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rank 5464
word count 28285
date submitted 16.08.2010
date updated 29.03.2011
genres: Fiction, Fantasy, Young Adult, Chri...
classification: universal
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Dream Seekers: The Beginning

Brandi Brace

Arie's world is turned upside down when she discovers that she is heir to the elven throne of a world she never knew existed.

 

For years sheltered and secluded in a lonely home full of lies, Arie, a young and independent teenager, is pulled from her reality into a world she never fathomed to exist and made to reconcile who she is with who she is being forced to become. A book of approximately 100,000 words, Dream Seekers: The Beginning is the first of a series that will follow Arie into her future while delving farther into her family’s past and the history of the elven race she finds she is a part of. Mixing fantasy with Christianity and a bit of science, the book presents not only an alternate world but a world rich in history that mingles with that of Earth’s.

The book is written from Arie’s perspective showing her inward struggle and allowing the reader to experience the indecisiveness and fear of a girl who tries very hard to show the world that she is sure and confident. Dealing with the revelation that the only parents she ever knew were soldiers ordered to kill her family and kidnap her at a young age, Arie’s story of self discovery is framed in confusion, sadness, and loss.

 
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Chipper10 wrote 642 days ago

Good style and plot. Backed.

I invite you to comment or read Dreams Come True: A Story About Taylor Swift.

God Bless,
Chipper

klouholmes wrote 643 days ago

Hi Brandi, The outset immediately captured my interest because of the strange treatment that Arie receives from her parents and then their leaving her overnight. She begins as a normal girl, her dialogue a protest. After the dream, her walking into the hallway and into the strange building is entrancing. I liked all the description and how she tries to maneuver her way through it only to find herself in the dragon basement. Your style and wording have the fairy world flavor. Happy to shelve – Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

Craig Ellis wrote 644 days ago

Original fantasy, with a great story line. You have a good hook at the end of the first chapter, with Arie being confined by indifferent parents, who end up not being her parents. I like the transition between a normal world and a fantasy one in your first two chapters.

Good dialogue throughout, and a well described world.

Backed with pleasure!

Craig Ellis
The Sun and the Saber

beegirl wrote 644 days ago

This is a good beginning for a strong storyline. I sometimes felt as I read the information was rushing out--this was especially true when you are unpacking Arie's history.
Keep up the good work. Write on.
Barbara

CamilleS wrote 644 days ago

You have me hooked and I want to keep reading, that's the name of the game. Well done! Backing.

Camille
Curse of the Golden Fly

yasmin esack wrote 644 days ago

Bravo! This is marvelous writing. You convey the young girl's anguish so vividly and your characters come to life.

I am most happy to back you

THE DATE

missyfleming_22 wrote 644 days ago

Arie is an interesting character, a little different from the norm. You've got a great writing style, perfect for this kind of story. You really draw the reader in and your blend of genres is awesome. I've enjoyed reading this!

Missy

Andrew Burans wrote 645 days ago

You have finely crafted a most interesting storyline and have created a very endearing main character in Arie. Your use of short paragraphs and crisp, realistic dialogue keeps the pace of your story flowing well. All of this coupled with your descriptive writing ensures that your work will appeal to the youth market. Backed with pleasure.

Cheers,
Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

tendorphin wrote 646 days ago

wonderfully written with incredible attention to detail. i love Arie's innocence, but courage in wanting to discover things and know more. perhaps this expresses a bit of the author's personality?

Burgio wrote 646 days ago

DREAM SEEKERS
This is an interesting story. You’ve created a good character in Arie; she has every reason to be confused about who she is and you express that well through her thoughts. I’m glad you decided to tell this in third person rather the usual first person narrative new writers tend to use; it gives this a much more polished, mature feeling. Makes it a good young adult read. I’m happy to add it to my shelf. If you have a moment, would you look at mine (Grain of Salt)? I’m in 3rd place but only holding on by my teeth. Burgio

Jim Darcy wrote 646 days ago

Plenty of original touches to interest and enchant the reader. Good fantasy fare with a strong Mc Arie.
Jim Darcy
The Firelord's Crown

Walden Carrington wrote 646 days ago

Brandi,
Dream Seekers: The Beginning takes the reader into another world which reveals the author's brilliant imagination. It reminds me of The Chronicles of Narnia by C. S. Lewis. The reader is taken into another world through a wardrobe cabinet in the Lion, The Witch, and the Wardrobe. It appears to be the beginning of a series of fantasty novels which will enchant young readers who enjoy imagining themselves into another world created by the author. Backed with pleasure.

scargirl wrote 647 days ago

this premise is good. perhaps separate the long pitch into paragraphs to make it easier reading..
j

Laurence Howard wrote 647 days ago

Your pitch is intriguing. I like the Christianity/ Science mix. Well written, original and imaginative. Very enjoyable.
Laurence Winchester, The Cross of Goa.

Eveleen wrote 647 days ago

Dream seekers
The writing is good
Backed
Eveleen(Turning a new leaf)

RonCoffman wrote 647 days ago

I was taken with Arie when you first introduced her. Isn't the singular for elf , Elf not elve? doesn't matter. Your writing is great . The story takes me away on the fantasy I wasn't expecting. Very cool.

Backed. and put a bit more up for us all to read...

Ron Coffman DRAGON'S LIGHT

name falied moderation wrote 647 days ago

Dear Brandi
love elf books addicted for sure, and yours is wonderful. (well so far). I would like to commend you on the skill you have applied, the imagination and the talent you have in writing this work of art of yours. I feel sure you feel like me that it is your baby and you so want to see it succeed. I do wish you all the best in rising and also getting this book of your published

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Please take a moment to look, comment which is important to me, and back my book. if not that is OK also

The VERY best of luck to you

Denise
The Letter

SusieGulick wrote 647 days ago

Dear Brandi, I love that you quote some scriptures like, "in the beginning God" & "Christ died for us" - great that you got the most important points in. :) Darling story - hope you write many more. :) Your pitch, paragraphing & dialogue are excellent. :) I've already backed your book :) - hope you'll take a moment to back my 2 memoir books. :) Thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

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thebobster wrote 647 days ago

great stuff!

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