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date submitted 13.07.2010
date updated 19.11.2010
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A Wolf In She's Clothing

Leila Lee

A female wolf bitten by an infected human must live life as an ‘upright’ to save her pack from extinction.

 

In this first book of a trilogy Elle was once a wolf; then, bitten by an infected human and transformed, she is thrust into the harsh and unknown world of uprights. She must servive with the despised form of human. Here she meets Mike, the cowboy with a heart as big as the Arizona ranch-land he rides upon. To him this mysterious raw beauty is surely salvation; all his dreams come true...


But, some dreams were always meant to be nightmares, and this one has just begun.
How will Elle explain claw-marks left on wooden floors by her son Cassity; and what to do about Coyote, the pack outcast not worthy the name of Wolf. He who is always two steps behind and getting closer?


As the local community must find a way to deal with the increasing threat of unnaturally brutal wolf attacks, Elle is torn between her strange new feelings for Mike and her primeval sense of duty to her kind. Will she make the ultimate sacrifice to safeguard her son’s future...?

 
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Slowly she returned to the Now.   But where had she been?  Had she been back to that horribly remembered place?  Only once before had she been submerged in such a dark, suffocating suspension of feeling.  That time, it was her mother’s demanding attention that returned her to the light.  She had been badly mauled and would have chosen the dark of the other world had it not been for her mother’s refusal to let her go.

But no, this was something different.  The hunting had been successful but she did not have the energy to return to the den.  There was an unaccustomed weakness as she dragged herself those few paces to this remembered haven.   Out here in the nowhere was this abandoned barn.  Here, she had fed on her kill.  Her body trembled in an agony of violation as wave after wave of gut-clutching spasms churned her insides.  Then came the most severe of winter chills followed immediately by the burning of a desert summer.  Impossible!  The weather seasons did not happen that way: one intruding on the other at the same time.  She did not fear this drift into the dark world but welcomed it as a relief from torment. Her willingness to linger in that relief did not dictate her submission to it.  She must return to the NOW. 

She opened her eyes a drowsy slit then, in shock, blinked and opened them to a startled wide.  This was wrong, frighteningly wrong.   The light was such that she had never seen.  Gone were the subtle differences in shades and hues, the sharp definitions in black and white, here was a different image.  She blinked again hoping it would go away.  It didn’t happen.

    This was the wrong den.  No!  The shapes and order of things were the same.  This was the place she always used when her hunting took her far from the pack.  Here were  the familiar and comforting smells: cured animal dung, musty straw bedding and the sweet odor of a snake’s lair.  Bright, dry dust floated in the air catching the early sunlight filtering through broken boards in the roof.  Never before did it appear so bright and alive, never before so shimmery silver.

 

    She lay on her side next to the comforting remains of her last meal; the crushed bones sucked for marrow, the discarded scrapes of fur.  The delicious perfume of blood gone dry lingered in the air.  She licked her lips for any remaining taste and then brought her paw forward to lick.  The comforting rasp of her tongue would collect the tidbit tastes left on the fur.  As it happened, her tongue slipped over the smooth surface of a paw she could not recognize.  This thing that responded to her intention couldn’t be hers.  Completely startled, she was on all fours to make an escape.   But they were not “all four”.  Her body moved independently of her thinking.  Her front paws left the ground.  It was as though she uncurled.  Her head lifted up and up and up until she balanced on her two hind legs.  She was upright.

  The  uprights had intruded and could be seen everywhere.  The whole pack knew, very well, what they looked like.   This was just some kind of mimic trick her body had learned.  Her heart pumped erratically to accommodate this new circulation. A swirling entered her head and she collapsed.

      This couldn’t be her body.  With eyes tightly shut, she couldn’t bear to see her ugliness.  She commanded different parts and pieces of it to move.  She practiced this exercise for several moments and always the limbs gave the appropriate response.

She knew what kind of creature she had been and what she should be.   When the uprights saw her, what was the cry?   “Wolf”, or sometimes  “Lobo” which she thought meant the same from their reactions.   She accepted that as being what she was.   She relaxed and breathed evenly. Now calmed, she took an inventory and had to admit that there was a match for what was remembered of them.  This is the body of an upright.  In confusion she thought, I was a wolf pup first.  I remember that.   Then, with the seasons, I got to be an upright.  Even she could see there was something wrong with that progression.  But what had happened to her?   Whatever, there wasn’t a thing she could do about it now.  She had to consider what this meant to her survival.  Was she safe here?

