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rank 780
word count 61450
date submitted 15.06.2010
date updated 16.06.2010
genres: Fiction, Historical Fiction, Biogra...
classification: universal
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Too Early for Flowers: The Story of a Polio Mother

Kurt Sipolski

A widow raises her polio boy with dignity. He returns from Sydney to teach her to walk after a stroke.

 

BASED ON THE PUBLISHED MEMOIR:

IRIS, at 21, is too beautiful and ambitious for Hardscrabble, Illinois and escapes to Washington D.C.
She marries BUNNY, and has two sons, JIMMY and GRAYSON.

Bunny dies suddenly and two-year-old Gray is diagnosed with polio. Iris returns to Hardscrabble. Over nightly exercises she excites him with tales of world travel.

On his 13th birthday, the doctors give Iris the news. Gray will always limp, but can walk without the braces. She breaks down with joy.

In the family tradition, Jim graduates from Virginia Military Institute. When he develops melanoma and dies, Iris sees a tradition of widows continue. After college graduation months later, Gray at 21, handsome and charismatic, tells his mother that just as she had so many years earlier, it is time for him to move away from Hardscrabble.

Rupert Murdoch has hired him as a journalist in Sydney, Australia.

Later, Iris suffers a stroke. So now it is Gray’s turn to return to Hardscrabble. Gray is successful and happy; and lovingly, he nurses his mother back to health, telling her colorful stories of the world he has seen and giving her the therapy which now teaches her how to walk again.



 
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eriexchick wrote 699 days ago

Man, we discovered a coal chute and an old basement just like the one described! I remember going to Montgomery Ward's with my grama in Butler too.
I'm getting a little confused with mixing people up from the sentence structure. Also when she's laughing in chapter 3 in the begining you could just say- ," she laughed, " -then start your sentence again instead of "hahahahaha". Plus a thought is in italics not quotes I think. Punctuation. Just trying to help :D still reading because I love the story. I read Reminisce magazine and love the old days.

Rosemary Peel wrote 700 days ago

The first two chapters held me rivited. I must read more. You set the tone of this story so perfectly. Times gone by are suddenly experience once more. I am more than impressed. One or two little typographical errors that can easily be put right, is all I can find to criticise (sorry English spelling!). I will keep this on my WL and fully intend to read all you have posted. Already backed from your excellent pitch and now feel fully justified in doing so.

stoatsnest wrote 701 days ago

Beautifully written and a wonderful sense of place and period. I'd happily read it all, if only for the pleasure of the writing. Backed.

yasmin esack wrote 703 days ago

TO EARLY FOR FLOWERS

Grand heart wrenching work that is marvellously told.
Backed

One little error
Line 1-waved to/ not at (i believe)
Your 10th line- row of negro homes How do you know this?

Luk7 wrote 704 days ago

I must admit the photo for the cover drew me in, more than the subtitle. But I can see the logic of using it... I liked the fact once I started reading that there was plenty of period detail here. This seems to capture the spirit of the times really well. Somewhere there a mention of a sepia-toned photograph and this made me wonder if the term sepia was used that way at the time, or not? My great aunt wore a leg brace (actually a special boot I think) as a result of polio, and it is amazing that by the time we were growing up we just needed an injection. This book may really make people appreciate their luck. Luk

DP Walker wrote 704 days ago

Hi Kurt
This is a powerful and poignant story filled with emotion. It's good that you are able to draw attention to this largely forgotten disease. We can all learn something from this.
DP Walker
Five Dares

Jack Hughes wrote 705 days ago

This is a beautiful and touching story about an illness that has largely been forgotten about in much of the developed world. It also shows how the disease affected families, something that is not shown in statistical data or medical histories. Will read some more when I get a little more time, best of luck.

Jack Hughes
Dawn of Shadows

Barry Wenlock wrote 705 days ago

Hi Kurt, this is a well-told and heart-wrenching and heart-warming by turns. An emotional roller coaster of a story.
Backed with pleasure,
Barry
Little Krisna and the Bihar Boys

eriexchick wrote 705 days ago

I love this time, if you really like this kind of stuff try the magazine Reminisce. I love reading old stories from this time, people were so much stronger back then. They'd brush themselves off and keep going instead of copping out with medication and SSI.

ketley wrote 706 days ago

powerful stuff, backed
ketters

Lara wrote 706 days ago

This is an emotive novel and you don't shy away from the confrontations. Well done, I've backed you and you deserve it.
Rosalind
Good For Him

Famlavan wrote 706 days ago

A person I really admired (Milton Erickson) had polio twice, he taught himself to walk again by watching his baby sisters and how she started walk, so this was a must read for me!
You really know how to engage the reader’s emotions. However it is the positive feel that has enhanced this read for me. – Good luck with this it is a great read!

canman wrote 707 days ago

Yes! One reader said that, mailed me the book and I have it right on my shelf in front of me...thanks.

