Book Jacket

 

rank 5463
word count 82156
date submitted 12.04.2010
date updated 15.06.2010
genres: Literary Fiction, Thriller, Horror,...
classification: adult
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The Natural Order of Things

Kevin P. Keating

A number of strange and startling characters struggle to make their way through the halls of a Jesuit school on a fateful Halloween day.

 

In this labyrinthine but meticulously plotted novel, Kevin P. Keating introduces readers to a number of carefully drawn characters who struggle to make their way through the halls of a Jesuit school on a fateful Halloween day.

There is the star quarterback who finds himself entangled in the lives of a prostitute and a seemingly opportunistic and seductive teacher. There is the lead guitarist of a death metal band who begins a dangerous affair with the owner of a local cafe. There is the down and out football coach whose gambling addiction forces him to wager more than his dignity. There is the ancient priest whose heretical platitudes infuriate his superiors. There is the editor of the school literary magazine who mourns the recent death of her husband. As the story unfolds we also meet a duplicitous housekeeper, a chronically unemployed handyman, a mischievous dog, an insatiable landlady, and a madman roaming the streets of the city in search of his next victim.

Portions of this book have been nominated for several prestigious awards, including the Pushcart Prize. Read and find out why "The Natural Order of Things" has impressed so many.

 
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Eveleen wrote 676 days ago

A well written story
Backed
Lennty Harry (Like a dot on the horizon)
Hope you'll look at mine

Keating wrote 704 days ago

Hi, Greg,

Yes, I lost my faith in this site quite awhile ago but have kept my book posted here anyway. You never know who might spot your work. I've been stuck at the #1700 spot or so for months with no chance at all of my manuscript ending up on the editor's desk. A small publisher out of Texas (The Drill Press) has agreed to publish the book but it's a small operation and all marketing is left to the author.

I checked out your blog and saw that you live (part-time) in Mexico and Austin, Texas? I also saw that you were in Taxco not too long ago. I just read in the papers that there has been some trouble there (a shooting?). Big tourist area, right? It does look like Greece.

I'll have to check some of your work out. I hope you have better luck here. It's tough. Most of the books that get "recognized" are thrillers/mysteries.

All the best,
Kevin




The more I find highly inventive and well-written books like yours with few backers, the more I lose faith in things Authonomic. What the h_ ll?

I'm not that deep into the Natural Order of Things yet, but I've seen very positive literary signs, and continue to click away.

Forget what the herd thinks. This book is worthy of my shelf, for sure.

Backed,

G

P.S. Your list of favorite books is fantastic, too.

mclevin wrote 704 days ago

The more I find highly inventive and well-written books like yours with few backers, the more I lose faith in things Authonomic. What the h_ ll?

I'm not that deep into the Natural Order of Things yet, but I've seen very positive literary signs, and continue to click away.

Forget what the herd thinks. This book is worthy of my shelf, for sure.

Backed,

G

P.S. Your list of favorite books is fantastic, too.

Owen Quinn wrote 710 days ago

backed with please. mysterious, evocative, vivd imagery, good plot, a movie will be welcomed.

Barry Wenlock wrote 717 days ago

Hi Kevin, this is a very polished and professional piece of work, with incredibly good dialogue and poetic narrative.

Backed with pleasure, Barry

Little Krisna and the Bihar Boys

lynn clayton wrote 718 days ago

For me a list of characters is the best pitch to entice me to read a book. I think it's no coincidence that they include the best prose. This is the sort of thriller I'd read when not on Authonomy. Brilliant. Backed. Lynn

zan wrote 724 days ago

The Natural Order of Things
Kevin P. Keating

Unfailingly delightful and creative. Chapter one, "Vigil" is simply brilliant. You must have some real talent to weave a thriller/horror with the threads of literary fiction. Good plot, engaging, memorable characters but I love your use of language and your competence with words, more. "A storm has blown in off the lake, and freezing rain pelts the windows like small stones hurled by the tiny hands of angels." "Behind him the gothic bell tower rises stately and imperturbable above the evening, above the decades and the centuries, and somewhere within its shadow a thousand eyes watch and wait, never letting him out of their sight." You do so much so well. Your writing sparkles, and your storyline including how you progress it here forceful and totally compelling. More than happy to have backed this.

lionel25 wrote 727 days ago

Kevin, your first section is a smooth, literary read. I can definitely learn a few things from your work.

Backed with pleasure.