 

She finally acknowledged the obvious.  This place hasn’t changed: it is my eyes that have changed and how I am seeing it.  This is still the place where I have havened in the past.  This is where the uprights, at one time, kept their four leggeds.  When the uprights had moved out then all the natural life returned to make it home.  There are the very small creepies, the middle size scurryers and now I too.  It seems that, in me, an upright has returned.

      Then the thing happened that, as a predator, she always feared.  She sneezed.  While hunting you can’t afford that type of betrayal.  She sneezed again.  In her agitation she had stirred up clouds of old straw and dust.  Oh no!  She had never minded these things before.  This change affected not only her body but her thinking as well.  So, as much as she was loath to do so, now was the time to confront these changes.  

  This was a girl body and, with an ache of acceptance, it was her body.  Her disgust caught in her throat so that her anguished animal moan could not escape.  A moan had not the volume to express her distress.  At last, a full voiced and haunting howl satisfied her grief. 

No matter what her shape, she still had to eat, so these long, well-muscled legs would just have to carry her.  All her parts were pretty much accounted for, although of a size and shape she despised.  She wouldn’t ever think about her pelt.  She had been so proud of the thickness and silkiness, without realizing the richness of the color. She would miss the warmth of that pelt but she would not punish her vanity by its loss.  At least this under-a-rock, milky-white hide wouldn’t attract the unwanted attention of a male, whatever the specie.

Such speculation was a waste of time. Whatever the cause of this miserable transformation she still had to survive within this body.  The first order of survival was, as always, food.  That would have to wait for the darkness to settle.  It was then that the small, furry things would be about.  Her mouth puckered at the thought.  She would never get the fur past her mouth, let alone stomach it.  This strange reaction must be a part of her change.  She would skin down to the animal’s flesh before she fed.  What a waste.   She would face that later.   Now that the barn was daytime warm, a lethargic kind of coma overcame her.  With the drone of the insects as a lullaby tune, she slept.

She floated in a warm shallow of dreaming, buoyed by bubbles of a tuneless chant. “What came first, the chicken or the egg?…the chicken or the egg?…the chicken or…” It was a memory scolding her: a young one’s voice.  The words meant nothing.  They droned in her head as she slept.

 

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Red2u wrote 391 days ago

Love the chicken or the egg. Different but intriguing so have rated and placed it on my Wl for further reading. By the way Love France too!
Red

Brooklyn Writer wrote 399 days ago

I've only looked at the first couple of chapters and may come back for more later. Meantime, a spin on my shelf for what it's worth. (Not much as I have not TSR) The first chapter is especially strong and intriguing. I'm not a big fantasy fan but your concept is also fresh and worthy. Now, I'll admit that I didn't like your introduction to Michael via his rhyming songs. Too cute, and too obvious by half. You managed to get inside the head of the she-wolf in chapter 1, surely you can do the same for the cowboy in chapter 2? To begin with, he has to be doing something when we first meet him. I like "Seven years ago he had come through this country" as a first line, but I have no idea what he's doing in the chapter. Is he driving through looking at scenary? On a horse? This is problematic, but again I'm shelving on the basis of Chapter 1 and your concept. You'll figure out the rest.

Old Bob wrote 408 days ago

Hi Leila. I know I promised to do a reading a while ago. I don't usually read fantasy and I think that, subconsciously, kept me away longer than I intended. I do have a bias against fantasy so I may not be the best choice as a reader. I will attempt to focus on technique more than anything.

You have a compelling opening but, know what? You do something I don't like (doesn't mean it's wrong). You use the word "had" a lot. It's not just passive voice (which you also use a lot of), but it makes your writing choppy and keeps you from expressing yourself. Example in Paragraph 2: You say, "The hunting had been successful..." but the use of the word "had" along with the passive "been" allows you to skip showing the reader how and what was accomplished. Why did she not have the energy to return to the den?

You picked a really tough project - to convey the thoughts of an animal and to do it almost entirely in narrative. The premise is good but the narrative,, though well written, is slow. Let me suggest a couple of things for you to think about. If you want to set the stage, do it in a prologue (you did a pretty good job with your pitch). I would take everything leading to the transformation, condense it and write it along the lines of your pitch. At least you used more active voice there. Then, start your book with Chapter 2.

