OF LUCK
Denise

owen carless wrote 673 days ago

Hi, i read the first couple of chapters and actually found some of it quite well written for this genre, including some nice phrasing and such, although there is too much exposition and not enough action or dialogue. a few grammatical errors too, although nothing too terrible. i encourage you to have a read of my book. i assume you didn't read any of it, just saw the 'christian' tag and sent me a spam message, otherwise you would have realised that my book is actually a satirical critique of organized religion, particularly pentecostal Christianity, which is my background. still, you might be interested in a different take on the whole 'spiritual warfare' thing. ; P

KatrinaShelley wrote 673 days ago

Andrew,

I have backed your book--primarily because it scared me! This is in a good way. I find opportunities daily to be reminded of God's love for me, however, I constantly need reminders from other believers of Satan's fury. While I do see some area's where your style may need some brushing up, the storyline is fantastic and the pitch drawing. This is a story and reminder that everyone should have.

Blessings - Katrina (EMBRACED)

slh68 wrote 674 days ago

I`ve only had time to read a few chapter`s, but this is exceptionally well written, and a very powerful story. I will read more soon, and will back this with pleasure when I reshuffle my bookshelf.

Best wishes

Sarah Louise

Steven Rineer wrote 674 days ago

This reminds me a bit of PIERCING THE DARKNESS in the way you interweave real life faith with fantastical and immediate and entertaining elements...also and for me most importantly you know your way around a sentence. Good luck.

Linda Lou wrote 683 days ago

hullo Andrew. What an interesting subject to expand upon. Regardless, of all that has been written about the 'fall from glory', yours sounds the most realistic and 'down to earth', pun intended. Very good.
Already shelved and backed.

Linda Lou Long
Southern dis-Comfort
http://www.authonomy.com/ViewBook.aspx?bookid=11421

Kristine Cheney wrote 683 days ago

Backed! Will you please take a quick peek at my "Spartan Heart," and if you deem it worthy, return the favor?

Thank you so much! Best wishes for all of your writing endeavors.

Kristine Cheney
Spartan Heart

Katy Christie wrote 686 days ago

This is powerful stuff - of biblical proportions! Can't read much more today, but am backing it on the assumption that it only gets better.
Katy Christie
No Man No Cry

D.S. Williamson wrote 687 days ago

This really isn't my thing, Andrew, but I'll back it because it does put me write into the story and I do like that.

Drew Pate wrote 689 days ago

Thank you for your kind comments, I hope that you enjoy the story.

Hi,

Unique is the word that comes to mind after reading your opening chapters. You`ve skillfully managed to interweave faith and fantasy together. This is a well written manuscript which is full of promise, I will most certainly come back and read more later...Backed with pleasure.

Good luck,
Cerys (Bradan)

Drew Pate wrote 689 days ago

Thanks for the comment, that is exactly what I am going for.

This should be good reading for Christians of all denominations.

Backed.

Gabriel(It Goes On Forever.)

maxie wrote 689 days ago

Hi,

Unique is the word that comes to mind after reading your opening chapters. You`ve skillfully managed to interweave faith and fantasy together. This is a well written manuscript which is full of promise, I will most certainly come back and read more later...Backed with pleasure.

Good luck,
Cerys (Bradan)

gotiko wrote 689 days ago

This should be good reading for Christians of all denominations.

Backed.

Gabriel(It Goes On Forever.)

PirateWriter wrote 692 days ago

Having a quick reshuffle on my shelf. Duly backed. Sorry cant comment more at the moment. Good Luck. P

scargirl wrote 702 days ago

good subject and lots of hidden things to discover in your message.
j

lbrammer1992 wrote 715 days ago

This is inspired work as you have a brilliant concept and write a storyline around it well. The way the characters are created is brilliant and draws the reader into your world. Your descriptions are engaging and well done which futher enthralls the reader. Could you have a look at my manuscript The Sacred Pool.

Laurence

Larry789 wrote 717 days ago

This book will do well, you have strong story telling skills and that makes for a good book.

Drew Pate wrote 721 days ago

Thanks for the suggestion, I like the idea of not breaking from that particular viewpoint so soon. I'll look into it. Also, there are about 4 testimonies like Sara's scattered throughout the first part, the rest of book is more in the traditional story telling that you mentioned. Thanks again for the great idea.

Hi Andrew,

Your book Ignited, is an important work. A story that needs to be told. However in order to be a commercial success I think you'll need to frame the book so that it shows the story instead of telling it.

In chapter one you have a gripping scene in italics with a point of view change. I think if you stayed in first person and let us live this scene along with the character it would be much stronger.

backed for content
Pamela Frost
aka scatteredfrost
Houses of Cards

scatteredfrost wrote 721 days ago

Hi Andrew,

Your book Ignited, is an important work. A story that needs to be told. However in order to be a commercial success I think you'll need to frame the book so that it shows the story instead of telling it.

In chapter one you have a gripping scene in italics with a point of view change. I think if you stayed in first person and let us live this scene along with the character it would be much stronger.

backed for content
Pamela Frost
aka scatteredfrost
Houses of Cards

Nancy Bush wrote 723 days ago

This looks like a powerful and well written book. I can appreciate all of the Truth displayed in the text and almost have to prepare myself to read. I am familiar with The Word as well. I may refer to "Ignited" in future times of challenge on this fallen planet.

Very Good Luck with this book,
Nancy Bush
DAYMARES - Based on a True Story
MENAGERIE - A Micro Collection

Drew Pate wrote 724 days ago

Thank you for your kind comments. I think that you are the first person to read the last chapter! I enjoy reading shorter chapters; so that is why there are so many. I still need to read Paradise Lost, but I have read Pilgrims Progess and definately the Bible. Thanks again.

