The adventures of Cecil Cedric

Jay
You have no need to be nervous about posting your work on here. It's very well-written, quirky and with good attention to detail eg the 'row row row your boat' doorbell! You show us the characters' little idiosyncracies eg Cecil and the black squares on Wednesday. The theme is universal and timeless, and should appeal very much to target audience. Wish you all the best with this :)
Backed and starred
Kate

Jay
You have no need to be nervous about posting your work on here. It's very well-written, quirky and with good attention to detail eg the 'row row row your boat' doorbell! You show us the characters' little idiosyncracies eg Cecil and the black squares on Wednesday. The theme is universal and timeless, and should appeal very much to target audience. Wish you all the best with this :)
Backed and starred
Kate

interesting start to your book

Jay - from the very first paragraph you show a mature and purposeful control of the art of writing, even when you use some tried and true devices such as opening with a statement about the ordinariness of Cedric's home and neighbourhood. Why you would feel anxious about exposing your talent is beyond me.

Congratulations. 5 stars.

Farrold Saxon (Where-Stand-All)

This is a very cute book and the kids will fall in love with it.Well I am a kid at heart so I loved it too. Well thought out and exciting. Best of luck to you Beth Anne 5 stars given

This is a very cute book and the kids will fall in love with it.Well I am a kid at heart so I loved it too. Well thought out and exciting. Best of luck to you Beth Anne

I love this - it has everything I look for in a book. I'm backing it because I'd buy it!

Liz
The Cheech Room
A Fine Pickle

This looks to be my kind of book. Will shelve it once another new book has sat out its 24 hour minimum!

Bill (Faust's Butterfly)

Dear Jay, I love their analogy of The Easter Bunny, Santa, & the tooth fairy. :) Your pitch prepared me for your exciting fantasy & I sure wasn't disappointed as I got to chapter 8 :) - amazing :) - and the parents don't have a clue! :) Crisp dialogue & paragraphs made for an enjoyable read, not to mention the dinosaur step. :) I've read, backed, & commented on your book :) - could you please take just a moment to back my memoirs book? :) Thanks so very much. :) Love, Susie :)

"When you back a book, it only improves the ranking of that book, not yours. However, the author whose book you are backing may decide to back your book also, in which case yes, your ranking would be improved, " - authonomy quote. :)

Definitely one to appeal to the young reader...you're a convincing storyteller and I think this will attract a lot of attention on this site...well done!
Backed
Stewart

Perhaps the greatest compliment is that I can picture myself reading this aloud. The flow of the dialogue and the exactness of the phrasing creates a novel ideal for the younger age group, with appeal to the older among us. A charming story I am happy to back.
Lenore
Surviving the Seaweed

You have written a very interesting and unique storyline, which I do like, and created a most memorable main character in Cecil. The dialogue is realistic and well written and the pace of your story flows well. All of this along with your descriptive writing ensures that your fantasy will appeal to the youth audience. I will back your book in the next couple of days when I free up some space on my book shelf.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

Dear Jay, I have backed your book & comment will follow after I've read your book: 7 hours later :)