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rank 5467
word count 12916
date submitted 29.10.2010
date updated 03.05.2011
genres: Fiction, Thriller, Religious, Crime...
classification: adult
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The Sleeping Cab

Daniel Koehler

Someone is killing young women along Interstate 40, and all the FBI has is a tenuous profile—a religious zealot bent on ritualistic sacrifice.

 

To FBI senior agent, JOE MAC ADAMS, the Atonement Killer is a psychopath who scrawls the word across his victim’s torsos in blood, but to rookie cop, JOLENE DYKES, he is a hooker/john sting gone terribly wrong.

Polygamist trucker NARVEL LAFFERTY'S mission is to save fifty souls. However, when his marks refuse to convert voluntarily—either by baptism or marriage into his communal family, Narvel turns to “blood atonement,” an obscure cult doctrine whereby the souls of grievous sinners may only be saved by spilling their blood and then baptizing their corpses.

Held prisoner, beaten, and raped in Narvel’s sleeping cab, Jolene finally escapes by trickery and her police skills. Put on medical leave, Jolene becomes the FBI's first eyewitness in the Atonement Killer case. Soon, however, her behavior becomes increasingly irrational and aggressive.

Frustrated by the FBI's plodding pace in the Atonement Killer case, Jolene obsessively pursues him across Interstate 40, weaving together the clues to his identity with the aid of her alcoholic cop/boyfriend.

Together, they trap Narvel at the famous Cadillac Ranch in Amarillo, Texas, and there Jolene battles for both her life and her soul.

 
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Katy Johnson wrote 387 days ago

Great opening – descriptive & informative, but designed in a way that grabs. On the surface, the story has a good vs. evil quality, but I love the (so far) hint about the role-reversals. The characters come across as gritty, flawed, and real.

You have a very unique way of describing commonplace observations, an example being the way that you explained that Dale’s TV was muted. I really enjoy it – it makes everything seem like it is happening right next to me and I’m slowly noticing the scene as opposed to it being described to me. It’s very easy to picture – almost like I’m watching the movie. The dialogue is smart, and your writing is simply brilliant. You have an excellent and vivid vocabulary.

My only critique is a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there. Other than that this is an enticing story and easily worth a backing.

If you have time, please take a look at “The Promenade.” I don’t ask for backings, just a read – and a chance.

Can’t wait to read the rest! -Katy

happypetronella wrote 571 days ago

I enjoyed reading this suspenseful piece. One thing: the last paragraph of chapter 10 (in ch2) starting with 'slid the knife back...' seems to be out of place. Thought you'd like to know.

Andrew Burans wrote 573 days ago

I do like what you have written and it is every bit as good as what you have posted before. Space should open up on my shelf in the next couple of days and I will back your book then.

Cheers,
Andrew Burans
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