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rank 127
word count 17456
date submitted 20.08.2010
date updated 18.01.2012
genres: Fiction, Thriller, Comedy, Crime
classification: moderate
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The Cambridge List

Robert Clear

An ever-so-English Greek tragedy.

 

An action-packed dark comedy about gods, sex and death amidst the ivory towers of Cambridge University.

James Connor thinks that murdering his former professors in cold blood is rather a bad idea. Unfortunately his head has been commandeered by a bloodthirsty family of Greek gods, so he doesn’t have a say in the matter. With Hera and Aphrodite at each other’s throats and Dionysos failing to keep order, James’s brain has become a cosmic conflict zone, and he’s worried they’ll leave it in ruins. There’s only one way out: he has to go from socially inept young man to slick sociopath fast. If only he wasn’t so squeamish about mass slaughter.

Forget the serene deities you’ve seen carved in ancient marble. Forget the quaint charm of England’s most English university. Here in the cut-and-thrust world of Cambridge the rule of the jungle prevails, and nothing is sacred. Follow the world’s least menacing serial killer on his awkwardly murderous journey, where ancient rituals, scheming academics and divine politics collide. And where murder has consequences unforeseen even by the gods themselves...

With its irreverent tone and dark humour, The Cambridge List reads like Roald Dahl for adults.

 
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markwoodburn wrote 264 days ago

Absolutely mad! Admittedly at first not my type of thing but decided to give it a go and yes...I can see why this has been so popular! Trying to think who wouuld be the best director for the inevitable film...Scorcese, Ritchie???
Brilliant, starred, regards, Mark

not so ancient greek wrote 374 days ago

A thoroughly enjoyable read, clever yet accessible. It has a true British feel and is darkly funny, original and gives a glimpse of what life is like in modern Cambridge academia. Being Greek myself I loved all the gods and goddesses. I could imagine a series of spin off novels. Also I think that the story has lots of potential as a basis for a film.

Hope that this book is published soon so that I can read on!

CarrotyNell wrote 391 days ago

What a splendid piece of work. Intriguing and thought-provoking story-line, vivid characterisation, beautifully flowing prose and authentic dialogue - you can hear the voices. Deserves to be published.

sandea wrote 421 days ago

I believe this book is a masterpiece. Whoever would have imagined combining humour with the thriller genre? Obviously Henry Fleet, and with magnificent results. I would rate this author with my all-time favorites and hope to see this work in print.

Orlando Furioso wrote 428 days ago

I was pissing myself laughing at the end of Ch3. Well done.
It took me a while to get my head round things but once you started to mainline with the wit I was on msg. I know the Eagle and I rather like the notion of wreaking revengue upto the ivory tower denizens. I wanted to bayonet the ambassador's son. Some of the descriptions were cracking. I esp liked the followers:
-- Abigail had become ... etc ... degenerated into a withered malnuoruished husk.'
-- the harmonic tapestry
(when I read Shut the fuck up I got notes of Madonna)
-- rodent like compulsioh to seek out the most inconspicuous dark corners...'
-- From around the corner came a girl of about nineteen ... fell freely crom her cheaply glossed lips.'
(Hera bursting in for some inexplicable reason aroused an image of a young and sexed up Maggie Thatcher)
-- Hera raised a tightly clenched... The Muse's crumpled form.'
-- hi, Jonny Jester!
-- '...erection breached the elasticated preimeter of his boxer shorts and poked its head over the parapet.'
-- Fattt Mason ... a truly horrifying monster in all ways, bodily, attitudinaly, ugly in all ways ... in fact I want to kill the sexless sexist bitch myself.
-- little sardine that slips the jaws of a dolphin
-- A month later after his thesis...found the ideas too radical...less than a pass.' Bastards.
-- the Ghost of Virginity Past
I like the gods raging around in his drug addled brain and the notion of running out the whole rotten crew of self-serving professors. The Eagle will never be the same again. Cheers. I also have a dear friend who teaches in a lang school in cambs...will onpass the read to him. And get you on my shelf as soon as someone drops off.
*bows*

AndrewStevens wrote 1 day ago

Happy to back this again, Robert. It's such a good read, one of my favourite books on the site.

Philchurch77 wrote 22 days ago

Hi,

This is a great idea and I thoroughly enjoyed reading the first chapter. Also, I live in Cambridge and have done for many years. I love the way you describe the city and bring in the geography of the Fens early on - nothing like a Fen wind to chill you through. Always good to see someone combining genres and surely there is no better target than the Cambridge elite for a bit of light-hearted fun. I will be backing this and hoping to see a copy in the Cambridge Waterstone's in the near future.