Joffrey (The Silver Spoon Effect)

CraigD wrote 729 days ago

Very nice tone to this, and the writing style complements well the subject matter. Happy to back this for you.
Please consider taking a look at my book, The Job.
Craig

A Knight wrote 730 days ago

I love the gothic tone to this. Your descriptions put us in mind of towering edifices and twisting ginnels. It was the setting, painted so vividly, that drew me in. One thing the editor in me noticed is that the first paragraph appears to be just one sentence, broken by semi-colons, commas, the usual. This could be stylistic - but I thought I'd flag it up just in case you wanted to break it up. I'm torn between recommending it to stop the reader getting confused and losing focus, and wondering whether it would adversley affect the flow.

Either way, it's up to you, but this is a wonderfully sculpted piece, and I've backed it with pleasure.
Abi xxx

Daniel Manning wrote 741 days ago

The Natural Order of Things comes across as a coming of age story, a bit like St Elmos Fire, but with a more Gothic, darker twist. The descriptive writing is so superior in the opening paragraphs, that the picture the author is trying to convey, becomes locked in ones mind. Repraochable archaic stuctures and buildings surround the pinnacle of architectural magnificence, the Jesiut school, preserved like some temple, while forlon and crumbling, the neighbouring tenements melt away.
Now transpose that to the character of Frank, redouptable, dependable, star football player, corrupted by women, booze and drugs, so he melts away at the all important game.

So I don't know about St Elmos Fire, the Natural Order of Things comes across more like Death in Venice. With a great title and equally great writing, I'm backing this, and putting it on my watchlist.

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 742 days ago

Extremely well written and very hard to put down. Very well done. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

Rusty Bernard wrote 742 days ago

Hi there,

If I have given you my backing I have read the pitch, loved it and then at least two chapters of your very fine work.

Then, if you do not help me with my Psychiatric Evaluation it will be partly your fault that I am stressed out and can no longer spend time on this site.

Lots of writers may than suffer breakdowns because of this!!!
RB

Roger Thurling wrote 743 days ago

All that I have read in this book is written well or very well - interesting characters, plot, description and dialogue, all in carefully crafted prose. However, I must cynically add, this is Literary Fiction, which will account for the fact that it is not doing terribly well in the 'league table'. Recent experience of Authonomy (eg the last five to the 'Editor's Desk') shows Thriller: 5, Literary Fiction Nil. May I suggest that if the league table is important, the author replaces 'catholicism, literature and jesuits' in the tags with, for example: 'thriller, horror, crime, vampires'.
No, please don't.
All the very best wishes for this, Kevin - it's a good book, and I'm sure you know it.
Don't change it.
I doff my cap.
RT

RichardBard wrote 763 days ago

This is a wonderfully written piece of work. The prose is clean, but powerful. It flows smoothly, drawing the reader in. But it's the colorful cast of characters and the hints of humor that make this compelling for me. I'm happy to back it.

Richard Bard
BRAINRUSH (2010 ABNA Quarter-Finalist)

SusieGulick wrote 764 days ago

Dear Kevin, I love literary fiction & that it is based on fact, but it is hard to believe that this really happened. Your blurb is good because it prepared me to read your book. Your story is a good read because you create interest by having short paragraphs & lots of dialogue, which makes me want to keep reading to find out what's going to happen next. I'm backing/commenting on your book to help it advance. Could you please return the favor by taking a moment to back/comment on my TWO books, "He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not" & the unedited version? "Tell Me True Love Stories." Thanks, Susie :)

blueboy wrote 765 days ago

Interesting voice you have here and a compelling narrative. Based on the opitch and the first couple of chapters I will back you and wish you the best of luck. Please read some of my book, The Age of Rhinestone, when you have time and let me know what you think. Feedback is always welcome. Take care and goodluck with your manuscript.

blueboy

soutexmex wrote 765 days ago

Kevin: the Pushcart Prize? This writing is good so I am SHELVING you.

Though I have been a very active member for over a year, I can still use your comments on my book when you get the chance. Every little bit helps. Cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

mikegilli wrote 768 days ago

Inspired and inspiring.
I enjoyed the gags and the tongue in cheek style.
An inclusive humanist vision.
No typos seen,
backed with enjoyment.......mikegilli The Free

Malcolm Judge wrote 768 days ago

I'm going to back this simply on the strength of the ambitiousness of that first sentence. If I get time I'll get on to the second one.

