Millie Rose

The Enormous Little Adventures of Millie Rose
by Kris Oliver .

This is one of the best kiddies books that I have seen on the site.
I can imagine parents reading this to a very young child, it's brimming with everything that will hold a child's attention.
I see that the story is to be in Audio Format as well.
Great...that's is even better...Mum can get on with other things. Good thinking!!
This is kiddies writing at it's very best, I was facinated by its structure and the interest it offers a youngster.
This is a story, I would have loved as a child, it has that 'Alice In Wonderland' touch to it that you never forget.
It doesn't need to be a long story, it's fine as it is, just about right.
Wonderful book cover, eye catching, very colourful.
I would expect this book to be taken up by a publisher, if not I would wonder why... Brill!!
Pleased to put your book on my shelf with the highest rating.

Kind regards,

Neville. THE SECRETS OF THE FOREST - THE TIME ZONE.

I love running across a good children's book on this site. Children's authors in general on this site are far and few between and I think we need to stick together! I often find that writing about animals can be very difficult but you have managed to make little MIllie relatable to your target audience. You didn't give too much detail to distract the younger reads, yet the action is perfect. I am of to take look at the illustrations as I am sure they are charming! Best of luck with this and I hope to see this published soon! Many stars from me.

Best,

Ashley

Really lovely. And getting through a cat flap? My nine-year-old managed to wriggle through the next door neighbour's cat flap when she left the keys inside, but I don't think any older child would manage it.
To be backed when space permits. Marj.

I thought this was a lovely, well written story - good work. Personally, i'd make it the first time the child went through the cat flap, which would be more exciting. Our cat flap is quite small and i did wonder how even a young child could wriggle through, but i'm probably being over analytical! For some reason I can't give you a star rating right now, but i'll do it later.
Good luck with it.
Kim
St Viper's School for Super Villains

I thought this was a lovely, well written story - good work. Personally, i'd make it the first time the child went through the cat flap, which would be more exciting. Our cat flap is quite small and i did wonder how even a young child could wriggle through, but i'm probably being over analytical!
Good luck with it.
Kim
St Viper's School for Super Villains

The Enormous Little Adventures of Millie Rose
by Kris Oliver .

This is one of the best kiddies books that I have seen on the site.
I can imagine parents reading this to a very young child, it's brimming with everything that will hold a child's attention.
I see that the story is to be in Audio Format as well.
Great...that's is even better...Mum can get on with other things. Good thinking!!
This is kiddies writing at it's very best, I was facinated by its structure and the interest it offers a youngster.
This is a story, I would have loved as a child, it has that 'Alice In Wonderland' touch to it that you never forget.
It doesn't need to be a long story, it's fine as it is, just about right.
Wonderful book cover, eye catching, very colourful.
I would expect this book to be taken up by a publisher, if not I would wonder why... Brill!!
Pleased to put your book on my shelf with the highest rating.

Kind regards,

Neville. THE SECRETS OF THE FOREST - THE TIME ZONE.

Kris - I find the title too long for children - how about cutting it down? Button Nose alone would enchant and attract anyone I feel sure. Aside from that I have read some of your charming tale Millie Rose and backed your book with shining stars. Balepy (Freckles the Fawn)

I was intrigued by your long pitch and I just read Chapter One and a few paragraphs of Chapter Two. I'll be reading more because the writing is good and the story looks interesting. Just wanted to note quickly that you're missing a vital part of the beginning of your story. We need to see Millie in her regular boring, ordinary, and in some specific way disappointing/hurtful, and then see her actually discover the portal to her magical world. This is standard in this type of book, as children need to be drawn in by some initial stumbling upon something fantastic and otherworldly. I'll have more comments on the story as it is once I've read more. =)

Hey you,

Just your freindly neighbourhood Tigger. Oh wow! Your writing is terrific. So glad you kept at it. Just love Millie Rose.

Myth Watch is finally revealed to the world. Have a look and let me know what you think.

Ian

What a sweet story!

It's probably my natural perversity, but as cute as this is, I couldn't help thinking that a child shrinking to the size of a hamster in the proximity of a cat might not be such a good idea. I'm not sure what made me think that; maybe the pile of hamster sized rodents that my pet cat drags through his cat flap??!

Notwithstanding my macabre musings, this is a delightful little tale.

J.S.Watts
A DARKER MOON

What a delightful story! The characters are so well developed and your writing skills for children are excellent. I am enjoying the adventure as much as any child would. I wish you the best with your book.

