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rank 5463
word count 17436
date submitted 04.09.2010
date updated 20.09.2010
genres: Fiction, Fantasy, Children's, Young...
classification: universal
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Swink-on-Polt

George Anderson

The suburban neighborhood of Carnish is darkening with rumors of war. Can the Kilndaele sparrows fight off the conquest of the rival Blindoh tribe?

 

You might not notice the house sparrows all around you; after all, they're only dirty little birds fighting over mates and food--or so you might think. Actually, sparrows have a long history of war and peace, and various tribes have fought each other for the Land of Carnish, a suburban neighborhood filled with trees, houses, and well-stocked birdfeeders.

Bill Spara, the chieftain of the Kilndaele tribe, is just returning to Swink-on-Polt, the capital of Carnish, located in the eaves and gutters and bushes around a human house. Rumors of war are spreading throughout Carnish, and when Bill's sister Gilda is kidnapped, the leaders of the Kilndaele decide there is only one thing they can do to defend themselves: call in a tribe of chimney swifts, the most agile fighters known to birdkind, who live in the wilds of the north in Dol Gammedd.

While Bill and Gutterina travel far into the north to ask the swifts for help, Omar and Guttery remain behind to organize the defense of Carnish. But the Blindoh tribe has grown large, and the Kilndaele cannot hold out long. Can Bill and Gutterina return with the swifts in time?

 
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George Anderson wrote 169 days ago

Oh, I'm delighted to discover this (through a forum post). I have a great fondness for this... genre? I'll read eagerly.
Animal fiction, do we call it? I'm a fan of rabbits at war (Watership Down) – moles at war (Duncton novels) – ants at war and owls at war I've found. And you can't do better for a title - this is just a gorgeous name.


Thanks Bryn. ;) I'm not sure what to do with this little book. I've heard that it's impossible to self-publish children's books, so maybe this one should be submitted traditionally. On the other hand, I feel that this is pretty much just an "avian Redwall"--which may not be original enough. On the other hand, is there such a thing as originality anymore, or is it all just appropriation?

Hm, there's something to stroke your beard to, for those of you who have beards.

Bryn Hammond wrote 170 days ago

Oh, I'm delighted to discover this (through a forum post). I have a great fondness for this... genre? I'll read eagerly.
Animal fiction, do we call it? I'm a fan of rabbits at war (Watership Down) – moles at war (Duncton novels) – ants at war and owls at war I've found. And you can't do better for a title - this is just a gorgeous name.

George Anderson wrote 184 days ago

Wow. Just started it. Read first 2 chapters in minutes. This is like Redwall with birds! I will finish reading what is posted before I comment further. Well done!



Thanks Simon. ;) The funny thing is that I was 12 when I wrote it, and I was into Redwall hardcore! Sometimes I think it's a little too similar... idk.

Simon R. Willis wrote 185 days ago

Wow. Just started it. Read first 2 chapters in minutes. This is like Redwall with birds! I will finish reading what is posted before I comment further. Well done!

Jim Darcy wrote 585 days ago

This is a refreshing read, an avian Redwall and very well written. Could read this to the grandkids and keep their interest with few worries - in fact, I probably will. :)

Andrew Burans wrote 610 days ago

You have written a very interesting and unique storyline, which I do like, and created a most memorable main character in Bill. The dialogue is realistic and well written and the pace of your story flows well. All of this along with your descriptive writing ensures that your fantasy will appeal to the youth audience. Backed with pleasure.

Andrew Burans
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andrew skaife wrote 626 days ago

As an extremely experienced teacher of English I can happily tell you that this would be a wonderful book for them to read and also something that they would lap up. They are so bored of being condescended to and patted on the head with twee nonsense and so something hard and gritty like this is perfect.

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name falied moderation wrote 627 days ago

Dear George

well what a good surprise and so original...I would like to commend you on the skill you have and the imagination and the talent in writing this work of art
of yours. I wish I had half of your talent. Where does one get such original work like this, such a gift. I feel sure you
feel like me that it is your baby and you so want to see it succeed.( I wish I had half the talent some of you have on this site)

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Please take a moment to look, COMMENT which is important to me, and BACK my book. if not that is OK
also

The VERY best of luck to you

Denise
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name falied moderation wrote 627 days ago

Dear George
reading now will comment later
Denise
The Letter

SusieGulick wrote 627 days ago

Dear George, I love that you let your imagination run away with you & that you wrote such a delightful story. :) Your pitch & prologue set the stage for the birds & for them to live happily ever after, too :) - "good job." :) I love it. :) Hope you'll write many more books. :) Your tight dialogue & paragraphs made for an easy read. :) I've backed your book :) - could you please take a moment to back my memoir book? :) Thanks so very much. :)

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