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date submitted 02.09.2010
date updated 23.09.2010
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Reverie

Lisa M. Taylor

Sometimes dreams don’t go according to plan.

 

Tom’s cautious nature and emotional reserve has left him secretly in love with his passionate, spontaneous, best friend Ruth for nearly ten years.

So, when Ruth discloses details of a vivid and provocative dream, in which she believes she was with her soulmate; Tom uses it to persuade her to take a road trip across America with him as a way of getting closer to her.

But his plans for romantic scenery and time alone in her company are overshadowed by tragedy and unexpected distractions.

With a hope that simply refuses to relent, Tom has some difficult and life changing choices to make, risking his heart and soul and even his sanity on a quest to win her love.

However, as reality dawns, Ruth’s world is turned upside down by a revelation that proves invaluable for her future decisions.

 
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Preface - Dreaming

 

 

 

 

Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres.

 

1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

 


 
Alone; I wander aimlessly. The cool, night air is muggy and drops of sweat begin to form on my forehead and at the back of my neck; slowly trickling down my back. Blinking street signs are familiar and yet different somehow; not English – American. Sudden billows of steam rise from the rusty drain covers as the ground shakes every few minutes … the subway. Like fairy lights on a Christmas tree, a multitude of colour glistens and the chatter of people still bustle through the streets even at this late hour. Onwards and endlessly, the streets extend in all directions, buildings towering overhead; a multitude of shapes and sizes all closely packed yet fitting together perfectly, like jigsaw pieces.

 

My scenery changes all of a sudden; I am at the top of a tall building now. The humming of the traffic beneath me remains despite my altitude. The chess board streets criss-cross over one another as I look out over the side; interlinking, connected and yet still seeking their own destinies. The city lights blur like oil on a pond; splitting into a rainbow of colours that fuse into each other. Swirling air lashes through my hair and around my cheeks with a mild fury and yet I feel no chill. Anticipation races through my veins; warming me, bubbling up under my skin.

 

He has been waiting for me; patiently, with a relentless hope. His passionate, fiery eyes now scorch the back of my neck as he draws in behind me, step by tentative step, coming closer. His breath against my skin; warm and sweet, making the hairs on my neck quiver with arousal. Gently, his whispering ripples in my ear, ‘Ruth.’ Smooth as velvet but hesitancy clouds his tone. ‘Are you absolutely sure about this?’

I nod confidently, slowly turning around into his long, muscular arms as they wrap firmly but gently around my waist; how can I not want this? Tenderly, his lips kiss the side of my neck, moving up to my ear with an electrifying determination that makes me shudder expectantly. Tussled by the wind, his thick, dark hair brushes against my cheek and tickles the side of my neck and a quiver of excitement shimmies through my spine. His lips continue to caress my skin with a soft moistness that motivates me to look up at him, my lips feverishly meeting his in a harmony that makes our breathing sing.

 

Behind him, a bright spotlight shines into my straining eyes, obscuring the details of his features. His ice blue eyes sparkle like sapphires, piercing through my soul with their flawlessness. Faster and faster, my heart accelerates and then explodes with ecstasy as I suddenly realise that this man is mine, entirely and devotedly; until the end of time. His grip possesses my body, making me want to concede defeat gladly. Overwhelmed with exuberance, I continue to kiss him with a passion not suited to this very public place, and he pulls away from me calmly and deliberately with a reluctant sigh. 

His slow, smouldering smile is tinged with desire; his hand reaching up to tenderly wipe the sweat from my forehead. Soothingly, reassuringly, his touch sweeps against my cheek and cups the sides of my face, holding my gaze with his.

 

Frozen in the moment, my heart and breathing stop momentarily. Who is this man? My love? My soulmate? I strain against the ferocity of the spotlight’s glare but his face continues to elude me. Blindingly, the light gets brighter and I blink, frantically trying to remain focused on his features; but then, nothing….

 

I blink again; the morning dawn flashes violently through the thin, cotton curtains in my bedroom. My heart still races and my whole body is shaking; my pillow damp from the sweat dripping off me. A wave of devastation grips me and I clutch at my chest, my heart, in desperation. Was this really only a dream? Please no! It felt so real, so intense. He must be real, he has to be. I have to find him; but how?

