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rank 1888
word count 84104
date submitted 02.05.2010
date updated 02.05.2010
genres: Fiction, Romance, Historical Fictio...
classification: moderate
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Queen's Resolve

Abid Vali

For us the Roman legacy means civilization and order. But for the conquered it held another meaning: oppression and terror. The story of Boudicca.

 

At its height, the Roman Empire was the greatest the world had ever seen. For us, who have inherited its legacy, it means civilization and order. But for those conquered by the peerless legions it held another meaning: oppression and terror. This is the story of Boudicca / Boadicea / Bonduca. The name comes from the Celtic root-word for Victory, and thus she may, ironically, be called Victoria. She suffered, she fought, she died. From the mists of 60AD very little else has come down to us. What we have now is more legend and myth than history, and that history is little better than propaganda, written by the victors. I offer a wholly un-academic explanation of Boudicca’s savage rebellion against the Romans. No historian, certainly not a male one, should condemn a woman for revenging the brutal attacks on her daughters. Perhaps men fear the violence of women because men know how much they have done to deserve the wrath of a woman’s resolve.

 
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adventure, british, celtic, historical fiction, rebellion, revoltuion, revolution, roman, romance, romantic, war

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RichardBard wrote 288 days ago

Hi Abid!
Since you haven’t been to Authonomy for a while, I hope it’s okay that I’m sending this through your book comment:

I’d like to thank you for backing BRAINRUSH (a Thriller) last year. Because of you it hit the Authonomy Number-1 slot, attracted an agent, and landed a film option. Now that’s a brain-rush! The formal book launch is September 1st and the sequel will be released in December. None of this would have been possible without your help. So, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!
Sincerely,
Richard Bard, BRAINRUSH

PS. If you want a good laugh, check out the temporary book-trailer video on the BRAINRUSH website. It’s there as a placeholder for the upcoming professional video. The current one features children and it’s guaranteed to make you smile! And yes, the younger kid on the screen is really me. You can see the video at www.RichardBard.com. The link is also on my Authonomy profile page. Special offer for former Authonomy backers between now and the formal launch on Sept 1st: If you would like to receive a “Review” copy the eBook (plus 2 FREE thrillers from the Kindle Top-20 PAID Bestseller list – yes, really), go to the website, click the “Contact” button, and leave a message that includes your Authonomy username and the secret code words “I Feel the Rush!” Details of this promo will be emailed to you. Thanks!

Carol Browne wrote 510 days ago

This is wonderful, stirring stuff! Beautifully and lyrically written. Impressively researched. On my watchlist for now.I would love to see this as a published book.

Carol
The Lorestone

bmlg wrote 737 days ago

Beautiful and brutal story, very well written. You do a fine job of evoking a distant time with small details of clothing and setting.

Greg Stewart wrote 741 days ago

This is a credible and exciting take on the Boudicca tale. Well written and persausive in the telling of the time, characters and motivations. I might suggest that your longer pitch has some rhetoric towards the end which would be better lost. Also the chapters should be separated so each has its own Authonomy chapter rather than the 4 in 1 you have now. But the story and style is good. Reminded me of Marion Bradley Zimmerman, for some reason - which is praise. Best of luck.
Greg Stewart

writingwildly wrote 745 days ago

It's the little details a good writer digs up, and the way they use them that make a story great. Your research and passion are obvious. It's a little dry for me, but that's the style that you're going for, obviously, and it rings very true in that sense.
backed
Genevieve

Sharatola wrote 747 days ago

STUNNING! breathtaking and deeply earthly. a very intoxifying journey into the past

Sharatola wrote 747 days ago

STUNNING!

Jack Hughes wrote 749 days ago

Fantastic! You've clearly put huge amounts of research into this. Well written and with an excellent plot from one of the most intriguing areas of Romano-British history. Backed with the greatest of pleasure, best of luck.

Jack Hughes
"Dawn of Shadows"

yasmin esack wrote 750 days ago

Dear Abid
What a treat and what a treasure! Very well written and so informative. I would buy this if it were available in stores.
A plasure to read and back

best.

Niobrara Kardnova wrote 750 days ago

Abid,
The story of Boudicca is a fascinating if almost mythological one, and you are right, what we know of the tale has come down to us almost exclusively through Roman eyes. Showing this from a British perspective and taking serious account of the woman's motives gives us a brand new story, and one that your obvious penchant for history makes exciting to read. Backed.
Niobrara Kardnova (The Trouble with Wives)

Elizabeth Wolfe wrote 750 days ago

You go girl! This herstory may not be academic, but we need that alternative voice. BACKED -Elizabeth Wolfe (Memories of Glory)

Barry Wenlock wrote 751 days ago

Hi Abid,

I read five chapters and thought it was a stunning piece of work.

