The TimeKeeper: Dawn of Time

hey Adam,

awesome concept. i love the idea of time travel and time control. the start has got me hook.

good effort.
Alexander Allen-'The Middle of Nowhere'

DAWN THE TIMEKEEPER'

the pitch promises great potential, it very; ;deep and well written and the prologue in easy reading as the learjet desends is interesting and , how can i resist reading on.
its a well versed and well written story; for what i have read. well researched also and its compelling
backed
TOM BYE ' FROM HUGS TO KISSES'
back mine if you like it . thank you

Adam: do apologize for this spam comment but I did BACK your book. Though my book is currently on the Ed's Desk, I can still use your comments on my book before the end of this month. Thanks - cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

This was a fun thing to read! The time travel idea has been done and done again but you've added something a little extra to this, your writing style, approach and characters make this stand out to me. Everyone at one point has wondered about going back to change things so I think most people would find this interesting. The pace is great, it moves along nicely and kept me involved!

Missy

Adam, I find your book well written. We must think alike. I don't know if you have seen it but my book has many similarities. Check my intro. The Dakota Principle.

I have read just a portion of your, but he have been BACKED.
John Green
The Dakota Principle

Well written and a great idea. I believe that, even though I don't read much sci.fi. Found it hard to follow the paras. with no indents but managed in the end! Gordon - The Harpist of Madrid

Hi Adam, The outset to this gives it a realistic base, especially with government funding, so that it makes me wonder speculatively instead of launching into a fantasy world. I noticed in the synopsis the sentence "Things take a sinister turn.." I had to read back because the "he" may have referred to Daniel there. The prose has a good flow while the focus on character gives the scene balance for the story. It sounds fascinating in its scientific rendering. Shelved - Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

right up my street, filled i found with clever metaphors for the human equation and a really clever exploration of the true responsibility of being given literally the power of god, good dialogue and 3 dimensional characters in a really enjoyable story. good luck.

The TimeKeeper: Dawn of Time

Adam J. Marshall

The "timekeeper technology" you refer to here sounds most creative. And yes, it is always about a struggle, isn't it? You set the stage for conflict well - seems like a simple plot, but to me very symbolic. Enjoyed your opening and will "fasten my seatbelt" following captain's announcement when I come back to read more. Good suspense with the headline "Dr. Green, TimeKeeper of Tomorrow" but abstaining from providing further info. Would love to see what that's all about. Reading on as time allows . . . and good luck.

The prologue hooked me right in - well done so far and easy to back this!

Liz
The Cheech Room

The timekeeper
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Eveleen
(Turning a new leaf)

You have written a very interesting storyline and I like your use of foreshadowing in your Prologue. Your character development of Daniel is excellent, the dialogue is crisp and realistic and the pace of your story flows well. This and your descriptive writing makes your fantasy a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

Dear Adam

Your short pitch took me to your long pitch which is very well crafted and promises an interesting original read. I I am amazed as I see the books on this site, with the minds, and the talent which produce writtings with such skill. How characters can be depicted to vividly using words as colors, and at how a story can be told and it depicts a movie on the mind. I do wish to congratsulate you on your book. I have not read all your writing but I do wish to back this book so it may asssit you

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The VERY best of luck to you

Denise
The Letter

This has great potential and the use of the name Janus (The two-faced God) is inspired. I will read more soon. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

Fascinating premise. This promises to build into an intriguing and involving read. :)
Jim Darcy
The Firelord's Crown

Interesting dialog. I was hoping on a faster pace aster reading the first chapter. Needs more active rather than passive . Look for "was, is" in the story and try to replace them with more lively verbs...

backed

Ron Coffman - DRAGON'S LIGHT

Hi adam, I'm sorry I only had time to read the first two chapters. nice dialogue. I think you could omit the word 'comfortable' as large leather chairs usually are (comfortable) and i wondered about replacing 'was sitting' with the more active verb 'sat'.
'The man had a long forgotte...' also seemed awkward...try, 'A long forgotten cup of black coffee stood on the desk before him....'
The coffee would be cold if it was long forgotten, so no need to write the word 'cold'.
Just a few thoughts -- feel free to ignore, of course.
Backed with pleasure for lots of potential.
Best wishes,
Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

Dear Adam,
I was very fascinated by your novel The time Keeper: Dawn of Time, oh.... to be able to re-wind time and control life, there is an air of mystique and certainly thought provoking subject you write about. I like your powerful pros, and though I've not read the full story, my mind was blown anway by your strong synopsis.
I have backed your novel and look forward to reading and returning with further comments.
Helen
The Last Dream

TIMEKEEPER
All of us wish we could control time better – so the idea of creating a time machine gives this book an interesting premise. Daniel is a good main character; he’s likable and has a right to be scared as such strange things are happening around him. Makes following him to see how all of this plays out a good read. I’m happy to add it to my shelf. If you have a moment, would you look at mine (Grain of Salt)? I’m in 3rd place but only holding on by my teeth. Burgio

The layout is a bit dicky, but I coped. The pitch was slightly confusing but I like the idea, sounds intriguing. The start - with the man in the mask is good. I immediately wanted to know what that was all about. 'Timekeeper of tomorrow' - I like that, and it's a theme that I think will draw a lot of people. I'll be reading on as its now way over my bedtime and may comment on further chapters later. Backed.
Polly
STONES.

You are totally fantastic, Adam! :) How can I ever thank you enough for backing my 2 memoir books? :)
God bless you. :) Love, Susie :)

Adam,
The TimeKeeper: Dawn of Time has an intricate and enthralling plot. Your descriptions made it easy for me to envision the scenes. The fantasy genre has such imaginative work and yours is no exception. Backed.

Many thanks Neville! Comments like that mean a lot! Sorry about the slightly jarry layout folks! It's a pain but I hope it's legible enough for you to read at least!
Have fun reading and as ever, let me know what you think, love or hate!

Dear Adam, I love that I'm not Daniel :) - it would be awful if the future of the world was on my shoulders. :) Your pitch drew me in to read your book & your crisp dialogue & paragraph made me keep reading. :) This reminds me the The Terminator TV Series which was my favorite. :) Hope you'll write a series. :) I've backed your book :) - hope you'll take a moment to back my 2 memoir books. :) Thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

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Your book starts off with an excellent prologue which draws the reader into wanting to know more.
The begining of a book makes the difference as to whether it succeeds or fails.
Your book will do very well as regards this and I can see it in book shops.
I certainly back it. SHELVED.

kind regards,

Neville (The Secrets Of The Forest)

Good pitch!

Your story has some potential, but you have some serious formatting problems.

Rodney