 

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Elizabeth.NYC wrote 555 days ago

Hi Lisa,
I remember reading some of this love story when you first uploaded it. As I revisited the story today, I remembered why. You are a true romantic (and this, to me, is a high compliment). What I most enjoy about the story is that it doesn't read like genre romance - you've done something different by allowing your readers to experience the story through Tom's POV. I think this is a great move. Tom's an ideal main character in that he isn't the typical leading man. He's...well, he's a natural, believable guy and this goes a long way to making the story authentic.

I should step back and address the opening, though, which I find very beautiful. Ruth's dream has that ethereal quality one would expect in a dream, but I also connected to her sense of longing, that call of the soul for it's mate. This is not easy to describe, because the line between drama and cheesy can so easily be crossed (something I catch myself doing in my own work). But, while you go right to heart of her desires, you don't cross the line and go too far.

I like the relationship Tom and Ruth have in chapters 2 and 3 - friends in an awkward state now that they've kissed, and Tom trying to reconcile his feelings for her while still maintaining their friendship. This, too, is not genre romance, but more "real life" as two people seek to work through their feelings to discover what's really there.

There were a couple of spots where I thought the descriptions could have been simpler, especially with Tom's POV - for instance I didn't think a guy would describe the drapes in the room in the same way a woman would. - thick, navy, velour. This could just be me (thinking now of the men I know) - but would a guy really know or mention that something is velour? Or, maybe this is a part of what makes Tom different. In that case, I'd skip the "thick" since it isn't necessary and more than one (or two at the most) descriptives tend to bump readers away from the story for second.

The subject of soulmates is universal, and because it is such a core subject, there can never be too many books written about that seach. But it's nice to read one that is coming from the male POV. I think you'll find a strong readership and I wish you the very best. I'm sending you some stars now...

Lizzi
(Out of Sync)

Daniel Manning wrote 597 days ago

Tom has a birthday surprise for Ruth, tickets for a flight to America so she can find her soulmate. Tom and Ruth are part of group of friends who call themselves the fantastic four, and in a response to a dream Ruth had about finding her perfect man in that country, Tom sets it all up for her to go. He will go with her for company, but little does she know, Tom feels she is the girl for him.
Bumbling and tongue tied unable to confront the girl, with his true feeling's for her, he goes along with the idea that they are only friends. Can't quite get out of my head the game of Russian roulette that Tom is seemingly playing, by setting up the trip to America, so Reverie is quite a suspenseful tale. Calling somebody's bluff over a dream, might lead to one hell of a predicament, especially if the dream comes true. How will Tom cope?
Great story interwoven with the girls hopes and dreams is going to be Toms scepticism, and this could lead to some awkward and profound moments.
Backed with pleasure.
Daniel Manning
No Compatibility.

CarolinaAl wrote 598 days ago

An inventive, intense romance. You skillfully captured my attention, and then my mind. Relatable characters. Authentic dialogue. Accomplished storytelling with deep undercurrents. Artful writing. An inviting read. Backed.

Bocri wrote 599 days ago

Reverie opens with a vivid, vibrant dream sequence. Or is it a dream? Seeking the answer to this question the reader is motivated to read on, an effective hook devised with craft. The prose continues to be articulate, detailed and pulsating. There is graphic depth, movement and a kaleidoscope of colour brought to the page with vigorously descriptive writing. BACKED. Robert Davidson. The Tuzla Run

Barry Wenlock wrote 629 days ago

Hi Lisa,
Usually, I'd say that starting your story with a dream sequence is a risky business. The reader often feels misled, any action is broken-off leaving a sense of anti-climax and it's a very cliched and over-used method. However your 'dream' is so beautifully written, I forgave that and continued. It's all very nice writing so far, with the makings of a excellent romance, so I'm really glad I did. Well done.
Backed with pleasure,
Barry

Elizabeth.NYC wrote 555 days ago

Hi Lisa,
I remember reading some of this love story when you first uploaded it. As I revisited the story today, I remembered why. You are a true romantic (and this, to me, is a high compliment). What I most enjoy about the story is that it doesn't read like genre romance - you've done something different by allowing your readers to experience the story through Tom's POV. I think this is a great move. Tom's an ideal main character in that he isn't the typical leading man. He's...well, he's a natural, believable guy and this goes a long way to making the story authentic.