IGNITED - THE RISE OF THE SAINTS

Andrew - This inspiring book will shoot off the shelves of the specialist religious and sacred bookshops. Though I have not read of the books you cite as your personal favourites, I sense from reading your own authored book, that you have read John Milton's Paradise Lost and Paradise Regained, Dante's Inferno and John Bunyan's The Pigrim's Progress. That you have read The Bible in great depth is obvious. Ignited - ...... is a very long book (56 Chapters) and I did not read it in full. You conclude with a very telling effect in that the words of the opening Chapter are reiterated in the beginning of the final Chapter. I think your book will be read by adherents of differing shades of Christianity and other Faiths. It has a special attraction especially if you retain your present book cover. What you have to say is well worth being spread around. There are no cockles or chaff in your take on the spiritual wisdom you impart, but pure grain that will sprout and flourish among sincere spiritual seekers after truth. You are a force for good in the world and your fine writing is witness to the healing outreach that inspires you. I will put your book on continuous Watchlist and return to it in my quiet corners of time. Backed.

Tony Brady - SCENES FROM AN EXAMINED LIFE - Books 1,2 & 3.

Anthony Brady wrote 724 days ago

IGNITED - THE RISE OF THE SAINTS

Andrew - This inspiring book will shoot off the shelves of the specialist religious and sacred bookshops. Though I have not read of the books you cite as your personal favourites, I sense from reading your own authored book, that you have read John Milton's Paradise Lost and Paradise Regained, Dante's Inferno and John Bunyan's The Pigrim's Progress. That you have read The Bible in great depth is obvious. Ignited - ...... is a very long book (56 Chapters) and I did not read it in full. You conclude with a very telling effect in that the words of the opening Chapter are reiterated in the beginning of the final Chapter. I think your book will be read by adherents of differing shades of Christianity and other Faiths. It has a special attraction especially if you retain your present book cover. What you have to say is well worth being spread around. There are no cockles or chaff in your take on the spiritual wisdom you impart, but pure grain that will sprout and flourish among sincere spiritual seekers after truth. You are a force for good in the world and your fine writing is witness to the healing outreach that inspires you. I will put your book on continuous Watchlist and return to it in my quiet corners of time. Backed.

Tony Brady - SCENES FROM AN EXAMINED LIFE - Books 1,2 & 3.

Vanessa Darnleigh wrote 725 days ago

An interestingly different read...I think it would be more reader-friendly if you could edit the text and avoid the congestion! Backed for now...
Best wishes
Stewart

Drew Pate wrote 725 days ago

Thank you, I'm glad that you are enjoying the story.

Hi Andrew,
I have just read the prologue and the first chapter of your manuscript, The Rise of the Saints. I must say you have an interesting tone and voice. I found your work very good, bar a few minor editing corrections, apart from this I was drawn immediately to your first character, Sara. I think this is going to be a real good read, and am looking forward to reading the end of the novel.
I will keep you informed of my progress. Well done... Nicely written.

Despinas1 wrote 725 days ago

Hi Andrew,
I have just read the prologue and the first chapter of your manuscript, The Rise of the Saints. I must say you have an interesting tone and voice. I found your work very good, bar a few minor editing corrections, apart from this I was drawn immediately to your first character, Sara. I think this is going to be a real good read, and am looking forward to reading the end of the novel.
I will keep you informed of my progress. Well done... Nicely written.

Lynne Ellison wrote 728 days ago

great spiritual romance

Diane60 wrote 728 days ago

This should do very well. It is packed with tension and great description!
:)
Diane

M.C. Holman wrote 729 days ago

Here I am for the read swap!
First off, bravo for writing a Christian spiritual warfare story. I could tell that you've done research when you paraphrased Isaiah.
However, I have these critiques: I wrote a story once that narrated the fall of Lucifer, and it was twelve pages long. I would personally suggest that you lengthen this series of events if you plan to narrate it, or else you should just summarize it. I have a few critiques: God and your angels don't feel real. Their language isn't human. And I know, they aren't human, but if you make the angels alien then us mortals won't be able to identify with them.
Another thing: Lucifer got damned just because he didn't show up when he was supposed to? That's harsh. The end with the throne room seemed rushed to me. They're in the throne room of the Most High God. Wouldn't it be a bit more awesome, in the old sense of the word?

Your events also need some looking at. Lucifer wasn't damned because he didn't answer a summons. He was banished because he tried to overthrow God. There's another verse about Satan that you need to take into account:

And there was war in heaven. Michael and his angels fought against the dragon, and the dragon and his angels fought back. 8But he was not strong enough, and they lost their place in heaven. 9The great dragon was hurled down—that ancient serpent called the devil, or Satan, who leads the whole world astray. He was hurled to the earth, and his angels with him. - Revelation 12:7-9

In summary, use that verse to show how Satan got overthrown - perhaps an epic battle scene to begin? - and make them more human. Give them some emotion besides anger. This is the fall of Lucifer, the highest angel in heaven. The world tore in half as he fell.

I look forward to hearing from you about my book!

M.C. Holman
Dragon-Children: The Secrets of Tarenhavdel


Billy Young wrote 729 days ago

Interesting concept but I'm not sure of this. The first two chapters, the intro and chapter one that is, are they really needed. Could you get away with just chapter one as the introduction, just a thought. Speed up the pace a bit so the reader can get into the tale quicker. Still as I said a good idea behind the tale. Best of luck with it.

Owen Quinn wrote 730 days ago

Fantastic pitch and cover and the start evokes images of the Helm's Deep battle from the two Towers. The imagery burns in the reaader's minds as the story progresses. The story has obviously been thought through by the author with a clear, concise path that leads the reader on smoothly. backed with pleasure.