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date submitted 01.06.2010
date updated 01.06.2010
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BLINDED

Larry Woods Zoeller

Suspected of espionage, a team of code-breakers accepts a dangerous mission to clear themselves and learn Hitler’s secret plans to defeat the D-Day invasion.

 

Documents declassified after WWII revealed America’s ability to intercept conversations between Adolph Hitler and Japan’s Ambassador to Germany. This is the story of a brilliant but naïve team of cryptographers in Army uniform, at a secret base in Virginia, who broke the coded intercepts. Off duty, they are welcomed by the last of an old Virginia family at their idyllic estate. The idyll crumbles as they learn the dark side of this aristocratic and racist culture that ignores the war in favor of horses and fox hunting.

A month before D-Day, Tokyo abruptly switches to a new code. The enemy has discovered our deepest secret. With the team under suspicion and excluded, intelligence agencies scramble to break the new code while Eisenhower waits anxiously: Only the Ambassador’s reports can tell him if Hitler knows the chosen site, if Nazi tanks are massed to massacre the assault troops as they land

Then the legendary spymaster, “Wild Bill” Donovan, takes a chance on the team--if they agree to a dangerous mission. Will they give their lives to save the lives of thousands on the Normandy beaches? Even if they return, the question remains: Who is leaking intelligence to the enemy?

 
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Chapter One

One month before D-Day in the spring of 1944, a vital intelligence source evaporated, endangering the success of the invasion and triggering a high-level espionage investigation.

The Japanese ambassador to Nazi Germany, Lieutenant General and Baron Hiroshi Ōshima had developed a close personal relationship with Hitler.  His dispatches had unique value, providing the allies with intimate, day-by-day insight into the mind of Adolph Hitler.  From a top-secret Signals Intelligence Service (SIS) station disguised as a rural Virginia farm, my father led the cryptanalyst team responsible for decoding and analyzing these intercepts.

A massed Nazi force at Normandy, before we could establish a beachhead, would drive our troops back into the sea, inflicting catastrophic losses.  The success of the invasion planning had come down to the Allies’ ability to read not only the German field generals’ intentions, but also the increasingly unpredictable and irrational decisions of Hitler.  

From the time I was a university undergraduate, I have been gathering material for a book on my father’s service, 1943-1945, at Vint Hill Farms Station (VHFS), located in Fauquier County, Virginia, about 50 miles from Washington, DC.  

Before they passed away, I interviewed my father, Richard Bradford Winslow II, PhD, Professor Emeritus, Princeton University and other members of the team, including Paul Zamoski; Daniel Allerton, PhD, Chairman Emeritus, Moore School of Electrical Engineering, University of Pennsylvania and Stefan Abassian, PhD, Dean of Asian Studies, University of California, Berkeley. 

The last team member, Mr. Zamoski, died in 2001 and, on November 18, via Federal Express, I received a package from the law firm of Bulkowski, Weiner and Monohan, executors of his estate.  It contained seven handwritten notebooks, containing startling revelations withheld during our earlier interviews, which radically changed the direction of my planned narrative. 

This is Paul Zamoski’s story. I believe that my father would have wanted it this way if he had lived long enough to learn the whole truth, as would his colleagues and, certainly, the Arundell sisters. 

I will leave it to others to relate the many other contributions of the brilliant and dedicated code-breakers who many believe were responsible for our victory.  However, I have added amplifications and clarifications to Mr. Zamoski’s narrative at intervals, based on my interviews with the principals and research into the five million World War II intelligence documents only recently declassified.

We begin with Corporal Zamoski’s journal entry recounting the day Baron Ōshima’s transmissions were interrupted. 

Richard Bradford Winslow, III, PhD

May 2003

 

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May 6, 1944:  I’d been with the team exactly a year-the best year of my life.  It started as a routine day.  Heat was already building up in our small round office. Summer comes early in Virginia. Mort sat in front of the input keyboard of our PURPLE machine.  It looked like two portable typewriters connected by a heavy cable. You wouldn’t have guessed that something so ordinary was the most closely guarded secret of the war:  Unless you saw the innards beneath the black cloth-covered wooden case. Inside, it looked like a Rube Goldberg contraption with four strange saw-toothed metal wheels like gears.   Connected to the rotors was a bewildering array of wires that led back to the typewriter keyboard. Each time the operator punched a key all three rotors jerked up and moved forward one place, chattering and throwing off sparks that tinged the air in the small office we occupied with the faint odor of an electrical fire.    