Phil

AndrewStevens wrote 76 days ago

I absolutely loved this, Robert. On my shelf.

The prose is crisp and clean and very polished with a subtle, controlled elegance which contrasts really effectively with the often quite surreal plot developments and comic dialogue. The various characters feel real and distinct and, even after a couple of chapters, I'm already engrossed in this strange, mundane/madcap world.

Love the conversational exchanges. The humour comes across most strongly in the dialogue with some wonderfully inventive but still utterly believable exchanges (I especially enjoyed the conversation with Mischka which immediately brought to mind Magda in Lead Balloon!!) Fabulous stuff.

The plot definitely sounds original (!!) with plenty of scope for escapade and humour. As others have suggested, I can see this being developed as a film or TV series which, I think, is testament to the immersive quality of your writing.

This really is one of the best comic novels I've read on the site. Thanks and best of luck. A

LizX wrote 118 days ago

Slap! How could you do it to me?

I went back and read your opening paragraph three times just to make sure I hadn't gone word blind. Why did you swap tenses from sentence one to sentence two and right in the midst of all that beautifully turned out description. Which, by the way, made me quite homesick. If you'd have written “It had” and “it would continue to journey there”, I'd have given you ten out of ten for one of the best opening paras I've read in a while, but as the case may be, I'm sending you a slap with my ruler instead!

Your comedic timing is first class. I'd forgiven you for the start and put my ruler away by the time I'd finished the first scene.

The one thing which drew my attention in the second scene was the lack of difference in the voices of Bumrash and James. They were difficult to distinguish. I was disappointed you didn't give Bumrash the dialect he deserved. He was a bit too English and didn't come over as a Pakistani at all. To cheer myself up, I went back to the end of scene one and read it again!

Loved the pub history and the introduction to The Muse was really well done. I could just imagine “the chav” sitting in the pub with him.

Best description... like a cat being beaten to death with a pair of bagpipes.! Truly unique!

bigmouth wrote 148 days ago

Hello.

I read all five chapters you have up here and below are some thoughts and suggestions. I hope you find them useful.

THE GOOD STUFF

Great opening. Well-paced and very funny.

At its best it reminded me of Tom Holt's real world meets fantasy world novels.

The premise is intriguing and has lots of commercial potential.

I like the visions/hallucinations that The Muse creates to communicate with James. Nice touch.

THE NOT-SO-GOOD STUFF

The dialogue needs work. It can be stilted in places. The conversation with Bumrash being a good example. I am not sure people actually speak like that, it seemed like you were using it to develop a plot point. A very common problem and one I see all the time in manuscripts that are submitted to me. Not hard to fix.

The drug test seems a bit contrived and is thrown in very early. I can see why it needs to be there but you might want to introduce it a bit more subtly.

And while I am on the subject of subtle, some of the less sophisticated gags - Bumrash/Bumhole for example - will put some people off. I think the strength of the story is such that you don't need to go in this direction.

The command from the gods comes too quickly and James doesn't question it enough. Might be better if he refused to do it and then they punished him with something so unpleasant that he has to agree.

Beware of writing about fat women. It is hard for a bloke to do this without sounding a bit misogynistic. Just saying. Again, the basic story and premise are strong, no need to take this direction.

The pills/heart medication did seem to be a bit too much of a coincidence.

Fatty's thoughts while dying don't really ring true, funny though they are.

SUGGESTIONS

If you are writing what is effectively a fantasy story but set in the real world then you may want to consider making the real world as real as possible - avoid made-up burger names, too much overtly ribald comedy etc - so that the supernatural element really hits you. You can still be funny but no need to be quite so OTT.

Have you read Gods Behaving Badly by Marie Phillips? That is a great example of a very funny book set in the real world but with a peculiar supernatural twist. Worth taking a look to see how she does it.

SUMMARY

Where this is on top form it is very funny. It is also an excellent concept. I think it goes a bit OTT in places and the dialogue needs work but this is all stuff that can be addressed with some editing and rewriting.

I did laugh, which is sort of the point.

Juliet Blaxland wrote 165 days ago

This would-be modern Ealing Comedy, with its refreshingly deadpan delivery, is a rare gem in a world over-seasoned with exclamation marks and 'only joking's, where quiet wit and irony used to reside. This belongs in a good bookshop near you.... It really is very funny, and a bit silly.

