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rank 5464
word count 15032
date submitted 19.08.2010
date updated 16.09.2010
genres: Thriller
classification: moderate
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The Last Olympiad

John Goodwin

A novel based on a terrorist attack on the 2012 Olympics Games as viewed by one of the terrorists involved.

 

When the BOC won the right to stage the Olympic games they displayed a ‘Countdown’ on their website. It was also a countdown to events that could make London 2012: ‘The Last Olympiad.’
When Gavinder, a disaffected British born Moslem helped install an explosive device in the concrete undercroft of London’s new Olympic Stadium he thought it was set to destroy the structure and cause the cancellation of the games. But other forces are at work and the consequences are far more than his conscience can reconcile. Menaced by Shakir, a murderous munitions expert, he is torn between revenge, his innate humanity and his duty to the Jihad. He is involved in love, hate, murder, rape and retribution. Can he keep his faith? If he tells the authorities will they believe him? Can he recover the computerized key that is the only way of disarming the device? Aided in London by a young Islamic student and complicated by a team of mercenaries with dubious loyalties, his adventures take him across Europe, into North Africa and back to London in time for the doomed opening ceremony. Fate, right wing extremists and Anglo-American confusion all play a vital part in the outcome.

 
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Countdown to London 2012: 2 years, 11 months, 6 days, 14 hours, 27 minutes.

 

One mile off the mouth of the river Swale, where it joins the Thames estuary, Gavinder slipped over the stern of the yacht and, grasping the painter, placed a tenuous foot into the dinghy. At the moment he chose to transfer his weight the rubber boat bucked, pitching him headlong into the water. He gasped and spluttered his way to the surface, somehow maintaining his grip on the thin rope. The cold sea penetrated his jeans and tracksuit top, chilling him to the point of pain. Taking a grip of the dinghy’s bow he heaved his slim frame over it, tumbling in a heap onto the sagging bottom of the unstable craft. He remained prone, coughing up the last of the salty liquid that threatened to invade his lungs. Above him the overcast night sky was visible beyond the rubber walls of the dinghy. Waves slopped over the sides, adding to the puddles that formed around him and the black plastic clad cylinder bonded to the small craft’s bottom membrane. Tense and shivering from the cold he fought his nausea, now worsened by the exaggerated movement of the smaller vessel.

‘Gavinder, ce va?’ a voice called. ‘You are okay?’ The words were heavy with a French accent.

Unable to catch his breath enough to speak, Gavinder raised his fist and waggled an extended thumb in acknowledgement. He thought he heard a wry chuckle in response.

There was a sudden change in motion as the dinghy was set adrift. The yacht was bearing away; he heard the mainsail crack as it jibed onto its new course. It would continue up the Thames to make landfall at St. Catherine’s Dock in the city of London. There, it would clear customs. If tracked by radar, its passage would not show any stops, nor was he on the crew list.

Gavinder eased his head over the gunwales; already, the yacht was only visible in the darkness by its stern light. He knew that, on board, the crew would be pumping up an identical dinghy and strapping it to the cabin roof to replace his one. On arrival, all would appear to be as it had been when they had left France.

Looking to his left he could make out the low, dark shape of the Kent coast and, ahead, the higher and closer bulk of the Isle of Sheppey. The rising tide would sweep him between the two landmasses and, when the time came, he would paddle ashore up a creek to the rendezvous and safety. He groped around in the bottom of the boat and found the plastic bag secured there. Opening it, he felt, inside, the familiar shapes of a torch, a plastic bottle of Evian water and, most importantly, a bailer. After a while, despite the addition of more salt water from the occasional high wave, he lightened the vessel enough to keep it dry. Due to the weight of its cargo, if swamped, it would no doubt sink to the bottom. Its valuable contents would be lost, or, worse, recovered by a fishing boat and handed to the authorities.

Wretched and still shivering he took a drink and looked around. The tide was doing its job; he was now between Sheppey and the mainland. Above him and to his right, he could see the lights of the Hartferry Inn. To his left, the mainland coast, a distant blackness without habitation.

The yacht skipper had told him that, if he paddled at a steady pace from this point towards the far shore, the tide would carry him along to his landing point. He should make landfall within the hour. He sat astride the cargo, reached down and dragged the single paddle out from its Velcro retainer. With several strokes on his right, he turned the bow towards the distant shore. Digging the paddle in one side, then the other, he propelled the boat forward. It was necessary to put in occasional extra strokes to his right to keep the correct heading. He gained momentum and settled down to a steady rhythm.

