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date submitted 16.08.2010
date updated 16.08.2010
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction, Thriller...
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Errand into the Maze

Harold Calthorpe

A rape takes place in the crypt of a church. Twenty five years later it has catastrophic consequences for three people.

 

Rowan Fisher knows little about his parents save that his mother died in the flood in Florence in 1966. He arrives in the Italian city on a quest for more knowledge. Unbeknown to him he will commit an act of incest and his entire history will have to be re-written from scratch.

 
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In an arched niche high in the wall stood a cast of Venus. She looked down at Jared’s Descent from the Cross, the large painting he had been working on for the past five years. It depicted the central Christian paradox: the secular defeat leading to the spiritual victory. On the surface Jared did not believe what his painting conveyed - the creed of his church fathers that there exist final causes. He was a man still awaiting his revelation.

      The last time he had worked on it was a few days ago when he had painted an emerald stone around the neck of the Virgin Mary. His wife had posed for the Madonna and lay in a faint at the bottom of the canvas. The swirling dark background threatened to engulf her. This was the third time he had unconsciously painted his wife unconscious. The third time he had shown her in a state of slumber, unable or unwilling to open her eyes. This was one of the mysteries of his painting. His wife’s daughter, whom he had brought up as his own child, the legacy of running off with another man’s wife, was the ministering angel who held the Madonna’s head. His eye moved up to the figure in the fiery red robe who represented St. John of the Apocalypse and then to Christ on the cross who bore a subtle resemblance to Jared himself. The sky had split open above Christ’s head. His left hand was still nailed to the cross, his right arm stretched down towards the unconscious Madonna. The living Christ was embraced by the beautiful Magdalene who gripped his leg beneath the knee around which she had entwined her long dark curls. Jared had painted a second shadow Christ, from whose shoulder, suggesting the idea of the Passion, flowed in tangled folds a purple robe. This was the Christ who would descend down into hell to pluck out Adam and Eve. Jared’s own daughter, the eight-year-old Cordelia, had posed as a child who held the Madonna's hand but was looking up at Magdalene, the fallen woman. Only now did he notice a note of wary reproach in the highlight of his child’s eye.

     Jared opened the copy of the Bible given to him by his father. If thou seekest her as silver, and searchest for her as for hid treasure; Then shalt thou understand the fear of the Lord, and find the knowledge of God.  Jared enjoyed opening the Bible at random and reading the first few lines on which his eyes alighted. If thou seekest her as silver... What did that mean exactly? Her instantly evoked an erotic undertow. She was the vision which set him down before the ocean of all his sustaining longings. She could never be for him merely an abstract principle. She was forever and always personified in physical form as the muse. Was the problem then that his wife had ceased to be his muse? He had given some thought to the idea of adding two panels to his Descent from the Cross - on these he would depict Adam and Eve. No muse though had appeared, no girl posing nude for his students was appropriate to the idea he had in mind. 

      As Jared stepped up closer to his picture, a voice, English, well-educated, slightly affected in tone and unfamiliar, resounded through the corridor of the deconsecrated church.

     “If I’m not mistaken, that’s Raphael leading Tobias and his dog on the plaque outside,” said the dark-haired man who pushed aside the drapes of Jared’s studio. “Forgive me for intruding. My name, by the way, is Damien Sparks.”

      Jared shook the man’s hand. He was wearing a russet sweater beneath a black sheepskin coat.

     “This building,” said Jared, “used to be a church dedicated to the Archangel Raphael, healer and guide of wayfarers.”

      “Now it’s an art school, I believe. This building, you see, played a part in my youth. I attended one or two parties here in the sixties. That was before I went into law, when I was still idealistic.” The man, lit a cigarette with a match and blew out a dissolving circle of smoke. “I remember there was a huge Buddha statue up there which I see has been replaced by Venus. In fact, the parties here were rather wild. A woman was raped at one of them, downstairs somewhere I believe. That caused quite a rumpus among the English community at the time. In those days, as I recall, this building was believed to be haunted. An angry woman was the general hypothesis. I don’t suppose you've ever experienced her - the angry woman?”