Bea Sinclair wrote 183 days ago

Well written, very funny love it. Yours Bea

Bea Sinclair wrote 189 days ago

Very funny, I loved it. Backed and high starred.
Bea

markwoodburn wrote 264 days ago

Absolutely mad! Admittedly at first not my type of thing but decided to give it a go and yes...I can see why this has been so popular! Trying to think who wouuld be the best director for the inevitable film...Scorcese, Ritchie???
Brilliant, starred, regards, Mark

Red2u wrote 265 days ago

Brave soul that James. Read the first chapter and am intrigued to read futher. Well done. Plan on returning for a further read.
Red

gacojo wrote 268 days ago

Excellent! Enjoyed reading this. It's intelligent and funny, and you have an evil imagination! Well done.

JREdwards wrote 268 days ago

Brilliant! I was intrigued by this concept and thought I'd read the opening chapter, only to read everything that you've got up.
I love the combination of suspense and humour, very difficult to accomplish without one seeming a bit cliche or contrived- but here the blend is spot on- I was actually laughing out loud at several points.
The set up is clever, as so far the reader cannot know whether James is being affected by the drugs, his own fractured pschye, or if the gods are actually real. As James' background is elaborated upon, and he is pressurised by the voices, you feel that he is the victim here, not the people he is setting out to kill.
I studied classics and did an MA in ancient history myself, and so far I love the characterizations of the deities- especially the visual appearance of one of the muses- and I'd love to see how the rest are played out.
I noticed one or two typos, but that is really my only criticism.
Once again- Brilliant!

C.E.Wildgoose wrote 273 days ago

Haha this book is so funny! The language is great and it's well paced. (and I'm fairly certain that I am going to be chuckling at bumrash for a nickname and the image of one legged prostitutes smacking people with their peg legs all day!) looking forward to reading some more :-)

Walden Carrington wrote 279 days ago

Henry,
The Cambridge List has very descriptive prose and dialogue with a realistic tone. I could easily imagine the scenes and hear the characters speak in my imagination. I love the ambiance of this story in such an academic setting. James Connor has a complex psychology and is unlike anyone I've ever known. I enjoyed my visit to this amusing account and admire your fluid narrative style.

Walden Carrington
Titanic: Rose Dawson's Story

Robin Pearson wrote 288 days ago

Great premise, witty tone, and a natural, authentic voice makes The Cambridge List an easy choice for the shelf. Best of luck; this deserves to go far!

Robin

Primrose Hill wrote 301 days ago

Have seen this on Ron's shelf for ages, and he has good taste.
Poor James. Fabulous opening chapter - the wind across the Fens- we just know it will be an ill wind. You very quickly gain sympathy for your MC by sticking him in one of those mind-numbing language schools - the bog standard racket of Oxford and Cambridge. I'm rooting for him instantly, The dialogue with Bumrash is well-paced - very slight feeling of conveying info. here. Worth checking they're talking only to each other everywhere, and not to the reader. As I say, it's very slight, but it's there.
The whole is so well-written, I look forward to reading on. Meanwhile, starred and listed. Julia

Norton Stone wrote 313 days ago

CH5 So that's it guvnor. No more for us eh? Excellent work but how long can it stay on the shelf without a new chapter to read? Perhaps that doesn't matter now. I loved the Cambridge history but it stood out like dogs balls. Bit of filler knowing you were getting to your end, so to speak? A fun read, well written. I can only wish you luck in delivering the finished product, presumably direct to an interested publisher now you've got their interest. Means we'll sodding well have to buy the rest I suppose.
Cheers Norton

Norton Stone wrote 314 days ago

CH 3. You've managed to include a bit of Trainspotting. Bad Hera! The next chapter will tell me whether you should have done for Fatty Mason in this one. May have over indulged at the bakers. We'll see?

Crispy wrote 315 days ago

Hi Robert

This is a very amusing concept. I have just read Chapter One and will continue to read later on. The premise of the dissaffected language teacher and the students with little grasp of English was very funny. I liked the fact that his musings were vocalised and picked up by Mishka....."what is bollocks"?.

Backed and on the shelf. Perhaps you woudl take a look at Marking Time - also set in the world of academia.
Good luck Crispy

Norton Stone wrote 317 days ago

Excellent. A bit Kingsley Amis. Good work. On my shelf and backed.

Norton Stone wrote 317 days ago

Excellent. A bit Kingsley Amis. Good work. On my shelf and backed.