After a while he started to appreciate the cool breeze. It cut through his wet clothing and dissipated the heat from his straining muscles. The lights of the pub slipped away to his left and, although the land behind him receded, the opposite shore did not seem to get any closer. He realised that he was alone, not a living thing in sight, just the wind, the waves and his precious cargo.

He used to enjoy being alone; that was one of the reasons he had taken up cross-country running whilst at school in Kent. Once away from the pack, he was able to set a remorseless pace, eating up the miles, losing himself in his own thoughts and oblivious to fatigue. However, this was a different kind of solitude. He was surrounded by an alien environment, without the option of stopping and going home, or any chance of rescue, should he succumb.    

Trained hard at the camp in Pakistan, his slim body rippled with a tight musculature straining against his light brown skin. However, he had never learnt to cope with fatigue in his upper body the way he could with his legs. He felt the first burning sensation in his upper arms and pectorals as the lactic acid built up. The shore seemed a long way off.

Pushing this from his mind, he turned his thought to better things. Once he had completed his mission, he would be taken to London and then to Erith and home. He had not seen his parents in three years. Shortly after his recruitment at the age of seventeen, he had been sent to study Islamic culture in Pakistan and now he was almost home. He imagined the greeting he would receive. Hugs from Mother, a handshake, maybe even a pat on the back, from his father. All the family, his brother and sisters, cousins, aunts and uncles would come to his parents little corner shop for a party to welcome him home; a hero of Islam.

He scanned the shoreline; it was closer now. Glancing at his watch, the luminous hands showed it was almost four o’clock; he had been paddling for an hour. By this time he should be close, looking for a signal from the people on shore to guide him to the right creek and blessed relief.

No doubt, the tide had carried him far enough along, but the wind was holding him off. He dug in with the paddle blades, pushing harder and faster; glitters of phosphorescence sprang from their impact. His muscles screamed for relief, but on he ploughed. His left leg felt numb and a cramp had set into his right. The wind had freshened, chilling his sweating face and whistling in his ears; its salty tang stung his eyes and nostrils. He put his head down and paddled for all he was worth. Every ten strokes or so, he raised his eyes, searching for the signal light. He was sure he would be swept past.

The shore came closer; he could see the undulating edges lapped by small waves against the almost-black mud. Darker creases appeared where creeks and rivulets emptied into the estuary, the rising tide filling their recesses. Grasses that topped the mounds were visible now. He could smell the rotting vegetation and oily pollution of the salt marsh. Still he swept on. The current carried him faster than walking pace. Not daring to stop paddling, he peered into each creek as he passed; no sign of life. He must have overshot. He decided to get ashore anywhere he could, tie the boat and go to look for them on land.

Three short flashes; one long. The signal! He headed towards it, his flagging muscles burning with every stroke. As the boat turned in the current, his efforts only seemed to slow his progress. He was being swept away. He fumbled for the torch, turned it on and shone it at the light. They responded with the signal again. He tried to send the reply; his numb and puckered fingers could hardly feel the flash button: ‘two short, one long’. They turned their torch in his direction; they had seen him and started to signal again. The last short flash cut off as a muddy mound occluded the beam. Gavinder returned to paddling toward the mouth of the creek. He felt a jolt as the back of the boat struck the mud; it spun around and came free again. He grabbed the painter and rolled headfirst over the side. He struggled to the surface and, probing with his feet, found the soft and yielding bottom, his head barely out of the water. Each wave lifted him, threatening to topple him over. He struck out up the steep, muddy slope to the shallows, at last throwing himself onto the sticky black mass of the shore.    

He lay there, gasping for breath. His eyes stung, his head pounded and his whole body ached. The dinghy floated alongside him, the painter tugging at his raw hand. After a while, his pulse slowed and he became more aware of the cold. He summoned the last of his strength and struggled to his feet. He was standing waist deep in water and calf deep in mud; his right leg bent almost double, with his left stretched out in order to stand upright. From this stance, he lurched forward towards the creek, dragging the dinghy. He was at the point of collapse when a light appeared above him.

Here he is,’ said a deep, unfamiliar voice. Fetch that rope. 

Other voices muffled replies. A rope slapped down into the water beside him and two men in waders slithered down the steep bank

It’s okay, boy, we’ve got it now. The painter was eased from his hand.

