May I Take You to Heaven?

Such a beautiful inspiring read "May I take you to Heaven" you did. How imaginative your interpretation and for those of seeking, blissful. A truly wonderful read.

Clare Be The Human Sunshine :)

May I Take you to Heaven is educational. I like it

Sharing my inner sunbeam and my book Be The Human Sunshine, I return all reads.

Blessings Clare :)

Fergus,

I love this book! The title is fantastic and the plug really gives the reader a sense of what the book is about. Way to go!

Rob

Look forward to reading your interpretation of Heaven, I have added you to my watchlist blessings Clare:) Be The Human Sunshine.

Hi Fergus,
I've just been reading 'May I Take You to Heaven'. Your writing is clear and well reasoned. This book would be a wonderful help to many who struggle to believe. The trick is in getting those people to read it! I rated your book well, and wish you good success.

Kerrie Price
THE GOD PLEASERS 40 day Study Guide

Hello Fergus:

I began reading through the first chapter of May I Take You to Heaven? and was impressed by several things: the vocabulary level, the diction, and the strength of your arguments for the existence of God. As a believer, I have heard many supporting arguments over the years but much of what you wrote was fresh to me.

There are a number of spelling/grammatical errors which need to be cleaned up, but the diction is very articulate.

Blessings to you as you proclaim His kingdom.

James Revoir

Dear Fergus,
Good for you, to write a whole book based on your convictions. I too stand in Awe of God and give Him Glory. I love Jesus above everything and everyone, and you will NOT find a greater believer than me. Read my book, it's all there.
The only argument i have, is when people say "Since i've been saved". I don't see someone who considers himself/herself a "Born again Christian", be any more beloved to God, than someone who doesn't even go to Church. IF we are all God's children, doesn't God love us all equally and unconditionally, even the most rebellious of us?
I believe we have all been saved from the time we are born. WE are Gods greatest work of art. Surely, and i'll use myself as an example. To believe in God and that Jesus died for me, makes me feel part of God's family, along with every human being on this earth. I don't believe i will be punished if i don't "become" born again. It's great that born again people feel they have been saved, they have the right to their opinion and their conviction.
Just sayin.
God bless you and everyone.
Maria
Dark of the Moon

Any book with the aim of pointing people towards christ can only be good!
Star rated
Ruth

What do you say to those who wld cherry pick from all this? They who wld choose aspects of a christian lifestyle without the belief in a deity. Relighion seems to require an emotional surrender to a state of belief. For some this is not possible. But the question remains, can a moral code be stripped from religion and god be left out of it? Is god the sort of stiffener for those moments when we may not be able to stick to the code?

Hi Orlando, thank you for your interest in my book. Belief in God is more that just a notion.

God is real, he is the reason you and I exist, if he was not real you and I would not be here interacting. Good by itself means little if there is no belief in God because then good that causes people to suffer would go unrewarded and so Christian morals cannot have God stripped out of it. I would really like to have you read the complete book since you've come this far.

What do you say to those who wld cherry pick from all this? They who wld choose aspects of a christian lifestyle without the belief in a deity. Relighion seems to require an emotional surrender to a state of belief. For some this is not possible. But the question remains, can a moral code be stripped from religion and god be left out of it? Is god the sort of stiffener for those moments when we may not be able to stick to the code?

I can't help thinking about all the Shawn's of the world who do not have their night of tears. All the thousands who die on dark street corners or in out of the way places. And of all the misery they in their turn spread around the world. And of the lucky ones between the Shawns and the dead, those many thousands who are right now, rotting in jails.

If Sanjay's tale is emotional, Richard's intellectual, Shawn's feels by far the most spiritual of the three. His story seems familiar. There must be millions of Shawns in the the world, enmired in despair, vice and crime. And millions of others who experience lesser degrees of those evils than he did. The power of the words quietly waiting there on the hotel bedside table is a powerful notion. All three of the stories make me think there are those who are 'on top of their lives' out there, kicking ass, too busy succeeding and or having a great time to worry about anything, esp the fate of losers and those, while perhaps not crushed losers like Shawn, who are weaker than the third or so of us who are living the high life in the peak of health. Yet even we may have our little immoral wevils eating away within us, weakening us from within, and even we may slip on the stairs of life one day and find ... that we are not quite as we though we were.