Nigel Fields wrote 322 days ago

The Cambridge List is professionally written and pure entertainment. Brilliant. I hope you upload more soon. Six stars from me.
Cheers!
John B Campbell

Jillian Godsil wrote 323 days ago

love it! really really good! I really like James. super! is there a hard copy available?
cheers
Jillian
Running out of Road

Phyllis Burton wrote 329 days ago

Hello Henry, Love this: funny, well written with a unique concept. Imagine letting Greek Gods loose in Cambridge! Your characters are really good and I am amazed that James let himself become a guinea-pig with such interesting results. Good luck with this, should do well. Starred highly and will go on my shelf when there is room.
Perhaps you could have a look at either of my two stories on site: PAPER DREAMS or A PASSING STORM, please.
Best wishes

Phyllis

Urania wrote 333 days ago

I like this, for its location, and mythology, both dear to my heart. Gets funny after chapter three, love the pitch, although a little confusing. Maybe less of the 'had been' and more action - think you need to liven it up a bit. But backed for pleasurable reading. All the Best, Sarah

Zane Stumpo wrote 335 days ago

Just finished Chapter 5 - enjoyed the Gothic surrealism of the death scene. I loved the physical degeneration happening in front of our eyes like in a shlocky but technically brilliant horror comedy. Think I must like visual humour when it leaps off a page. It's the written equivalent of computer graphics in the movies. Whatever its fate on the slippery pole of shelf life I hope you add some more chapters. I want to know what happens next!
Good luck
Zane

Zane Stumpo wrote 343 days ago

Hi Henry - Very much enjoying the book, and have added it to my shelf. Know the setting, ate the doughnuts, tried to get chucked out. Temporarily succeeded. Ah, the days... I've also written a book which attempts to be humour with the corsets removed for readers who're not afraid of the odd bit of erudition. For God's sake have a look and make a comment. Please. Someone's already said it's 'competent', but it would appear that my non-US spelling counts against me. It's at http://www.authonomy.com/books/31339/schr-dinger-s-caterpillar/ and it's called Schrödinger's Caterpillar. Can you rate me better than 'competent'? 'Well meaning' perhaps? Or 'tolerable'? Anyway, I'm off to Fitzbilly's to drown my sorrows in jam doughnuts. Sorry - donuts.

Cheers - Zane Stumpo

Vin Mariani wrote 344 days ago

Hello Henry

I read 1 & 2. Good stuff, inventive and clever without being too show-offy. Usually I wouldn't read anything about academia, but this felt spunky and fresh. I hope it gets really nasty later on. My only thoughts were: You could have been less verbose, sharpen up some the sentences, brevity is the soul of wit etc etc. make them 'ping' a bit more. You give us far too much of Abigail's back story. Had James started taking the drug before he started hearing the Gods? - I wasn't sure. Bumrash needed more character - he talked the same way as James.

Apart from that, high ratings. Male-orientated comedy seems to have the taint of Satan about it for agents/publishers so you might find it a struggle (as I am), but best of luck with it.

V.M.

writingbear wrote 352 days ago

Henry,
I just backed your book, if you could take a look at either of my two novels, DIFFERENT DIRECTIONS or MY GENTLEMAN FRIEND, it would be appreciated.

Thank you,

Dwain-Thomas

M. A. McRae. wrote 353 days ago

Stampman's Review.
Henry, your writing is brilliant. I especially noticed the way that you convey mood with the way you make your descriptions, occasionally almost lyrical, as is the very first paragraph, and later 'Human history was spread out like a giant web, and men, women, empires and nations garnered upon it like dew, glistening and bright.' But equally, you convey a profound depression with a different sort of description, phrases like 'teeth-clenchingly nasal voice,' and 'lank, bleached hair lay straggled....'
Your story is most unusual, but there are changes of mood, and in Chapter 2, a witty but irrelevant digression with 'Peggy.' I wonder if you have quite worked out the route you intend to take. (I'm probably wrong here, and maybe you've finished it three years ago or something.)
There are too many sad and cynical parts to make this story totally to my taste, and yet your talent shines.
Well done, and to be backed, Marj.
PS: I saw not a single typo.

Leigh Alexander Mitchell wrote 362 days ago

I really enjoyed the humour of the dialogue and found it really natural. Of everything I've read on this site so far I've found the discussions in your first chapter to be the funniest and most authentic. Excellent work, rated and backed. Leigh.

