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rank 5463
word count 21798
date submitted 27.09.2010
date updated 18.01.2011
genres: Fiction, Thriller, Crime, Erotica
classification: moderate
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BEACH IN HEAT

Paul Corman

The sun heats the beach and two vacationing lovers burn up the sheets in this sexy and humorous tale of murder, revenge and passion.

 

A young woman is brutally murdered in a fishing village in a small Latin American country while war journalist Robert Fletcher is there on vacation with his sexy girlfriend Maria. Two more grisly murders have the tabloid press in the Capital hinting that rebel factions may once again be active in the area. The village is slated to be bulldozed for a tourist development and Fletcher sets out to get the story even if it means risking the deadly wrath of rich and powerful investors. Robert’s sardonic wit and Maria’s erotic charm bring humor and seething sensuality to this tale of murder, money and mystery.

 
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CHAPTER ONE

Rosetta Valencia Rivera stumbled along the beach toward the village lights. The sand sucked at her feet like Satan's hand reaching up from hell to drag her down.

She fingered the silver cross that hung around her neck. “Please, God!she cried out in prayer, “protect me from this evil!”

The sound of her voice was stolen from her lips by the roar of the breaking waves. She had lost both her sandals. The thin white cotton dress that her mother had washed and pressed a hundred times was dirty and torn at the neck line. One of her young breasts was exposed and she held the top back in place as she wiped tears from her face.

There were no clouds in the sky on this night. Venus hung above the horizon in the west. Phosphorescent algae rode the gentle white waves that broke against the beach. A soft warm breeze blew in off the Pacific and the air smelled of fish and coconuts and Asia thousands of miles away.

It was one of those nights that normally would have filled Rosetta’s heart with joy as she walked on the warm sand and imagined that the stars were a million radiant angels descending from heaven.

Tonight, though, she saw none of this as her heart pounded in her chest.

Help me God! Forgive me for the shame I have brought on my family!”

In the pale moonlight there was movement in the shadows. Rosetta tripped and fell. She scrabbled forward on her hands and knees.

Then, close by a whisper in her ear said her name and someone grabbed her by the hair.

“Don't hurt me!” she sobbed. “Please don't hurt me!”

It was the last thing human ears would hear Rosetta say. If God heard her prayer He did not answer. Perhaps He was busy with other matters. Or perhaps the brutal death of one young woman in a far off corner of the world, where nothing important ever happened, was too insignificant an event for His attention.

Perhaps He didn't care.

Perhaps He didn't exist.

 

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Paul Corman wrote 597 days ago

I just put up a few more chapters have a look. Continuing to read your work. Excellent writing and very erotic. Have you on my bookshelf……..Paul

billysunday wrote 490 days ago

Great imagery. Really like the way you start off with impending doom. Makes me want to turn the page. Dina-33

billysunday wrote 491 days ago

Sounds like a sexy mystery! Check out 33 if you have a chance.

Sue50 wrote 500 days ago

BEACH IN HEAT was recommended by CC Brown author of Dark Side. I have read, rated, and BACKED your work. Hope you have a chance to look at Dark Side and find a place for it on your shelf. Thanks!
Sue50

ccb1 wrote 577 days ago

“BACKED” BEACH IN HEAT. We liked the ending of ch 13! That Maria is something else!
CC Brown
DARK SIDE

SubtleKnife wrote 578 days ago

Funny - but in a very good way. I like your narrative style and your writing is tight. Will read more, but backed. Cheers! -Liz (Meggie Blackthorn)

andrew skaife wrote 582 days ago

Well, the fiction, thriller and crime parts are well written, thrilling and criminally exciting and the erotica made me blush-- tick, tick, tick and big tick.

BACKED

Linda Lou wrote 588 days ago

BEACH IN HEAT-Paul Corman
hullo Paul. I liked the way you have situated this killer in a setting like this. Just scary enough to keep the reader interested to read on into the next chapter, then the next, then the next,...Already shelved and backed.
Please take a look at my book if you have not and thanks for that if you have.
Linda Lou Long
Southern dis-Comfort
http://www.authonomy.com/ViewBook.aspx?bookid=11421

missyfleming_22 wrote 589 days ago

This is an impressive piece of work so far! It's got a deadly pace and it's impossible to stop reading. I like all the elements you've combined, it's becoming something I'd buy from the store. You have a great writing style and it's tight too, didn't see any errors. I liked it and really don't have anything to say beyond that! I'm waiting for the hardback!

