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rank 5463
word count 21987
date submitted 27.04.2010
date updated 01.06.2011
genres: Literary Fiction, Thriller, Fantasy...
classification: universal
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THE SPINE CHILLING ADVENTURES OF THE MIME

Shinben Gozai

Teenaged boy Edward Parnassus, drawn into a savage world of international espionage, eventually transforms into "the world's deadliest and spookiest assassin."

 

What if one fine day you opened a mysterious package wrapped in brown paper and twine, postmarked Lisbon, Portugal, to discover a stack of blue notebooks and a bundle of yellowing pulp magazines ( Black Mask, Dime Detective, Chilling Adventures,&c), along with a brief letter from a stranger informing you that your recently deceased great uncle Edward, whom you never met in life or even knew existed, was in fact a dark, avenging pulp hero known as The Mime -- "the world's deadliest and spookiest assassin"? Would you plunge into reading the notebooks?

The Spine Chilling Adventures of the Mime is a literary mystery, a knowing homage to the great pulp spy/adventure stories of the '30's and '40's, and a tragic study of love, revenge and terror. It opens with the discovery of a family secret in a cache of yellowing documents and unfolds in a series of shocking revelations and tense action spanning the globe. It also deals in some depth with the occult. The Mime himself is an avenging pulp hero in the classic mold, like the flawed and  tormented yet sympathetic figures in Dumas' The Man in the Iron Mask and Trevanian's Shibumi.

 
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James26 wrote 580 days ago

This is so well written!! I really enjoy your style, its fresh and very enticing. A great read, thank you!!! Regards James. (Their Limbo Lives)

homewriter wrote 642 days ago

Great idea. Well constructed work. Irresistible. Gordon - THe Harpist of Madrid

andrew skaife wrote 655 days ago

Your invocation of language is sublime and I appreciate the delicacy with which you deploy your structure. To grab attention there is a necessity to write but eloquently but also excitingly and you manage both with gusto.

BACKED of course.

DP Walker wrote 715 days ago

Dear Shinben
Very eloquent use of language. You certainly have a way with words and I lost myself in the sttory. You've also mentioned my favourite park in Paris - Luxembourg which helped me visualise the end of the first chapter clearly. You have a great imagniation and have crafted this well into your book.
Backed
DP Walker
Five Dares

CraigD wrote 719 days ago

I've always been creeped out by clowns. Do others feel the same about mimes? Probably. This story has got just the right voice, and the writing is filled with wonderful little bits of detail. It fits the character's name "Noir" exquisitely. I see no technical weaknesses in the writing, and the premise and the way you've pulled it off are just right. Easy to back this.
Craig
The Job

Beval wrote 724 days ago

This is magnificent.
A real spiffing yarn.
It reminded me of Boys Own Paper and all those splendid adventure stories written in the 20s. I have a small guilty collection of these with wonderful titles like "Matched Against Alva." and "True Stories of Brave Deeds".
The writing is perfect, a homage to past glories, but with just enough tongue in cheek to leaven the pudding.
I can't remember the last time i enjoyed anything so much. I want to sit in a big armchair with a long glass of something fairly alcholic and read this cover to glorious cover.

KW wrote 725 days ago

Yes, I would read the notebooks. This is a very intriguing story. I like the notion that a dead relative may have been a pulp hero. Everyone would love to have an unknown great uncle who wills you something very intriguing. Of course, though, you may get something you didn't bargain for. I love the lines in the pulp magazines: "Please don't squeeze the dame so tight. I don't want her porcelain skin to welt. On the other hand, you can jug the mutt all you want." Nice. I'll be back to read more when I get a little time. Backed for now.

Andy M. Potter wrote 725 days ago

Hi Shinben, enticing read. on my shelf.
i said i'd pass on some "picky" comments. sorry, couldn't find any quibbles. ;)
you've created an intricate and completely believable fictional world.
your prose and narrative tone are, for me, reminiscent of Borges. nice one!
best, andy

scottkenny wrote 727 days ago

Hi Shinben. What an enticing pitch. I admire your inventiveness and your rich imagination, and your writing style is perfectly honed for this genre. You're a natural story teller. This story drew me in and I now have to drag myself away so I can do other things that I need to do.
Best wishes, Scott.

Jim Darcy wrote 729 days ago

I think I like the bold emissions as much as the actual text! This is finely done and with great aplomb. Edward makes for a very droll hero and the cliches are somehow not cliches but highly amusing narrative devices. Thanks for sharing this. I think I prefer it to Vampire Lover but just IMO.
Jim Darcy
The Firelord's Crown

lynn clayton wrote 730 days ago

I like the innocent, deceptively easy style for this far from innocent thriller. It's a joy to read and a thrill to read. brilliant. Backed. Lynn

Andrew Burans wrote 730 days ago

Your use of the first person narrative coupled with your highly descriptive writing style makes your finely crafted fantasy thriller a pleasure to read. I especially liked your light use of foreshadowing in the prologue. Your work is well paced, well written and your use of imagery is excellent. Backed with pleasure.