Alternatively, if you want to keep this as an expressive chapter, you've got to write all that narrative in more active voice. Dialogue is also a good way to move things along. I know it's hard to write dialogue with only one character, but you have several opportunities to change some of that narrative into expressed "thought". Thoughts, like dialogue, move a scene faster than narrative. Example (I just picked one): You say, "She never minded these things before. This change effected not only her body but her thinking as well." You are telling us what's going on. Try showing us, "I've never minded these things before, but now the change is effecting the way I think as well as how my body looks, feels, functions...". Which do you think moves your story along better?

Look, I'm not a trained writer; I only say what I feel. You don't have to take anything I say seriously and, certainly, I don't say anything to be mean. I just try to help.

Good luck with your book.

Old Bob
A PLACE IN LIFE

Helen Rose wrote 408 days ago

Wow, your book is really great. It's well written and extremely interesting. I'm so glad my friend David asked me to take a look at it.

Frank Sabetan wrote 412 days ago

Dear Leila:
It is my pleasure to read your book. I really appreciate my friend--David recommend your book to me. I just start to read and I believe I will fall in love with your work. Good luck.

eric.swanson wrote 412 days ago

Enjoyed the detail you place in the first chapter. Decided to back it.

Kenneth Edward Lim wrote 413 days ago

Leila,
I found your book unusual, to say the least. I've read of changelings before but the brew you've mixed involving a she-wolf turned human and procreating with a cowboy to poduce a love child with more than human qualities, is strangely intoxicating. I had a sampling and couldn't get enough. Your prose is clear and conciase, your dialogue well put together. Thank you so much for the entertaining read.

Kenneth Edward Lim
The North Korean

QuiteTheSmoothOperator wrote 414 days ago

Such an interesting idea for a story! It's backwards. I'm not great at coming up with things to comment on, but this is so fun. Ranked it highly.

Francene Stanley wrote 414 days ago

An intriguing read, and an excellent idea. Can an animal think this clearly? I'm not sure. But right at the end of the fiirst chapter, a human memory intrudes in her dream. Is this body memory? Has the wolf's brain inhabited a different human's body? The reader will have to continue to find out.

The writing could do with editing, so that each sentence sings with clear meaning, and the thinking is in an active voice. eg: It was a memory scolding her, a young one's voice.
The memory of a young one's voice scolded her.
Easily fixed.

Francene. Still Rock Water.

Scott S. wrote 415 days ago

My friend David keeps recommending me to read your book. Once I started to read your book, I got the reason why he did that. Thanks for your nice work.

VictoriaPendar wrote 416 days ago

This is such an interesting concept. It's much better than a recent movie I saw. Good job. And I was liking Michael so I can see why the wolf will too!!! (I only read to Chapter 3.)

Patrick Brockers wrote 418 days ago

Hi, Leila:
Nice to read your book. I read David's Mankind's end last week and he recommended me your book. I think I will enjoy reading your book as well.

Groaner wrote 419 days ago

Cool... if the first chapter don't keep you reading I don't what would. That pitch really drew me into this. Well done on that.
Good story (seem so, though I only read 2 chapters and skimmed a few more), and you have a fine voice for it. Superb writing in my opinion. Very nice flow, easy to read. I love it... place, characters, dialog... just darn well done. I think this should do well. On my shelf for sure. Best of luck with it.

CMTStibbe wrote 419 days ago

A Wolf In She’s Clothing is a evocative read. I enjoyed reading about the female wolf and how she suddenly finds herself as an ‘upright’. Michael in chapter 2 is dreaming. . .or is he? A naked vision runs out of sight and he follows her. This is an interesting chapter and I enjoyed his response. We are transported into chapter 3 and into the mind of the wolf-now-a-woman as she finds a barn and clothes to wear. The interlocking stories work well and there are plenty of visuals to fuel the mind. In chapter 3 Michael is watching and in chapter 4, she is aware of danger. But the sensations she feels are well delivered. They are still animal. I enjoyed this book immensely. Starred highly. Claire ~ Chasing Pharaohs.

Hero Xie wrote 420 days ago

I like you book very much! Thanks to my friends Gary Xie and David Welch' recommendation I got the chance to know you and your book! Keep going~ I will back up you~!

Gary Xie wrote 420 days ago

Wow, your book is really great. It's well written and extremely interesting. I'm so glad my friend David asked me to take a look at it.