      “I thought all women were angry nowadays,” smiled Jared.

      “I’ll never understand women. One of the reasons I’m retracing my steps is a hiatus in my relations with my wife. She possesses an absolutely brilliant mind and thus it's very difficult ever to win arguments. She’s given me permission to have an affair. Says I ought to sow some wild oats. Her only clause is that it must be an affair with a girl no older than twenty-two. Her reasoning is that I’ll soon grow bored without intellectual stimulus and that girls are still mentally unformed until they reach twenty-three. I suppose that's rather an arbitrary statement but those were her words. She believes I will be saved by a sacrifice on her part.”

      “So you’ve come to Florence to have a fling?”

      “No. The older I get the less interested I become in libidinal frisson. Among other things, I’ve come with the idea of purchasing property in Chiantishire.”

        “Not this particular piece of property, I take it?”

       “No, no. I'm no artist and I'm certainly not interested in moral responsibilities. Any claim I had to moral high ground went to the dogs when I defended the Prince of Darkness. That’s what I call the most infamous of my clients. He pays me a yearly annuity for a scrape I got him out of. Therefore, I'm still, you might say, in his pay.”

      “The Prince of Darkness?”

      “My private joke,” said Damien Sparks. He now turned to look at Jared’s painting for the first time. “So you're a great fan of chiaroscuro. Isn’t that merely old hat?”

      “I paint from nature; I paint what I see,” said Jared.

      “I’m not sure I trust these formulas for capturing beauty. We’ve had golden sections, squares, circles, S shapes. Each one becomes slavish in its own way. Artistic doctrine has a well-recorded history of inhibiting creativity. Actually, I recently acquired a rather nice piece of work. It was a painting on a piece of old plywood. Rather Chinese in its effect of leading the observer towards an idea of the purification of spirit. I've also just purchased two paintings by a London artist called Babb. They're both yellow – primrose yellow squares actually. I find them fascinating.”

      “Modern life has very much been turned into yellow squares - neat equations of bland optimism. But do they offer any resolutions or redemptions? Perhaps though, as Shelley said, poets are the hierophants of an unapprehended inspiration. What kind of inspiration is a yellow square?”

       “Inspiration is for artists. I’m a lawyer. So,” the man said, after looking deeply into Jared’s shy blue eyes, “a charge of magus might be levelled at you? What is it you teach your students? To paint what they see?”

      “Any idea of beauty depends on seeing the whole, what you choose to leave out as well as put in. Painting has as much to do with evolving consciousness as training the eye.”

      “Quantum theory has it that we change things by observing them. So aren’t you really just seeing what you want to see? Which is to say, reality as the old masters perceived it? And you hate all modern and abstract art?”

      “I dislike fads.” 

      “You go in for the abiding truths? The thing I don’t understand,” continued the barrister, “is how one can even believe it’s possible to recreate the sensibility of the sixteenth century. Violence, the threat of plague, persecution and the fervent fear-induced nature of religious belief gave to those paintings a profundity we can only regard with disenfranchised awe nowadays. Who any more, for example, could paint a proud regal male without poking fun at him? Males in those days never suffered from self-doubt in their social and religious roles - the infrastructure was still intact which gave them their authority. Any male nowadays who sees himself in those high and mighty terms simply becomes a laughing stock. Irony is the medium through which we now grasp reality. To discount it from any depiction of modern life is to deny the organic evolution of our thinking.” The barrister turned his attention back to Jared’s painting. “But tell me, why is the Virgin wearing an emerald stone?”