Cheers,
Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

Bhandbook wrote 730 days ago

I love old-fashioned adventure stories like this, or at least I did when I was in my youth. I like that you started with a letter which also adds to the "Boys Own" style. I've enjoyed reading the first few chapters and have backed it on this basis.

Wayne
The Bastard's Handbook

Eveleen wrote 731 days ago

This is an adventure story, well written, and also in real life people can be violent, like the story, backed, hope you've the time to read mine.

Hypo99 wrote 733 days ago

Hi Shinben and how are you? This is not my usual thing, but I stumbled upon it and was genuinley, HOOKED. I like the way you write and I think that you have found your voice. I'm not the greatest at comments, honest, but I shall indeed, be returniing to this excellent piece of work.

BACKED.

Hope you get the chance to take a little peek at The Russian Hat

Sincerly
Brendan Doherty
The Russian Hat

Luk7 wrote 749 days ago

A stong concept and a clever package for what seems to be an amusing romp that could appeal to many...In the world of the book, this all really happened -- but as I know truth is often stranger than fiction, the history buff in me also wants to know if this has any historical basis. If yes it might make the pitch?

Luk7 Pixellated

meemers wrote 750 days ago

The cover, the title, the pitch, all pulls the reader into a story that moves well and is very absorbing. I love what you did with the Mime. This has a little for everyone, ..spine tingling!

shelved
Sue
Fate's Chastening

Abhyastamita wrote 750 days ago

I love your characters' names and all the different styles of writing at the beginning. I haven't gotten a chance to read more than the prologue yet, but what I did read I really enjoyed.

mando wrote 750 days ago

So good. Backed.

Owen Quinn wrote 751 days ago

This reads like one of thise old style pulp adventure comics like Doc Savage and tarzan, although the characters are not like this they are in the spirit of these adventures. even the cover sparks such memories. The writing is fluid, easy to be caught up in and the imagery is solid, literally dances off the page. love this, can't recommend it enough!

eloraine wrote 754 days ago

Loved it! Backed with pleasure. E.Loraine Royal Blood Chronicles book one

Angel22 wrote 755 days ago

Love the cover the pitch and the title - read the first chapter - great punchy style with an economic use of words, this moves the intrigue on and the pages turn. Backed. I wish you well.

Jacqui
Once Upon a Blue Moon

Su Dan wrote 755 days ago

this is indeed 'spine chilling', and written so well...original and intriguing...on WL
SU DAN [READ 'SEASONS']

pwinkle wrote 755 days ago

You have the style down perfectly. I like the Omitted here sections. I like the mood and complexity of the language. Backed.

Ashes2jewels wrote 755 days ago

My back ability is on the blink again so I will have to watchlist you but when it works...I'm going to keep you on my shelf for a while. Never have I judged a book wrong until the moment I felt I would find merit but no enjoyment in your book. This isn't my genre at all and I still walked into a wall trying to read it and go outside for some air at the same time.
One thing though: what's with the &c all over the place? Is it like etc or have some meaning my delightfully deficient American education failed to teach me?

Pia wrote 756 days ago

Shinben

The Spine Chilling Adventures of The Mime - Love the prologue, the memoirs of E.P and 30s pulp magazines, and what a name ... Ada Vance ...
Unless you meant the typo ... worn should be sworn ... under Phillip Norris's specimens prose. The ... Omitted here ... paragraphs are clever fun. And what an ending to CH 4. A rich feast of writing. Well, you have a fan.

Backed with pleasur. Pia (Course of Mirrors)

nac101 wrote 756 days ago

Interesting concept, has a mysterious feeling about it. It's a great addition. Backed
NAC

soutexmex wrote 756 days ago

Shinben: I can go with the short pitch. With the long pitch, I need more exposition to show me a larger slice of the story arch in that first paragraph. Drop out that second paragraph because you are TELLING instead of SHOWING. Perfecting your pitches is how you climb in ranking to gather more exposure and comments to better your novel. The writing is good so I am SHELVING you.

Though I have been a very active member for over a year, I can still use your comments on my book when you get the chance. Every little bit helps. Cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

SusieGulick wrote 756 days ago

Dear Shinben, I love that you had the "letter" in the beginning/the "wire" he received was impressive, too. :) You did well in preparing me to read your book by your recap/pitch & prologue before your story began. It is a good read because you create interest by having short paragraphs & lots of dialogue, which makes me want to keep reading to find out what's going to happen next. I'm "reading/commenting/backing" your book to help it move up on the charts (sending a message doesn't move your book up, but only "comment/backing"). Could you please return the favor by taking a moment to "comment/back" my 2 memoir books to help them move up? "He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not" & the unedited version? "Tell Me True Love Stories," which at the end of the last chapter tells my illness now & my 6th abusive marriage I'm in. Thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

Eileen Schuh wrote 756 days ago

The plot thickens...
Eileen Schuh Canadian Author FIREWALLS

Burgio wrote 757 days ago

This is an entertaining book. I felt all the while I was reading the letters as if I were eavesdropping – but that didn’t stop me from continuing to read. In fact, it made me read more. The premise of this is clever; you have a good character in Edward. Makes this a good read. I’m adding this to my shelf. Burgio (Grain of Salt).

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