I should step back and address the opening, though, which I find very beautiful. Ruth's dream has that ethereal quality one would expect in a dream, but I also connected to her sense of longing, that call of the soul for it's mate. This is not easy to describe, because the line between drama and cheesy can so easily be crossed (something I catch myself doing in my own work). But, while you go right to heart of her desires, you don't cross the line and go too far.

I like the relationship Tom and Ruth have in chapters 2 and 3 - friends in an awkward state now that they've kissed, and Tom trying to reconcile his feelings for her while still maintaining their friendship. This, too, is not genre romance, but more "real life" as two people seek to work through their feelings to discover what's really there.

There were a couple of spots where I thought the descriptions could have been simpler, especially with Tom's POV - for instance I didn't think a guy would describe the drapes in the room in the same way a woman would. - thick, navy, velour. This could just be me (thinking now of the men I know) - but would a guy really know or mention that something is velour? Or, maybe this is a part of what makes Tom different. In that case, I'd skip the "thick" since it isn't necessary and more than one (or two at the most) descriptives tend to bump readers away from the story for second.

The subject of soulmates is universal, and because it is such a core subject, there can never be too many books written about that seach. But it's nice to read one that is coming from the male POV. I think you'll find a strong readership and I wish you the very best. I'm sending you some stars now...

Lizzi
(Out of Sync)

Johanna Kern wrote 569 days ago

What a beautiful story!

Yes, the dream, the hope, the reality -- you captured the human longing for love, not only skillfully but also with great sensitivity and depth.

A great storyteller you are! And that is something that cannot be learned... A lot of people can write beautiful words. But not that many can tell a great story! One needs to be born with such talent. And you have it in spades.

My complements - your book deserves top star rating - and I hope you will get published soon!

Warmest Wishes,
Johanna Kern
Master and The Green-Eyed Hope

Jim Darcy wrote 582 days ago

Entertaining piece of fluff for a grey afternoon which perks up the jaded reader. :)

chvolkoff wrote 582 days ago

This is a very enjoyable read, of true romance genre, with a good hero who is likeable. The writing is simple, no nonsense, and is pushed along by the story. Maybe the opening could be shortened a little, but I am happy to back it as I did enjoy it. I guess I am an incorrigible romantic :)..

John Warren-Anderson wrote 591 days ago

A good story well told - once it starts. I enjoyed the interaction and letting the characters reveal themselves in 2. It is worthwhile and deserves backing. But if it was me I would ditch the prologue. Starting with 2 gives you a much more vivid start.

Daniel Manning wrote 597 days ago

Tom has a birthday surprise for Ruth, tickets for a flight to America so she can find her soulmate. Tom and Ruth are part of group of friends who call themselves the fantastic four, and in a response to a dream Ruth had about finding her perfect man in that country, Tom sets it all up for her to go. He will go with her for company, but little does she know, Tom feels she is the girl for him.
Bumbling and tongue tied unable to confront the girl, with his true feeling's for her, he goes along with the idea that they are only friends. Can't quite get out of my head the game of Russian roulette that Tom is seemingly playing, by setting up the trip to America, so Reverie is quite a suspenseful tale. Calling somebody's bluff over a dream, might lead to one hell of a predicament, especially if the dream comes true. How will Tom cope?
Great story interwoven with the girls hopes and dreams is going to be Toms scepticism, and this could lead to some awkward and profound moments.
Backed with pleasure.
Daniel Manning
No Compatibility.

MickR wrote 597 days ago

Chick lit, romance, YA, jeez could I be further from my element.
I don't think I need be an expert of the genre however to appreciate the lyrical prose that Lisa Taylor gives us with Reverie.
Very well done,
MickR - The Nightcrawler

CarolinaAl wrote 598 days ago

An inventive, intense romance. You skillfully captured my attention, and then my mind. Relatable characters. Authentic dialogue. Accomplished storytelling with deep undercurrents. Artful writing. An inviting read. Backed.

Bocri wrote 599 days ago

Reverie opens with a vivid, vibrant dream sequence. Or is it a dream? Seeking the answer to this question the reader is motivated to read on, an effective hook devised with craft. The prose continues to be articulate, detailed and pulsating. There is graphic depth, movement and a kaleidoscope of colour brought to the page with vigorously descriptive writing. BACKED. Robert Davidson. The Tuzla Run

MMQ wrote 600 days ago

Dear Lisa

Firstly, I loved your opening verse from Corinthians and secondly your writing is wonderful!!

