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rank 1748
word count 17502
date submitted 21.10.2010
date updated 21.10.2010
genres: Fiction
classification: adult
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The Prophetess

David W. Landrum

In Acts we read Paul's encounter with a girl who prophesies by a spirit. Read her story.

 

In the books of Acts, we read of a girl who has a spirit of divination and who follows Paul around shouting, "These men are servants of the Most High God who have come to show us the way of salvation," until he commands the spirit to come out of her. The Prophetess is the girl's story--the back-story to the Biblical account. Read how she became what the ancients called a "Phythoness" (the word the New Testament uses to describe her). Drusilla, from a prosperous home fallen on bad times, is sold to pay her family’s debts. Her life as a slave, however, takes on an astonishing twist when her master arranges for her to go to Delphi to receive the gift of prophecy. Back in Philippi, she begins her career as a prophetess who can foretell the future, making her master, a violent and brutal man, wealthy. Things begin to change, however, when a group of itinerate Jewish religious teachers show up and an old friend of the family, Lydia of Thyatira, is converted to their faith. Drusilla finds herself in the center of a conflict that involves religion and the supernatural.

 
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lizjrnm wrote 574 days ago

It is obvious you have done your research. Intelligent and compelling so far.

Liz
The Cheech Room
A Fine Pickle

Jim Darcy wrote 576 days ago

This made for a fascinating read and the reader quickly warms to Drusilla and her journey. You give enough description to anchor the reader without swamping them in historical detail. Enjoying this so far.

Lenore wrote 579 days ago

What an intriguing premise. Happy to back.

Walden Carrington wrote 580 days ago

David,
Stories like The Prophetess which sweep the reader away to Biblical times in modern-day English are a special treat and I would love to see so many more of them published. Backed with enthusiasm.

Deborah Aldrich Farhi wrote 580 days ago

What an imaginative, unique story, and so well written I was drawn right in on this! Love it!

SusieGulick wrote 581 days ago

Dear David, I love how you have woven a story around the Biblical story of the girl with the spirit of divination which was cast out by Paul, when he said, "I command you in the name of Jesus Christ to come out of her." :) Your pitch prepared me for your wonderful recount & tight dialogue & paragraphs moved me right through chapter 8. :) Hope you'll write a lot more Bible stories. :) I've backed your book :) - could you please take a moment to back my memoirs/testimony book? :) Thank you from the bottom of my heart. :)

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Andrew Burans wrote 581 days ago

You have written a very interesting and unique historical storyline, which I do like, and created a most memorable main character in Drusilla. I also like your use of the first person narrative voice as this allows you to convey her thoughts, fears and emmotions. The dialogue is realistic and well written and the pace of your story flows well. All of this along with your descriptive writing makes your work a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

yasmin esack wrote 581 days ago

Lovely and spiritual not to mention insightful.


Happy to back you

The Mind setter

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 581 days ago

This is a very clever way to mix fiction and biblical text from a different angle. The whole idea works very well and the girl's confusion is clear. Excellent work. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

Vanessa Darnleigh wrote 581 days ago

Contrary to what many writers and self-styled experts on authonomy stress, this is an example of a text that works very well as narrative without the constant interruption of meaningless dialogue! What you have written propels the story forward at just the right pace...well crafted and devoid of major language issues.
Cheers
Stewart

fh wrote 581 days ago

THE PROPHETESS
You have a nice clear and concise hand when writing. Lots of meaty narration, although it does read well. Backed
Faith
THE ASSASSINS VILLAGE

AlleJo wrote 581 days ago

This is very readable, after the first few lines, with a crisp, clear style,
and it's engaging.

I don't think the pitch conveys the style and readability, and its formality
(imagining it on the back of a book or in promotional text) could be rather off-putting,
and makes the book sound rather wordy, and 'the girl' a vehicle for the theme
instead of the centre of the story, told in first person.

The story is unpredictable and intriguing.

celticwriter wrote 581 days ago

Hi David, nice nice nice! Lovin' it. Simply backed.

blessings,
jim
jack & charmian london

Dolores A wrote 581 days ago

What a great idea for a story! Backed, and keep writing.

SusieGulick wrote 581 days ago

:) comment to follow - read & commented on 14 hours later :)

eurodan49 wrote 581 days ago

Only had time for about 3 or was it 4 chapters.
First person makes the pace netter.
I like your voice, the narration flows (with a good balance of “show” and “tell”) and the dialogue has a realistic sound.
Good job…hope you find representation.
Dan
PS. Could you pls check mine? Comment/backing will be appreciated.

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