The Words That I Speak: Glorifying God Through My Everyday Conversations

Glad to see such an important book being written. I think this is great. God Bless.

Hi Addy!

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Sincerely,
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Great to see encouraging books like this, but I agree with D L Stoup's comment below about boys. All the best with it.

I loved this. You have a good writing style and a good testimony. Best of luck with your future writing and God's blessings. I would appreciate you reading and commenting on December Gold, a Christian historical fiction novel. Again, thank you for sharing this book.
--author of December Gold

Backed with pleasure, I wish you the very best with it. E.Loraine Royal Blood Chronicles book one

"Electrifying portrayal of not just mind over matter, but mouth over mayhem...Helps reestablish the intricate power of communication from serene whispers to resounding shouts."

With Regards,

Mark L. Kelsey

I like the topic of this book, and you have a very easy to read style of writing. I do think it's a shame, however, to state in your short pitch that this is for teen girls. What about the boys? They talk too much too, and could benefit as well. Don't limit your audience by such a large degree. :)

I like that you've taken on this subject and have done it very well, I like the pitch as well, good luck, backed E.Loraine Royal Blood Chronicles book one

This is a well written book on an important subject. Yes, what we say matters. You rightly quote James about the difficulty of controlling the tongue, and I suppose every Christian knows how true this is. You wisely divide your thoughts into a number of chapters, each dealing with particular ways we can use words, and helping us by the questions, to think through what we actually do in each area. I particularly liked the quotation from the psalms, where David says, 'My soul is among lions...men whose teeth are spears and arrows, and whose tongue is a sharp sword.' This is an experience most of us have suffered. An excellent and important book, which will be of great use to everyone who reads it. Backed.
Gerry McCullough,
Belfast Girls.

I learned about "slam books" from your work. The work is an inspiration for all to read. Thanks for sharing. Chuck (Paperboy Adventures)

You have a chosen a great topic; nothing destroys the Body faster than gossip. I pray that this will reach far and wide. Good luck in your journey and God Bless.

Drew Pate

Welcome, Addy. This is a great place to improve your craft. You know, I would normally complain about these types of pitches that just 'tell'. But you know, both of these actually work for me. For your genre, it fits perfectly. The writing is good so I am SHELVING you.

Though I have been a very active member for over a year, I can still use your comments on my book when you get the chance. Every little bit helps. Cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

This book is a step by step guide to better spiritual health through being more careful what words you use. I'm surprised you say in your ptich this is intended for teenage girls as I think it applies to a much wider audience than that; I could use your advice myself. I'm adding this to my shelf. Burgio (Grain of Salt).

I am a bible teacher and am writing for YA today...I love this book...it flows so easily...it's a quick read...but very relevant and necessary for our youth today. I pray that you will have tremendous success with your career...good luck to you, Jen (Bridges) Backed 100%

Dear Addy, I love that you've laid out that we shall all give account before the Lord for our words. :) God bless you. :) This book (as does the whole Bible) applies to everyone God has chosen. I'm so happy it will be read round the world, as my memoir of 2 books that I'll name below - God will accomplish His purpose in each of our lives. Pleasing God in everything - thought, word, deed in a word LOVE, is where it's at. Your blurb, table of contents, introduction, & conclusion were all good because it encompassed what your book content was. :) The Word of God is quick & powerful & won't return, so your book is a good read because you create interest by having short paragraphs & questions at the end of each chapter for self application, which makes me want to keep reading to find out what you are going to say next. I'm backing/commenting on your book to help it advance. Could you please return the favor by taking a moment to back/comment on my testimon in TWO books, "He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not" & the unedited version? "Tell Me True Love Stories." Thanks, Susie :)