Missy
Mark of Eternity

Terry Murphy wrote 589 days ago

Hi Paul,

Manic pace, exotic writing and packed with wry humour.

An engaging storyline too, lest I forget!

Backed.

Terry

Eunice Attwood wrote 593 days ago

This is a very polished tale with a well thought out storyline. Erotic, thrilling and gripping. Backed. Eunice - The Temple Dancer.

lizjrnm wrote 595 days ago

Wow - you certainly have the gift for grabbing the reader from the get go - this is the sort of book Id take on holiday so hurry and get it published! Backed for talented writing and an intriguing storyline.

liz
The Cheech Room
A Fine Pickle

Paul Corman wrote 597 days ago

Gripping story. Will continue to read……..Oban Scotch you say.........Well the General serves Robert Johnnie Walker Blue. I'd like to do a taste test sometimes. Line up all the best Scotches and sip all night. I just put up a few more chapters of Beach in Heat have a look.

Paul Corman wrote 597 days ago

I just put up a few more chapters have a look. Continuing to read your work. Excellent writing and very erotic. Have you on my bookshelf……..Paul

Jehmka wrote 597 days ago

Paul Corman’s Beach in Heat is fun (loads of fun) It had me smiling from the opening paragraph to the end of the second chapter. It’s exciting too. What else is fun and exciting? Rollercoasters! It’s a bit like that… and it’s easy to read… very well written… well organized… smooth and fluid. What else is smooth and fluid? Oban Scotch! In fact, a shot of Oban would go nicely with this story.

Excellent! Recommended and backed…
Rodney Jones
(The Father)

name falied moderation wrote 601 days ago

Dear Paul
Love the first person narrative, it gives me a window to experience more. Just love your use of words, chosen with skill to create such vivid pictures in my head. and they move well as does your plot. Original and well paced and am looking forward to you posting more.BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Please take a moment to look, COMMENT which is important to me, and BACK my book. if not that is OK
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The VERY best of luck to you

Denise
The Letter

Andrew Burans wrote 602 days ago

You have written a very interesting, sexy and unique storyline, which I do like, and created a most memorable main character in Robert. I also like your use of the first person narrative voice as this allows you to explore his thoughts and feelings. The dialogue is realistic and well written and the pace of your story flows well. All of this along with your descriptive writing makes your crime thriller a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

name falied moderation wrote 602 days ago

Dear Paul
very original so far...I am going thru my reads now...will comment later more
BACKED FOR SURE BY ME
Best of luck
Denise
The Letter

SusieGulick wrote 602 days ago

Dear Paul, What an ending!! Chapter 11: He got his story & a nightmare, but what will happen next? A re-play of years before? Or is there more to your story? Great pitch, preparing me for catching the serial murderer & crisp dialogue & paragraphs with LARGE print for a quick read was a joy! :) I've backed your book :) - could you please take a moment to back my memoirs book? :) Thanks so very much. :) Love, Susie :)

Great showdown in Chapter 19. :) WOW!!! :)

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JD Revene wrote 602 days ago

Paul,

Great opening chapter. Tension, drama and humour.

First chapter also reads well, with the sardonic--and dare I say, sex obsessed--narrator giving character to the events. The description is good, with spare details working well.

One observation twice in your opening paragraphs you use sensing vebs, 'saw' and 'watched', which you could avoid and perhaps keep the reader closer to the narrator and his experience (e.g. Sweat ran down the Captain's forehead . . .).

Chapter three continues on in much the same vein, a hard-edged, sardonic narrator, an exotic setting and plenty sexiness. I like this.

One couplet of sentences didn't quite work for me:

I'm not sure what love is anymore. I thought I *did* once[,] but a hard [-]hearted bitch in Paris delivered me from that delusion.

I wondered whether 'did' shouldn't perhaps be 'knew'.

But the odd quibble aside I've thoroughly enjoyed the three chapters I've read.

Backed with pleasure.

SusieGulick wrote 602 days ago

:) comment to follow - read & commented on shortly thereafter :)

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