Your prose is poetic, which adds an almost 'epic, mythological and magical' feel to the story -- 'how else can one tell the dancer from the dance?' and the description of the groove and the patterns in the sunlit tree, matching anything on a shield. Really very clever and convincing history.

The brutal rape of the queen by the soldiers is sordid and graphic but absolutely necessary, of course. It makes me feel angry and sad and revolted. Actually, this scene could be transported to modern day Africa, or indeed anywhere where there is conflict. Have we learned nothing in 2000 years? It appears not.
One suggestion is you check the work for unnecessary repetition of the word 'then'. It can often be omitted without changing the meaning of the sentence, making for a smoother read. Just a thought.

Backed with real pleasure, Barry

Little Krisna and the Bihar Boys

A Knight wrote 751 days ago

This is compelling, gripping, horrific and fascinating. History is bloody, and many of us forget that, preferring to look upon bygone days with the eye of romance and nostalgia. You have captured the essence of the fight for survival, the brutality and hardship with skill.

Fabulous work, and backed with pleasure.
Abi xxx

lizjrnm wrote 751 days ago

Story telling at its best! It is obvious you have spent time, energy, research and passion in writing this superb piece of historical fiction. Backed

Liz
The Cheech Room

Amylovesbooks wrote 751 days ago

Quite an interesting premise! Backed.

Amy
Love Match

SusieGulick wrote 752 days ago

Dear Abid, I love that your story is so long ago 60AD - that would be 27 years after Jesus' crucifixion & 10 years before Jerusalem was destroyed - what a story you have - very well done. :) I like your poem, too. :) That's pretty neat that you have a glossary, too. :) Before I began to read your book, I was prepared by your recap/pitch & prologue. Your story is good because you create interest by having short paragraphs & dialogue, which makes me want to keep reading to find out what's going to happen next. I'm "backing" your book to help it advance - this will help yours & mine move up on the charts. :) Could you please return the favor by taking a moment to "back" my TWO memoir books, "He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not" & my completed memoir unedited version? "Tell Me True Love Stories," which tells at the end my illness now & 6th abusive marraiage." Thanks, Susie :)
p.s. Remember: Every "backing" you do moves your book & the other person's book closer to the top. :)

Lj Trafford wrote 752 days ago

This is an intense read. What stands out for me is the violence. You portray it well. It needs to be sickening, despicable (the scene with the Queen's rape is particularly so), in order to explain what happens next, to show the motivation.
Intense, dark, unsettling but very readable.

AuthorTom wrote 752 days ago

Backed with confidence! Tom Ryerson (Carnal Wreckage)

sjbal wrote 752 days ago

Hi Abid,
You write with great clarity and portray each scene very well. Your premise is very good and clearly well thought out. I enjopyed reading it and am happy to back it.
Good luck,
James (The Lycetta Legacy).

eloraine wrote 752 days ago

I love this kind of story and I love this, good luck with it. E.Loraine Royal Blood Chronicles book one

soutexmex wrote 752 days ago

Welcome aboard, Abid. This website will improve your writing craft, if you allow it. You have to think of your pitches as your sales tool to grab the casual reader's eyes. The short pitch works. With the long pitch, break it down into smaller paragraphs so it reads faster. Though I know the story of Boudica, you still may wanna end it with one succinct question to pique interest. Perfecting your pitches is how you climb in ranking to gather more exposure and comments to better your novel. The writing is good so I am SHELVING you.

Though I have been a very active member for over a year, I can still use your comments on my book when you get the chance. Every little bit helps. Cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 752 days ago

This is a really gripping page-turner. The sense of authenticity comes across and the book is very hard to put down. I have no doubt that this book will be a success. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

Jim Darcy wrote 752 days ago

You write with an authority and passion far removed from the inane story so beloved of the Victorians. Your Celts and Romans live on the page. Speech is appropriate and convincing. Description is good, enough to ground and not swamp the reader. A very good read for a Sunday afternoon. Jim Darcy The Firelord's Crown

Melcom wrote 752 days ago

What a great story, you are a superb story teller, your prose is flawless and your descriptions place the reader in the midst of your story.

Very happy to be the first to comment on such a great book.

Melxx
Impeding Justice

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