One thing, though. SO many people make this mistake and I found it in some of your sentences. The contraction for "you are" is "you're" and not "your." I guess I noticed because it is a pet peeve of mine I see everyday in writing and correspondence.

I am excited about backing your book and giving it many stars. If you wouldn't mind returning the favor for my book THE TIMID HEART, I would greatly appreciate it. Thanks!

Debbie Martin
THE TIMID HEART <3

This is indeed a delightful story for children.
I'm currently not backing many new books but have looked at both of yours and given them star ratings. They are both very readable and enjoyable.

You're welcome, Kris. Have you given any further thought to removing the word "but" from your title? I would love to see your book titled "The Enormous Little Adventures Of Millie Rose."

I told my twin brother the title of one of my books and he suggested I change one word and I like it so much better now.

Sincerely,
Kate

I read the first chapter of Millie Rose and discovered a bright, cheerful, makes-me-smile story with cute, endearing characters.

A suggestion for the title: remove the word 'but' so that it reads 'The Enormous Little Adventures of Millie Rose '.

The word 'but' always makes me think that something negative is about to be said or done.

Little Adventures

This is precious and thoroughly enjoyed by my grandchildren.
Such a long title.

A zoomer

This is VERY cute! I haven't read much but will be back for more, it really made me smile :-)

Cute story. I like Millie, "the smart sausage," and the cat door transformation. I also liked how you ended the chapters I read.
Question: Do her parents know what happens to her when she goes through the door? (I'm assuming its her secret.)
Also, at the beginning-when does she go through the door. She is watching her cat from inside the house, reminiscing about her past adventures, and then she is outside.
And at the beginning of chapter 3, we do not need to be reminded that she has made friends with a snail. You can just continue with the rest of your story.

This is a really appealing story for young children . It is a change from witches and wizards. I think it would add interest if you added a little to explain how Millie first discovered that she could get through the cat flap. Did she get stuck the first time she tried it? Backed, Anne

This is absolutely adorable. Age appropriate intelligent and imaginative! Backed for 24 hours.

Liz
The Cheech Room
A Fine Pickle

Kris,
This is a wonderful children's story remeniscent of Alice in Wonderland. I truly enjoyed if. The only comment that I would make is the transition through the cat flap. It is sprung upon the reader suddenly without any explanation of sensation or orientation. When did Millie first discover this and how?
At any rate a charming story.
Best of luck,
Sharon Van Orman

This is so sweet! I really enjoyed it. If I was a little tiddler, I bet this would've had me in tears because all the little creatures were so kind to each other! But I also bet I would've gotten someone to read it to me again and again. Best of luck with this. Ceeds

Kris The Enormous but Little Adventures of Millie Rose is just my cup of tea and I have backed this without hesitation. I trust you might do the same after looking at Freckles the Fawn - and do leave some feedback if you have time. Best wishes and keep writing - Balepy

The Enormous but Little Adventures of Millie Rose:

I'm delighted to come across another children's story on Authonomy. My grandchildren will love this and they're having a sleepover next weekend at my place so I will read this to them.

I've tried three times to back itbut this computer won't put it through so will try again in an hour or so when I'm at my own PC.

All the best,

Cáit :o)

What great stories you write. I am impressed by the way you get into the mind of your character.

This is a delightful story. Backed.

As kiddie's books go, I can't find much wrong with this...perhaps my biggest issue has to do with inappropriate colloquial usage eg. floor instead of ground etc and a number of punctuation problems...try to get this illustrated!
Good luck
Stewart

A cute and enjoyable story. Be careful of punctuation though. When using dialogue there should be a comma before the name of the person speaking. You've used full stops most of the time. Good luck with your story. Have added to my watchlist.

What a beautiful and sweet write.
Backed with pleasure
green h - through green's eyes

This is sweet and obviously a work of care and love. I wish you success with this and whatever follows it!
Backed with pleasure
Peter Wild
Double Action
(A very long way away from Millie and Button Nose :)

Kris, I feel you wrote this with a lot of love and enjoyment, it certainly comes across that way. Childrens books have always been a fascinating thing for me, brings back memories of the scrapes and games we often got into and with such great fun. This is such a lovely book and with the coming of the illustrations, it will surely be a top of the chart book with your chosen audience. Backed with pleasure and GOOD LUCK.
Norman. (Fromante)

Dear Kris,
Your book is charming and well written. It's so difficult to write a children's book that doesn't talk down to children, but connects with them in a profound way. Your writing has just the right touch!