Richard sounds like an intelligent and gentle fellow. There is none of Sanjay's anger in him. But there is rationality and the fear created by his illness. I, confess, I have been lucky enough not to be so ill. I concede that the world might look very different from the perspective of a sickbed. Perhaps it is more the arrogance and pride of a successful, ambtious and functioning person that thrusts thoughts of religion from their lives. I too wld be shocked and impressed by the keys to the store. Of course I can see the symbolic linkage between the keys to a store and the keys to heaven. Having said that why should anyone want eternity? The notion is difficult to grasp. What wld one do? Write poetry? Clap one's hands and cause ... a big bang ... over ... there ...
Richards comments about his reading experience resonated with me. He sounds like I sometimes feel like reading stories here. Patient, sometimes bored, and then pleased to find a glinty bit. The glinty bit he highlights reminds me that this is the 400 th anniversary of the King James version of the Bible and that the langugage and poetry of the work are definitely to be celebrated for their literarly quality, other matters apart.

Sanjay's testimony fascinates. I, confess, I don't believe in god, but nor do I disbelieve in him. I just never think of him either way. The notion of Sanay wanting to fight with Christians astonishes me. The passage on the big bang fascinates me. I have always thought that the theory was inadequate. I mean what was there before it? Was it a poem that went wrong? Are we floating around on crumbs of some failed creation? And who was the poet? I must read more about B.B.B. (before big bang). Anyway, I do not consider myself an atheist, much as I don't consider myself a non-skier. It just does not occur to me. I don't feel any anger to Christians though. And I am cheered to know there is no racism in the bible. That is good. The feelings of dislike for others I can understand though. Misanthropy is a mind set i resort to from time to time. And am perfectly happy there in my singular bubble. Not always, but sometimes. Good luck to Sanjay.

I should be working for my capitalist boss, but I have been reading you this morning.
Firstly, I was surprised to learn that I had misread defeateddragon. I thought it meant that you were somehow the dragon defeated. Now I realise that the meaning is that you defeated said dragon. The image is very fresh and the nature of the dream dramatic. This encouraged me to read on.
I like the way you deploy a directly reasoning and questioning approach. This made me think of Aristotle. Questions and answers, questions and answers!
Your approach smacks more of philosophy and reason than a stern bible-based didacticism. This is very sensible as it does not put people off and is more likely to appeal to the rationalist sceptic. Indeed, the way you seek to strike up a gentle debate with and within your reader has a charm about it. There is intelligence in play in your writing. You do not hector in any way. You are seeking to give pointers rather than lead, as though you want your reader to make his or her own mind up.
I was particularly engaged by sections 4 and 6. I will come back and read the testimonys later to see how the new elements work.

Hello Fergus, God here ... needless to say I approve of your words. Keep up the good work. Should you care for a little piece of heaven on earth may I suggest WATCHING SWIFTS by Orlando Furioso for its moral undertones. Good must always win, despite what the cynics say. A thousand blessings.

I read ch 1 and 7 then moved around in the text.

2nd Testimony--forgot the s

You have gentle, conversational style. Obviously, you've put a lot of time and thought into your approach. A life's work.

I do have a few pieces of constructive criticism I'll leave in your messages.

Always enjoy a Christian read. Appears to be a Wake Up to faith discussion. Will read.
Tom Balderston
The Wonder of Terra

Thought provoking and written in a lovely, talkative, style that pulls the reader in - backed and best wishes
Diane
Good Blood

Thank you for backing Mary Magdalene; My Story. I have just begun to read your book, May I take You to Heaven? I like your friendly, direct style. I have watchlisted it so I can read more and will most likely book shelf it soon.

Dear Brother Fergus Davar,

Amen to you, Brother Fergus, and write on in your conversational, friendly style. Bring brothers and sisters to the Lord and continue on your blessed journey in May I Take You to Heaven.

Your friend,

GK Stritch
CBGB Was My High School
(a true story of conversion)

Hi

You have a clear writing style. This needs an edit as you have a few spelling mistakes. An interesting take on interpreting the bible and christianity.
Backed.
A return read and comment would be appreciated.
cheers olga

I like your questions, and (as a Christian) appreciate your answers. A 'borderline' or struggling christian may be encouraged by your writings, so maybe that's your market but non christians (in my experienc - married to an atheiist) are unlukely to be drawn in. you have wonderful drive and enhusiasm,. if you are to be published you need to target your market .... and adjust your pitch accordingly. I do wish you well and pray your endeavours will bear fruit!

Hi Fergus,you put over your points in a very acceptable way.
Your book is well written and clear to understand.
Your style of writing has a nice comfortable feel to it as well which can only involve the reader further.
I wish you well with your book and of course back it. SHELVED.