       Jared himself was not sure why he had painted the stone around his wife’s neck. The moment he had seen the green stone while searching for a fortieth birthday present for Diane he knew it was what he wanted to give her. It summoned to his mind an image of the grail stone and his idea was that it would act as a kind of talisman. He associated one particular day with the stone. Earlier in the year he and his wife had been on holiday in France. The day started, while Diane was intent on her reflection in the mirror, applying her usual sweet-smelling accruement of body paints and powders, with an argument. Stencilling a subtle black shadow beneath the blue of her widened eyes, she told him she was not interested in accompanying him on a tour of the Romanesque churches in the area. What once had drawn her to him - the contagious ascendancy of his insistence on harmonious line - had now become her chief source of irritation.

      Jared followed the old pilgrim’s route as designated in his guide. He had visited a few churches and seen a perfectly preserved wooden crucifix from the twelfth century before parking the car in a small village. Red geraniums contrasted poignantly with the grey stone of the houses. He heard the crisp sound of a man hammering nails into wood. The church itself was in shadow and stood in a small square with several plane trees and a magnolia whose flowers were on the verge of opening. There was a scallop shell on the door, a testament to the pilgrims who had used these shells in which to collect alms.

      The interior of the church, at first glance, had no floor and resembled the kind of spectacle the mind produces in sleep. The arches and the roof all lay at his feet as well as over his head: the floor was entirely covered in mirrors. His initial reaction was mistrust as though he were about to be ensnared in some fatuous modern performance art from which even his beloved Romanesque churches were no longer immune. He thought about turning his back on the experience, especially when he saw a sign saying that shoes had to be removed. He picked up a leaflet. The leaflet was entitled, Quod superius, sicut quod inferius - As above, so below. There was a primitive drawing of two snakes forming a double spiral around a rod. They were on the verge of attacking one another. He read only a fragment of the text alluding to the Tabula smaragdina, the emerald tablet, on which the essence of the alchemical opus was inscribed in thirteen sentences from Hermes Trismegistus. He walked slowly across the glass towards the transept with the church’s double row of arches soaring both above and below him. The world had been turned upside down. He felt as though he was walking on water. All the weight in his body dissolved and he succumbed to a sensation of being suspended ethereally between two surfaces, two worlds. His progress across the glass and its disorientating duplications was accompanied every so often by images of an embryo developing inside a womb. Something was trying to rebirth him. Something was trying to make him experience a reality which defied hard analysis. 

      He gave his wife the leaflet to read without having read it himself. Diane though was tired of giving credence to his enthusiasms and lost it without so much as glancing at it. He searched among the rubbish, the fermenting vegetable peelings, the fat and bone of chewed meat, the crushed cartons and oxidising tins but it had vanished without trace. She did not remember what she had done with it. Lost, it began assuming an immense significance in Jared’s mind.

     The stone he gave to his wife had the form of an Egyptian scarab, symbol of rebirth, and its markings etched out a primitive cross. Jared explained to Diane that it represented the four elements which together give rise to the quintessence. He later discovered that the emerald stone was the jewel that fell to earth from Lucifer’s crown when the angel of dawn was cast out of heaven. Diane wore the green stone for a month, seeming to take great pleasure from it, and then put it away in a drawer.

     “Do you know why you do everything you do?” asked Jared in response to Damien Sparks’ question. “The stone appeared and I painted it.”

    The barrister raised his eyebrows and then picked up a jar of honey-coloured medium which he held up to the light. “I don’t suppose,” he said, swirling the unctuous liquid around in the glass, “for old times sake, you'd care to show me round the downstairs part of the studio?”

     There being no direct access between the upstairs and downstairs floors, they descended the narrow marble stairs to the street below. Jared led Damien Sparks through a large wooden door. Beneath a high vaulted ceiling the room was cluttered with easels and model stands. Small plaster casts lined the shelves - an orderless miscellanea of angels, ballerinas, holy virgins and nymphs collecting dust. 

      “I seem to recall there being talk of a crypt somewhere down here. You haven’t located it, I suppose.”