Kerry M wrote 430 days ago

Hi Leila, comments as promised. Read your first three chapters and found it very well written with lots of good description. A couple of queries - chapter 1: the question of whether she is naked needs to be clarified and I couldn't help thinking what if the other wolves returned? Chapter 2: need the context of where Michael is earlier in the chapter (i.e. on horseback headed away from population). Perhaps need an "exciting incident" or a "dramatic highspot" early on to really hook the reader. Overall, very evocative and captivating. Good luck. Kerry M (Her Soul To Keep)

skaterwriter wrote 440 days ago

I read your first two chapters and although the idea is original to some degree I found your prose to be extremely wordy and somewhat boring. There were capital letters here and there that seem out of place. Your hook at the end of chapter 2 is the naked woman and I get that but you will lose the reader way before they get there with so much backstory and mundane information. How is this pop-culture? Skater

Gideon McLane wrote 447 days ago

"A Wolf In She's Clothing" - Leila Lee. I read the 1st 2 chapters, scanned the 3rd and several comments. Bookshelf and stars for plot originality and humor! Some thoughts: perhaps add "humor" to your pitch; suggest a flashback to when she was "infected" somewhere in the 1st chapter to set up the reader who hasn't read your pitch. In all a pleasant read.

Gideon ("Thrill Writer's Remorse")

"Stolen Childhood" wrote 455 days ago

I just love the title of your book, i saw it on someone’s shelf and i had to read the first chapter. The title it self creates a huge curiosity. Though it is scary to read about the her search for food i think this is well written.
Laila Bevan

RonParker wrote 464 days ago

Hi Leila,

Please excuse the duplicated message. It didn't appear to have registered the first time.

Ron

RonParker wrote 464 days ago

H Leila,

An good and original story with some amusing scenes. Unfortunately, I have only had time to rrad the first few chapters but I hope to return to it when time permits.

Had I not read your pitch I would not have understood at this stage what was going on. Your pitch won't be part of the book so shouldn't be relied on to explain things. Admittedly, things may be explained further into the story, but the reader might have lost interest by then.

You need to review your story for typos. For instance, you have scrapes which should be scraps and thought which should be though.

Young wolves are called cubs, not pups.

I do think this story is unique enough to find a place on the bookshelfs so I will be backing it for that reason. Good luck with it.

Ron

RonParker wrote 464 days ago

Hi Leila,

A great story with an original theme and some amusing scenes. Unfortunately I have only had time to read the first few chapters but I hope to return to the story when time permits.

From what I have read of the story, I would have found it a little difficult to understand what was happening if I hadn't read your pitch. Your pitch won't be part of the book so shouldn't be relied on to explain things. I appreciate this may be explained further into the story, but A reader could lose interest before then if he doesn't know what is going on.

You need to review your story for typos. For instance, you have scrapes which should be scraps and thought which shouild be though.

Young wolves are called cubs, not pups.

I do think this story is unique enough to find a place on the bookshelfs so will be backing it for that reason. Good luck with it.

Ron

Clare Morris wrote 466 days ago

Hi Leila, have read the first half of the book and really enjoyed so far. A great idea, turning the old idea of a human turning to a wolf after being bitten, on its head. I love your descriptions from the wolf's perspective - concerned with basic thoughts of survival only, ashamed of her body and totally incapable of dressing herself.

I think you have lots of potential here in this tale. Backed with pleasure and looking forward to reading more.

All the best
Clare Morris
The Cloud Drivers: The Giant's Storm

hikey wrote 504 days ago

' A Wolf in She's Clothing '

I found your story original and well crafted. Your plot seems well worked out and I would have enjoyed reading more. You have a great imagination and that rare ability of being able to put it into words.

Jane
'Breath in the Dark'

bookjacket wrote 522 days ago

I loved this! It was a quick read and had a different approach.
The she-wolf reminds me of Native American fables. Classic Americana. Great job, I can easily see this in stores.


-Judith B. Shields
[Twice Reborn]

billysunday wrote 524 days ago

Love your title-clever. Also, love your cover. Did you do the artwork? Your summary is very catchy and I look forward to reading it.

Ancient Reader wrote 526 days ago

Leila,
I have just finished all of chapters one through five and wish I had time for more.

You have a great premise here, the wolf being forced to live as a human and coming to terms with that. You do a fine job of showing the differences between a wolf and a woman. This section is a bit longer than necessary, but you have much to establish here. I think I would consider pruning the backstory a little; just give hints that you bring up later to fill out. This kind of clue-giving can hook the reader and make the need to keep reading to find the answers a profitable one for the author.

I like the unusual use of words here: " ... a soft, old blue jean kind of night" and "after the starched underwear day in the brittle, bright heat"

Even more of this kind of description would help those readers who have never spent time in Arizona. I have and I know how good these descriptions are to real life as well as being well written.

