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rank 5467
word count 23628
date submitted 17.10.2010
date updated 18.11.2010
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction, Romance
classification: moderate
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The Old Farm By The Barrow

Philip Carlton

The story of how the modern world intrudes in a surviving prehistoric arcadia and how the ancient ways absorb it and continue.

 

There is a part of Britain unchanged for millennia, hilly and densely wooded, and bypassed almost entirely by all invaders for over three thousand years. It is a place where the old beliefs regarding nature and fertility and the need for sacrifice have continued into modern times, where a brother and sister farm in the same location where their family has lived through all those years, as evidenced by a bronze age round barrow visible from the windows of their home.
Into their world come two strangers. Both, in their different ways, will become a part of that ancient world, the girl by being assimilated into the family, the man as proof that more than the physical remains of that past have survived, and that the old ways have continued into the present and life and beliefs will go on into the future.

 
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ancient beliefs, continuation, life and death, love, old farm, remote

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Frank James wrote 575 days ago

Hi Philip (The Old Farm By The Barrow,

I read your story and was pleased with what you had offered us. A good strong storyline and good well rounded characters. You have my best wishes for your future writing and I'm BACKING your book and have a spot on my bookshelf for it now.

Frank James (The Contractor)

Jim Darcy wrote 578 days ago

Other than to suggest that you do not need the phrase 'whose name was' when introducing characters, I have little to add. Atmospheric, evocative, this has your hallmark style to it.

Su Dan wrote 580 days ago

great effort and hard work as clearly gone into this- a very enjoyable read, with good descriptions and full use of dialogue- on my watchlist...
read SEASONS....

corichaffee wrote 580 days ago

You have excellent descriptive skills-- you definitely know how to paint a picture for your reader to follow. If I were you, I would add some more dialogue-- you have a long stretch of narrative at the beginning of your story, which could be broken up and shown with dialogue, rather than told with narrative.

But overall, I enjoyed this. I love descriptive writing!

Backed with pleasure!
Cori
"Princess"

scargirl wrote 580 days ago

you write well. i would break up the long pitch into paragraphs to make the text flow easy.
j

GK Stritch wrote 583 days ago

Dear Mr. Philip Carlton,

Et in Arcadia ego. (Even in Arcadia I exist.)

Best wishes and backed, lovely work The Old Farm by the Barrow.

GK Stritch
CBGB Was My HIgh School

andrew skaife wrote 583 days ago

I like the animals being involved and their acceptance being so important; it is a clever authorial device. Your style is bouncy and moves at an excellently handled pace. I also think that your skills in writing go beyond the average and you have a quality that is unusual in literature.

BACKED

SusieGulick wrote 585 days ago

Dear Philip, Well, here I am reading & commenting on your 2nd book :) - just as well written as your 1st one. :) I love your love-story & happily ever ending that I reached after reading every word to the end of chapter 3. :) The gold part was great!! :) I just love touching happy endings stories. :) That's why I wrote my memoirs book. :) We've backed each other's books, already :) - thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

SusieGulick wrote 585 days ago

:) comment to follow - read & commented on 1 hours later :)

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