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rank 4168
word count 79540
date submitted 09.09.2010
date updated 09.09.2010
genres: Fiction, Romance, Popular Culture, ...
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Clam Chowder at Lafayette and Spring

Pete Brassard

Luca Montella. Regular guy, regular job, discovers Mel and goes from exisiting to living. Just an average guy's observations on life, love and losing.

 

Freelance photographer Luca Montella survives on mediocrity till he meets Mel, the girl he's known for years who he suddenly sees for the first time. Together they collapse in love and then fall apart. That's fate.

 
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CLAM CHOWDER AT LAFAYETTE AND SPRING

P. D. Brassard

 

 

 

 

For anyone who’s ever been there and

those still waiting to make the trip.

 

 

 

 

 

Introduction

 

 

 

Okay, so here it is. You sure you wanna hear this? Well, alright then. Go get yourself a beer, better make that two, sit down and listen up.

    This a story to which you should pay a great deal of attention. Yea, you may learn something here. Maybe, you just might learn something.

    It’s about you and me, see, what we got, what we want and what we had. The highs, the sky-highs, and the way-down lows. Now, I ain’t saying you’re gonna agree with everything I’m gonna tell ya, you don’t have to. Hey, that, is your prerogative. Like I should care. I’m just telling it like it is.

    But do me a favor, don’t interrupt or go jumping to no conclusions or nothing. Hear me out, okay? As with most things in life, give it a chance. Like people. You should listen to what they have to say, listen closely, absorb the information and then assimilate a viewpoint. And only then. But don’t judge. Ain’t no-one on earth with the right to judge someone else. Remember that.

    ‘What’s it all about?’, I hear you asking, ‘c’mon man, make with the story.’

    Okay, it’s about a slice of life. A slice of life like the slice of apple pie your mom used to bake. Remember that? Do you remember the smell of cinnamon, remember the anticipation, the taste, the experience? It was a whole experience, right? Remember how it tasted so good, you had to have another slice, mmm-mm, and then another, and another till you ate so much you felt sick. MOM! And then? And then ya vowed never to eat pie again. Too much of a good thing, huh?

    ‘Big deal’, you say ‘so what?’.

Well, the ‘so what’ is the slice of pie. This slice of pie is like a metaphor for a slice outta your own life. That’s right. You.

    Tell me, you ever experienced that transition in your life where you go from existing to living? Do you know the difference? Where suddenly your whole life has gone from being, from being ‘stuck on survive’ to ‘so much to do, so little time’? I’m talking, like, coming home. A feeling that you have arrived. I am talking about finding that one person, that one special person who makes you feel whole. Someone for whom you would sell your soul. Someone who makes ya feel goofy. Like, doh! You understand?

    Okay, then this is good. Imagine then, that this day has come. Imagine, for the first time in your life, you are no longer existing. You feel alive, like suddenly you can do what the heck you like. You have energy, ZAP!, you have enthusiasm, POW!, you wear a perma-grin on your face and you have the stars in your eyes. You can take on the world. Hey, it’s a great feeling, right?

    So what if then, what if, what if, BAM! It’s gone. Like, where’d that go? Consider that. Gone. Disappeared quicker than H2O in the Gobi. Emotional drought. Y’ever thought about that? Okay, I hear ya, you’re thinking,

    ‘This freak’s gonna tell a tale that’s doom and gloom, it’s gonna be depressing, I’m outta here!’.

Well come back, let me tell ya something, it ain’t. It ain’t all doom and gloom. It’s experience. See, in life, no matter what happens, good or bad, it’s all experience and we should embrace that. It makes us wiser people, believe me. It’s enriching.

    But you know what? The most important thing to remember here, is that it’s only enriching if we learn from these experiences. What I’m saying is, just cos maybe, something bad goes down, don’t mean we should look back and hate that period of our lives. No, we should look back and see what we have learned from it. How may it have benefited us rather than affected us. We should look back, remember the good times and laugh. Laugh out loud, hahahahaha! And we should remember the bad times. And laugh out loud. And we should cry. Every now and then, we should cry. It’s a release. Cry a river if you have it in you. One thing’s for sure, if it don’t make ya feel better, at least it clears the crud from your eyes.

    Okay, so, where was I? Oh yea, the tale. The spiel, the story. Well, it’s kinda like this, see...