I think you can carry this theme out if you are careful to show how Elle's reactions are wolf-like and not human-like.

There is an audience out there for this kind of supernatural stuff. Good luck.

Ancient Reader.

Bradley Wind wrote 526 days ago

A Wolf in She’s Clothing
Cover: Nice, I always wanted a wolf-ear brassiere.
Title: Isn’t this title redundant? nice.
Short pitch: Hm, somekind of reverse werewolf story...wonder what you’d think of the dream I refer to in the beginning of Bulb(but not posted here) - also relates to our Assange talk. I think the short p just fine.
Long p: A story for the whole family. Have you contacted Disney about this one yet? I think this just fine as well.
Text: opening chapter is fun. I think the chant should be something other than chicken or egg. Possibly you are using it to foreshadow something about her true character but it doesn’t seem right that a wolf would turn human and suddenly start chanting human phrases. To me...
Best of luck with this!!
-=B

Christopher Roy Denton wrote 528 days ago

Hi Leila!

I did enjoy reading the first couple of chapters of your book. Here are my initial thoughts.

In the first chapter, the paragraph beginning ‘This was the wrong den.’ I think you meant ‘Was this the wrong den?’ I was surprised you concentrated on her differences in sight in the preceding paragraph, but then said the smells were familiar in this. Surely the difference in sense of smell would be even more powerful than the change from bw to colour sight. I mean, aren’t wolves about 100x more sensitive than us to smells?

Paragraph beginning ‘No matter what her shape’ there’s an s missing from species in the last sentence.

I think it’s a bad idea to end the first chapter with your mc falling asleep. It doesn’t hook the reader so much as a good old cliffhanger or a big question raised in the last paragraph. For example, if you ended with a paragraph where she’s wondering how she can hunt in this new body, then we’d have something to think about.

The second chapter ends with a wonderful hook, because we’re wondering if Michael will see Elle again. However, the second chapter as a whole isn’t as good as the first because it’s not quite so clear. I wasn’t aware he was on a horse and riding through the countryside until the second to last paragraph! Because of this, the whole thing felt like it was being told rather than shown. If you had set the scene better, so we knew he was on a horse and riding, it would feel less told. Also, I think you should reduce the backstory here and work it into later chapters more gradually.

It’s just my opinion. I still enjoyed reading this. It’s a good story :)

All the best,
Chris :-)

lbb wrote 530 days ago

Think you'll ever release this ? Because i would definatley buy it. :~)
Leesa, The Lake Dweller series.

E.J. West wrote 535 days ago

Just my thoughts...I really like the premise and have only read the first chapter....but, to me, it doesn't seem like your story begins in quite the right place. I think if you show the attack, not necessarily what is attacking her, and then have her stumbling around confused, it would allow the reader to be better grounded in the story. It's just a suggestion take it as you will. Will try to finish it over the next few days. I am really interested where you go with this. Will go on my watch list.

Also, just FYI I updated my profile and now have a story. While I really don't care if you back it or watch it, I would really appreciate some feed back on the first three chapters. I have more...but that's all I posted. I'm in the editing/revision stage and critiques are welcomed.

The Nomad wrote 537 days ago

Very interesting premise and story, enjoyable and uncomfotrable at the same time! I do have a few suggestions, if you want. I would have Elle's first person accounts in italic, just so the reader can differentiate her thoughts from the rest of the story. Also, there appear to be some paragraphs which are not first person accounts, but probably should be; where it says 'Did she..', it could just be switched to 'Did I..'.
One more thing, in the pitch survive is spelt as 'servive'.
Anyway, not major problems, just suggestions that a lot of people may disgree with. Backed with pleasure.

Good Luck!

The Nomad

THE ISLAND EXPERIMENT

minx2minx wrote 545 days ago

Happily rated and backed.
All the best
Lizzie Scott :-)

rivergirl wrote 546 days ago

Hi Lee you are now starred, watched and backed k x

Winnie Khaw wrote 550 days ago

Interesting premise! The character's dismay at finding herself transformed was convincing and well-written. :)

DirogEX wrote 550 days ago

I like the concept of it, it really drew me in. And, written from a wolf's point of view, it provides a fresh viewpoint. Backed with pleasure. :)

A. Zoomer wrote 551 days ago

A Wolf in She's Clothing
Dear LL,
You have succeeded in pulling me into your world.
I love the sneeze!
The story unfolds masterfully, I mean mistressfully. I read to Chapter 5 and will come back when I have time.
I have nothing but praise and stars to give this manuscript.
A Zoomer

Olga Carles wrote 554 days ago

Leila,

This isn't my preferred genre, but you have an interesting idea here. It seems to me that the execution in the first chapter is a little off though. For example, look at how many sentences begin with "She." Indeed, notice how many times the pronoun "she" appears in this chapter. Perhaps if you vary your sentence structure a little bit the picture you paint will be more accessible.

