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rank 5323
word count 10909
date submitted 17.08.2010
date updated 20.08.2010
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction
classification: universal
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The Marshlanders, Volume One in The Marshlanders Trilogy

Annis Pratt

The Marshlanders is a compelling read about the conflict between self-sustaining communities and their enemies, who are determined to drain their wetlands for agricultural development.

 

How did we get to the point where our lakes are so choked with algae from fertilizers and our rivers so silted up with industrials poisons? The Marshlanders tells the story of Clare and William, left alone to make their way in the world after their parents are destroyed by greedy apothecaries who want to corner the market on herbal remedies. They are adopted by a community of Marshlanders and their allies who are trying to save their homes from a cabal of merchants, ministers, and apothecaries. The merchants are buying up common lands, the ministers insist they renounce their love of the earth and of their own bodies, and the apothecaries persecute local healers. The Marshlanders are joyously sensual. They seek harmony with their watery landscape and are creatively practical, always looking for new ideas about farming, irrigation, navigation, foraging, and weaving. Their enemies are sexually violent and seek to dominate nature. They pursue technology out of greed and govern by male domination and military force. The novel has a fast paced plot and is a compelling read.

 
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, alternative community, earth centered spirituality, eco-fiction, environment, herbalism, sustainability, weaving, wetlands, women's fiction

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John Warren-Anderson wrote 498 days ago

Believable start and quite attmospheric. The narrative leads us into a thought provoking story.

Eunice Attwood wrote 499 days ago

A great start to this book. Straight into it with good descriptive detail and a 'need to read more' quality. You use words very effectively to paint pictures that held me captive. Happy to back. Eunice - The Temple Dancer.

CarolinaAl wrote 505 days ago

A thoughtful, well-constructed story. Timely theme. Atmospheric. Evocative settings. Impecable characterization. Engaging drama. A sound, thought-provoking storyline. Energetic writing. Backed.

Lara wrote 519 days ago

ps the paragraph beginning.. the evening after his ditches
Lara
Good for Him

Lara wrote 519 days ago

This has good pace and momentum. I enjoyed reading this unusual book although you haven't uploaded much yet. I think in 2 you would do well to rewrite the paragraph which tells what happens in a passive way in order to make it active and immediate. It would be exciting stuff.
Backed
Lara
Good for Him

Elizabeth Wolfe wrote 533 days ago

Dear Annis,
This is compelling writing on an important and timely subject. Your cover is absolutely beautiful! You might consider breaking your pitch into paragraphs with more white space for easier reading. Overall, well done.

BACKED
Elizabeth Wolfe (MEMORIES OF GLORY)

missyfleming_22 wrote 536 days ago

I think you've done a wonderful job with this. It's a very timely piece, something people can read and benefit from right now. I believe in the message you are sending across in your writing, we need to be more aware and active with these things. A very well written and engaging book.

Missy

Annis Pratt wrote 536 days ago

I'm still trying to figure out how to enter comments, but this one is for Katherine Holmes' The Swan Bonnet:
It's very well written and a compelling environmental subject. I read two chapters and it catches you up not just in the plight of migrating swans but in the history of Alaska. Here in Northern Michigan, I'm delighted to have seen two pairs of nesting trumpeter swans, one pair with cygnets, after the reintroduction of the species a few years back. Our good earth needs more good writers like this!

Annis Pratt wrote 536 days ago

Hi Annis, Different and the atmosphere established is maintained well so that I felt immersed in the setting. The soldier threats towards these women is like an invaded territory and yet there’s a strange feeling of another realm. The natural setting and the descriptions of the marketplace and the foraging in the woods are picturesque while Margaret’s plight gripped. Clare seems very young, I wasn’t sure how young, but I was surprised she didn’t attempt to simply run away from the conflict. Well-written! Happy to shelve – Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

Annis Pratt wrote 536 days ago

Hi Annis, Different and the atmosphere established is maintained well so that I felt immersed in the setting. The soldier threats towards these women is like an invaded territory and yet there’s a strange feeling of another realm. The natural setting and the descriptions of the marketplace and the foraging in the woods are picturesque while Margaret’s plight gripped. Clare seems very young, I wasn’t sure how young, but I was surprised she didn’t attempt to simply run away from the conflict. Well-written! Happy to shelve – Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

klouholmes wrote 537 days ago

Hi Annis, Different and the atmosphere established is maintained well so that I felt immersed in the setting. The soldier threats towards these women is like an invaded territory and yet there’s a strange feeling of another realm. The natural setting and the descriptions of the marketplace and the foraging in the woods are picturesque while Margaret’s plight gripped. Clare seems very young, I wasn’t sure how young, but I was surprised she didn’t attempt to simply run away from the conflict. Well-written! Happy to shelve – Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