Gavinder closed his eyes, too tired to help or care. With the rope secured under his arms, he was dragged up the muddy slope. Aware of being carried and dragged, pushed and shoved, he was eventually bundled into the back of a van. Wrapped in a blanket over his sodden clothes, the exposed skin of his hands and face burnt as the warmer air replaced the chilly wind. Feeling safe, at last, he fell into a deep, exhausted sleep.

A sharp blow to the forehead jolted Gavinder awake. He was still in the van, which had pulled up sharply. As it pulled away again, he slid back across the metal floor, along with an assortment of hard, metal objects loose in the load space. He tried to see what they were, but it was so dark he could hardly tell if his eyes were open or closed.

The vehicle’s motion became more erratic. It was obvious they were in town now after the early morning drive on the motorway. He tried to brace against the side, jamming himself into the front left corner of the space. His whole body ached, his head throbbed and, touching his tender forehead, his hand came away sticky and wet. He was covered in foul-smelling mud and filth, drying and becoming stiff in some places. It made him so nauseous that vomit burnt in his throat, but he managed to swallow it back.

The journey continued uncomfortably, then ended with a sudden screech of brakes. He heard the front doors open and close. The van moved slowly on down a steep slope and stopped. The engine noise died away and the rear doors were thrown back. Dazzled by the daylight, he covered his eyes.   


 

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angelwithabullet wrote 24 days ago

Hope the 'men in power' read this one!
Have read your first chapter and think it very well crafted and beautifully worded. Your descriptions pull me into your story and I believe it!
Well done.
Have added your book to my watch-list.
Kaye

Bocri wrote 586 days ago

The Last Olympiad is a well organised example of 'how to' in the thriller genre. Take an element that is firmly rooted in reality, add a creative imagination, mix in a continuing frisson of excitement and allow to marinate before permitting the reader to peel away the layers and experience the thrill. Excellent prose, powerful pace and an extremely credible plot. BACKED. Robert Davidson. The Tuzla Run.

Niobrara Kardnova wrote 636 days ago

John,
You've written a very topical and believable thriller. I can see all of this happening. The countdown atop each chapter is an effective device to build the tension. Using Gavinder's POV is also a clever technique. Through him we cannot only follow the terrorist plot, but he is far enough removed from the real bad guys that we can identify with his moral dilemma and and fight for survival. Nice job! Backed.
Niobrara Kardnova (Family Irregulars)

Scott Toney wrote 636 days ago

John,

When I first read your premise I thought that your book was one that I wasn't sure that I would like but that it had great potential. You definutely made me want to read into your book with your premise though and once I got here I was happily surprised. You know your stuff. As I read the first chapter you made me believe that you know much about being on the water and your main character is both believeable and is someone that I strangely want to like. This is a book that I could really get into. When you have it in print please let me know. Have a great day!

- Scott Toney, The Ark of Humanity

Caroline Hartman wrote 635 days ago

Dear John,
The Last Olympiad is by far the best thing I've read on or off Authonomy in a long time. I plan to add you to my list of on site books to read which I post in my bio. Your prose is smooth, the narration inside Gavin's head is right on. I read all you posted, compelled by the story as it unfolds. What I especially liked is how you show how he developed into a terrorist in the making (can't think of a better term), how mentally life shaped him, how he is developing in his thinking and his beliefs, and how strong those beliefs are. Also, you've humanized someone who wishes devastation to my side of the world. I like him. The Last Olympiad deserves to be published. Best of luck John, and welcome to Authonomy.
Caroline
KC Hart
Summer Rose

angelwithabullet wrote 24 days ago

Hope the 'men in power' read this one!
Have read your first chapter and think it very well crafted and beautifully worded. Your descriptions pull me into your story and I believe it!
Well done.
Have added your book to my watch-list.
Kaye

zan wrote 573 days ago

The Last Olympiad

John Goodwin

I read this a few days ago before the establishment of the new regime with its star-rating facility. Enjoyed it very much and have now star-rated it accordingly. Was more than happy to do so John and wish you the best with it.

nenno wrote 573 days ago

Going through all my comments to see who I backed and doing the star thing. Good luck, again Four Better Four Worse

zan wrote 578 days ago

The Last Olympiad

John Goodwin

Creative imagination and a thriller with much relevance to the times. Prose is beautifully done and characterisation is credible. One I have no hesitation in backing.

Bocri wrote 586 days ago

The Last Olympiad is a well organised example of 'how to' in the thriller genre. Take an element that is firmly rooted in reality, add a creative imagination, mix in a continuing frisson of excitement and allow to marinate before permitting the reader to peel away the layers and experience the thrill. Excellent prose, powerful pace and an extremely credible plot. BACKED. Robert Davidson. The Tuzla Run.