mvw888 wrote 768 days ago

This is truly exceptional writing. Your opening paragraph is vibrant and alive; it pulls the reader in like thread on a spool. I did have a little tic over your use of the semi-colon in this first paragraph. Wasn't really sure the distinction there and why you used it when you did. Overall, the framing of the story is great and I love that your prose is riddled with surprising elements. Your Jesuits, with their attorneys eager for "blood sport" and their strained relationship with the beer deliveryman, are unlike what would normally come to mind when the word Jesuit comes up. They seem to signify an order, but a commercial, business-driven order. Intriguing. Love that Will is the Minotaur--in what way will he be a bull in a china shop? Or is it a bull market at some point? Is he a commodity? Another personal issue I have is profanity. I'm honestly not a prude, really. I just find that sometimes, profanity cheapens a work. It's off-putting to me, especially when it comes early in a novel. I guess I need to be eased into it; I need to know that it serves a legitimate and important purpose, especially if it's going to be extreme. I understand that Will is a macho athlete at a frat-type party, I get that. Still put off by it. I think it cheapens your writing, which is amazing. Just my opinion. Love this work though, am so impressed with your style, your descriptions and observations.

jammer wrote 770 days ago

Kevin, this might just be a work of genius - I usually baulk at such in-depth description, but you manage to hold interest and weave some kind of narrative spell which meant I was sucked into the rich story-world you create, and then the effortless 'there is a mad-man at work' - the classic story hook, but wrapped up in descriptive magic - compulsive and clever - what I've read so far is excellent. Very well done.

gillyflower wrote 770 days ago

This is an excellent book, full of fascinating characters and events. Will is a colourful, attractive person, someone we can't help liking. It seems that he only wants to do something kind for Frank, but in fact he practically destroys Frank's life. Frank's presence at Will's party the night before the big match and especially his drinking, smoking dope, and sleeping with Tamar, make him unfit for the game, and it's no wonder the team loses 28 - 3. But Frank has already become disillusioned before this, and unsure if he wants his sports career to continue or not. Your writing is crisp, clear, easy to read, and also vivid and full of pictures and imagery which bring your settings and characters to life. You are consistently funny, but you write about serious subjects, too, the eviction of the local people, the risk to the homeless and the prostitutes. A book which grips from the start. Backed.
Gerry McCullough,
Belfast Girls.

Joss64 wrote 771 days ago

Backed with pleasure! Jocelyn E. Morris (A Bore No More)

lynn clayton wrote 772 days ago

Character and beautiful prose - the sort of book I read when not on Authonomy. Backed. Lynn

lizjrnm wrote 772 days ago

This is writing at its best. It is no surprise that these interconnecting stories have won awards. I have read through chapter three - the only mistake I saw was in Box (2) part 10 He patiently waits for Maggie to go (to) I believe you wanted say but otherwise perfectly polished so far! Backed with pleasure.

Liz
The Cheech Room

Cait wrote 772 days ago

The Natural Order of Things:

A good read, well written with interesting characters and when tweaked a little it will be an even better read.

Had time to read only the first chapter. Will back it now and keep it on my watchlist for further reading.

All the best,

Cáit ~ Muckers ~

Melcom wrote 772 days ago

An excellent read accomplished characters from the get go, who use authentic dialogue, well done, no mean feat!!

Very polished and your premise promises this read is going to be good all the way through the book.

Happily shelved

Melxx
Impeding Justice

Burgio wrote 772 days ago

I used to teach at a Jesuit school so your pitch popped out at me. Your story kept my interest because this is not your average school. You have a good mix of slightly zanny characters here, You have a lot of long descriptive paragraphs, especilaly in the beginning that you might try to break up. People glance through the first chapter of a book in a bookstore to see if it looks like an easy read; long paragraphs make it look like an intense read. And it would be a shame if someone passed this by because of such a simple thing. They'd miss a good read. I’m adding this to my shelf. Burgio (Grain of Salt).

Jim Darcy wrote 772 days ago

Not sure which is the most 'foreign', the Jesuit school or the football background! You quickly establish character and have an ear for speech patterns that define those characters. In the light of present revelations about the Catholic Church you will either make many friends with this or annoy some quarters! I love a bit of controversy! Jim Darcy The Firelord's Crown

Suzannah Burke wrote 772 days ago

Kevin, it is difficult to make comment on a work of art. This is just that, a work polished, perfected, and crafted lovingly--by an artist for whom every word and each inflection must add to and not deflect the colour of the artistry.

That is about as flowery as I am ever likely to get. This is a beautiful piece of workmanship, I am ill prepared to comment other than a reader who began reading and could not stop. There are some wonderfully talented people on this site...and another had just joined the ranks.
Bravo.
Backed with the utmost pleasure.
Suzannah Burke.

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