This is such a beautiful premsie for a story - it reminds me only on a more simpler level of that children's book Love You Forever by Robert Munsch. I will definitely return for more of this later. BACKED

Liz
The Cheech Room

lizjrnm wrote 707 days ago

This is such a beautiful premsie for a story - it reminds me only on a more simpler level of that children's book Love You Forever by Robert Munsch. I will definitely return for more of this later. BACKED

Liz
The Cheech Room

cutley wrote 707 days ago

Good luck. This is a link to a thread on the forum explaining how the site works: http://www.authonomy.com/Forum/posts_new.aspx?threadId=57319

Charles

Gauis wrote 707 days ago

Iris IS too beautiful? Present tense
but engaging story - so far -
thanks

C W Bigelow wrote 707 days ago

Kurt - the pitch reeled me in and your writing supports it. Easily thrown back in time with your descriptions. Backed. CW (To Save the Sun)

Bill Long wrote 707 days ago

Hi Kurt
I have only read a little so far, but enough to draw me back again. There is a melancholy flavour which appeals, for me, to another era. Well done. Backed.
Bill Long
Timecrack

Rusty Bernard wrote 707 days ago

Dear Kurt,

I have backed your book because I was hooked by the pitch, liked your introduction and read a couple of chapters.

How much more I read and comment on depends on time and commitment.

Take it easy and enjoy everything.

MM

Lola Klein wrote 707 days ago

Kurt, an astonishing story, beautifully told. You write with rare skill, bringing every nuance of the story to the reader's attention. Inspirational. Backed without a moment's hesitation.
Lola.

Despinas1 wrote 707 days ago

An amazing story, and amazing pitch. Backed of course with pleasure
Helen

Esrevinu wrote 708 days ago

Kurt, what a wonderful story-- I loved your writing style and your intelligent descriptions. The pitch is perfect for this awesome story. It is obvious a lot of work went into the book,.
I loved it. Best wishes
Scott
The Esrevinu Chronicles/Secrets of the Elephant Rocks

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Joanna Carter wrote 708 days ago

A moving story, powerfully told. Good luck with this!
Joanna Carter
Fossil Farm

name falied moderation wrote 708 days ago

Kurt this book is a worth while read, thank you. Your short pitch is excellent and your long pitch said to me that this book would give me a well crafted flowing read and it did not disappoint. I have not read it all, but will continue. You have given me a read that is inspirational, brave, loving, and true. These are the components I love in a good book. You have not included sensational components that so often clutter every para. It reminds me of some of the older writers, and of course the research you have done shows. I am not a buff on grammar however I do know what a good book is and your is one. CONGRATS......My book is of a different genre but that is the beauty of this site, and if you could 'review' and 'comment' and BACK it, I would be so happy. Again BEST OF LUCK with your book

Denise
The Letter

Burgio wrote 708 days ago

TOO EARLY FOR FLOWERS
This is an inspirational book. Both Iris and Gray are courageous characters; it’s great the way their lives intertwine to come together again at the end. It’s hard to remember what a horrible disease polio was and the damage it could cause. This book is a good reminder of that and how people who did contact the disease are still living with it. I’m adding it to my shelf. Burgio (Grain of Salt).

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 708 days ago

There is nothing left to say after canman's review.Some books are for entertainment and some, like yours are simply inspirational. Thank you. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

Code Monkey wrote 708 days ago

Hi! A good work overall. An excellent character story; a good job presenting believable, real-life people and making us care about them. Thanks.

Here's some (hopefully) constructive criticism:

Things I liked:

- Good, sparing use of adjectives and adverbs. Sentences are concise and unobstructed by wordiness.

- Characterization is strong and compelling.

Things I think need work:

- Dialog is unbelievable in places. Some characters say things simply to inform the reader. A more natural dialog treats the reader like a voyeur, not necessarily privy to understanding all the details of the conversation, or even its context.

- Punctuation is spotty in some places. Watch your commas and apostrophes.

Extra comments:

- Many of the "Things I think need work" are only issues with the first part of the book. As the work goes on, these comments apply less and less, and the work improves remarkably in readability. This is especially true of the dialog.

Keep up the good work.

canman wrote 708 days ago

I quite agree with you that the pitch is too compact, and altho I spaced everything out in the pitch it appears all jumbled up in the final.

Thanks
Kurt

I was in tears when I wrote the novella..and am awfully close to that from your stunning review.

My great thanks,

Kurt

canman wrote 708 days ago

I was in tears when I wrote the novella..and am awfully close to that from your stunning review.