Beval wrote 537 days ago

Highly imaginative, I felt like I had been plunged into Culpepper, but with all the added excitment of a well concieved plot. The folk elements appealed as well, it maybe thought odd in me, but I have always loved the morris and all the old country ways.
I presume you have based your marshlands on the Broads and fens, I can see them being a character within themselves in this story, I had a feeling of Hardy and the way he understands the significance of landscape in the lives of those who live and word in it.
The study of bigotry was handled well here, the under lying greed was brought out and exposed.
The whole was very readable and Clare came over as a very bright little girl caught up in a sea of adult emotions and motives always just beyond her understanding, William hadn't quite begun to emerge in the chapters you have here,
An excllent read and one i would be happy to continue reading.

greeneyes1660 wrote 538 days ago

nnis, Wow what a creative imagination and a blending of worlds past. You dipict fear of the unknown extremely well in your characters they all have depth and thought provoking views. Clare so innocent yet, she has a very strong constitution. How brave and typical of a mother to do whatever necessary to save her child from harms way, but what a heavy burden to bare to have to make your own child feel unloved to do it.

You capture a true sense of human behavior with your dscriptives and imagery, but it is your dialogue that is the driving forc of this wonderful novel.

I am so happy this is a triology and I can't wait to read more. Definetly intrigueing, paced well and clear enough for us to follow....Backed with pleasure Patricia aka Columbia Layers of the Heart

C W Bigelow wrote 538 days ago

Annis entetaining, heartfelt depiction of a very intriguing world. Clare has the makings of a great heroine, fearless and wiley. Well done. Backed. CW (To Save the Sun)

C W Bigelow wrote 538 days ago

Annis entetaining, heartfelt depiction of a very intriguing world. Clare has the makings of a great heroine, fearless and wiley. Well done. Backed. CW (To Save the Sun)

Barry Wenlock wrote 538 days ago

Hi Annis, this swept me along. I know the story will continue to be strong. Keep it up.
Best wishes, Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

Niobrara Kardnova wrote 538 days ago

A fine world you've created here. It's very natural an effective setting for the environmental allegory you are building. The dichotomy between good and evil is never in doubt (the uplanders and apothecaries attracting less sympathy than the Inquisition), but I think that works well for the sort of adventure story you are writing. As you say, the writing moves at a rapid pace and the plot is compelling. The only suggestion I'd make is to change the first "are" in your pitch to "our" so that no one is prejudiced early on against your writing style, which is really quite lovely. Backed.
Niobrara Kardnova (Family Irregulars)

TalulaJane wrote 538 days ago

Insightful. It is fiction splashed with true life issues. As a reader, I became easily engrossed.
Carrie
The Darkwood Tales: Demouri's Defeat

name falied moderation wrote 539 days ago

Dear Annis
Your short pitch took me to your long pitch which is very well crafted and promises an interesting original read. I I am amazed as I see the books on this site, with the minds, and the talent which produce writtings with such skill. How characters can be depicted to vividly using words as colors, and at how a story can be told and it depicts a movie on the mind. I do wish to congratsulate you on your book. I have not read all your writing but I do wish to back this book so it may asssit you

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Please take a moment to look, comment which is important to me, and back my book. if not that is OK also

The VERY best of luck to you

Denise
The Letter

Ann Mynard wrote 539 days ago

Annis, I like this story very much. It's unusual, entertaining and very well written. I was happy to linger a long time to read it and I'm now very glad to back it. I wish you all the best with it.
Backed,
Ann Mynard (Windshadow)

Andrew Burans wrote 539 days ago

You have finely crafted a most unique and interesting storyline and created a very endearing character in Clare. The dialogue is crisp and well writen and this coupled with your imaginative writing makes your work a pleasure to read. Gladly backed.