      “There’s a kind of trap door beneath that rug over there which leads down into a small cellar.”

      “No, this was a proper crypt. People were said to have hidden down there during the war.”

      “Perhaps you should speak to the owner of the building, Guido Locatelli. His family has owned this building for generations. They were all sculptors. You should talk to Locatelli. He might know where the crypt is.”

      Jared flicked on the switch but no light was forthcoming. The walls of the old church climbed a vast distance until they disappeared into the penumbra beneath the wooden rafters high above. Hoists which once upon a time must have shifted huge slabs of marble were adorned with rams' heads. Diffused luminosity filtered down through the large glass window and lent to the many white casts scattered everywhere a disconcerting intimacy. The two men stood in the shadow of an angel with poised wings. A rat darted out from behind a ladder and vanished behind a shimmering profusion of figures at the far end of the room.

      “It’s like the building’s memory," said the barrister. “I was here in 1966, the year of the flood. Did you know there was another serious flood in 1333? Do you go in for number games? I personally have a soft spot for that kind of thing. 33 and 66 might lead one to deduct that the next flood will be in 99.”

    “The apocalyptic flood of Revelations?” said Jared, struck by the angel and remembering that his wife had just painted herself with wings: swan’s wings.

     The light now flickered on, bringing into focus the far wall where chipped grey columns supported a series of three arches beneath one of which hung a crucified Christ. They were standing in a vast neglected warehouse of casts.

      “I believe our underworld vault is over there, somewhere behind those statues. I have a feeling that’s where this woman was raped.”

      “Why are you so interested in this rape?”

      The barrister, having led Jared over to a colossal reclining stone river god, said: “I suppose because in a way it decided my fate. It marked the end of an era.”

      “You knew the woman involved?"

      “She was an extremely attractive though rather unconscious woman, if you know what I mean. And, as I recall, it was believed in certain quarters that a child was born.”

 

 

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balance from statement wrote 171 days ago

Interesting. perhaps the writing is a bit too self conscious though.

bausch wrote 352 days ago

Good writing but you probably need to pick up the pace of the first chapter. Too much self pleasuring dialogue for my liking.

Su Dan wrote 360 days ago

good writting, good style...interesting with effective dialogue and narrative...l have backed...
read SEASONS...

Margaret Anthony wrote 361 days ago

I read the first chapter, dipped into the middle and then chpt 6. There is no disappointment because the story is well sustained throughout. There is no doubt this tale is in a very safe pair of hands.
The pitch is unique and promises much, and from the start you build an interesting platform on which to offer intrigue as a good thriller should. The hook at the end of the first chapter is simple but so effective, a perfect example of less is more.
The last paragraph in chapt 6 'only lack the documents,' set me thinking. As one who was adopted, I'd never thought of it like that, and so true.
An attention to detail, enhanced by careful research,makes this writing special. It is barely worth mentioning, but I did stumble once. At the beginning, 'he had unconsciously painted his wife unconscious.' I thought it a bit clumsy, perhaps 'unresponsive,' might be better for the wife. Just a thought. All round a fine story which I star, and shall glady shelve shortly. Margaret.

grantdavid wrote 536 days ago

Harold, I was impressed first of all by the refined Baroque architecture of your writing, and also by the intrigue of the pitch, which for me reserves the goodies for later as I wend my way through the Maze.
Backed as soon as the queue permits.
David Grant
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KW wrote 549 days ago

I love the atmosphere of this. Rowan becomes a model for the Brit artist community living in Florence and comes to grip with what happened go his mother. Little knowledge about his parents. It's a fascinating thriller. I'll come back to read more when I get a little time. "She died in the flood." "What more do you want?" "A heritage perhaps? A sense of being connected to the past." A reasonable request, but what are the consequences? Simply, a well written and intriguing story. I wish you the best with this.

