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rank 2066
word count 11218
date submitted 01.11.2010
date updated 19.10.2011
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction, History,...
classification: moderate
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Suckers and Scallies

Kate Rigby

The novel describes the life long and mutually-dependent friendship between two men, beginning in Liverpool in the 60s when they are children.

 

Loss and loneliness in childhood lead introvert middle-class Kit Ramsay into forbidden friendship and taboo territory with Liverpool tough boy, Terry Dacosta. Violence and deprivation in Terry’s childhood, drive him to aspire to a life like Kit’s. Their early experiences in 60s and 70s Liverpool are to have far-reaching effects on their adult lives and relationships as they get sucked back into each other’s world in 90s Bournemouth.

The 'sucking' theme can be read on many levels as well as the more literal (ie sweets and cigarettes in childhood, kissing and oral sex in adolesence.) In a more symbolic sense, and as well as offering ‘succour’, Kit is a sucker for Terry’s world and anything connected with it (Terry being ‘the brother’ he lost). But in Kit’s words, “Who’s doing the sucking anyway? I thought it was me, but him, that lot, they’ve sucked me in ever since. Like sinking mud.”

 
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60s, 70s, food, liverpool, relationships, retro, scouse, sweets

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jamesmac wrote 530 days ago

Sucka

I loved every minute of this Kate.

It’s not just the imagery, or the authentic scouse voice that had me repeating the dialog out loud to myself (my daughter thinks I‘m mad by the way) but the tastes and the aromas were the thing that did it for me. The tang of shairbet on the tongue - Milkhhy Way - and the smell of vinegar from five lotsa fish and chips.

And the boys - Kit and Terry - the way you lightly brush on their socio-religious differences between them - keep these things in the minds eye, but very much in the background - exactly as children do.

I love the sentence near the end of the prologue, when Kit says;

‘I’ve always liked playing with words, although I like it better when words play with me.’

A great line Kate - every writers dream that is, and very appropriate because it summed up the fourteen chapters for me. The words dance with us here - develop arms and legs of their very own and lead us round the floor.

You’ve only shown us some so far - and I know there is still much to tell of the present here - but the picture you’ve painted of the kids’ past has been a delight that I’ve enjoyed very much.

Let me know please if you decide to upload some more Kate.
I look forward to it.

Have a good weekend

James

hikey wrote 558 days ago

Kate

Your use of dialogue is very appealing ,authentic and humorous .This extremely well written story evokes the atmosphere and images of the 60s and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Deserves a wider audience and highly recommended.

Jane

'Breath in the Dark '

John Warren-Anderson wrote 559 days ago

You have a very natural voice. It is quite the most relaxed I've come across. And voice, I think, is the hardest thing for a writer to develop.
Lovely story. Youse kids ger on the shelf.

paul house wrote 490 days ago

I have read a bit of this (not as much as I would have liked) and have enjoyed it very much. I shall come back for more shortly.

Irene Ro wrote 503 days ago

Oh no, Aunt Lil just died! I'm really enjoying this; beautifully written. I will be putting this on my bookshelf. All the best with it, Irene

jamesmac wrote 530 days ago

Sucka

I loved every minute of this Kate.

It’s not just the imagery, or the authentic scouse voice that had me repeating the dialog out loud to myself (my daughter thinks I‘m mad by the way) but the tastes and the aromas were the thing that did it for me. The tang of shairbet on the tongue - Milkhhy Way - and the smell of vinegar from five lotsa fish and chips.

And the boys - Kit and Terry - the way you lightly brush on their socio-religious differences between them - keep these things in the minds eye, but very much in the background - exactly as children do.

I love the sentence near the end of the prologue, when Kit says;

‘I’ve always liked playing with words, although I like it better when words play with me.’

A great line Kate - every writers dream that is, and very appropriate because it summed up the fourteen chapters for me. The words dance with us here - develop arms and legs of their very own and lead us round the floor.

You’ve only shown us some so far - and I know there is still much to tell of the present here - but the picture you’ve painted of the kids’ past has been a delight that I’ve enjoyed very much.

Let me know please if you decide to upload some more Kate.
I look forward to it.

Have a good weekend

James

Ceeds wrote 554 days ago

Dear Kate - ta so much for recommending my book to Ben - I look forward to reading his book tonight as I am a bit of a home brewer meself! Ceeds

hikey wrote 558 days ago

Kate

Your use of dialogue is very appealing ,authentic and humorous .This extremely well written story evokes the atmosphere and images of the 60s and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Deserves a wider audience and highly recommended.

Jane

'Breath in the Dark '

John Warren-Anderson wrote 559 days ago

You have a very natural voice. It is quite the most relaxed I've come across. And voice, I think, is the hardest thing for a writer to develop.
Lovely story. Youse kids ger on the shelf.

JOE ADU-GYAMFI wrote 563 days ago

Wow! Excellent first chapter.Once you start, you cant stop.I really love your style of writing.It flows pretty well and the suspense is just amazing.I wish I cud read everything-I wudve luv it that way.This is a fantastic piece which really deserves to be published.I'm sure everyone agrees with me-for sure.great!
joe-Herbivore City

Tom Bye wrote 565 days ago

HI KATE 'SUCKA!

THIS book is one delightful read and I am loving it . autentic it is with the liverpool accent to the fore in the dialogue. makes for interesting reading , written with a g ood sense of humour too.
backed with pleasure
tom bye ' from hugs to kisses'

SubtleKnife wrote 567 days ago

I've read the first seven chapers and I'm impressed. It's not easy to hold a dialect, but you've managed this well. I like the contrasts betwen past/present, Still too early to distinguish where the story is going, but I'm absorbed enough to want to read on. I'll star-rate and keep on my list until I have a space on the shelf, though that might take a few days. Cheers! -Liz (Meggie Blackthorn)

marywood18 wrote 569 days ago

I decided to have a look after seeing your thread about Gerald's book. This promises to be the kind of book I love to read, it drew me in from the start. I live near to Liverpool and can appreciate the accents, but I like the way you introduce them so everyone reading this can understand them, too. If I had any nits, it would be a favourite of mine. I find the use of 'was' gives a passive describing voice and avoid it as much as possible in my own writing. For instance: Look how much crisper these sentences read:
Glass Eye Lil walked towards them and the divvy kid went and hid behind the parrot cage.
"What horrid children!" Glass Eye Lil said, wagging her finger at them...
But, I have to admit a lot of its use in your work sits right with the accent. Great stuff, on my wl for my next lot of backings and rated a 5.

SusieGulick wrote 569 days ago

Dear Kate, I love that you informed me of what your story was about in your pitch :) - totally concise!! :) Tight paragraph & dialogue moved me right through chapter 14 & I'm glad I didn't even know Kit & Terry :) - my life was bad enough as it was, so I'm thankful that I'm through all of that!! :) One more thing to be thankful for!! :) This is probably based on fact, so I hope these guys are doing well, now. :) Great write!! :) I've read, commented on, backed, & ****** 'd your book :) - could you please back & ****** my memoirs book? :) Thank you from the bottom of my heart. :) Love, Susie :)

SusieGulick wrote 569 days ago

:) comment to follow - read & commented on 6 hours later :)

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