DEAD BY TUESDAY

THanks, I don't know what's going on. Will check it out. Lou[


QUOTE] Only your title showed up and was unable to read your stories. I'll be first in line to look at them if you refile.

Only your title showed up and was unable to read your stories. I'll be first in line to look at them if you refile.

DEAD BY TUESDAY-Louis Gallo
hullo Louis. An interesting read, good structure and put together well. Amusing as well. Already shelved and backed.
thanks for your back.
Linda Lou Long
Southern dis-Comfort
http://www.authonomy.com/ViewBook.aspx?bookid=11421

Your brilliant, comedic short story grabbed me and kept me riveted. Credible characters with emotional depth. Crisp dialogue. Confident narration. Spot on wit. Vital, thought provoking writing. I absolutely love this thoughtfully composed story. Backed.

Chapter One really has me chuckling and wanting more, and it is only 2:34 AM so .... that's good. Backed

I've added your book to my watchlist and will read as time permits. Good luck.

Lovely thoughtful writing, I really enjoyed Bodies in Motion, especially your very last line.
This made me want to read more, presumably why this is here.
Best of luck and Backed.

Interesting read. Nice literary prose. Flows well. I would like to see some more. Marilyn Rodwell

Sounds fascinating - just getting started. Have it on my book shelf.

Thanks, and I will back your fine book as well. Lou

i really like this

very quirky by nature and well executed

just the sort of book i would read in full

good job

i really like this

very quirky by nature and well executed

just the sort of book i would read in full

good job

Suz, I don't now if my messages are getting through or not. But thanks for the generous comments. Lou

Well done . . . though not a surprise given your vocation.
Gobins and universes without pension plans (loved that), almost feel the planet rumble on its axis.
Anyone can learn to write, but it takes talent such as yours to make it sing.

No luck needed her.

Suz

Thanks for the generous comments, Suz. Lou

Well done . . . though not a surprise given your vocation.
Gobins and universes without pension plans (loved that), almost feel the planet rumble on its axis.
Anyone can learn to write, but it takes talent such as yours to make it sing.

No luck needed her.

Suz

Thanks, Joanna. Lou

I can't think of anything new to add to the well deserved praise below, so I'll just say I love this and it's on my shelf.
Joanna
Fossil Farm

I can't think of anything new to add to the well deserved praise below, so I'll just say I love this and it's on my shelf.
Joanna
Fossil Farm

Well done . . . though not a surprise given your vocation.
Gobins and universes without pension plans (loved that), almost feel the planet rumble on its axis.
Anyone can learn to write, but it takes talent such as yours to make it sing.

No luck needed her.

Suz

Hi Louis,

I have backed your book because I was hooked by the pitch, loved the introduction and read on. How much more I read depends on time and commitment.

Enjoy everything and good luck.

Rusty Bernard
The Mental Pause

No, not the actor, though I had a great uncle VIncent Gallo. Thanks. Lou

Dear Lou Gallo,

Dead By Tuesday: Killer title with dead on writing. Backed.

Any relation to Vincent Gallo?

All best wishes with your published work.

GK Stritch

Louis, It takes a special talent to take what everyone is thinking even when they don't know they are thinking it, and turn it into an entertaining, yet thought provoking enjoyable read. The rat race is something we all wish we could quit, some have found that serenity, while others chase their tail, and you my friend have taken your gift and given those who had that annoying voice yammering in the back of their mind, and given it a name "Bodies in Motion" and it is done brilliantly....I will be back for more when I am feeling better and have time. Keeping it on my watch list, continued success. Patricia aka Colmbia Layers of the Heart

Dear Lou Gallo,

Dead By Tuesday: Killer title with dead on writing. Backed.

Any relation to Vincent Gallo?

All best wishes with your published work.

GK Stritch

THanks, Andrew, alway good to get positive feedback. I will back you. Lou

You have written very interesting and unique storylines, sprinkled with nice touches of humour, which I do like. The dialogue in your stories is realistic and well written and the pace of your stories flow well. All of this along with your descriptive writing makes your work a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

Apart from a problem with the upload resulting in some weird typography, these stories look to me like fine, high-spirited literary fiction told in a variety of narrative voices that invite further reading. Backed.

You and I are exceptions to Kurt Vonnegut's broad characterization of English professors who don't write much because they have such good taste they can't stand anything they write.

Bill

You have written very interesting and unique storylines, sprinkled with nice touches of humour, which I do like. The dialogue in your stories is realistic and well written and the pace of your stories flow well. All of this along with your descriptive writing makes your work a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

Dear Louis

oops backed it again

still best of luck

Denise
The Letter

A great piece of writing. Backed with pleasure. Eunice - The Temple Dancer.

Thanks, I have backed your fine book as well. Lou

All I got read was Bodies in Motion but I will likely keep you on my shelf for a while so I can read more of your short stories. You are a very talented writer and I enjoy the language you use and how it drew me into the story.

Jason
Gateway to the World of Light and Shadow

All I got read was Bodies in Motion but I will likely keep you on my shelf for a while so I can read more of your short stories. You are a very talented writer and I enjoy the language you use and how it drew me into the story.

Jason
Gateway to the World of Light and Shadow

THanks. Lou

Not what I usualy read but I did enjoy your writinh.
Backed.