Sweat darkened the underarms of Mort Frankland’s oversized khaki shirt.  All signs of the heavy starch the post laundry had added were gone and the shirt hung on him like a tarp thrown over a kiddy car.  The epaulets of the shirt had slipped forward off his scrawny shoulders, letting the shiny gold second lieutenants’ bars, droop halfway to his chest.  His signal corps patch was down around his right elbow.  He looked like Lt. Fuzz in the Beetle Bailey comic strip. You never would have guessed that he was a distinguished math prodigy, who had amazed his elders with his elegant proofs and won his PhD from NYU at nineteen.

I knew the discomfort didn’t matter to Mort, or to the rest of the team-Danny, Richard, Stefan and Denise. We popped salt pills the Army provided and worked through the long days and nights.  Denise Seranto was the only other team member besides me without a PhD.  Like worshippers clustered around the alter, our wooden desks made a semicircle around Mort and the PURPLE machine, with the door to the stairwell just behind it. We were all up, excited, anticipating. 

The Army, the miserable living and working conditions, being away from home, none of it mattered that day.  Earlier intercepts had alerted us: A transmission that would contain the most vital intelligence of the war-that could very well help end the war-would be coming soon.  And we were the crypto team that would decode it, translate it and analyze it for General Eisenhower and maybe even President Roosevelt!

Mort had just used the machine to decode a short intercept addressed to the Jap embassy in Berlin from the Ambassador’s boss in Tokyo, Foreign Minister Togo Shigenori.  Stefan was busy translating it into English.  The rest of us weren’t paying much attention. 

It was Ambassador Ōshima’s report to Togo we were waiting for; the detailed treatise we expected on his recent tour of Nazi defenses on the French coast.  The report that would give Eisenhower the final intelligence he needed to schedule the invasion across the Channel.   Earlier intercepts had alerted us when Hitler himself had authorized the unusual mission and ordered the Nazi general staff to give Ōshima the royal treatment in France.  But detailed transmission on what he’d seen and heard hadn’t been intercepted yet. 

Stefan Abassian said, “Richard, you better check me.  Make sure I got this right.”

Richard Winslow was the oldest. The grey in his hair had earned him his silver first lieutenant’s bars and the title of squad leader.  The rest wore gold bars like Mort, except me.  I’d just gotten my second strip. The hint of alarm in Stefan’s normally serene voice was enough to pull us away from our desks to look over his shoulder.  The translation he’d written in flowing longhand on the paper in front of him was simple: 

“Suspend transmission. Use diplomatic pouch for all communication until further notice. More later. TOGO” 

Stefan had the translation right, and he knew it.  He just didn’t want to believe it. None of us did.  There was silence in our round windowless office-a silo, attached to a barn, with traces of barley dust in the cracks in the walls, the sour smell of stored grain still lingering.  Reminders of the working farm it had been until the SIS bought the estate a year earlier and subdivided the silo into offices, one over the other.  

Richard pushed his large steel-framed glasses up on his nose-Army-issue flat-sided “gas-mask” glasses-and read the message, his lips silently mouthing every word.  Satisfied it really did carry the news that we would receive no more missives from Ōshima, he handed it to me, as he did every other message after it was decoded, translated and analyzed.  He didn’t need to spend any time analyzing this.  The meaning was obvious and disastrous.

The single sheet felt heavy, as though the message were engraved on lead.  It slipped from my fingers and we watched it glide to the floor.  Mort said what we were all thinking, “It can’t happen-not now.  With the invasion coming…” 

There’s a place on the back of my head just above the base of the skull.  It’s kind of flat, not that my Dad made it that way, but it seemed like he knew it was more sensitive or something.  When I was growing up in Pittsburgh, the son of a bitch used to hit me there with his open hand, rock-hard from fifteen years in front of a blast furnace. He thought it was funny to slap me as he walked by, jarring me until it felt like my eyes were going to pop out of my head.  As I bent over to pick up the scrap of paper, it was as though he had just walked by and my brain was boiling. 

I stumbled over to the secure TWX machine, dialed the number for SIS headquarters at Arlington Hall and started transmitting.  Sometimes I greeted the Hall operator over the wire.  Not today.  Today the clatter, ding of the keys as they hit the ribbon said, “Doom.”

When it stopped, there was silence, until Mort asked, “What are we going to do?”

“Nothing we can do.” Danny Allerton said, rising from his desk to comfort Mort. He fashioned himself as Mort’s protector, but despite his brilliance, he could barely take care of himself. 