dave_ancon wrote 638 days ago

Very well done, and I have no real nits. Well, only one nit. When Mercy starting talking about chasity, and then told him she didn't want to talk about it. Sounded a little odd. I mean, she brought the subject up. Might think about it. It's a small nit, but it did sound awkward to me. Anyway, you have a great story brewing and I'll put your work on my shelf for you. Dave

homewriter wrote 641 days ago

Hi Harold, your pitch is superb and I just had to read some, if only of the first chapter. Lovely writing and a gripping tale. Gordon - The Harpist of Madrid

CarolinaAl wrote 641 days ago

A gripping journey filled with surprises. Fascinating characters with real emotions. Excellent dialogue and narration. Intriguing storyline. Lucid writing. Backed.

Barry Wenlock wrote 642 days ago

Hi Harold, I've read chapter one and was impressed. It gripped me from the very start -- loved the description of the painting and the garrulous Damien. Excellent dialogue and no nits. The hook about the rape and the possible child works its charm on our curiosities.
Backed with best wishes,
Barry
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paperbat wrote 642 days ago

I am reposting this comment as my efforts appear to have got lost in the ether yesterday!

Just finished the first 2 chapters. Very enjoyable and worth backing. I will read a bit more and then sent you a better commentary of my comments. Excellent.
I would appreciate any comments [good or bad] on my childrens' book, and back it if you see fit.
Jerry - paperbat

greeneyes1660 wrote 643 days ago

Harold, What a well written unique storyline. I have read 4 chapters and it's like peeling back an artichoke each layer leading to the heart of the matter. I love your MC in Rowan, at first thinking he was withdrawn, only to find out that he is quite complexed and versed,

Your imagery brings the country and countryside alive whisking us away on a European vacation...

Mystery, intrrigue and humor...Just delightful Backed with certainty Patricia aka Columbia

klouholmes wrote 644 days ago

Hi Harold, After the discussion of Jared’s painting and the evocative description of the church, the last part gave me a little chill. Damian Sparks is a curious character from the first and his dialogue is intriguing. The writing has the feeling of a tapestry – many symbolic elements and telling details. A little dense at the first, perhaps, but still this intrigues and involves. I wish I could read on today. Easily shelved – Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

yasmin esack wrote 644 days ago

I was most impressed with your depth of knowlege and loved how you fictionalized it.

Very engrossing

backed
THE DATE

missyfleming_22 wrote 645 days ago

Very interesting premise, it's the kind of thing I like. History blended with religion is always a surefire win. I like your writing style and your characters both are strong and really engage the reader. I feel like I didn't have to struggle with the mix of history and religion, sometimes in books it comes across as a lecture. Yours felt like pure entertainment. I've enjoyed this so far!

Missy

Elizabeth Wolfe wrote 645 days ago

Dear Harold,
Quite a nice pitch, especially the short one. Now you need a unique book cover to make your excellent story stand out. You might try Bradley Wind, who did my cover. He usually will do a cover for free if you ask him.

BACKED
Elizabeth Wolfe (MEMORIES OF GLORY)

Niobrara Kardnova wrote 645 days ago

Latched onto this because I liked the short pitch and kept reading because of the humor. The naive Rowan Fisher is about to commit original sin without a clue what he is doing. Damien Sparks has the perfect profession and nationality for his personality. Lots of irony and satire built into the story panning the holy trinity of art, literature and religion. I'm sure I missed out on nine out of ten references, but I still enjoyed the read. Backed.
Niobrara Kardnova (Family Irregulars)

Katy Christie wrote 645 days ago

This is a very clever piece of writing. I love the dry humour and you are obviously well versed in many areas of art and art history. In the first chapter you have introduced two very diverse characters and set the scene for some interesting conflict to follow. This is definitely a book I would buy.
Katy Christie
No Man No Cry

Andrew Burans wrote 645 days ago

You have created a most memorable main character in Rowan and have crafted a unique and compelling storyline, what happens 25 years after a rape and all of the consequences. The dialogue is crisp and well written and all of this coupled with your descriptive wring makes your thriller a pleasure to read. Gladly backed.

