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word count 11134
date submitted 02.10.2008
date updated 10.02.2009
genres: Fiction, Fantasy
classification: moderate
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King

Tom Howe

A modest proposal, in the fantasia line.

 

This is a book to sear your soul.

If Hell needs fuel or the angels yearn for sunbeams, King is the thing. It tears into the human heart with hands of aqueous steel and rips out tears of glory.

Never in the annals of novels with quote marks has such a burning vision scarred the landscape of tomorrow. Mighty in scope. Vast in torment. Monumental in love. This is a book you will carry with you to your grave, probably have it buried with you, in fact.

King is the final volume of Stonebringer, also featured on this site, though Stonebringer is complete. They are two books in love, the first the tale of a bumptuous boy, the second that of his aged and now very wise love interest. The ol’ yin-yang effect.

 
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Prologue

My husband died a year ago today. On a day much like this one, with the wind sighing through the towers and the sky threatening rain, I heard the last words I ever shall from his lips. Mostly they were words of love, the gentle words he gifted me lifelong. And he had one last request for, as he asked so sweetly, “a final boon from my queen”. He asked me to finish his story.
 
I told him I would do it, though little gift have I for crafting tales or prosey. Of course, neither did Niles when he began his memoirs so many years ago, though he dictated the story to the royal secretary, Anais, who may have had a part in its composition. Often enough I heard them arguing a point of style or grammar in the back chamber. Mine I shall inscribe by hand with the quill of a durr goose as I sit here alone in my bedroom, to which I am often retired since Niles’ death. My years begin to weigh upon me.
 
Beginnings begin with waiting. So said my teachers when I was a mere nûnyet in the Sisterhood of the White Dragon, and I have long believed them. Much of a woman’s life is spent waiting, for it is our lot to be beginners. And enders. Men fill up the middle.
 
So how to begin the end of Niles’s story? First of all, his royal title was Henrius Niles Avilar Halifay Max Orloit, High King of Pan, Stonebringer and Swiftrider. Not that I ever cleped him with such a mouthful. To me, his first love and lifelong queen, he was always just Niles, though I glimpsed his destiny when first I saw him, with the blind and visionary eyes of virgin love, the eyes of a dreamer.
 
Niles was born prince Henrius Orloit, youngest son and seventh in succession to the throne of High King Avilar XII, whom historians have dubbed The Foolish. By such an epithet history fools itself. For Avilar was a wise man who ruled circumspectly in those most desperate times. His doom fell upon him like nightfall upon the day. And what mortal could ever reign in Chaos?
 
His queen, Lady Wenderly of Silva, bled away her life in birthing Niles. King Avilar’s passing followed hard upon hers, as did all of Niles’ brothers and both his sisters. Niles was born into a vortex of death that consumed every last member of his family but himself.
 
But I get ahead of my beginning, rattling on as old women do about the long gone-away. Much of this tale has been recorded by our history keepers and laid down in books elsewhere. Some of it, to be sure, has been sung by storymen throughout the kingdoms and thence passed from the common folk into lore itself. And so I shall apologize to those readers for whom my story is twice-told. Yet there are parts of this tale none but I have ever known. Not Niles himself knew it all. Some things even a queen daren’t tell the king. And, as the storymen say, this is the sort of tale that bears retelling.
 
I shall begin with a short introduction of myself: I am Queen Marisa III, once wife and consort, now widow of High King Henrius XVI. I reigned beside my beloved king for sixty-three years after the troubles. All of them were good years but the last, when Niles lost his eyesight and fell ill. Though weak and blind, he was full of peace and truly at heart’s ease when the end came. He said he could still see me in his mind’s eye – as I will always hold him in my heart. He was a fine king, a great warrior, and a gentle husband. I shall never face his like again, until we meet on the other side of mystery.
 
For most of the events I am here to relate, I was a witness and can speak in truth what I saw with mine own eyes, for a Dreamer of the Sisterhood never forgets the details. The tutelage of one’s youth returns as time wears on.
 
However, for some of the events in this narrative, I must rely on accounts related to me after the affair – though of those stories most were from our hero himself, and ever have I felt the truth in his heart and known the accuracy of his perceptions. Niles was a speaker of truth and a keen observer – certainly a droll storyteller. Especially when we were alone. In the last years of our rule we often went for long strolls in the palace gardens, winding among the pools and fountains, along the hedges, cypress, and weeping willows. He had a fondness for willows. We would occasionally reminisce of his times with Magus or his youth with Cley, before I knew him, or when we were apart. For such a renowned soldier and general, he was disinclined to speak of the warring years. I saw him but once in the midst of battle and never will forget that sight. Fearsome it was to me and horrifying, the single time he ever looked right through me, as though I were not here at all. His eyes shone with death. I can only imagine what they looked like to our enemies.
 
For those battles or meetings or places where I could never be, I know not how to tell this tale but in the voice of the storyman, as speaking listener not describer only, a voice known in the Sisterhood as the tellermode of the songsmistress, a mode of art as well as open sight and full heart. Yet the song I sing will be as true to the events as I am blessed to make it, for my song is not my own but the lifesong of my husband, who belonged to all the goldenhearts of Pan.
 
 

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comicguynz wrote 842 days ago

Backed

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Tale of the Seven Stones

Patty wrote 1209 days ago

Hey Tom,

Lovely writing, I must say. Nice and confident, and just a little bit different.

Your pitch... made no sense to me, so you might work on that a bit, although it conveyed some interesting images.

In the first chapter, I was only tripped up by the paragraph that starts 'His Queen...' I had to read back, and tease out the surrounding text, to figure you were talking about the dead king's mother, although it says so in the text, but it's buried a long way down. Could you say 'His mother' instead of 'His Queen', because I wondered if the current widow was a second-hand wife.

JAK wrote 1214 days ago

Hi Tom, So pleased you like Sim. No- no social commentary- I promise. The lad just finds himself in a situation with no other way out. And they are appalling people. Bit like the old question- would you have killed Hitler as a baby if you could go back in time? I suppose the only social commentary is the desire to say that everyone is pretty complicated and you can't just slap a Thatcheresque label on them. I'm so pleased you think Sim is funny- there are some really prissy-arsed reviewers out there who can't see it. I was beginning to think that no-one in the world shared my sense of humour. Back to Stonebringer later- promise! Now off to chuck snails over the fence before the neighbour wakes up. jak

Tom Howe wrote 1214 days ago

Well pshaw, plagarism is unacceptable? Guess I'm screwed then.

Ha. Thanks so much Jak for the comment. I really appreciate it! Glad the historic/histronic language didn't go over the top for you. That is kind of a fine line. I'll take a gander at Sim for sure.

Tom

JAK wrote 1214 days ago

I want Judi Dench to read me this story! It has such an utterly convincing female voice with the historic language just kept under control to remind us of 'otherness' without going all fey on the reader. Some of the phrasing was chillingly brilliant 'A pit in reality, or a tear in the fabric of existence' makes me wish for a world where plagiarism is acceptable. Loved the blurb as well. I'm watchlisting this because I've a shrewd idea it'll do well.
You love Earthsea -even better! I'd beg you to look at Sim: as a writer of adult fantasy I'd value your view ,but i'm afraid it might suck. Jak

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