“But it will be all over,” Mort’s high voice cracked.  He loved the challenge of this work and the knowledge of its importance to the war effort, as we all did, despite the difficulties.

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There was, at that time, a sense of tense anticipation on both sides. The Allies had advanced against the enemy in Africa and Italy.  The Russians had beaten them at Stalingrad.  Nevertheless, there could be no march into Germany until France was retaken.   

The Allies had been running an elaborate ruse, Operation Fortitude, for months, to throw Hitler off on the timing and location of the invasion.  They had to keep him thinking that Pas de Calais, where the English Channel was narrowest (only 20 miles from the cliffs of Dover) was the planned invasion site instead of the real site at Normandy.  Was it working?  Ōshima’s report would tell them.

-RBW, III 

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Thirty-seven minutes after the TWX stopped thrashing, the direct line to the Hall, a field phone in a wooden box, rang hollowly. We jumped in unison like passengers in a car hitting a pothole.  People at the Hall spoke to us as little as possible.  Their big-time cryptanalysts lost the Ōshima mission to our team.  They were headquarters, at the seat of power just across the river from DC, and we were “the farm,” fifty miles away in rural Virginia. The Hall was still smarting from losing out to its country cousins.

The telephone rang again, a fire alarm, a storm warning, a battle stations signal.  Richard took his ever-present curved meerschaum pipe from his mouth, reached gingerly into the olive-drab box next to the TWX machine.  He picked up the black receiver, as though it were something alive and dangerous.  “Third Signal Squad.  May I help you?” he said into the phone, his baritone smooth and formal, as usual.  He was the only one of us who could sound military. 

“What the hell are you men doing down there?  Are you absolutely sure you rendered that message correctly?”

The man on the other end was yelling so loud I could hear him clearly across the room.  Richard held the receiver away from his ear and we huddled around him. Listening, his bushy eyebrows above the ugly glasses pulled close together in confusion and irritation.  Questioning looks passed among us.  There were only shrugged shoulders in reply. 

“To whom am I speaking?” Richard said into the phone, and a voice brayed back, “This is Gen. Tilden.  Do you realize you’ve just lost our most important strategic intelligence asset at the most critical moment of the war?” 

That was one of those “when did you stop beating your wife,” questions the Army loved to ask.  This time it wasn’t a barracks sergeant chewing out a lowly private; it was the commanding general of the SIS. 

Richard wasn’t used to being yelled at.  None of them were.  They were eminent scholars-tops in their fields-accustomed to the civility of academia. 

Without waiting for an answer, the General said, “Stay there.  Don’t move.  Colonel Molson and his team are on the way.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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markwoodburn wrote 331 days ago

This is a well-researched thriller with Allied code-breaking at its heart. The author has an authorative approach though very American from the viewpoint. Jack Higgins, Ted Allbeury etc etc made careers out of this type of story and it has a readibility that afficionados of the genre will find attractive. With tidying up here and there I could see this on a shop shelf somewhere. Well done, sir. Starred, regards, Mark

Iva P. wrote 626 days ago

This is a tasty dish for true historical fiction fans. Well-researched, informative and a good read. HF can't get any better.

Iva P.
Fame and Infamy

CurmudgeonJohn wrote 627 days ago

Hey Larry,

When is the rest coming? It is very good and now that you've got me hooked , you can't just leave me hanging.

John Lison

Phyllis Burton wrote 629 days ago

Hello Larry,

Well done - this is brilliant. Really good story telling...I too could see it as a film. Have no hesitation in backing this. Hope this does really well.

Phyllis
A PASSING STORM

lizjrnm wrote 670 days ago

Wow - move over Balducci! This truly has the makings of an epic movie - well crafted and talented writing a producer would love to get a hold of! backed 100%

Liz
The Cheech Room

eurodan49 wrote 672 days ago

This is a well crafted and research work. As someone with a little knowledge in the matter I can say “well done!”
The writing is competent and the pace brisk.
You’ve got my backing.

Famlavan wrote 672 days ago

First let me apologies, I backed your book after an initial read and have only just got round to commenting (been editing).

Great long pitch, drew me in!
My first impression was; this is well research and has depth.
I’m not a lover of prologues however yours is well crafted and works brilliantly. Also like how you set the time and place with your early narrative description especially around the purple machine. When time allows I will come back to this, it is a very good read! – Good luck.

WendyB wrote 675 days ago

The true story of the code-breakers was fascinating enough, but a fictional embroidery worked into its fabric...marvellous!