Cheers,
Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

Rusty Bernard wrote 646 days ago

Hi Harold,

I have backed your book because I was hooked by the pitch, loved the introduction and read on. How much more I read depends on time and commitment.

Enjoy everything and good luck.

Rusty Bernard
The Mental Pause

Jared wrote 646 days ago

Sensitive and skilful writing, allowing the language to flow smoothly without hindrance to the development of the story. Masterly work. Backed with admiration.
Jared.

Tari wrote 647 days ago

This is such a sophisticated read gripping the reader. The descriptions are quite beauitful and so vivid, taking the reader straight into the scenes.

The narration is clear and concise without undue recourse to adverbs and adjectives to halt the flow.

The language is exemplary here and reads well.

The diaogue is well written driving the plot forward with a fast pace.

Great read,

Will be back for more.

Kind regards,

Katy
Phobic Dawn.

Jim Darcy wrote 647 days ago

Quite Arthurian really! :)
Not sure you should have the universal tag, that means that it is suitable for even young children.
Jim Darcy
The Firelord's Crown

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 647 days ago

Intriguing and absorbing but I think I would start with some drama. Perhaps the rape itself? Anyone not particularly interested in art may be put off by the lengthy description even though it serves a purpose. You should do very well with this. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

Cariad wrote 647 days ago

First paragraph is enigmatic, takes us straight to place and setting, and shows me you can write well.

'Unconsciously painted his wife unconscious' in para two is very clumsy. Could you change one of the two unconscious words? I like the way you slowly introduce the characters, not giving it all away, so that we remain interested and want our questions answered. I also like the subtle warnings you give - like the 'highlight of wary reproach in his child's eye.' I'm not a backer of any and every new author that appears just to help my rating, since I'm not sure what the point of that is anyway - I'm backing you because I think what I've read so far is good.
Polly.
STONES.

flower girl wrote 647 days ago

I found this absoloutely gripping. the only problem was that i couldn't read the rest. I love the vivid descriptions of the artworks and the art symbolism, and your characters are strikingly real. Backed.

Burgio wrote 647 days ago

ERRAND INTO THE MAZE
This is a good story. The setting of the old church is intriguing. The mystery over what happened there is good plotting. If I had a suggestion it would be to begin with the rape – lock your reader in early – then go back to Jared and the painting. Either way, this is a good read. I’m happy to add it to my shelf. If you have a moment, would you look at mine (Grain of Salt)? I’m in 3rd place but only holding on by my teeth. Burgio

name falied moderation wrote 647 days ago

Dear Harold
me again I just wanted to say also that I cannot see a book cover on my page, assuming you dont have one, but I am really looking forward to seeing it when it is up. please let me know. ( its about the whole package for me)
Denise
The Letter

name falied moderation wrote 647 days ago

Dear Harold
your short pitch is so powerful.Your short pitch took me to your long pitch which is very well crafted and promises an interesting original read. I I am amazed as I see the books on this site, with the minds, and the talent which produce writtings with such skill. How characters can be depicted to vividly using words as colors, and at how a story can be told and it depicts a movie on the mind. I do wish to congratsulate you on your book. I have not read all your writing but I do wish to back this book so it may asssit you

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Please take a moment to look, comment which is important to me, and back my book. if not that is OK also

The VERY best of luck to you

Denise
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celticwriter wrote 647 days ago

Nice read. I like the visuals. :-)

sincerely backed,
jim
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SusieGulick wrote 647 days ago

Dear Harold, I love the end of chapter 6 best :) - that's exactly how I feel, "What you don't know, won't hurt you," as the saying goes. It 's all over & past & we all have our lives to live for the future. :) Great intriguing write. :) Hope you write more books. :) I've already backed your book :) - hope you'll take a moment to back my 2 memoir books. :) Thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

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