Margaret Anthony wrote 364 days ago

I've been reading quite a bit of historical fiction of late so this has suddenly refreshed me. Slick writing indeed and quite 'off the wall' in places but it certainly has its appeal.
Some excellent and original descriptions, too many to mention but the likes of 'rodent like compulsion.'
Witty and at times somewhat zany, this has potential and it will be interesting to see where you take us with this story. Meanwhile, happy to star this and shelve shortly. Margaret.

Margaret Woodward wrote 367 days ago

Whee, that is fun! So what happens now? The pace of this gets swifter and swifter and the fresh ideas come thick and fast! When it is published I shall buy it.

What is also satisfying is that it is immaculately written - until chapter three. I noticed nothing until then, but there I began to pick up several niggles, including several changes in the point of view which jarred.
- 'Shame he isn't a woman,' ... let James imagine Fatty saying this, to put it right.
- Shortly after, 'carve out' would have no hyphen.
- And 'there was (not were) a strictly limited number...'
- Then another switch of POV 'Right on one,' thought Anderson. Could he say it aloud?

Then I was away again, too caught up in the ridiculous fascination to pay attention to nit picks. You teeter a little close to tastelessness in places but I presume you have that in hand in later chapters because what you have is very sophisticated comic writing even if the content is often juvenile. 70k is about right and should attract a publisher. Good luck with it - and apologies for taking so long to get around to reading it. My loss!

Margaret Woodward : The Devil's Bairn

rhine wrote 368 days ago

hilarious.
chapter 5, I would avoid the repeating of whale references, or vary it a little, like an Orca choking to death on a walrus.

rhine wrote 368 days ago

After two chapters, reads like Douglas Adams, or a Cleese rant. Funny, to the point,
Good objective achievement for each chapter.
IMO You should open with a description of the main character, not the boss,
Beware of making all the characters your age or starting their stories there, :)
You night even throw in the people who were burned at the stake outside the pub. Tourists often stop there to quench their thirst after they hear the tale. I would avoid the word gore at the end of two to notch up a little slower. Still reading but it's bedtime here and I wanted to share my thoughts.

cdwright wrote 371 days ago

Like what I've seen so far, right up my alley really. Putting it up on my bookshelf.

not so ancient greek wrote 374 days ago

A thoroughly enjoyable read, clever yet accessible. It has a true British feel and is darkly funny, original and gives a glimpse of what life is like in modern Cambridge academia. Being Greek myself I loved all the gods and goddesses. I could imagine a series of spin off novels. Also I think that the story has lots of potential as a basis for a film.

Hope that this book is published soon so that I can read on!

not so ancient greek wrote 374 days ago

A thoroughly enjoyable read, clever yet accessible. It has a true British feel and is darkly funny, original and gives a glimpse of what life is like in modern Cambridge academia. Being Greek myself I loved all the gods and goddesses. I could imagine a series of spin off novels. Also I think that the story has lots of potential as a basis for a film.

Hope that this book is published soon so that I can read on!

not so ancient greek wrote 374 days ago

A thoroughly enjoyable read, clever yet accessible. It has a true British feel and is darkly funny, original and gives a glimpse of what life is like in modern Cambridge academia. Being Greek myself I loved all the gods and goddesses. I could imagine a series of spin off novels. Also I think that the story has lots of potential as a basis for a film.

Hope that this book is published soon so that I can read on!

Tim Miller wrote 375 days ago

This is deifinitely my kind of book. Surreal but with some great hooks that suck you in so you keep on reading and with a great comic flavour. The blur between reality and fantasy - how do we really know what's real and what's going on our heads - and the power of mind-bending drugs gives it a topical and thought-provoking start.

Small points but I wondered if the ABC language school would be better with a more realistic sounding name - they're out to attract foreign students and are often aspiring to be prestigious. I was less bothered by Midsummer College, but for readers who know Cambridge it might be good to make it sound more genuine (though still fictitious) - a bit like Tom Sharpe did with Porterhouse - just a thought.

I found the story of how the prosthetic leg found its way behind the bar was good , but for me it interrupted the flow and I wanted to skip on tothe next bit. .

Like Orlando, I know the Eagle and will definitely not be able to pass it without a chuckle.

It's on my shelf and I hope to see it in Heffers soon.

Tim
Loud Laughs on a Long Journey

lisawb wrote 378 days ago

A powerful and quite compelling read that has the right combination of intrigue, suspense and wit. A book that once started has to be finished.

Backed easily and for a good while.