My great thanks,

Kurt

Kurt,

I just finished your entire submission. I am 65 years old and have lived through the effects of polio as I watched several friends in iron lungs, some in braces, polio vaccine administration, and all the rest. Sometimes excellent writers wield the pen and depict realism so well that readers get caught up in the story too much, experience too much, feel too much, and walk away with too much.

Several times throughout your book, I had to stop reading --I just couldn't take in anything else. The sadness, broken dreams, sibling interplay, parental hopelessness and helplessness in the face of impossible odds, and from what I could gather, the Grim Reaper of Dimentia finally payed Iris a visit. Finally, too many pills, the decision by Gray, then the lapse back into that dark, dark world, just prior to entering that world of light.

You have written a very powerful life drama. You have crafted an overwhelming slice of life. You have painted vivid word pictures that stand out in greyscale against a bleak and saddening backdrop of the times. Your uncanny ability to portray life at its lowest ebb, at its hardest to comprehend, and a decision that every son prays never to be confronted with, is overwhelming in their impact.

One, single, lone, solitary, triumph, or victory, or whatever you might want to call Gray's lonely future rises from the ashes of loss, death, defeat, and unbelievable trials. He is the collective Phoenix who will fly away with all the memories of the great fire that consumed his family and freed him to pursue his life, whatever that might be.

I've not been as somber in backing a book before. Of course, I've not encountered a work wherein the best of the book is framed in the worst of human experiences, but I do back it. I do congratulate you on one fine performance in the presentation of life. I walked away from Too Early for Flowers a sadder but stronger person.

Well Done! Two thumbs up.

PawPaw Mike LaRiviere
Eden's Door

soutexmex wrote 708 days ago

Welcome aboard, Kurt. This website will improve your writing craft, if you allow it. I'm a bit of a pitch doctor, having read thousands of pitches in my time on this website, so I want to share my insight here with you. You have to think of your pitches as your sales tool to grab the casual reader's eyes. The short pitch works. The long pitch needs to be broken down into smaller paragraphs so it reads faster. Perfecting your pitches is how you climb in ranking to gather more exposure and comments to better your novel. The writing is good so I am SHELVING you.

Though I have been a very active member for over a year and have the most commented book on the website, I can still use your comments on my book when you get the chance. Every little bit helps. Cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

Mike LaRiviere wrote 708 days ago

Kurt,

I just finished your entire submission. I am 65 years old and have lived through the effects of polio as I watched several friends in iron lungs, some in braces, polio vaccine administration, and all the rest. Sometimes excellent writers wield the pen and depict realism so well that readers get caught up in the story too much, experience too much, feel too much, and walk away with too much.

Several times throughout your book, I had to stop reading --I just couldn't take in anything else. The sadness, broken dreams, sibling interplay, parental hopelessness and helplessness in the face of impossible odds, and from what I could gather, the Grim Reaper of Dimentia finally payed Iris a visit. Finally, too many pills, the decision by Gray, then the lapse back into that dark, dark world, just prior to entering that world of light.

You have written a very powerful life drama. You have crafted an overwhelming slice of life. You have painted vivid word pictures that stand out in greyscale against a bleak and saddening backdrop of the times. Your uncanny ability to portray life at its lowest ebb, at its hardest to comprehend, and a decision that every son prays never to be confronted with, is overwhelming in their impact.

One, single, lone, solitary, triumph, or victory, or whatever you might want to call Gray's lonely future rises from the ashes of loss, death, defeat, and unbelievable trials. He is the collective Phoenix who will fly away with all the memories of the great fire that consumed his family and freed him to pursue his life, whatever that might be.

I've not been as somber in backing a book before. Of course, I've not encountered a work wherein the best of the book is framed in the worst of human experiences, but I do back it. I do congratulate you on one fine performance in the presentation of life. I walked away from Too Early for Flowers a sadder but stronger person.

Well Done! Two thumbs up.

PawPaw Mike LaRiviere
Eden's Door

lynn clayton wrote 708 days ago

This is so full of life and emotion, with spontaneous outbursts from the characters which are natural and endearing since we know what is in store for them.
It seems as if these are people you've known and heard speaking, they're so real. As if you've dwelt on their story for years, so that when you came to write it down it was effortless and immediate. I love it. Backed. lynn

gotiko wrote 708 days ago

What a beautiful story!
Backed.

Gabriel (It Goes On Forver.)

SusieGulick wrote 708 days ago

Dear Kurt, I love that you shared your story - wow! My twin brother had a slight case of polio & I, even less - we were fortunate it didn't affect our walking. :) Thanks for helping me to be thankful :) - even though I am so sick with lupus. Your pitch is excellent, so set the hook for me to read your book. :) When you use short paragraphs & lots of dialogue, it makes me want to keep reading to find out what's going to happen next. I'm backing your book. :)
Could you please take a moment to back my TWO memoir books? Thanks, Susie :)

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