Great beginning...I will be reading more.

Wendy Bertsch
(Once More...From The Beginning)

DMR wrote 675 days ago

The title piqued my interest and the synopsis promises an intriguing read- first few chapters definitely set the mood and crank up the tension - nicely done! Backed with pleasure
Diane
Good Blood

Despinas1 wrote 686 days ago

Brilliant. Backed
Helen

Mooderino wrote 688 days ago

Interesting story and you appear to have a unique vantage point to tell it from.

In the first section (the bit in italics) you mention the Baron's relationship with Hitler, and then say how useful it was to know what was in his dispatches, but you seem to take for granted that the Allies had access to these dispatches. It felt like you missed a step out. Possibly I'm being dense but it wasn't clear to me that just because Hiroshi sent these messages that the Allies would then have access to them.

Also in that section the line 'before we could establish a beachhead' felt like it came a little too early and should have been placed after the clause 'would drive our troops back into the sea', although I may be mistaken. Didn't sound quite right to me as I read it.

You establish life around the PURPLE machine very well, and you present the main problem very quickly so things are off and running.

I wasn't too sure about the narrator. He doesn't have a PhD and is of low rank, but i'm not sure what his role was within the team. I'm sure this is made clear later, but at the moment he could be the tea boy for all I know (which may be how you want it for all I know).

Overall a very solid start to an intriguing tale. Backed.

delhui wrote 693 days ago

Dear Larry --

Blinded is a terrific blend of history, drama, and thriller; please consider adding in the category of historical fiction, as this story definitely fits the definitions. The contrasts between the code breakers' academic brilliance versus their less astute comprehension of Virginia society adds great subtext to the story, as well as providing a glimpse behind the propoganda of the time period that suggested all of American society worked in perfect concert to fight against the Nazis. Well-crafted and engaging, we're very happy to support Blinded. BACKED. -- Delhui, The Long Black Veil

zan wrote 700 days ago

BLINDED

Larry Woods Zoeller

Backed some days ago.
Very good pitches in my opinion. It might be useful to tag this as historical fiction as well. Well written, solid plot, and it reads like good literary fiction.
I am not doing in-depth reviews at the moment Larry. Present “real life” responsibilities make this impossible, including family responsibilites resulting from school vacation, and, I am also presently editing some of my pieces uploaded here. I have backed your book after reading your pitches alone or your pitches and first chapter upload because I was impressed by them and believe your book deserves an HC review. I do not do blind backings but always read some of the author’s work before backing. After some eleven months of being on this site, I have read and commented on about 450-500 books – maybe more, as many writers have withdrawn books from the site and it’s now difficult to keep track. If you would like a more detailed comment on your effort, do leave me a message and I will be happy to oblige when school starts up again and family responsibilites are lightened, or before that, if I have some available time. In the meantime, I was honoured to have given your book a spin on my shelf, genuinely believe it has wonderful potential and I wish you the best in finding a publisher. (I would of course be most grateful if you are able to spend a little time on mine.)
Best wishes and a happy summer to you and family.
Zan

zan wrote 700 days ago

BLINDED

Larry Woods Zoeller

Very good pitches in my opinion. It might be useful to tag this as historical fiction as well. Well written, solid plot, and it reads like good literary fiction.
I am not doing in-depth reviews at the moment Larry. Present “real life” responsibilities make this impossible, including family responsibilites resulting from school vacation, and, I am also presently editing some of my pieces uploaded here. I have backed your book after reading your pitches alone or your pitches and first chapter upload because I was impressed by them and believe your book deserves an HC review. I do not do blind backings but always read some of the author’s work before backing. After some eleven months of being on this site, I have read and commented on about 450-500 books – maybe more, as many writers have withdrawn books from the site and it’s now difficult to keep track. If you would like a more detailed comment on your effort, do leave me a message and I will be happy to oblige when school starts up again and family responsibilites are lightened, or before that, if I have some available time. In the meantime, I was honoured to have given your book a spin on my shelf, genuinely believe it has wonderful potential and I wish you the best in finding a publisher. (I would of course be most grateful if you are able to spend a little time on mine.)
Best wishes and a happy summer to you and family.
Zan

lbrammer1992 wrote 700 days ago

When I started to read this I struggled to believe it was fictional as you have made the story seem so realistic. This is a brilliant novel which emanently deserves publication. I would love to read the whole of your work but unfortunately at the current time I don't have the time but I hope to in the future. Could you have a look at my manuscript The Sacred Pool.