Kind regards,

Olga

Olga Carles wrote 554 days ago

Leila,

This isn't my preferred genre, but you have an interesting idea here. It seems to me that the execution in the first chapter is a little off though. For example, look at how many sentences begin with "She." Indeed, notice how many times the pronoun "she" appears in this chapter. Perhaps if you vary your sentence structure a little bit the picture you paint will be more accessible.

Kind regards,

Olga

Senor Rikardo wrote 554 days ago

Dear Leila,
As I explained this is not my usual reading material but I agreed to give it a go. I found it to be different and interesting. A fantastic plot and you have good imagination. I am happy to give this support.
Al

Marija F.Sullivan wrote 555 days ago

I remember how much I enjoyed this book, and would like to give you more support.
Best wishes and lots of stars, M
- Weekend Chimney Sweep or Happy New Year
- Sarajevo Walls of Fate

Rhose.Whyte wrote 557 days ago

Hello there! You had asked me to read this book, so here I am.

[] = add {} = remove () = change.

I'll read the first chapter only. x]

What's the "Now"? I feel like you should explain that a little more clearly, but I also like the part about how you are keeping my interest, so it doesn't really matter. x]

...return to the N[ow]. <--- Never use caps. Use italics if you have to.

...were not "all four[.]"

"Wolf[,]" or sometimes...

In her agitation[,] she...

They droned in her head as she slept. <--- Put that on a line by itself.

You have an awesome idea on your hands. I can picture you characters, although I don't really know what they look like. Maybe you can explain that in the second chapter [which I'm sure you will.] I have also noticed that you don't really have much thoguhts in your writing. Try and add some in, so that the reader can have a brief idea of what the MC is thinking. Because that's what I love to read. x]

Remy xx

P.s: If you have time, could you read my project "Hate that I Love You" in return? Thank you! <3

Marianne Rivera wrote 558 days ago

This is different and interesting! I enjoyed reading it, think it needs a comma here and there.
Marianne Rivera, Otti's Escape

fh wrote 567 days ago

A WOLF IN SHE'S CLOTHING
Excellent title, caught my imagination straight away. I think others say so too.
This is well narrated with a strong and good story plot. Fantasy is such a huge genre nowadays and has to be exceptional and I feel thst this is spot on. Unique ideas blended with modern thinking. Intriguing and well worth a read.
Good luck
Faith
THE ASSASSINS VILLAGE

Justis Call wrote 567 days ago

First off, I love the title - excellent play on words. And from what I have read thus far, it is quite an appropriate title. Original and creative, great read.

Backed with pleasure!
Justis Call
Prestidigitations

Elizabeth.NYC wrote 568 days ago

What an original and beautifully written story! The author's narrative in chapter one captivated me. The style is almost surreal, elegantly detailed, and I think it is a rare author who can open a story from the mind and heart of an animal and completely win over her readers. That's what happens here. Then, as we learn that Ellie is an upright - the story takes off into a lavish and rich fantasy. I found nothing in the narrative to distract me. I felt mesmerized by the first chapter and I'm anxious to read on. Brava - this book deserves a high star rating and belongs on many, many shelves.
Lizzi
(Out of Sync)

Red Ribbon wrote 568 days ago

A great twist to the werewolf genre. Loved her panic as she changes into human form, drew the scene well.

End of chp 2 not heard of the expression 'she was slow running' I take it is shouldn't read running slow.

The two characters are strong and it moves at a good steady pace.

Welll done.

Backed.

Red

Kaychristina wrote 576 days ago

Leila, great storytelling. A She-Wolf in *upright* human clothing, in a mysterious human world we can rediscover along with her, and a man's man in Mike she's sure to meet... On top of that, there are cubs to worry about, one who was nearly the death of her, and a past, a future everyone will want to know about.

The imagery is stunning, and the internal thought processes beautifully done. It's very unusual to have no dialogue for such a stretch, (until ch.4) but what we have to replace it is by far superior.

Backed for your skill, and for all creatures great and small.

From Kay
(Waystation to Prosperity Street)