MickR wrote 586 days ago

John,
The writing is crisp, and the premise interesting.
I wasn't completely riveted by the opening, but you held my attention.
MickR - The Nightcrawler

Frank James wrote 588 days ago

To John Goodwin (The Last Olympiad)
I'm very taken with The Last Olympiad. It really is a brilliant piece of work.
I'm BACKING your book and have a space for it on my bookcase. I also look forward to reading the outstanding paragraphs.
Good luck with your writing.

Frank James (The Contractor)

Jaye Hill wrote 604 days ago

An excellent start, full of strongly drawn characters, punchy dialogue, and a believable plot. I did worry that Gavinder is a little too naive. Surely any Moslem beng asked to plant a bomb these days would realise what it was for - not mere disruption but much worse. He is supposed to have been trained in Afghanistan where he would have been subjected to propaganda sessions. It is well known that such training camps imbued their students with hatred of the west and a desire to murder the infidel. So although your story is possible it would be much more likely that Gavinder was a committed terrorist to start with. However, it is certainly well written, the style is fluent and it is likely to find a ready readership. Backed Jaye Hill Runa Seven and The Fantasy Trip

Sly80 wrote 605 days ago

The tight, precise details in the opening chapter mark this work out from most others. The navigation, the planning and precautions, the terminology (painter, gunwales, lactic acid) speak of expertise and intellect, yet never lose the reader. As a counterbalance, the description brings alive the tang of the sea, the shape of the coastline, the salt marsh, and a longing for home - all of which are familiar to most of us.

Cold Eyes and Mad Eyes - what a welcoming committee. It gets better, 'He'll do what he is told'. He and Razeem are both caught by their love of speed machines, but Gavinder's original love had been for his own speed, a talent betrayed by his fellow athletes, thus making an attack on the London Olympics so much more apt. 'Set to explode two weeks before the opening ceremony', now why don't I believe that?

This novel is the work of a talented and disciplined writer with an ability to inhabit the minds and hearts of his characters. With Gavinder, we have a protagonist who is both familiar and alien. We can see and understand his complex motivations and his divided emotions, his much-too-trusting youth and respect for his elders. The Last Olympiad is a thriller as complex and detailed as the terrorist plot that drives it, but which always remains human and personal in essence ... backed.

Possible nits: Perhaps break the long pitch into smaller paragraphs. 'a stainless steel bench was against', a more descriptive word than 'was'?

Pia wrote 607 days ago

John -

The Last Olympiad - Countdown has begun, Gavinder falls into the gap, is soaked. An interesting metaphor for what is to come, my guess. From the pitch I learn that he's not prepared to go the whole mile when he finds out the less than clear intentions of the various forces he joined. A struggle of conscience. The writing is very engaging and there is the promise that beyond being a gripping thriller, the story also offering valuable insights into the making or unmaking of a terrorist.

Backed, Pia (Course of Mirrors)

John G Cyprus wrote 607 days ago

Wow, this is very good. I'm impressed, John. When you said you spent two years editing this, I thought, "Uh-oh, it's going to be obviously over-fucked-with," if you know what I mean. But you kept the prose concise and resisted throwing in a bunch of adjectives and adverbs, which is how many people "edit." Well done. Engaging and smooth reading. Backed.

Laura Freeman
Writers on the Storm



You are very Kind Laura. Thanks

Laura Freeman wrote 607 days ago

Wow, this is very good. I'm impressed, John. When you said you spent two years editing this, I thought, "Uh-oh, it's going to be obviously over-fucked-with," if you know what I mean. But you kept the prose concise and resisted throwing in a bunch of adjectives and adverbs, which is how many people "edit." Well done. Engaging and smooth reading. Backed.

Laura Freeman
Writers on the Storm

Despinas1 wrote 607 days ago

John, This is amazing work...... Quite brilliant actually.
Backed with pleasure
Helen
The Last Dream

John G Cyprus wrote 609 days ago

john.
How well you write, The topic itself is a popular one and this plot would attract many readers. But the strengh of this book lies in the way you bring this plot out, slowly at a fine pace, I truly marvel at the construction of it.

A potential best seller

best



Yasmin. Thank you for your kind words they are much appreciated.

John G

yasmin esack wrote 609 days ago

john.
How well you write, The topic itself is a popular one and this plot would attract many readers. But the strengh of this book lies in the way you bring this plot out, slowly at a fine pace, I truly marvel at the construction of it.