Many thanks for backing my book, much appreciated.

kind regards,

Neville (The Secrets Of The Forest - Series)

MAY I TAKE YOU TO HEAVEN?-Fergus Davar
hullo Vergus. thank you for sharing your beliefs and insights into eternity. Already shelved and backed.
Please take a look at my book if you have not and thanks for that.
Linda Lou Long
Southern dis-Comfort
http://www.authonomy.com/ViewBook.aspx?bookid=11421

Most of this book seems to consist of direct quotes from the bible, but you have your own additions to make. There is an interesting warning for instance, that if the wrong person throws demons out of someone, they run a risk that the demons might enter themselves in place of the original victim.
There are still quite a lot of errors of spelling, so more editing is needed. eg, 'crucification' or 'cricucification' in Chapter 4, should be 'crucifixion.' This is an important error for a book about Jesus. Also 'you self' should be 'yourself' and 'may be' should be 'maybe.' Grammar: Often , you miss the 's' on words, sometimes on verbs where it is needed, sometimes on plurals. eg 'five chapter' should be 'chapters.'
You have put a lot of work into this sermon. All you need is an appreciative audience. From previous reviews, there are many people who will take your message to heart. Marj.

@M A McRae
I would have appreciated your comments to be constructive but it seems like your hatred for the Christian faith is great. You seem to be full of contempt and have taken much time and effort to find fault with this book but what I am happy about is that my book made an unbeliever like you feel uneasy... so your conscience convicts you but you are so filled with guilt that you cannot accept so much of negative feedback. You may reply to me via mail, keep out of my comments section.

Most of this book seems to consist of direct quotes from the bible, but you have your own additions to make. There is an interesting warning for instance, that if the wrong person throws demons out of someone, they run a risk that the demons might enter themselves in place of the original victim.
There are still quite a lot of errors of spelling, so more editing is needed. eg, 'crucification' or 'cricucification' in Chapter 4, should be 'crucifixion.' This is an important error for a book about Jesus. Also 'you self' should be 'yourself' and 'may be' should be 'maybe.' Grammar: Often , you miss the 's' on words, sometimes on verbs where it is needed, sometimes on plurals. eg 'five chapter' should be 'chapters.'
You have put a lot of work into this sermon. All you need is an appreciative audience. From previous reviews, there are many people who will take your message to heart. Marj.

Thank you for backing Abandoned Hearts. It is because of this that I looked you up. I am sincere when I say it is a pleasure to back your book. I am proud of you for standing up for the Savior we share. May He bless your efforts and continue to use you in broadening His kingdom!

interesting and intelligent exposition of Christianity

Lynne Ellison

The Green Bronze Mirror

I have a few people in mind who could benefit from this. It's the kind of stuff we should have in the glovebox of our cars -- just in case ministering leads to a whole lot of questions.

You sent me a message and my first thought was, "Oh no, with that user name he obviously hasn't read my bio and doesn't know I only read in line with my Christian values." (I get a stream of messages from people asking me to read then it turns out to be about the dark arts or magic!) How wrong I was with you though. I hope others don't miss this work by making the same assumption.

I will add you to my prayer list.

Hello Fergus, This is beautiful writing and I am so glad that I have read some of it. I wish you so much luck with this. It is thought-provoking and gentle. BACKED with pleasure.
Thank you for backing my story A PASSING STORM.
Best wishes
Phyllis
A PASSING STORM

This is a very refreshing read. I found that it approached Christianity in a much more practical way than a lot of books do. It also answers many of the more obvious questions that non-believers have. It does exactly what the title promises.

Tracy
The Candyfloss Room

This is most inspirational, and leaves much room for thought.

Hi Fergus, Many thanks for backing "The Doctor of Summitville" and for calling my attention to your book. Sincerity is your best card, and it's strongly manifest in your writing. For all I know, "May I Take You to Heaven?" might be a best seller among all those lost souls out there. If it saves even one, it's worth my humble backing. Best of luck, Bill

This is not a difficult book to back simply because it is an admirable effort on your behalf to enlighten those less aware.
I confess it is unlikely to change my life, but I have found it interesting to read and commend you for the way you have presented your thoughts, findings and beliefs.
I offer no criticism, it would be crass of me to do so. All I need to do, is support you by backing this. Margaret.

Thank you Margaret for your appreciation, comments and backing, My book by itself cannot change anything but my book points you to Jesus, who can do all things.