Laurence

stereotomy wrote 703 days ago

Though I haven't read the entire novel yet, I found the opening chapter captivating. There's a wonderful feeling of authenticity in this novel that very much appealed to me. I'll be looking forward to reading more.

Kevin Crockett wrote 706 days ago

Well-paced, incredibly detailed, and an engrossing read. Kept me up late, because I didn't want to stop reading.

Burgio wrote 709 days ago

BLINDED
This is an exciting story. I love this type of book: a rewriting of history gained from an old journal. I was surprised to learn all of this espionage and code breakage was going on in Virginia; as you say, that’s a big contrast against the peaceful countryside there. As I read, I kept thinking of this as a movie: the contrast between the setting of the team and the setting of Hitler would be great. Makes me suspect there’s an agent or a producer out there with the same thoughts. I’m adding this to my shelf. Burgio (Grain of Salt).

Cholly wrote 710 days ago

You have my vote! Good luck, Larry! ~~Char P (alias "Cholly")

Eveleen wrote 711 days ago

Backed.

lwzoeller wrote 712 days ago

Once in a while, I run across something that is so expertly done, there's not much to say. Your writing and story are riveting from the first word. The prologue letter sets the scene perfectly and already introduces things for the reader to anticipate and ponder (the notebooks, the Arundell sisters, etc.). Obviously well-researched (and in part, well-lived) and well-plotted. This reads like a finished, published work. Excellent.

---Mary
The Qualities of Wood



Thanks, Mary. That's really high praise. I just hope some publisher thinks so as well. I"ll take a look at your book tomorrow.

mvw888 wrote 712 days ago

Once in a while, I run across something that is so expertly done, there's not much to say. Your writing and story are riveting from the first word. The prologue letter sets the scene perfectly and already introduces things for the reader to anticipate and ponder (the notebooks, the Arundell sisters, etc.). Obviously well-researched (and in part, well-lived) and well-plotted. This reads like a finished, published work. Excellent.

---Mary
The Qualities of Wood

lwzoeller wrote 712 days ago

Hi Larry
You can't beat a classic war spy thriller and this is up there with the best of them. I immersed myself totally in the plot immediately. I didn't get chance to read the end but if it matches the beginning, you've got a real winner here.
DP Walker
Five Dares



Thanks for the support. I'll tke a look at your book and back it.

DP Walker wrote 713 days ago

Hi Larry
You can't beat a classic war spy thriller and this is up there with the best of them. I immersed myself totally in the plot immediately. I didn't get chance to read the end but if it matches the beginning, you've got a real winner here.
DP Walker
Five Dares

klouholmes wrote 715 days ago

Hi Larry, An incredible story! It’s so convincing, I had to go back and see if it wasn’t non-fiction. But then the scenes and descriptions of the code breakers was written with flair and had me immersed. I hadn’t realized that Americans were not going to eavesdrop in war – except that the Nazis had broken European war rules anyway. The conflict with the investigation, their not using “sir” when addressing an officer, twisted the whole thing in a believable way. It’s a page-turner! Easily shelved – Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

Kevin Crockett wrote 715 days ago
Telegraph wrote 715 days ago

You given created world that few every see or would get the chance too. You step into another time and a past that is filled allisions of what one might want us to see. Awesome read. C W

threestrikes wrote 715 days ago

This is an exceptional book. The characters are well-developed and the descriptions and dialogue are crisp. The story resonates all the more because it is based on a true, war-time situation that influenced the lives of many people. Great job.
Jon Payne

richardbasch wrote 716 days ago

Larry. glad to add my name to your list of fans.

You have my vote

Richard Basch

name falied moderation wrote 716 days ago

So Larry yet another thriller and I am getting to realize that this genre is one that I have missed out on most my life. However when the red gets good like this I feel that my heart is better for not reading. Brilliant at captivating your reader and keeping them bound to you and your characters SHELVED

Would you take the time to read some of my book and give me your feedback. All comments are always welcome, one can never get too much help. and if you like it please back it.
BACKED
BEST OF LUCK
Denise

fremont wrote 716 days ago

A wonderful, exciting book that grabs your attention and you can't wait to see what's coming next. Cryptography is one of my favorite subjects and it is interesting to see how it has evolved through the ages. I always love a suspense story weaving in and out of a true story. Knew you could do it, Larry!

