Lineage of Visions

Lineage of Visions:
Visual and entertaining. The first chapter is compelling and hooks the reader. I will read more and happy to back this. I think it will go far for you!

all the best
Sue
Fate's Chastening

Lineage of visions
Wish unicorns were real
Backed
Eveleen
(Turning a new lef)

I like your style but blue unicorns don't do a lot for me I'm afraid...I wish you luck nevertheless!
Stewart

I really enjoyed your wondeful story and am happy to back it.
Sharon Van Orman
Eve, an Eden's Exiles Novel.

This is simply beautiful. I love the vision you create of the angry magical creature speaking in emotion. That is truly inspired. I would be happy to back this.
All the best, Sana
Saffire Drake and the Three Keys

Great Premise! Your writing is superb with a lovely descriptive voice.

The cover is particularly interesting.

Great Story!
Backed!
Good Luck!
Sammy Sutton
King Solomon's '13'

I have a thing about unicorns, - having written about them in one of my children's book. When I saw your pitch I just knew I had to check your book out. You have a natural talent for writing in this genre. An easy flow and natural style, make this an enchanting book to read. Backed with pleasure. Eunice - The Temple Dancer.

Hi Tiffany happy to back your fine writing and of course compliment you on an enjoyable read.

Best wishes

Richard

Dear Tiffany


Talent and skill have been shown with this book for sure. I have to wonder on this site at the creations that come from peoples heads and of course the immense talent of those like yourself to animate such colorful characters. I truly wish I had half your talent. I loved your short and long pitch both really sell your book which they are meant too so CONGRATS, and love the way you write. Your ability with words to craft an orginal read is amazing. the characters have decided to take up permanent residence but i will insist they leave soom to go home. ha!

Please take a moment to look, COMMENT which is important to me, and BACK my book. if not that is OK
also

The VERY best of luck to you

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Denise
The Letter

Talented writing and an intriguing storyline make this easy to back.

Liz
The Cheech Room
A Fine Pickle

Charming, really charming. My children would have loved this and any adult would love to read it to them, well done. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

Even though her goals may not have included peace, as a frequent reader of Antiwar.com, I wish it had. We have always needed peace, why can't a warrior unicorn help us out. I hope the old man is able to get her to help. "Aislin had spent years fighting in the war against humans and had learned quickly to hate and fear us." Sensible, so why does she befriend the old man. You've intrigued me with this. I agree with Jim Darcy that "there is an old-fashioned quality to this that is quite pleasing to the ear." I'll come back and read more when I can. Backed for now.

There is an oldfashioned quality to this that is quite pleasing to the ear. Unicorns are always a favourite too. You do have a tendency at the moment to doble upm on your description - do you really need to both it was a dark night and that the sky was black for example, as they both say the same thing. Just a minor point but one you may want to consider.
Jim Darcy
The Firelord's Crown

Dear Tiffany, I love your darling story & "weeping silently" really hit me :) - I love that phrase :) - unique :) - I doubt if I've ever heard it in my 70 years. :) Your pitch was concise preparing me for my read, as were your paragraphs & dialogue, making for a smooth flow through your story. :) Tearful, to say the least. ;( Great write! :) Hope you'll write many books. :) I've backed your book :) - could you please take a moment to back my memoir book? :) Thanks so very much. :) Love, Susie :)