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Claude Bonanno wrote 540 days ago

A strong voice, a definite style: you can just see the guy drinking beer! I've put you on my WL. If you have a minute, please check my Strings of Madness - definitely a different voice (a computer geek who falls in love with a beautiful woman who died 200 years ago...) I would love to knwo what you think!
Claude Nougat

Lynne wrote 585 days ago

You start this off so well. I found myself reading with a silly grin on my face. It's just as though you were speaking the stort out loud. Very well written and intriguing. Backed. Lynne, Brooklyn Bridge.

eurodan49 wrote 593 days ago

My time is short so only read your intro and first 2 chapters.
This is not something I usually read but I enjoyed it…good, strong voice.
The narration of the intro is good and the first person and internal dialogue helps move it along.
You deliver just the right amount of narration and dialogue (personally I would like more) and the mix of “show” and “tell” makes it an enjoyable read.
What can I say…good luck with finding a publisher. You’ve got my backing.
Dan
PS. Please take a look at mine and give me your comment…backing will be appreciated.

John Warren-Anderson wrote 594 days ago

I like this 'in your face' style of writing. A good immediate start and it's off and running.

yasmin esack wrote 594 days ago

You story is told so well. Catch and spunky you capture attention immediately. I love this and the way you leave the reader turning the pages and wanting more.

Terrific read.

Best
The Mind setter

CarolinaAl wrote 615 days ago

A quirky journey filled with surprises. Well-crafted characters with real emotions. Excellent dialogue and narrative. Inventive storyline. Lucid writing. A rollicking read. Backed.

missyfleming_22 wrote 618 days ago

I love your narrative voice, it's unique and very refreshing! I really enjoy being inside his head, is that a bad thing? You certainly are a talented writer. I really wish you the best with this, I can't really say anything else other than I really liked this and you stand out on this site in a very, very good way. Thanks for giving me something different to read!

Missy
Mark of Eternity

Bonzo147 wrote 618 days ago

Easy to absorb and even easier to back. Great narrative with pace and dialogue to match.

Angus Shoor Caan.

Andrew Burans wrote 618 days ago

You have written a very interesting and unique storyline, which I do like, and created a most memorable main character in Luca. I also like your use of the first person narrative voice. The dialogue is realistic and well written and the pace of your story flows well. All of this along with your descriptive writing makes your work a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

Three Red Seeds wrote 619 days ago

He's a bit Holden Caufield but how Holden would have been a few years after the book finished (Catcher in the Rye). I enjoyed the protagonist's attitude, his cocky way of putting forward his opinions as fact. One thing -- I don't think 'assimilate' is the right word in that context.

I haven't been able to 'back' anything yet, I think there's something wrong with my registration, am waiting for the powers above to respond so for now you'll have to make do with a "Good job" pat on the back instead.

Off to read more...

Elizabeth Wolfe wrote 619 days ago

Dear Pete,
I read your introduction, which I find witty and charming. I enjoy the way the narrator says, chill, don't give up on my story, try to learn from it. It's a unique introduction. This is excellent writing!

BACKED
Elizabeth Wolfe (MEMORIES OF GLORY)

zan wrote 620 days ago

Clam Chowder at Lafayette and Spring

Pete Brassard

Interesting title and a storyline that got my attention. Not sure about the use of words like "wanna", "ya", "kinda" et cetera in the narrative (I think it would be different if it was part of dialogue) though. Anyway, you have unique energetic style of writing with much to recommend this story. All the best in finding a publisher.

Barry Wenlock wrote 620 days ago

Hi Pete,
I love the first person narration and his direct, gritty method of addressing the reader. He reminds me somewhat of Little Krisna.
I think yeah, is more common than 'yea'
conur (concur)
Top class writing, amusing and hard to put away.
One thought is to be careful about too many sermons -- they slow the pace of the plot. Of course they add things to your character study, but just check you're happy with the balance.
Backed with pleasure,
Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

Vanessa Darnleigh wrote 620 days ago

I was a bit put off by the rambling narrative and persistent rhetoric...the voice sounds like Hollywood 1930's gangster...Cagney springs to mind. Sorry about that but it doesn't work for me...worth a spin though.
Cheers
Stewart

pete brassard wrote 621 days ago

Hey GK, just a thought, was your mother called Elaine by any chance? Very funny lady! What the hey, I just figured too, 'Ga' is a cool name, but ya need to put the 'in' into 'Ga' for it to work, then you have 'gain', that too, is just as nice as Gina. I will take a look at your memoir over the weekend and I'm telling ya, I'm looking forward to it..memories...