BigB wrote 717 days ago

Awesome read......

ermalou wrote 718 days ago

This book grabbed and held my attention from beginning to end. You introduce me to an interesting and important world I would otherwise never have had a chance to know. Even though the work of code breaking is foreign to me, you made it easy to follow. I became emotionally and intellectual involved and couldn't wait to see what happened. Thanks for such a good read!
Ermalou

Andrew Burans wrote 718 days ago

Your prologue, you didn't call it that though, sets up your book perfectly. What you have posted so far is well written, well paced and I like your use of the first person narrative. Your use of imagery is excellent, your historical perspective is percise and intriguing all making your finely crafted story a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

Barry Wenlock wrote 719 days ago

Hi Larry,
This is a really tremendous thriller. I see it's not classed as historical fiction but it sure reads like it. Your You story seems well-researched, the characters are realistically depicted and the dialogue is well delivered. Backed for a very enjoyable read.
Best wishes, Barry
Little Krisna and the Bihar Boys

AuthorTom wrote 719 days ago

Backed with confidence! Tom Ryerson (Carnal Wreckage)

Jim Darcy wrote 719 days ago

Great characters and plenty of action tied to real events. Very popular genre and this appears to be well researched. Multifaceted too, which gives plenty of potential readers.
Good luck with this.
Jim Darcy
The Firelord's Crown

SusieGulick wrote 720 days ago

Dear Larry, I love your intriguing story of which I was not even aware of - how could this be hidden from the public - I guess that's what the secret service/KJB, etc is all about - amazing, your story. :) Thank you for taking the time to let me know what was done behind closed doors. God bless you. :) Before I began to read your book, I was prepared by your pitch, which was very well done. :) Your story is good because you create interest by having short paragraphs & lots of dialogue, which makes me want to keep reading to find out what's going to happen next. I'm "backing" your book. :) "When you back a book, it only improves the ranking of that book, not yours. However, the author whose book you are backing may decide to back your book also, in which case yes, your ranking would be improved"...authonomy quote. :) Please "back" my TWO memoir books, "He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not" & my completed memoir unedited version? "Tell Me True Love Stories," which tells at the end, my illness now & 6th abusive marriage." Thanks, Susie :)
additional authonomy quote: "Every time you place a book on your bookshelf, your recommendation pushes the book up the rankings. And while that book sits on your bookshelf, your reputation as a talent spotter increases depending on how well that book performs." :)

eloraine wrote 720 days ago

Really great, good luck with it. E.Loraine Royal Blood Chronicles book one

Roger Thurling wrote 720 days ago

I would normally avoid any book which claimed to be a 'thriller', but this one also has claims to be lit fic.
It is careful, detailed and thorough, and shows either a great deal of careful research, or an amazingly fertile imagination. For those who enjoy thrillers, particularly thrillers based on our recent military history, this is a 'very good buy'.
RT

lwzoeller wrote 721 days ago

Welcome aboard, Larry. This website will improve your writing craft, if you allow it. I'm a bit of a pitch doctor, having read thousands of pitches in my time on this website, so I want to share my insight here with you. You have to think of your pitches as your sales tool to grab the casual reader's eyes. Congrats - both pitches work which is rare for a newbie. Perfecting your pitches is how you climb in ranking to gather more exposure and comments to better your novel. The writing is good so I am SHELVING you.

Though I have been a very active member for over a year and have the most commented book on the website, I can still use your comments on my book when you get the chance. Every little bit helps. Cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

soutexmex wrote 721 days ago

Welcome aboard, Larry. This website will improve your writing craft, if you allow it. I'm a bit of a pitch doctor, having read thousands of pitches in my time on this website, so I want to share my insight here with you. You have to think of your pitches as your sales tool to grab the casual reader's eyes. Congrats - both pitches work which is rare for a newbie. Perfecting your pitches is how you climb in ranking to gather more exposure and comments to better your novel. The writing is good so I am SHELVING you.

Though I have been a very active member for over a year and have the most commented book on the website, I can still use your comments on my book when you get the chance. Every little bit helps. Cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

Melcom wrote 721 days ago

Larry, this is an absolutely stunning read. I was drawn to your book from your pitch and my interest didn't waiver for a second after that. I love reading about the war and all the conspiracy theories surrounding it, I live in Normandy 30 mins from the landing beaches so it means a great deal to read accounts like yours.

Very happily shelved as I believe this WILL get published.
Melxx
Impeding Justice

yasmin esack wrote 722 days ago

WOW! EXCITING STUFF, THIS IS A BLOCK BUSTER MEGA HIT

BACKED AND HUMBLED
THE LORD OF THE DAWN

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