A potential best seller

best

philip john wrote 616 days ago

Hi John,

This is terrific stuff. Well written, crisp. Good premise. A couple of pifflingpoints of detail. You refer to the BOC in your pitch. Always a good idea to spell out any acronym the first time around. In the first chapter the French should probably be 'ca va.'

Philip John

JB. Woods wrote 618 days ago

Hi, John,
I'm familiar with this book having been around during its conception so to speak.
I wish you the best of luck with it and I am backing it of course.
Brian aka JB. Woods

Becca wrote 629 days ago

This is absolutely well written and structured perfectly for a thriller. It read very easily for me also, until the last paragraph, where the flow felt a little off. I think this is because the last four sentences are all structured with introductory phrases, making them read like the same sentence with different words. that happens to me sometimes too when I'm writing, though, and I'm sure it's something you would have caught in edits. I love the POV character you chose for this and it's interesting how you manage to get us to feel sympathetic toward someone who in another story would have been portrayed as a bad guy. I like him in the first chapter, anyway, so I can only imagine that feeling will continue. Good luck with this!

xBeccaX
The Forever Girl

nenno wrote 631 days ago

Finally got back to this and is as good as it promises - nearly canned it because of the pitch which is good, then starts to bog you down. Suggest you rethink it some? Best of luck with this.

JD Revene wrote 634 days ago

John,

I read three chapters and found nothing to fault. This reminds me of the works of Terrence Strong or even Frederick Forysth: good narrative, plenty of action, but all underpinned by a persuasive sense of reality.

Backed

klouholmes wrote 634 days ago

Hi John, The intriguing start is written ominously. I could feel the silence once Gavinder was sailing alone - good building of the surroundings and his tension. His feeling the lactic acid and his muscle strain was ironic with the attack on the Olympics in the synopsis. Looks like a immersing story with a thought-provoking plot. Easily shelved - Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

Caroline Hartman wrote 635 days ago

Dear John,
The Last Olympiad is by far the best thing I've read on or off Authonomy in a long time. I plan to add you to my list of on site books to read which I post in my bio. Your prose is smooth, the narration inside Gavin's head is right on. I read all you posted, compelled by the story as it unfolds. What I especially liked is how you show how he developed into a terrorist in the making (can't think of a better term), how mentally life shaped him, how he is developing in his thinking and his beliefs, and how strong those beliefs are. Also, you've humanized someone who wishes devastation to my side of the world. I like him. The Last Olympiad deserves to be published. Best of luck John, and welcome to Authonomy.
Caroline
KC Hart
Summer Rose

John G Cyprus wrote 635 days ago

By popular demand I have added chapter five. I hope you like it.

Jim Darcy wrote 635 days ago

What a great idea for a story. Topical but not sensational, you write well and your characters convince. Let's hope you are not a prophet. :)
Jim Darcy
The Firelord's Crown

Roger Thurling wrote 635 days ago

This is a very well written piece, with good clear prose, a pace appropriate to the story, and good characterisation.
Not much is uploaded yet, only four chapters - not enough to make any judgements about the plot as a whole, but so far the text gives the reader a lot of confidence that the author knows exactly where he is going, and how.
I can back this with confidence.
RT

Scott Toney wrote 636 days ago

John,

When I first read your premise I thought that your book was one that I wasn't sure that I would like but that it had great potential. You definutely made me want to read into your book with your premise though and once I got here I was happily surprised. You know your stuff. As I read the first chapter you made me believe that you know much about being on the water and your main character is both believeable and is someone that I strangely want to like. This is a book that I could really get into. When you have it in print please let me know. Have a great day!

- Scott Toney, The Ark of Humanity

Niobrara Kardnova wrote 636 days ago

John,
You've written a very topical and believable thriller. I can see all of this happening. The countdown atop each chapter is an effective device to build the tension. Using Gavinder's POV is also a clever technique. Through him we cannot only follow the terrorist plot, but he is far enough removed from the real bad guys that we can identify with his moral dilemma and and fight for survival. Nice job! Backed.
Niobrara Kardnova (Family Irregulars)

name falied moderation wrote 637 days ago

Dear John
It is so good to see that your book was well received. I have already commented and backed your book, and as at times the backing have not shown, i will back your again, just to MAKE SURE.
I do wish you the very best with your writing