Thanks. Lou

You are totally fantastic, Louis! :) How can I ever thank you enough for backing my memoir book? :)
God bless you. :) Love, Susie :)

Thanks, Susie, thank, thanks, thanks. Lou

You are totally fantastic, Louis! :) How can I ever thank you enough for backing my memoir book? :)
God bless you. :) Love, Susie :)

You are totally fantastic, Louis! :) How can I ever thank you enough for backing my memoir book? :)
God bless you. :) Love, Susie :)

Not what I usualy read but I did enjoy your writinh.
Backed.

hanks very much. Good feedback always appreciated. Lou

Yes, it was goblins. I saw the same dream. Then the idea of Absolute Rest is one I've had so often and I end up running around doing tons of little takes from the newness of the resting has worn off. I guess what I'm trying to convey is that I enjoyed the first story very much and plan to read the rest once I get a little more Absolute Rest. Backed for now.

Thanks again, man. THat story is even being taught in universites around the country. People seem to like it. Hope the others come up to its standards. This too is a book of stories called DEAD BY TUESDAY.

Dear LG,
I loved everything about your story BODIES IN MOTION except that I didn't write it.
'Groped the rope,' taking aging personally. a potential thief, dishwasher thoughts, who gets the cupcake, caca.
Yikes, I will read more.
I will read everything you write on the basis of this story but you must promise to write to this standard.
A Zoomer
Going Out in Style

Hi louis, final got around to your book 'Dead by Tuesday' backed it earlier on the pitch read.
I find it to be excellent reading, I do like shorter stories and your book suits me down to the ground.
I did take to the everday humour embodied within your book, great stuff.
Your writing skills are pretty obvious and are to be commended.

kind regards,

Neville (The Secrets Of The Forest - Series )

Dear LG,
I loved everything about your story BODIES IN MOTION except that I didn't write it.
'Groped the rope,' taking aging personally. a potential thief, dishwasher thoughts, who gets the cupcake, caca.
Yikes, I will read more.
I will read everything you write on the basis of this story but you must promise to write to this standard.
A Zoomer
Going Out in Style

Yes, it was goblins. I saw the same dream. Then the idea of Absolute Rest is one I've had so often and I end up running around doing tons of little takes from the newness of the resting has worn off. I guess what I'm trying to convey is that I enjoyed the first story very much and plan to read the rest once I get a little more Absolute Rest. Backed for now.

Will keep this on my shelf a while... Come back to it. Worth coming back to.

Well polished and literate writing.

J.S.Watts
A DARKER MOON

Dear Louis


I have started to read your writing and must say that it is compelling. Already you have established your animated characters in my head, ( they are not leaving soon) and i feel strongly to back your book now. I do wish to be part of your climb to the top on this site. CONGRATS and I will comment more as I read more

Please take a moment to look, COMMENT which is important to me, and BACK my book. if not that is OK also
The VERY best of luck to you

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Denise
The Letter

There is nothing left to say after Barry's comments, excellent work, well done. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

THanks. Good feedback always feels good. Lou

There is nothing left to say after Barry's comments, excellent work, well done. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

Hi, I read Bodies in Motion and really enjoyed your writing.

I liked:-
'The Titanic has risen and we're all on board.'
'Prokofiev's music gone graphic'
'You can only think of injustice in the morning'
'You were trying to punch the second law of thermodynamics? Sure.'
'Let's just say I take it more personally'
'Fruit therapy'
'savoured their meringue'
'your very organs and glands weep'
'Guess who winds up with the cupcake?'
Success by default'

and many, many others -- brilliant.

'...and make grovel' -- typo
'...one condition only immortality...' typo

I hope this is helpful and encouraging. As I'm sure you realise by now, you're a top class writer.
Backed with pleasure,
Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

I will come back with more comments later but so far the irst story is well crafted and polished and Id buy the book based on that so Im backing it.

Liz
The Cheech Room
A Fine Pickle

Dear Louis

Just reading your book , will comment later

Louis, read Bodies in Motion - so much to love - Pepe's view of life or view of some life that sits upon an unattainable mountaintop and the hilarious turn of events that is so right on. Faye is everyman's wife - the "bubble buster", but then so many of us dreamers wouldn't survive without them. Intelligent, snicker if not LOL a minute. Can't wait to read the next one. Backed. Great job on this one. Certainly agree with Greensboro Review. CW (To Save the Sun)

of interest or not my daughter attended Radford for two years and we drive by on I-81 each time we head north.

Dear Louis, I love that you mention Adam & Eve & I hate anything to do with spiders. :) Your pitch & prologue prepared me for your short stories & I wish you had more online so I could read them, too. :) Your dialogue & paragraphs are crisp, providing for an easy read. :) I've backed your book :) - could you take a moment to back mine? Thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

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A very interesting book you have here, I have only read the first chapter but already hooked upon reading more.
I will get back to it later when time permits.
I back it for now though. SHELVED.

Could you have a look at my book please, THE SECRETS OF THE FOREST - THE TIME ZONE
Would be very pleased,

kind regards,

Neville (The Secrets Of The Forest - Series )

DEAD BY TUESDAY
Welcome to authonomy
An interesting collection of stories. The magazines are mostly unknown to me as I rarely read magazines of any kind. However, you have chosen a subject(s) that is comlex to most of us. Black they certainly are but of a wry, and sometimes satirical nature. Backed and should reach a substantial audience
Faith
THE ASSASSINS VILLAGE

Very nice atmosphere. I look forward to seeing more. Backed