SPACE MISSION

Avraham, it appears our books have something in common (Mossad). Are you still around the site?
Bob

I have been away from Authonomy bysy promoting another book. I have revized the Space Mission completely and just uploaded the first 10 chapters. If you like spy and intrigue plots, you'll like this one.

Avraham

Avraham, it appears our books have something in common (Mossad). Are you still around the site?
Bob

This sounds like an interesting concept. I too have written a spy thriller, so I am always on the look out for some good espionage in the form of fiction. I've put Space Mission on my wl and plan to take a look at it in the next couple of days.

- Jean Kinkade
The Zero Line

Thanks for your comment/. I'll read your book's description and back it.

Avraham
Space Mission

Backed you strictly based on your pitch and the first few pages. Perhaps you'd reciprocate and see whether NO RAPTURE's factual fiction merits your backing, as well?

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
NO RAPTURE

Your use of short, almost staccato like sentences woven into short paragraphs coupled with crisp, well written dialogue keeps the pace of your story flowing nicely. I do like your compelling storyline for it is believeable and taught with tension. Your book is character rich, I do like how you develope Avner, and your descriptive writing makes your thriller a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

Backed you strictly based on your pitch and the first few pages. Perhaps you'd reciprocate and see whether NO RAPTURE's factual fiction merits your backing, as well?

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
NO RAPTURE

Hello DP walker

Thanks for backing my Space Mission. I already backed your five dares.

Avraham

Hi Avraham
This is a great story and I think you've got a great concept here. You've obviously done your research well as the subject matter is covered expertly. It is well paced and full of action. Best of luck with it,
DP Walker
Five Dares

Dear Susie Q.

Thanks for your comment.

My Hidden Scroll is completed and I am concentrating now on my Space Mission thriller which may turn out to be a second thriller of a trilogy. The hero in all three is the same Professor Avner. I already have a plan for the third book.

I am even thinking of coining a new word for the next versions of the Webster, Oxford and Cambridge dictionaries. I may call my there books "THE AVNER THRILOGY". What is your opinion?

Regards,
Avraham
Author of the Avner Thrilogy, HA, Ha, Ha.

Dear Avraham, This is your 2nd book, I have read & am backing. It is just as well done with a lot of intrigue. You have nice crisp paragraphs & dialogue. Am I to expect a 3rd book, now? You have already backed my 2 memoir books. :) Thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

Dear Avraham, This is your 2nd book, I have read & am backing. It is just as well done with a lot of intrigue. You have nice crisp paragraphs & dialogue. Am I to expect a 3rd book, now? You have already backed my 2 memoir books. :) Thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

Thank you Mary M. for your comment. I do have a problem in finding the happy medium between having too many tags and not enough of them. I'l review the chapter and implement you suggestions.

Avraham
Space Mission

This is a good story that develops well but I believe it needs some proofing. The phone conversation in chapter 1 -- need tags interspersed throughout, ensuring the reader knows who's talking. Some transitional sentences are missing -- he tells the secretary to get someone on the phone then the next sentence he's in conversation without being notified he's on the line. Good development -- backed.

Mary M. -- Heartstrings

Hello Mary Webster

Thanks for your comment on my Space Mission. I'll look at your book soon.

Avraham Anouchi

Hi Avraham! I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading your opening chapter. I love spy thrillers and yours is fast-paced and edgy. You have a flair for upping the ante with every page. BACKED!

Hello Stevew,

Thanks for your comment. I''l back you book and will ook at it after the weekend

Avraham

The structure and content reads very impressive - The tone is espionage, and that will excite any reader, so therefore, the flow will be set by the reader - Very clever writing!

This read will build and build the readers expectations, leading the reader to an excitable crescendo.

I wish you every success.

Stevew
The Ultimate/The Authors Cut

The structure and content reads very impressive - The tone is espionage, and that will excite any reader, so therefore, the flow will be set by the reader - Very clever writing!

This read will build and build the readers expectations, leading the reader to an excitable crescendo.

I wish you every success.

Stevew
The Ultimate/The Authors Cut

Hello Sandie

Thank you for your encouraging comment. Only yesteday I posted the first 10,000 words of my new thriler. You are the first person to write a comment. I appreciate it and I'll look at your book during this weekend

Avraham
Space Mission


This book encapsulates why I love thrillers. For a start I love the cover, stunning picture and the idea of top secret drawings going missing made me want to read on. I was not disappointed I can see the view that you describe and imagine the relentless snow. The opening tells us that something is going to happen and we want to know what. Excellent writing sets the scene well and keeps the reader hooked, very well done and backed.

Sandie
The Crown of Crysaldor

This book encapsulates why I love thrillers. For a start I love the cover, stunning picture and the idea of top secret drawings going missing made me want to read on. I was not disappointed I can see the view that you describe and imagine the relentless snow. The opening tells us that something is going to happen and we want to know what. Excellent writing sets the scene well and keeps the reader hooked, very well done and backed.

Sandie
The Crown of Crysaldor