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rank 5335
word count 11680
date submitted 05.09.2010
date updated 10.09.2010
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction
classification: adult
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Life in An Indian Town

Satyendra K Gupta

Story of a family in an Indian town.

 

Everyone knows about the caste system in India. People of schedule caste and schedule tribe caste have been suffering from the discrimination for ages. But there are people of other castes who are also suffering from the class system. There is no end on how many criteria we, the Indians, are divided. Through this book, I penned the story of the class system in a small town where resources are limited but the people find the ways to be superior.
The story runs between the two generations. The protagonist of the story is Satyajit. Satyajit does not face any hardship that his father, Ramesh, had to. However, he could not integrate with the society. He, partially pushed by his parents, looked for ways to become like others - rich. However, he chooses a different path. Rather than working hard and starting his own business as others did, he decided to use education as a means to achieve his goal. In this journey, the closer he reaches his goal, more alienated he becomes to the society he wanted to integrate with.

 
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Andrew Burans wrote 520 days ago

You have written a very interesting and unique storyline, which I do like, and created a most memorable main character in Ramesh. The dialogue is realistic and well written and the pace of your story flows well. All of this along with your descriptive writing makes your work a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

Miguel Martins de Menezes wrote 517 days ago

Dear Satyedra,

You have a solid writing talent, i went ttrough all of your text and i felt it very descriptive, clean images vision, and a clear language. What i do feel it is that you can improve it (because i felt descriptions very intense) adding short plots in between to improve people curiosity. At the and i wanted more, i will follow it if you will add more chapters.
Best success,
Miguel

Elijah Enyereibe Iwuji wrote 517 days ago

Dear Satyedra,

Yesterday I read the first chapter of your book but time pull me off from dropping my comment with the backing. Your writing really flows and shows you're a talented writer. See, I have lived in Bombay, and do always travel to Kathmandu via Delhi through Gurapo, so I'm like being in the vein of your writing. Your descriptive ability, dialogue and detail are very well written based on what I read. Characters well developed. With what you wrote, the sky is your limit. Goodluck.

Elijah E. Yamslaw (Victims of African Wealth)

Vall wrote 513 days ago

Your writing brings your scenes alive - I enjoyed reading this. Backed with pleasure
Vall
Midwyf

Peter Wild wrote 515 days ago

You are a natural storyteller, and I hope this wonderful tale takes you far. Really well done!
Backed.
Peter Wild
Double Action

Elijah Enyereibe Iwuji wrote 517 days ago

Dear Satyedra,

Yesterday I read the first chapter of your book but time pull me off from dropping my comment with the backing. Your writing really flows and shows you're a talented writer. See, I have lived in Bombay, and do always travel to Kathmandu via Delhi through Gurapo, so I'm like being in the vein of your writing. Your descriptive ability, dialogue and detail are very well written based on what I read. Characters well developed. With what you wrote, the sky is your limit. Goodluck.

Elijah E. Yamslaw (Victims of African Wealth)

Miguel Martins de Menezes wrote 517 days ago

Dear Satyedra,

You have a solid writing talent, i went ttrough all of your text and i felt it very descriptive, clean images vision, and a clear language. What i do feel it is that you can improve it (because i felt descriptions very intense) adding short plots in between to improve people curiosity. At the and i wanted more, i will follow it if you will add more chapters.
Best success,
Miguel

Barry Wenlock wrote 519 days ago

Hi Satyedra, I've travelled all over India and I live in Nepal, so I'm very familiar with village life and its system. You show it well, with some great characterisation and informative narrative. Easy to read and very entertaining. Backed.
Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

satyendra gupta wrote 519 days ago

You have the quality of expression and the depth of passion to carry such a heavy and emotion filled narrative and I wish you all the best in getting published.

BACKED



Thanks.

andrew skaife wrote 519 days ago

You have the quality of expression and the depth of passion to carry such a heavy and emotion filled narrative and I wish you all the best in getting published.

BACKED

satyendra gupta wrote 520 days ago

You have written a very interesting and unique storyline, which I do like, and created a most memorable main character in Ramesh. The dialogue is realistic and well written and the pace of your story flows well. All of this along with your descriptive writing makes your work a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning



Thanks Andrew.

Andrew Burans wrote 520 days ago

You have written a very interesting and unique storyline, which I do like, and created a most memorable main character in Ramesh. The dialogue is realistic and well written and the pace of your story flows well. All of this along with your descriptive writing makes your work a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

satyendra gupta wrote 521 days ago

I commend you for the topic of your book and for the themes you exploit. They are of particular interest to me being married to an Indian whose family still own a home in a Gujarat village. In reading, I sense that his is going to be an epic story, drawing on the rich historical heritage and the landscape of India and its' inhabitants.
1 small point that might be a typing error in your short pitch - it should be either 'in Indian towns' or 'an Indian Town.' I wouldn't want people to be put off this by something so trivial as that!
Kendall Craig, 'The Halo (of Delight).'



Thanks for pointing this mistake. :)

Kendall Craig wrote 521 days ago

I commend you for the topic of your book and for the themes you exploit. They are of particular interest to me being married to an Indian whose family still own a home in a Gujarat village. In reading, I sense that his is going to be an epic story, drawing on the rich historical heritage and the landscape of India and its' inhabitants.
1 small point that might be a typing error in your short pitch - it should be either 'in Indian towns' or 'an Indian Town.' I wouldn't want people to be put off this by something so trivial as that!
Kendall Craig, 'The Halo (of Delight).'

satyendra gupta wrote 521 days ago

Dear Satyendra

Lots of research shows in this book. loved it .I loved your short and long pitch both really sell your book which they are meant too so CONGRATS, and love the way you write. Your ability with words to craft an orginal read is amazing. the characters have decided to take up permanent residence but i will insist they leave soom to go home. ha! I I do wish to be part of your climb to the top on this site. CONGRATS and I will comment more as I read more

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Please take a moment to look, COMMENT which is important to me, and BACK my book. if not that is OK also

The VERY best of luck to you

Denise
The Letter



Thanks Denise.

name falied moderation wrote 521 days ago

Dear Satyendra

Lots of research shows in this book. loved it .I loved your short and long pitch both really sell your book which they are meant too so CONGRATS, and love the way you write. Your ability with words to craft an orginal read is amazing. the characters have decided to take up permanent residence but i will insist they leave soom to go home. ha! I I do wish to be part of your climb to the top on this site. CONGRATS and I will comment more as I read more

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Please take a moment to look, COMMENT which is important to me, and BACK my book. if not that is OK also

The VERY best of luck to you

Denise
The Letter

satyendra gupta wrote 521 days ago

What a fascinating read about another culture - informative without coming across as a teaching book. Ramesh and his mother quickly take shape as real people. Description and background are very well done.
Jim Darcy
The Firelord's Crown



Thanks JIm.

Jim Darcy wrote 521 days ago

What a fascinating read about another culture - informative without coming across as a teaching book. Ramesh and his mother quickly take shape as real people. Description and background are very well done.
Jim Darcy
The Firelord's Crown

satyendra gupta wrote 521 days ago

Thanks Suzie. I will read your book.

SusieGulick wrote 521 days ago

Dear Satyendra, I love that you put me right there with you in your story to feel what you are feeling. :) Your pitch beckoned me to read your story. :) What an excellent write! :) Hope you'll write many books :) - hope, also, that you'll back my memoir book. :) Thanks so very much. :) Love, Susie :)

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