Backed with pleasure.

Michelle
Hush Hush

JD Revene wrote 602 days ago

Writing is crisp and clean. Starting with a dream is one of those things that writers are often warned against, but you do it well, and the language has a dream like feel (must admit, though, that the combination of 'cool' and 'muggy' struck me as unusual). The first chapter starts with a fair ammount of exposition before getting to action--through dialogue--and I wonder if it's not a slow start (especially if a reader skips the prologue, as some do). But there are nice touches--such as the way the end of chapter one seems to presage another dream like that of the prologue. Backed.

klfullerton wrote 604 days ago

This is very well written, and very detailed. It makes you feel like you are there. Karen

yasmin esack wrote 612 days ago

Oh! so good. You write well and I couldn't stop reading. You really caught me with this one. Nice start up and this one will go far.
A page turner and a blast for lovers of romance.
Damned good!

best

greeneyes1660 wrote 622 days ago

Lisa, As a hopeful romantic and poet I lLOVE this, I can only hope it ends up the way I imagine it. I love your main characters, the ease of conversation in your circle of fiends, it makes us immdiately feel an emotional connection, as if we are partaking on this rollercoaster of a journey. Being from N.Y I look foward to seeing the USA part of the story and am disappointed there were only four wonderful chapters posted.

I love your descriptives and ease in which you write allowing the reader to feel in control...Well done and I truly hope you post more...do let me know Backed with a hopeful smile Patricia aka Columbia Layers of the Heart

Elizabeth Wolfe wrote 623 days ago

Dear Lisa,
You've got one sensual opening chapter! Too bad it seems to be a dream! I really like your pitch too. It's just the right length. Soon you'll need a unique cover because without it, it's hard for people to remember if they've read your book before or not. It's a lot easier with an eye catching cover. Nice writing job!

BACKED
Elizabeth Wolfe (MEMORIES OF GLORY)

zan wrote 626 days ago

Reverie

Lisa M. Taylor

Not a big fan of chick lit but I found this well written and engaging. Liked your Corinthians quote at the start of Ch One which set a nice tone and atmosphere. No doubt this will appeal to women in general and those liking a good romance. "Who is this man? My love? My soulmate? . . . I have to find him; but how?" Good question. Coming back to see how she does it when I have a bit more time to spare. All the best with it.

Andrew Burans wrote 628 days ago

You have written a very interesting and unique storyline, which I do like, and created a most memorable main character in Tom. I also really like your use of the first person narrative voice. The dialogue is realistic and well written and the pace of your story flows well. All of this along with your descriptive writing ensures that your work will appeal to the YA audience. Backed with pleasure.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

alison woodward wrote 629 days ago

this is entertaining, it holds the readers interest, its wel written, backed

alison

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 629 days ago

Beautifully written, this is a book to settle down with when there is time to enjoy it. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

Barry Wenlock wrote 629 days ago

Hi Lisa,
Usually, I'd say that starting your story with a dream sequence is a risky business. The reader often feels misled, any action is broken-off leaving a sense of anti-climax and it's a very cliched and over-used method. However your 'dream' is so beautifully written, I forgave that and continued. It's all very nice writing so far, with the makings of a excellent romance, so I'm really glad I did. Well done.
Backed with pleasure,
Barry

lizjrnm wrote 629 days ago

Excellent writing - easy to back because this is a book Id buy!

Liz
The Cheech Room
A Fine Pickle

name falied moderation wrote 630 days ago

Dear Lisa


I loved your short and long pitch both really sell your book which they are meant too so CONGRATS, and love the way you write. Your ability with words to craft an orginal read is amazing. the characters have decided to take up permanent residence but i will insist they leave soom to go home. ha! I have to wonder on this site at the
creations that come from peoples heads and of course the immense talent of those like yourself to animate
such colorful characters. I truly wish I had half your talent.

Please take a moment to look, COMMENT which is important to me, and BACK my book. if not that is OK
also

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
The VERY best of luck to you

Denise
The Letter

SusieGulick wrote 630 days ago

Dear Lisa, I love how you have the dreams & how they are shared. :) You pitch & preface with "love is" of I Cor 13 beckoned me to read your book, along with your beautiful poems before each chapter. :) I love love-stories :) - my favorite. :) I've backed your book :) - could you please take a moment to back my memoir book? :) Thanks so very much. :) Love, Susie :)

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