Lisa

Yossarian wrote 381 days ago

Really good stuff. I'm three chapters in and I'm going to keep reading. You do a great job setting up a problem and tension, and I really feel for his problem and want to see the professors get their comeuppance. And very funny. I found it odd that the doctor just disappears. Isn't he supposed to be observing the effects of the pill? He should come up from time to time or at least you can explain why he's not around. Maybe he suddenly goes on a trip or has to leave. This could actually make the reader more sympathetic to James. Also, in the initial scene with the gods, they seem to rush into their plans for James. I think this could be stretched out a little to make it more believable. Otherwise I like where this is going and I'm going to keep reading.

Yossarian

Bradley Wind wrote 390 days ago

The Cambridge List

COVER: I think it well done... no nits there
TITLE: without reading the pitches it makes me think "brainy hitlist" lets see if the pitches match...
SHORT PITCH: Good!
LONG PITCH: V good...I might only suggest reworking the second paragraph...a little...hm, not as attractive as the first. Might be too much info for the long pitch...not sure...
TEXT: Love those opening paragraphs. I might be tempted to cut back that opening one...just a bit...I think you'd still get the same kick from the second and lose the slight drag the first has at the moment. What is "inner malnourishment" ? as fun as that descriptive paragraph is...I felt like I got more than I needed for her.
I like Bumrash and the drug story setup...am already wondering if the gods will be real or a drug induced figment. Some of the dialog with the goddesses...doesn't ring...well...true. I mean it comes off a little too "How much fun would it be to make them sassy trash talkers" I dig the trash but...hm, might work better if toned down just a bit...instead of shit-encrusted unwiped-asscrack why not just encrusted asscrack?
Shortened like that smells better to my ears...but could just be me.
I think I also wished for a better opening dialog with them...its okay as is...and gets to the point fairly quickly but...hm...I don't know...not as magnetic as it might be...again...could just be me.
I'm wondering why youre interrupting the flow of the new brain friends with the pegleg tale? Seems a bit much and slightly unnecessary to interrupt when I was just getting into the goddess business...Peg sounds like fun though...and I can understand easing into the bar scene before jumping right back to the brain conversations...hm, maybe just a shorter start to that section? Might take another look at the dialog between him and the Muse..."But you can't be serious. I can't just murder people"... falls a bit flat. What's a chav?
I like the whole setup of this story...its a fun premise...but that "dream" sequence could be seriously cutback.
Gah, hope you aren't offended by my thoughts as I'm reading this...only mean to help...but you can just ignore me because I'm crap at crit anyway...I almost wish it wasn't a "Was it all a dream" questioning as well...sorry, but its a tad cliché .
Well...you've definitely got writing skills...and I bet this progresses into a fun ride.
Best of luck with it!
-=Bradley

CarrotyNell wrote 391 days ago

What a splendid piece of work. Intriguing and thought-provoking story-line, vivid characterisation, beautifully flowing prose and authentic dialogue - you can hear the voices. Deserves to be published.

Frank James wrote 391 days ago

Hi henry,
My compliments to you and your writing. I thought the book was way up there somewhere on my rating. I really did belly laugh, the first time for at least a year. I'm BACKING your book and it goes on my bookshelf now.

Good luck with your writing.
Frank James (The Contractor)

Ariom Dahl wrote 393 days ago

Heh, this made me chuckle!

Lenore wrote 393 days ago

THE CAMBRIDGE LIST
The author has created a delightful drama filled with possibility — all of which readers are open to experience, thanks to the author's development of character and plot. Perhaps the best compliment is that it is not only easy to read, but so engrossing that readers will want to continue to find out what happens after chapter 3 and beyond. My complments. Stared and will place on shelf very soon.
Lenore Gessner
Surviving the Seaweed

Kaimaparamban wrote 406 days ago

You are very brilliant in combining of tragedy and comedy. This is a rare blend in the literature. Only a seasoned writer in this style can write such a work.

Joy J. Kaimaparamban
The Wildfire

Bec C Simmonds wrote 408 days ago

This is well written and I enjoyed the story the more I read. I feel that I have a few ideas about the first chapter. I personally feel that I would have preferred less adverbs to describe the manner in which people deliver dialogue, so the dialogue speaks for itself. That's just me. Well done. Great subject and def my kind of book. Bec (Find Mark). Will give you a good rating.

CMTStibbe wrote 412 days ago

This type of dark humor is just too good to put down. Combined with a thriller, this book is definitely best seller material. It will draw in readers and amass a high star rating. I would love to see this on the big screen. I have given it plenty of stars and its on my w/l for now until I have space on my shelf. Brilliant. It just scored higher than Mount Olympus. Claire ~ Chasing Pharaohs.