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rank 5463
word count 10223
date submitted 10.09.2010
date updated 10.09.2010
genres: Fiction, Fantasy
classification: moderate
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Lineage of Visions

Tiffany Krey

A tale of a unicorn, an old man, and an elf who enter a world of dangerous magic.

 

A haunting tale of a warrior unicorn tormented by the death of her love who finds assistance with an old man ready and waiting for death. Given new life and a chance for the adventure he had always sought, he follows this unicorn into a world of dangerous magic. It is his hope that she will be the one to bring the human race back into a world of magic and wonder. Her goals, however, do not include peace for mankind.

 
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betrayal, creatures, death, elf, fantasy, love, magic, nature, powers, unicorn

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meemers wrote 599 days ago

Lineage of Visions:
Visual and entertaining. The first chapter is compelling and hooks the reader. I will read more and happy to back this. I think it will go far for you!

all the best
Sue
Fate's Chastening

Eveleen wrote 604 days ago

Lineage of visions
Wish unicorns were real
Backed
Eveleen
(Turning a new lef)

Vanessa Darnleigh wrote 616 days ago

I like your style but blue unicorns don't do a lot for me I'm afraid...I wish you luck nevertheless!
Stewart

Sharon.v.o. wrote 616 days ago

I really enjoyed your wondeful story and am happy to back it.
Sharon Van Orman
Eve, an Eden's Exiles Novel.

SRFire wrote 618 days ago

This is simply beautiful. I love the vision you create of the angry magical creature speaking in emotion. That is truly inspired. I would be happy to back this.
All the best, Sana
Saffire Drake and the Three Keys

SammySutton wrote 619 days ago


Great Premise! Your writing is superb with a lovely descriptive voice.

The cover is particularly interesting.

Great Story!
Backed!
Good Luck!
Sammy Sutton
King Solomon's '13'

Eunice Attwood wrote 620 days ago

I have a thing about unicorns, - having written about them in one of my children's book. When I saw your pitch I just knew I had to check your book out. You have a natural talent for writing in this genre. An easy flow and natural style, make this an enchanting book to read. Backed with pleasure. Eunice - The Temple Dancer.

richard thurston wrote 620 days ago

Hi Tiffany happy to back your fine writing and of course compliment you on an enjoyable read.

Best wishes

Richard

name falied moderation wrote 621 days ago

Dear Tiffany


Talent and skill have been shown with this book for sure. I have to wonder on this site at the creations that come from peoples heads and of course the immense talent of those like yourself to animate such colorful characters. I truly wish I had half your talent. I loved your short and long pitch both really sell your book which they are meant too so CONGRATS, and love the way you write. Your ability with words to craft an orginal read is amazing. the characters have decided to take up permanent residence but i will insist they leave soom to go home. ha!

Please take a moment to look, COMMENT which is important to me, and BACK my book. if not that is OK
also

The VERY best of luck to you

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Denise
The Letter

lizjrnm wrote 621 days ago

Talented writing and an intriguing storyline make this easy to back.

Liz
The Cheech Room
A Fine Pickle

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 622 days ago

Charming, really charming. My children would have loved this and any adult would love to read it to them, well done. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

KW wrote 622 days ago

Even though her goals may not have included peace, as a frequent reader of Antiwar.com, I wish it had. We have always needed peace, why can't a warrior unicorn help us out. I hope the old man is able to get her to help. "Aislin had spent years fighting in the war against humans and had learned quickly to hate and fear us." Sensible, so why does she befriend the old man. You've intrigued me with this. I agree with Jim Darcy that "there is an old-fashioned quality to this that is quite pleasing to the ear." I'll come back and read more when I can. Backed for now.

Jim Darcy wrote 622 days ago

There is an oldfashioned quality to this that is quite pleasing to the ear. Unicorns are always a favourite too. You do have a tendency at the moment to doble upm on your description - do you really need to both it was a dark night and that the sky was black for example, as they both say the same thing. Just a minor point but one you may want to consider.
Jim Darcy
The Firelord's Crown

SusieGulick wrote 622 days ago

Dear Tiffany, I love your darling story & "weeping silently" really hit me :) - I love that phrase :) - unique :) - I doubt if I've ever heard it in my 70 years. :) Your pitch was concise preparing me for my read, as were your paragraphs & dialogue, making for a smooth flow through your story. :) Tearful, to say the least. ;( Great write! :) Hope you'll write many books. :) I've backed your book :) - could you please take a moment to back my memoir book? :) Thanks so very much. :) Love, Susie :)

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