Denise
The Letter

SusieGulick wrote 637 days ago

Dear John, I got so excited when I saw that you had backed my memoir book, "He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not." :) I really appreciate it. :) Could you please take a moment to back my other memoir book, "Tell Me True Love Stories?" Thanks so very much. :) Love, Susie :)

paperbat wrote 637 days ago

John. I noted you were on the site at the moment whilst I had my computer on. So I thought I would let you know of the first thoughts I have of your book which I thoroughly enjoy, and have finished the first chapter [but want to continue]. Although I have only just started the book, I can see it has a good pace to it as well some useful descriptive background. I have not yet got to much characterisation, but will let you know how Gavinder and Shakir develop. I will however BACK it now.
I would appreciate if you could recipricate and read a bit of my childrens' book ; Adventures of the Paperbats.

All the best. Jerry [paperbat]

missyfleming_22 wrote 637 days ago

This is shaping up to be a heck of a ride! I am hoping you upload more soon, it's like slamming into a wall once I got involved! It's an exciting premise and you start into it right away. I love that you do this fro Gavinder's view, we get to see this from a completely different side than I would have imagined and it works perfectly. He's a great character and I liked him regardless of what he's done or is going to do. I could really see this as a movie and I know that may sound cheesy or butt kissing but it's the truth. It played vividly in my head as I read, even cast the character! Anyway, please let me know if you upload more!

Missy

soutexmex wrote 638 days ago

John: do apologize for this spam comment but I did BACK your book. Though my book is currently on the Ed's Desk, I can still use your comments on my book before the end of this month. Thanks - cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

Frank James wrote 639 days ago

To John Goodwin (The Last Olympiad),
This is the novel I would like to write, but I have been unable to put together a framework for it. I reckoned the 2012 olympics being held in London would have inspired me. Not a bit of it. I'm bBACKING your book. You're on my bookshelf.

Frank James (The Contractor)

Anna Bourne wrote 640 days ago

This is First class..all the best with it Anna

John G Cyprus wrote 641 days ago

Hi Barry
The book is in fact finished I only put in a taster. You're probably right about the exclamation point I'll cut it.
Thanks for the backing I'll have a look at yours as soon as I can.
Best regards
John G

Hi John, this is a well-written and absorbing piece of work, so far.
Have you considered that the time frame may well have expired before you complete it -- how about 2016 games?
Ok (okay)
Ask if you need exclamation mark for The signal. (editors hate them)
Good luck with your writing,
Best wishes, Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

Barry Wenlock wrote 641 days ago

I realise 2016 games are not i London, so I guess you have to hurry.

Barry Wenlock wrote 641 days ago

Hi John, this is a well-written and absorbing piece of work, so far.
Have you considered that the time frame may well have expired before you complete it -- how about 2016 games?
Ok (okay)
Ask if you need exclamation mark for The signal. (editors hate them)
Good luck with your writing,
Best wishes, Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

Andrew Burans wrote 641 days ago

You have written a most interesting and unique action adventure storyline dealing with terrorism at the 2012 London Olympic games. Your character development of Gaviner is excellent as is your use of imagery. You build the tension well and this with your descriptive writing style makes your thriller a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

name falied moderation wrote 642 days ago

Dear John

I have started to read your writing and must say that it is

compelling. Your ability with words to craft an orginal

read is amazing. the characters have decided to take up

permanent residence but i will insist they leave soom to

go home. ha! I have to wonder on this site at the

creations that come from peoples heads and of course

the immense talent of those like yourself to animate

such colorful characters.

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Please take a moment to look, COMMENT which is

important to me, and BACK my book. if not that is OK also

The VERY best of luck to you

Denise
The Letter

Burgio wrote 643 days ago

THE LAST OLYMPIAD

This is an interesting story, particularly so because it reads like one that might happen. You’ve created good characters for this; the idea of telling this from a terrorist standpoint instead of from a detective’s view makes it a unique read. Your writing style is good for this type of story; you have a lot of back story to cover here so this all makes sense to your reader; you know to limit that, however, so your story doesn’t bog down but keeps always moving forward. I’m happy to add this to my shelf. If you have a moment, would you look at mine (Grain of Salt)? I’m in 3rd place but only holding on by my teeth. Burgio

SusieGulick wrote 644 days ago

Dear John, I love your pitch, so was drawn in to read your book :) - wish it was finished so I could see the ending. :) Great write with nice tight dialogue & paragraphs causing me to keep reading. :) I've backed your book :) - hope you'll take a moment to back my 2 memoir books. :) Thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

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