GK Stritch wrote 621 days ago

Dear Pete Brassard,

As soon as I caught the title Clam Chowder at Lafayette and Spring, I couldn’t wait to sink my teeth into this apple pie and chowder delight. I wasn’t expecting the recipe, Bourdain, and a tasty recipe it is. What’s it all about, TONY PARMESAN? I like your cool downtown style and I’m singing Volare with you all the way to the Bowery.

Let me say this loud and let me say it clear, there’s no humor like NYC metro humor. Capice?

And, there's nothing like finding a homeboy when you're on a site in the UK.

My first name starts with a G and ends in a vowel. Hey, do I know you?

LaFayette and Prince is where my character Andrew with the tight leather pants dwelled, but that was long ago, young blood.

Pete, we’re on the same page.

Hard to believe tomorrow is 9/11.

Backed and all best wishes for your groovy read.

GK Stritch
CBGB Was My High School

corichaffee wrote 621 days ago

This book is intriguing... unique... and a breath of fresh air. Thank you for posting it for us to read.

I love your writing style, the flow of your words, the organization of your thought. It makes for an interesting read. I will definitely be coming back to it when I have time to read the rest of it ( I read through chapter two just now).

If I could change anything, it would only be to add more dialogue. I prefer to be shown things by characters telling it than shown by narrative. But- that's my subjective opinion. I love this story so far!!

Backed by me!
Cori
"Princess"

James Brodie wrote 622 days ago

After Jack Kerouac, this is probably the most original thing I have ever read. Will let it gather dust on the bookshelf. James.

name falied moderation wrote 622 days ago

Dear Pete

Talent and skill have been shown with this book for sure. I have to wonder on this site at the creations that come from peoples heads and of course the immense talent of those like yourself to animate such colorful characters. I truly wish I had half your talent. I loved your short and long pitch both really sell your book which they are meant too so CONGRATS, and love the way you write. Your ability with words to craft an orginal read is amazing. the characters have decided to take up permanent residence but i will insist they leave soom to go home. ha!

Please take a moment to look, COMMENT which is important to me, and BACK my book. if not that is OK
also

The VERY best of luck to you

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Denise
The Letter

Kaychristina wrote 622 days ago

You've sure got style, Pete, and a voice I don't think anyone's ever put down on paper before. You also tell the truth, know how to say it, and make everyone think. That is some going...

Luca makes me think of the wrong side of "Sweet Smell of Success" - or should that be the right side...and all the people in his life loom as large as he paints them, Fender, particularly...even the maitre d' has a life worth a book. But I am very worried about Cat. I'll just have to read on until I'm sure "it" gets a piece of that cow...actually the clam chowder (straight up) would make me feel better.

Backed for Cat's sake...
From Kay
(Waystation to Prosperity Street)

lisawb wrote 622 days ago

I don't think I have ever read a style like this before, different, quite original and very relatable. I don't think I will eat a piece of beef the same way again ever.

'I was kinda looking forward to having steak at home, every night just as it comes. Moo'

Your book is interesting, shocking yet quite enjoyable.

Backed,

Lisa

lizjrnm wrote 622 days ago

Talented writing and and intriguing storyline make this easy to back.

Liz
The Cheech Room
A Fine Pickle

Bamboo Promise wrote 623 days ago

I agree with you and you are completely right,"Don't look back ,but we should see what we have learned." Now I am on ch 2
Backed with happiness,
Bamboo Promise

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 623 days ago

You have a very conversational style which makes for easy reading. I will return for more, well done. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

SusieGulick wrote 623 days ago

Dear Pete, I love the love Luca has for Mel :) - would that any one of my 6 husband had even loved me an iota of that :) - I'd have been elated :) - but they only loved themselves & for me to wait on them be their maid - ah, love :) - you have showed the epitome of love. :) Your pitch showed me it would be a good read. :) Tight paragraphs & dialogue moved me along quickly. :) I've backed your book :) - could you please take a moment to back my memoir book? :) Thanks so very much. :) Love, Susie :)

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KW wrote 623 days ago

Yeah, it's fate. I think many of us have been lucky to discover a "Mel." Lucky for me, mine is still with me after 27 years. "'Big deal,' you say 'so what?'" A little jealousy, eh? "Okay, so where was I?" Oh yeah, with backing your book. Thanks for uploading the complete text. I can come back and periodically read more and more. Backed for now.

R.A. Battles wrote 623 days ago

Your short pitch does a good job of teasing a reader to want to read more. Your full pitch is short, sweet, and snappy, and it succintly summarizes your story's plot. I really like your voice and the casual, conversational style of your writing. Your storytelling skills are quite evident. Happy to back you.

Rodney B.

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