BACKED
Elizabeth Wolfe (MEMORIES OF GLORY)

Enchanting. Best wishes, M
- Weekend Chimney Sweep
- Sarajevo Walls of Fate

A nice little story. Written in a perfect style for children. I am sure that there are plenty more stories to follow.

Philip John

Lovely little story. Millie is a cute character. It's a nice way to learn about animals.
I like stories that teach children about animals. I have a book called 'Bedtime stories with the Fruit Fairies'
Their fairy dust can only help animals. (the book is old now. so not plugging) lol
Look forward to more stories about Millie :)

KRIS OLIVER: THE ENORMOUS BUT LITTLE ADVENTURES OF MILLIE ROSE

Dear Kris,
I have this habit of looking through children's books because of my interest in finding good reads for my son. Yes, I did enjoy your book and so did my child; the writing is candid and alive as you take the young reader through an adventure that begins with the search for the snail's shell. Millie Jean naturally finds new friends along the way and the child grows enraptured with the many faces and stories that gets thumbed through the read.

I hope HC takes a look at your book.

Shelved!; just returning to make my commentary!

Romilla
Forgetting Sally

Hi
This is a well written enjoyable story. I think it could benefit with a little edit, not that there is anything wrong with the prose but rather to better fit the target age group. I loved Millie Rose.
Backed.
A return read and comment would be appreciated.
cheers olga

How cute, read up to Mo Mo the mouse. Would love to see pictures for it! Backed! Please check out my books. You would probably like "One Spring", but you can look at them both.

Kris,
The Enormous but Little Adventures of Millie Rose is an enchanting story. I'm sure I would have been enraptured by it more than a few years ago. Backed with pleasure.

I think you've hit a marketing jackpot with this one. Pod casts are coming on strong, but I haven't heard of anyone doing a children's book yet. Why not? Parents can supervise the upload and with all the new developments in sound software, it's a natural. Your story is very imaginative, and most importantly gentle on the ear. Should be a winner.
Niobrara Kardnova (Family Irregulars)

Dear Kris Oliver,

You can call me, monkey, too. I love Millie Rose. Yes, little but enormous in its scope to bring joy.

Best to The Enormous but Little Adventures of Millie Rose and backed.

GK Stritch
CBGB Was My High School

Kris.
This is a great little story. It does catch the imagination quickly which children need. Backed with pleasure. My childrens' book is for the same age group, so eould appreciate any of your experience. Best wishes.
Jerry [paperbats]

A total delight. I am completely charmed by this.

this could be a classic. nice children's story, with with a good flow, a treat for children of all ages...on my watchlist...
read SEASONS...

You have finely crafted a lovely children's story and have created a most memorable character in Millie. Both children and their parents will enjoy your excellent work. Backed with pleasure.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

A very charming and wonderful story.
Backed with pleasure.

Dawn My Friends and Me / Sammy and the Wise Willow

Millie's little meetings are just the thing to help parents give their children instruction and keep them interested.

BACKED

ENORMOUS BUT LITTLE ADVENTURES
This is a charming children’s story. You have a good main character in Millie and a mix of good accessory characters to compliment her. I think you’ll find a wide school age audience for this and because it advocates kindness to animals will also be selected by grade school librarians and parents (and those are the ones who buy books). I’m happy to add it to my shelf. If you have a moment, would you look at mine (Grain of Salt)? I’m in 3rd place but only holding on by my teeth. Burgio

Dear Kris
absolutely love this book. the book cover is captivating, your pitch wow. i want this book forget my kids and grand kids. BEAUTIFUL
I have started to read your writing and must say that it is compelling. Already you have established your animated characters in my head, ( they are not leaving soon) and i feel strongly to back your book now. I do wish to be part of your climb to the top on this site. CONGRATS and I will comment more as I read more
BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Please take a moment to look, comment which is important to me, and back my book. if not that is OK also

The VERY best of luck to you

Denise
The Letter

This is adorable and kids will love it! Backed with pleasure.

Liz
The Cheech Room

Dear Kris, I love your darling book. :) I hope you'll have a whole series of Millie. :) Your pitch, paragraphs, & dialogue are nice & crisp, all leading to an enjoyable read. :) I have already backed you book :) - hope you'll take a moment to back my 2 memoir books. :) Thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

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