Book Jacket

 

rank 5466
word count 10178
date submitted 10.07.2010
date updated 26.03.2011
genres: Fiction, Chick Lit, Romance, Comedy...
classification: adult
incomplete

Untitled as of yet

Hilary Entley

Can't find a date? Neither can Erin. How do you deal? Erin? She goes just a little mad.

 

What do you do when things never seem to go right? You ever wonder what is going on inside your date's mind? How do you deal when a date doesn't go quite as you'd like it to? What happens when you just can't take it anymore? Erin has been in the dating scene for just a little too long, she can't take being alone anymore so she does the only thing she hasn't tried yet...she makes up the perfect guy. But what happens when the lines between her imagination and the real world get just a little too blurry? Now Erin is stuck in a whirlwind raomance...except he isn't real. Can she give up the best thing that ever happened to her for something real? Is she ready to trust another actual human being? Can she step out of her comfort zone and have a real life now? Or is she stuck in her own mind.

Not worried about getting this one published right now, it's not finished. Butterflies, I am. This is just hilarious and I was hopeing to get some feedback, THANK YOU! If you could go up to Butterflies and back that one it'd be greatly appreciated.

 
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breakdown, crazy, dating, imagination, out of control

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Pia wrote 485 days ago

Hilary -

Untitled as of yet - I enjoyed Butterflies, and I enjoy these contemplations on dating. You have apt little spellers, like - roamance - in your pitch :) I like the humour in Erin's voice, the writing flows beautifully, and you have an admirable knack for comedy. A handful of stars and the best success for all your projects. Pia

fody wrote 518 days ago

maybe the title is in your short pitch: Just a Little Mad!

Fody--Council of the Ark

name falied moderation wrote 615 days ago

Dear Hilary





Talent and skill have been shown with this book for sure. I have to wonder on this site at the creations that come from peoples heads and of course the immense talent of those like yourself to animate such colorful characters. I truly wish I had half your talent. I loved your short and long pitch both really sell your book which they are meant too so CONGRATS, and love the way you write. Your ability with words to craft an orginal read is amazing. the characters have decided to take up permanent residence but i will insist they leave soom to go home. ha!

Please take a moment to look, COMMENT which is important to me, and BACK my book. if not that is OK
also

The VERY best of luck to you

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Denise
The Letter

SusieGulick wrote 615 days ago

Dear Hilary, I love Erin's imagination & Logan. :) Wouldn't it be totally wonderful if all men were as nice as Logan :) - I guess like Mr. Darcy in Pride & Prejudice, huh? :) I just love your story & wish it could be this way for real. :) I hung on every word. :) You pitch prepared me for my read & I wasn't disapointed, but more than overjoyed. :) Tight dialogue & paragraphs moved your story quickly. :) What a nice read. :) Hope you'll write a lot of books. :) I have backed both of your books, now. :) Could you please take a moment to back my memoir book? :) Thank you from the bottom of my heart. :) Love, Susie :)

eriexchick wrote 640 days ago

Hilary,
I think Erin is a bit delusional, but I find her very compelling and your writing style paints such clear images in my mind. Backed with pleasure.



Thank you I was hoping it was as clear to everyone else as it was to me lol...even if it's a bit blurry to Erin :)

Walden Carrington wrote 640 days ago

Hilary,
I think Erin is a bit delusional, but I find her very compelling and your writing style paints such clear images in my mind. Backed with pleasure.

soutexmex wrote 657 days ago

Hilary: both pitches work brilliantly. I do apologize for the lack of a proper comment but I am leaving for the weekend and it's late here. Let me know if you want a proper comment upon my return and I will read more as soon as I have a chance. For now, enjoy the BACKING. I can use your comment on my book when you get the chance. Cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

Burgio wrote 659 days ago

UNTITLED
This is a story based on a clever premise: what would happen if an imagined world seems better than the real one? All the while I was reading this I kept seeing it as a Rom/Com movie with Julie Roberts playing Erin. I think you’ll find an audience for this among young adults whose dating life also isn’t going so well who want to follow this and see how it all plays out. I’m adding it to my shelf. If you have a moment, would you look at mine (Grain of Salt)? I’m in 3rd place but only holding on by my teeth. Burgio

Amylovesbooks wrote 661 days ago

Funny at the onset, and quite an enjoyable take on the chick lit genre. Shelved with pleasure!

Amy
Love Match

eriexchick wrote 664 days ago

This is hilarious! You have a real gift fo rwriting in the chick-lit genre and certainly excellent tongue in cheek humour which is right up my alley! backed with LOL!!

Liz
The Cheech Room



Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.

lizjrnm wrote 664 days ago

This is hilarious! You have a real gift fo rwriting in the chick-lit genre and certainly excellent tongue in cheek humour which is right up my alley! backed with LOL!!

Liz
The Cheech Room

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