This is not a difficult book to back simply because it is an admirable effort on your behalf to enlighten those less aware.
I confess it is unlikely to change my life, but I have found it interesting to read and commend you for the way you have presented your thoughts, findings and beliefs.
I offer no criticism, it would be crass of me to do so. All I need to do, is support you by backing this. Margaret.

Thank you for spreading Gods word! gracie a perfect life

May I take you to heaven?
Backed
Lenny Harry
(Like a dot on the horizon)

Fergus,

What you're attempting to do is certainly a daunting task and one which I greatly respect you for. I have not read all of what you've written but have gone through the first two chapters fairly briefly. Personally I would advise you to expand on the subject matter within the first chapter, if the book is to be taken seriously by non-believers this is a crucial section as it deals with a logical and scientific grounding for the existence of God. I like that you address that the universe being created Ex Nihilo is a large problem for the atheist view, but I think that it should be expanded to explain the true logical absurdity of the situation. I would also use the scientific explination of the Big Bang, not as a proof for the beginning of the universe. I would suggest reading some academics, scholars, and scientists like William Lane Craig, Micheal Behe, Norman Geisler, J.P. Moore and perhaps even Alvin Plantinga. Great work! Please continue following the path that God has presented to you, your commitment to your Creator is truly a worthy and commendable asset!

Best Regards,
Kyle Derkson

Thanks Kyle, I have heard about Michael Behe. It will take me sometime to go through all their work, i doubt that I would be able to incorporate all their work but I will try. Thank you advising

Fergus,

What you're attempting to do is certainly a daunting task and one which I greatly respect you for. I have not read all of what you've written but have gone through the first two chapters fairly briefly. Personally I would advise you to expand on the subject matter within the first chapter, if the book is to be taken seriously by non-believers this is a crucial section as it deals with a logical and scientific grounding for the existence of God. I like that you address that the universe being created Ex Nihilo is a large problem for the atheist view, but I think that it should be expanded to explain the true logical absurdity of the situation. I would also use the scientific explination of the Big Bang, not as a proof for the beginning of the universe. I would suggest reading some academics, scholars, and scientists like William Lane Craig, Micheal Behe, Norman Geisler, J.P. Moore and perhaps even Alvin Plantinga. Great work! Please continue following the path that God has presented to you, your commitment to your Creator is truly a worthy and commendable asset!

Best Regards,
Kyle Derkson

An important text and what that should be read.

BACKED

Hi Fergus:

Excellent testimony and witness to Jesus Christ -- the only Way to heaven and the only Truth about heaven and the only Door into heaven. May Christ continue to bless you and enable you to continue serving Him. Your fellow-yoke brother! Backed!

Lorne

Hi Fergus:

Excellent testimony and witness to Jesus Christ -- the only Way to heaven and the only Truth about heaven and the only Door into heaven. May Christ continue to bless you and enable you to continue serving Him. Your fellow-yoke brother! Backed!

Lorne

I like this so much. Backed, but must tell you there is much need for editing. I hope you have a friend who is gifted in the English language.

Your straight forward writing approach is perfect for your genre of book. Your Christian faith clearly shines through and I do like the messages which you impart. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

Engaging. Powerful. Thought provoking. Inspirational. Convincing. Credible. Backed.

Okay, I was expecting a lot of bible references (which always puts me off!) but you refrain from that (though one did creep in early on!). I actually liked this, though I do think it might need a little rearranging. To my mind, the most powerful spiritual books are those which don't preach, which don't lecture - which show people as humans, but struggling with large spiritual crises and ideas - which let people come to their own decisions rather than having them forced upon them. I think you have the potential to do that with this book. I'm not sure - part of me wonders if it might be more powerful to have a testimony up front - to start with a human story...a real story....but then again, I'm not sure. I like your science too.
Hey, bottom line, I'm not sure I'm your market and I can't honestly offer any meaningful crit here - I'm a bit out of my depth. But I do think your book has plenty of potential and I can see a market so I'm more than happy to give you my backing.
btw, sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you. jxx

May I take you to Heaven?
Fergus I read your book with an open mind and you certainly gave me food for thought. There are some points I could argue with but who am I to say that I know better than you. You use logic in an impressive way. I hope this book does well for you.
Wilma1
Knowing Liam Riley – I hope you can spare a moment to take a look

I backed this work for its committment and effort. My view and those in this work could possibly meet in the middle as I also believe we had help from a highly advanced species, supreme beings if you will. The man made religious interpretations can now be viewed for what they are.