Cheers,
Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

paperbat wrote 539 days ago

Excellently written and very topical. Love the way in ch 4, [I think] that you decribe the contrasting/different scenes. Evocative. Hope you accept my backing.
Any comments on my childrens' book would be useful. [Jerry - paperbat]

Mollstar wrote 539 days ago

Great read. Thanks for sharing. :)

BJ Otto wrote 539 days ago

Extremely well written with great attention to detail. Plot unfolds at a good steady pace keeping the reader interested in what will happen next. Well Done. Backed.

Tari wrote 540 days ago

This is stunning, with so much attention to detail. I loved the theme of healing, the herbs, the apothercary, the first hopscotch of the spring.. Fascinating and the language flawless. Clare's interior dialogue driving the plot forward was impresive

This is a masterful piece of work and I am sure many will be asking you to put more chapters up.

Strong structure, colourful characters and a captivating plot.

Backed with pleasure.

Katyxxx
Phobic Dawn

andrew skaife wrote 540 days ago

BACKED. You have a clever twist and turn to your descriptive detail that I have never read the like of before.

Burgio wrote 540 days ago

MARSHLANDERS
This is a good story. You’ve created an interesting world here; in most fantasy stories a woman who can heal would be viewed as a hero; here she’s seen as the enemy. Twists values around nicely and alerts a reader from the beginning he’s in a different than usual world. You have good characters in Clare and William; a reader can’t help but want to follow them to see if they can escape into the Marshlands and be safe. I’m happy to add this to my shelf. If you have a moment, would you look at mine (Grain of Salt)? I’m in 3rd place but only holding on by my teeth. Burgio

lizjrnm wrote 540 days ago

This is so poignant and timely - I am sure a local publisher in Wisconsin would snatch this up in a heart beat. Excellent writing and obviously there is much time, research and passion put into this journey. Easy to back.

liz
The Cheech Room

Cariad wrote 540 days ago

A good read that takes the reader straight into the action. Good, clear writing with good description, sense of place and introduces sympathetic characters. Grippingly told and very relevant to the intolerance we see today - the killing of the man with his herbs for eg. Your writing voice is natural - we forget it's you telling a story and are immediately part of the world you are conveying.

Any quibbles? Not really, just a couple of comments:
I'd sharpen up the pitch a little - make it shorter and snappier. It's also not entirely clear if its fantasy, a modern parable or a mixture. You say 'How did we get to....' as indeed we have. it could be set right here. Also, if that really is chapter one - it's tremendously long. Otherwise - apart from these personal thoughts which others probably don't agree with - I was impressed. Backed.
Polly.
STONES.

Neville wrote 540 days ago

I find your book to be excellent reading.
It start's off right from the begining at a good pace, the reader being drawn into it wanting to know more.
You have a good character in Clare who comes across quite well.
A book with a different theme - pleased to back it.
SHELVED.

regards,

Neville (The Secrets Of The Forest - Book One) would be pleased if you could take a look.

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 540 days ago

This is absolutely fascinating and incredibly original. My first thought was that it would qualify for the Terry Pratchett Competition ending at the end of this year. You really should look into that, £20,000 pound advance and a publishing deal. I am positive that a future awaits you and your book. Patrick Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

fh wrote 540 days ago

THE MARSHLANDERS
Dear Kannis,

A super pitch and intro. This is simply fabulous. Historical fiction, great believable dialogue and vivid scenes . When Clare is hidden in the barn, my heart was thumping in alarm - it was very exciting. you have only posted 2 chapters here - shame I would have oved to read more. This had an amazing promise of being a great read. Pls put more chapters on and then I can read some more. I am backing you as it is one of the best excerpts I have read for a while. Good luck
Please, if you get a chance take a look at my novel, comments and backings are greatly received. Thanks
Faith
THE ASSASSINS VILLAGE

SusieGulick wrote 540 days ago

Dear Annis, I love the songs you have put in your story - a bonus for sure. :) This must be or has happened somewhere in this world - glad I'm not there. :) Another thing to be thankful for. :) I saw a 10 year old boy hit on his bike by a car & his leg was broken above his knee & his foot was by his head, but the skin wasn't broken - I got out of my car & prayed for him & calmed him down until the ambulance came, so this your story triggered my memory of all of that. :) Great write. :) I've backed your book :) - hope you'll back my 2 memoir books. :) Thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

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